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1st of all hi too all my LTlians...🤗after a long long time i am back to the forum, so hows all? lol i hope all remember me , dont ask who is this han🤔😆

^azybizy you're here like you said you would be :D hiii 🤗 missed you on the forum ...

group hug? most of our group is umh missing in action 😆😆 its only me and you here...three are awol

Originally posted by: -daya-

^azybizy you're here like you said you would be :D hiii 🤗 missed you on the forum ...

group hug? most of our group is umh missing in action 😆😆 its only me and you here...three are awol

hi daya

Hey azy

Good to see you back

How are you?

hi daya, nice ud , dutta will take his time to realise she is not there for his money. because of seema it's instilled in his mind. and that's where it's stuck at since th accident. he is noticing her goodness but believes it's all acting no one can b that good. i loved this chapter baji was as good as ever he knows dutta's happiness lies wih nakku,so somthing has to b done. i hope next ud is also long enjoy reading longer chapters because we get more details of characters. thanks and TC.

Originally posted by: afzal7861

hello daya baji how r you 😊

superb update and the way you write read the ud enjoyed every bit

now time to see what dutta s reaction and what he going to do

waiting next plzzz ud soon

Hi Afzal! I'm good, hope you are also :) ...Thank you for reading and commenting. It's greatly appreciated. Glad to hear you're enjoying it. Yup even I am not exactly sure how he will be but we'll see lol...thanks again...

Originally posted by: FASSBEN

HI Daya

👍🏼Thank for the ud I loved it especially when Baaji and Dutta had word. Baaji telling him Nakku is his wife and she is not going no were he must face it and deal with it. Baaji tells Dutta to get to know her and at the see how it turns out what you got to lose. I can't wait to see what Dutta is going to do.

Thank once again hope the next ud is not long to wait take care now.

Hiya ! Thank you for reading and commenting. Love reading them and it's greatly appreciated. I had the hardest time getting that conversation between Baaji and Dutta done. I wrote it four times...and gave up and just posted...still wasn't satisfied with it but glad to hear that was the highlight scene for most!

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

hiyaaa baji ummh dayaaa papsi...
YKB..
Chapter 3...
👏⭐️..brilliant mate just superb. Now the beauty of this FF is that it exemplifies their silence, that certainly has a voice,for it speaks. In this chapter Dutta's silence talks to the reader, and tells his tale,you have done a grand job in making it heard Daya, well done.
~a treat to get a peek into Dutta's mind filled with disinterest and indifference for Naku.
~lovely warming scene of Naku asleep on As's lap, ummh memory jogger.
~the complete scene in AS's bedroom is amusing to read, but you got the point across that he notices the mangalsutra ,although he's in denial about it's significance.
~ his battle with his desire to booze was quite funny as well,but for the fact that he realizes something has checked him,from actually doing so.
~the highlight has to be the well portrayed character of Baji,very well written indeed. The adda conversation between the two friends was all and all a bonding session between two males.It was noteworthy to hear Baji knock some sense into the old block. It may appear that Baji was getting no where ,but Dutta engages in the conversation regarding his wife is a step in the right direction ..which you have shown..
thanks Daya ,loved this piece of writing,please continue ..Iam waiting to learn more.
much love ,as ever yours xx hammie.

You were fast! I posted quicktime for you you know :P ...I am happy to hear you thought it to be brilliant. I am trying to keep the silence in reality going and focus on what it is his mind is doing. The mangalsutra was almost like a dude just look here and tell me if you still think you're not married thing LOL...it was to give him a bit of a wake up call...and of course I am glad you highlighted the Duji convo because I had the hardest time with that...I just couldnt get it right and in the end i just gave up...settled for whatever came about so really glad to hear you liked that bit...it was a bonding session. I am happy your loving this SS...afterall you're to thank for it even coming about...thank you so much for the lovely comments...lots of love mate see ya in pms...

Originally posted by: tamanna1391

update baaji knowking sense in duttA

Thanks Rani for reading and commenting, always appreciate them...
glad you liked the UD 😊

Originally posted by: priyaraghav

I love the way u write... Update was superbbb... N the way u conveyed the emotions of dutta n his way of thinking bout nakku was truly brilliant !!!!

Hey hun, thank you ever so much for the lovely comments. Glad you like it, this new style for writing can be quite a pain but I am liking the advantages of it as well. Thankd for reading...hope your youth festival is going well?

Originally posted by: stranger2rose

its wonderful to see such a sensible and matured baaji who is not afraid to put his thoughts across ..in the last chapter also he handled nakku really well and here also he was making dutta understand with his logical reasoning ..i wish he was like this in the show too ..now coming to dutta it has always been difficult for him to accept or face the real situation ..he may realize them but it takes lot convincing to make him ACCEPT things and move on ..for instance here too he knows that she will not leave him but still expects the opposite ..instead of embracing his present he tries to shun it away ..once again very well written update

Hi Rose! Thanks for reading and leaving your lovely comments. Yes, I always thought even behind the happy go lucky Baaji there was a lot of potential for a serious, intelligent, sensible man...and it's a shame he wasn't used to his potential in the show...especially as the most trusted right hand man...but i wanted to make him capable of doing work and sensiable and matured in the circumstances which require it...and Dutta lol ...he would do anything to run away but nothing to find a reason to stay put...stubborn man doesn't like to accept there may come a time where everything may seem alright..he is too fixed on the idea that life is not at all pleasant on any terms...lets see what makes him start falling again ... i am still working on that...anyway thanks again rose 😃

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

awesome update

this time we get to see dutta's thoughts

Hey hey! Thank you so much for reading and commenting. Glad you're liking it. Yes Dutta's thoughts, its different to write and difficult and fun at the same time...it's like trying to figure out how one's brain works lol...

Originally posted by: emilymine32

hi daya

love the ud

dutta carried naku in his arm for him he did it for AS comfort

baji has more sense than dutta

hope he gives a chance to naku

waiting for next

Hey emily. Thank you for reading and commenting. It's always greatly appreciated. Love to read what people thought, it keeps me going :) Thanks a lot !

Originally posted by: sona89

Hi daya, loved the UD...dutta had developed some feeling for naku ...its good 😊...baji -dutta cono gives hope ...Next ud soon

Hi hun, thank you so much for reading and commenting. Dutta has noticed the good in Naku ...but feels as if its too good to be true and wants to reject the idea of it all...Baaji and Dutta convo was needed to allow forward movement with Naku and Dutta..anyway I will UD as soon as I write the UD lol..which I haven't even started yet...

Originally posted by: Nakusha

hi daya

as expected awesome ud ,dutta is spying on naku now😆he heard the fact but can't blame him if its heard for him to belive goodness in a girl with 3 quality he despise on

no doubt dutta is attracted to towards naku innocence which is reflected in her eye

baji did the best thing by making dutta realise he needs to give naku a chance & dutta agreed to prove him wrong ,the scene made me nostalgic

dutta heart will beat for naku again coz her conditional luv will win him over ,i 'm loving the fact dutta has no memory of koel naku & still naku will make a impact time will tell or daya will😆

thanxs to u creative guys we get to see different facets of ltl ,next part soon & definately long😆

Hiya Nakusha...lol @ dutta spying well that's certainly one way to put it! Exactly ! he won't believe in her innocence even though its right in his face because he's too stubborn lol...Glad you liked the scene between Baaji and Dutta, it was much needed and a good way to highlight their friendship. Lets see how Dutta and Naku's relationship moves forward 😊 Thank you for reading and commenting!

Originally posted by: eternity_of_luv

Hey daya

How are you?

Amazing SS dear

enjoy reading it

so memory loss concept is used

poor nakku like always:-p

Dutta struggling to figure out nakku's status in his life

He is trying to ignore nakku and don't want to accept the realtion but he is affected by her presence :-)

Baaji finally talk to him and give him some suggestions.

thanks for pm dear

Hiya Ranju. Long time no see. I am fine hope you are also :) Thanks for reading and commenting. Glad you like the concept. Yup he's trying hard to ignore her that he actually ends up noticing her lol...he is definitely affected by her presence and hopefully soon it will move in the right direction ;)

Originally posted by: -Azy-

1st of all hi too all my LTlians...🤗after a long long time i am back to the forum, so hows all? lol i hope all remember me , dont ask who is this han🤔😆

now coming to the FF - Finished reading the prologue... So ill first comment on that 😉

Wow daya , u have given exact feeling n POv from nakkus side... It was so beautifully written 👍🏼

"A rebellious and wrong decision by my sister had made my life spiral in a different direction. My mother's fear and instinct to protect me from a corrupt world had her making decisions in haste. I was to cover my beauty and live an ugly girl because otherwise my pretty face would only be a curse. I think I was a curse, I was unwanted, I was humiliated, frowned upon, made an outcast, and always fell into the likes of some problem."

i really really like the way u have penned it that because her sisters mistake nakku had to under go all these tortures but it was all part n parcel of her final destiny , meeting Dutta Sriram Patel ! 😎

And the memory loss n how D only remember till seema n aftermath track only, has good scope in story telling, u have got a good story to tell also the title is superb, who ever who selected must say fantabulous👏 ,and the best part in this FF is u have kept the characters original n true to their nature , looking forward to read the balance part soon 😳 will comment chapter by chapter so it will be easy for u to reply 😛🤣

Till then lots of love n group hug 🤗

Azy

Hi Azy *big polar bear hug* 🤗oh I miss those lol...I am very happy to see you back in the forum and that too in my SS thread :D ... Glad you liked the concept, yup characters will try to stay close to LTL1 and the twist will take you through their journey and inner turmoils ...right through their minds...you'll see as you read the chapters too...hope you like the other chaps...thank you for reading and commenting...Love you lots...will talk to you on phone or pms..see ya later...