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tamannA

@tamanna1391

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#201

by mistake you wrote chapter 7 as 6 correct it and res for comment

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tamannA

@tamanna1391

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#202

update dutta in guilt that nakusha is not herself because of him dutta cooking tasha conversation nakku no expectation pained dutta anay birthday family going good

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Warda.

@Warda.

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#203

Hi daya

oyeee why have you suddenly stepped on the accelerator ...driving this ss at full speed

i still have to catch up with the previous part ...will be back soon mishal wala promise 😳😆

just joking paka wala promise just less active on forum due to revision ...15 more days for independence

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dilse14

@dilse14

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#204

hi daya awesome ud 😊 dutta is thinking abt naku

she does have a affect on him

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Nakusha

@Nakusha

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#205

hi daya

loved the ud 😊happy diwali & properous new year

dutta is having tough time & must say he is giving thought abt the relationship he had with naku .she does have influence on him .knowing or unknowing his action shows concern for her

naku inspite of been close to him leaving in the same room ,does know there is a distance & she been her old self with her concern for him ,somewhere is making dutta realize she isn't wht he assumed her to be

dutta should particiate in master chef😆if we are judge he 'll win hands down

dutta doesn't have any memory & maybe leaving in the safe house together will trigger some fimiarity .although i don't want him to regain his memory wholely till he develops feeling for naku

😊

loving the story & thanks for annotation .do ud soon

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sona89

@sona89

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#206

Hi daya

Amazing UD😊...dutta is guarding naku ...the perk is he is getting to know his wife all over again...safe house ...dutta & naku together ...looking frwd to the next chapter

Happy diwali to you

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FASSBEN

@FASSBEN

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#207

HI Daya

I enjoyed the ud. Dutta tells Naku that he can cook and goes with her to the kitchen and shows her which leaves her amazed. Dutta still think about her and their relationship and what should he do about her after this is all over.What will happen to them now while they at the safe house look frwd to the next part can't wait

Take care now.

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Rose

@stranger2rose

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#208

hey daya ..very nice update ...liked how dutta is struggling to accept that someone can know him better than him and he doesn't know that someone at all ..he is so determined not to like her ..not to accept her as his wife but can't stop thinking about her ..lol..the bed sharing scene was cute ..i was in splits when he suspected himself of taking advantage of her in the past ..lol..dude you can not do such a thing even in your dreams and dutta cooking ..thats great ..i really like men who can cook..it makes them a little sensitive ..i feel ..their interaction was beautifully described ..good this time there going to a safer home instead of jungle ..lol..its not decent to romance openly in a jungle *winks* ..waiting for the next