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Posted: 12 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: mirage123
awesome 😊😊

Thank you for reading and commenting. Glad to hear you're liking it :)

Originally posted by: uwith
very nice UD😊naku life is in danger..this will give them time together ...pls ud soon regards uvi

Hey Uvi. Thanks for reading and commenting. Yup Naku is in danger and they benefits I hope will work to everyone's favor 😉 will UD soon :)

Originally posted by: dilse14
hi daya superb ud 😊

Hiya! Thank you for reading and commenting. Glad you're liking it :)

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Iridescence

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Posted: 12 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: Hamlet53
helloo,Daya,thanks for the great UD.
Chapter 5
Dutta taken for a ride by unknown foe;Naku's life in danger,a fact confirmed by a missed bullet; well written bits of action. Finally all his battle within himself,regarding how to move her into his room, transpires so easily by just one missed shot at her. Clever justification, extremely practical.Liked the approach,short sharp!
Dutta this way also gets an opportunity to show his me man , me protective of my woman element. Well written.
thanks ,and please continue, as ever yours x hammie.The song below reminds of Dutta's predicament..
...PAPPY..heard this song and thought of you.. its set in your part of the world.Its sung by Jagit Singh a ghazal singer.. he was from India but was settled in Canada of recent.. he returned to India recently ,and died there in his mother land..
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uUCkBIelSjM&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]

Hiya Hammie. Thank you for reading and leaving your lovely comments. Glad you're liking the logic...and indeed it was short and sharp. It was reason enough to get her into the safest place in his books. His room. 😆 now no need to think too much into that...yes 'me man me protective' is what he wants to show but let's see just who'll take charge 😉

Now for that song...brilliant...loved it...thank you for sharing :)

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Iridescence

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Posted: 12 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: priyaraghav
hello daya... Sorry for commenting late... Again busy in college... My sessional exams are near... So, the torture has been started n i m concentrating on my studies bcoz if i'll score less then my mom will surely Kill me...
So i really sorry n ya I LOVED THE PART BETWEEN TASHA IT WAS ACTUALLY SUPERBBB. How nakku was giving answers to duttas questions...n my humble request is that plzzz CREATE MORE N MORE TASHA'S ROMNTIC CUTE N LUVING SCENES...
Anyways thnxx for the PM sweetheart !!!!

Hi Priya :) No need to apologize hun. Glad to see you. Thank you for reading and commenting despite being busy. Glad you're enjoying the story. And you'll have TaSha moments...definitely count on that...and you'll also have a Naku who'll give answers to him when he almost expects her to silently obey 😆 hopefully you'll continue to like how this goes...anyway thanks again and best of luck on your exams. See you and take care

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Iridescence

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Posted: 12 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: Nakusha
hi daya

finally u ud .i was missing it & was anxious to know story ahead .dutta's dealing with balvant was a trap & dutta's 6th sense did work & hopefully it continue working so 😆

the trap is blessing in disguise & attempt to nakus life ,dutta can't deny the feeling which is developing for naku

the time is all reserve for naku ,he will be her personal bodyguard ,naku is giving good one for his mistake at framing ques wrongly pack ur bag

the story i 'm just loving it ..pls ud soon .😊

Hi Nakusha, oh lol how big was the gap between UDs? 😆 I can't remember but sorry for keeping you waiting. Lol yeah i'd say the trap and the mystery man is a blessing in disguise...mysterious ways of god 😉 ... he's just got the opportunity of a lifetime to get his facts straight and let his heart play it's course again...glad you're loving it...and I know you're waiting next UD...I promise it will be soon...thank you for you lovely comments...take care and see ya

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Iridescence

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Posted: 12 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: tahera57
hi daya fabulous ud, jo dutta khud nahin kar paya woh uskay dushman ne karva diya , sending her to his room without him giving the 1st reason. V,cleaver kill two birds with one stone , she has started to bother him, i liked the long ud, i hope u got lots more to come. baji was good pehlay barges in thn ays main phir aajaon ga,😆 , and henthe scn without his shirt😆D dragging his wife to his room paints a funny pic. thanku please ud soon. c u take care

Hi tahera. Thank you for reading and commenting. So true who knew enemy's can be so so useful?😆 Now he has to not only deal with his mystery man but also his wife...she has always bothered him tahera LOL she's just getting better at it and he'll certainly see it more now that she's right in his face making her presence undeniable. You know what i think the next UD is longer...I can't seem to help myself. I like to allow the UDs to run it's course based on what I plan for it...so short or long depends on what happens each one...Baaji will be Baaji..haa...I just love having him around...yeah LOL even I smiled picturing such a scene but don't forget he has dragged his with no shirt on before...and it was in a public place...a temple to be exact 😆 so nothing too off there ...thank you for your lovely comments...and for taking the time to read...shall UD soon...take care

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Iridescence

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Posted: 12 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: sona89
Hi daya

awesome ud...dutta with naku 24 x7😆...balvant should be thanked ...there's this suspense element ...who's after naku's life ...dutta & naku together... looking frwd to ud soon

Hiya Sona, Thank you for reading and commenting. Glad you're liking it. Lol yup TaSha together almost 24/7 and you'll see what I mean in the next UD...defo Balvant should be thanked if he doesn't get killed first 😆 Yeah the suspense element is not meant to be big trust me...but it will be interesting to see who comes into play there...anyway...thank you again..and will UD soon