Originally posted by: Warda.
daya me here yaar 😳
Hiya Warda, nice to have you here 😃
Glad to note you haven't fallen into some hole this time😆😆
sorry super late this time😳
loved both chp 2 and 3 so much ...one dealing with naku's turmoil the other showing a bit mellowed dutta...
Chapter2 : Amazing portration of nakusha's character ...how much i love her never giving up attitude...her patience and above all her positive attitude... "wishful thinking' loved these words for hope is the only factor that keeps our life moving ...things will one day end up being well ummhh perfect in deed ...typical trait of a human who keeps searching for the next best option the way naku shows her concern can make any person belive that she is genuine ...glad she took the first step by stepping into his room again which im sure one day will be their room again...dutta though startled could not throw her out :)
Glad you liked her inner turmoil. Lol you know what wishful thinking is not a crime and on her part that's about all she can do for the time being...like you said hope is whats keeping at least her life moving...her hope that one day it will all be fine again..her genuine behaviour is noticed but denied by out very fav person because to him its just unbelievable...no one could be that good or so he thinks..and you've mentioned a good point...in all that he wants her to leave on her own..not once did he wish to throw her out...says a lot i would say 😉
baaji ohh im sure will fix it for sure for them... the last bit made me extremly excited that he will speak about this issue ...may be its my confidence in baaji ...who can go to any extent to fix things between his bhao and vahini ...vahini ji 😆
Yup Baaji...gotta love that guy...he'll do what he has to, to get things rolling
Chapter 3: this has to be fav.one so far for im loving this struggle dutta is going through trying to ignore her...can he please stop trying coz its impossible for him😛
You know I have to admit this was a chapter I rather enjoyed writing, even I was trying to think how would one who acts his way think about the situations in his mind..and i thought it would be fun to show his inner battle...and yup he trying to do something impossible for him...but he will continue to try until he gives in 😆
At least now he started thinking probably accepted too that she is his wife...ummhh how ??that is still a mystery for him though... ohhh any marriage video or pics yaar kuch tu help kar 😆...or call that purohit ji who certainly had great memories with dutta *cough*
naku i knew would certainly not need to try anything for he will certainly acknowledge her good deeds...her selfless love...
He does know she's his wife but exactly the question is how did that happen. He knows himself and his firm beliefs so he doesn't trust he went into with his whole heart...something got them married...I want to say fate for now 😆😉
loved the tickling of her anklets becoming his wake up alarm...so wish it to be a forever wake up call 😳
Wait till he finds out he gave them to her 🤣 i can't wait to write that in one UD 😆
AS-naku have great bonding...naku sleeping in her lap must be a sight...and an evesdroping dutta cant even imagine 😆
curiosity could kill a person..i would've done it...just because i know if i walked a way my mind with start making things up LOL
ohhh i was expecting he wold certainly wake her up by pating her shoulder...but sometimes stars are really kind 😳...
I thought about waking her up but then thought it'd be nicer if she didn't know and made it less awkward for him so he had no reason to immediately throw her on the bed and run 😆😆 imagine that !
baaji finally putting some senses in that ultimate gadha who certainly have the answer of all the questions saying 'i dont know'...errmmm why do these lines sound familiar 😆...
but at least the thinking process is on and i hope he comes to a conclusion soon...
Yes but we have yet to see how that conversation has gotten by with Dutta...but Baaji will help them i guarantee that much
thanks a lot ...really enjoed both uds ...and yes waiting for next one to be posted soon ...now that i have posted so asking haq se 😆
see you in pms :)
Thank you warda for commenting...and catching up..lol
Uhmm regarding UD well I uhmm have not even looked at starting one..
all i have on the page is 'Chapter 4' written across the top 😆 I don't suppose that will do ? 😆😆 hopefully soon inspiration will strike but you know that some other writing has kept me busy..I didn't know how much work it was to build a character from scratch...argh can be frustrating but am addicted to making to make sense😳 anyway we shall take this convo to pms 😉😛 see you mate!