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Posted: 13 years ago
hi oxygen😊rose
guys i have rechristen rose coz she is oxygen of our forum 😊
i 'm speechless this UD has supressed ur previous awesome writing .when the prologue of the ff was posted .i had many ques & u said slowly u would know why naku is hesitant to express her luv for dutta .i still waiting for the ans .its a awesome suspense u have created
the whole chain of event the way u have disclose is awesome .naku been the same girl dutta fell in luv & he is her luv too .there has to be something in her past which is making her hold her feeling .
i 'm so inquisitive & eagerly waiting for next ud .loved this one tc😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi rose (oxy) Awesome ud😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
HI ROSE visited the forum to read the ff...😊loved it ...busy with project work ...next UD soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi oxygen😊rose
guys i have rechristen rose coz she is oxygen of our forum 😊
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hmmm...good thought indeed she's oxygen! but look at the latest ud...she made me breathless😉😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

wonderfu ud rose. dutta confessed his love only to be rejected. it's confusing in her flashback she fell in love with him . that was the day she was singing the song when dutta first heard her. so i wonder what's happened now did she marry him under false pretense.

rose please post the next chapter soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi Rose

👏beautiful UD Dutta finds out that is was Nakku who sang that day not supriya I knew it was nakku and then he tells her that he love her but what does she do pushed dutta and runs away leave him heartbroken just like when he ask her to marry him in the show I hope he does not do anything to himself.
Dutta saved her in the past and she fell in love with maybe that why she married him. They are both in love but something is stopping her I hope in the next UD we will find out why she did this

Once again lovely UD as all can't wait for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey rosie!🤗

Why are you looking outside the window, arey baba sooraj purab se hi nikla hai! 😛your bandid queen avtaar in yesterday's PM was enough to bring me on time😆

Humko pyaar hua………ishhh humko bhi! 😳Thank you thank you thank you thank you, at least a confrontation for sups though civil then too, I feel so satisfied! Thand par gayi kaleje witch (no pun😆)hayee the way he stopped her midway, by using his palm, if ever he'll do that to me, I bet I'll kiss his palms,😳 o wait a sec, why will he stop me ever midway, he'll toh patiently go through my chatter sessions with a sweet smile playing on his lips, admiring my capacity to banter……..ishhh how romantic!☺️ Well leaving my love story aside lets focus on this wonderful story of yours!⭐️ Must say you have used sups in a brilliant way👏, everything related to her has been in so balanced proportion till now, never ever given extra footage yet made her play a pivotal role in the story, she kinds of plays not exactly a catalyst but definitely some one has till now managed to give right amount of jolt at the right time! Knowing very well the amount of hatred she enjoys from your reader, yet you kept your treatment subtle towards her, remarkable maintenance of the key essence of your writing and this story in particular as well. Unpredictable………that's what dutta is and that's exactly what his life is! Never ever he'd expected to love naku, but did ever he expected sups to be the first person to witness him confess that! It's heart warming to see how they both became extremely protective for each other in front of sups! You are so mean so so so mean, in the very first update, I predicted that it's not sups who sings and what you did? Kept mum! Atleast you should have praised me na!😔

After so many days a duji moment, no one replace baaji, coz no one in this whole world can compliment dutta that who CHEHEK raha hai……..that was so baaji, yaar I love the dialogue or antics you prescribe for baaji, and dutta or naku may go out of character for a moment but baaji…….. never👏

So, finally dutta ke dimaag ki ghanti baji……….. and he realized it was her wife's voice who casted a spell over him. Yaar tell me ye ladki hai ya alladin ka chiraag she sews, cooks studies and even sings? ek toh you gave him dutta upar se so much qualities……not fair! Well jokes apart, that something I kept looking whenever read a dutta's narrative. it was she who's voice touched his soul that's why he felt a connection with her at a different level I knew love isn't about logic yet felt a reason for such strong inclination!.Got it today……….me is very happy a paisa wasool update! Well you can very well imagine my extent of excitement on getting a rain sequence, not only the rains but also the description of the environment before rains, when he came back was a treat to my imagination,,waah! Maza aa gaya and what followed next gave me goosebumps, it was not passionate (completely) and an glad it wasn't the whole sequence remained a step behind being passionate, which felt so correct. To me the whole sequence was tender, subtle yes erotic in its own sense yet remained in the limits of being the "first step of a couple" and both hugging each other under the rain, picturesque is the only word that comes to my mind! And what? She pushed him, DSP? 😲This girl is really getting on to my nerves now, give me a broom, I want to😡……agrhh!😡 Kehte hain, jab koi ladki 700 years tak tapasya karti hai tab ja ke DSP usko ek baar kiss karte hain, and she pushed him, I feel like pushing her from the terrace!😡 But you know what when she said "nahin ye nahin ho sakta" I was like hain, ye mera dialogue kyun bol rahi hai!😆 Well now that's confusing, I mean when she too is equally involved with then why? And the flashback it toh the most confusing and probably the biggest twist, so madam was head over heels from day one and was only acting so indifferently following the golden rule that the more you ignore some one the more you grab attention! God I've never seen some one so cunning in my whole life!😡 And what a luck yaar, even in a dark clody night she gets to meet DSP and here even when I roam using a binoculars in a bright sunny only get to see gandi shakal wale boys.LOL who naku hi kya who doesn't have an extra black coat on her face, be it mud or soot!😆 But seriously I'm dam confused I mean she loved that nerdy right, and if she loves dutta then why didn't she reciprocated his feelings, uff I need answers asap, and I know, all you'll do is seal your lips and enjoy, thank god you have decided to update frequently!

That was a mind blowing delievely, enjoyed to the core, I know from now onwards we'll be getting mixed updates but I don't have a problem if they remain to be so……you know what *blush* but kindly next time make naku act a li'l more sensibly I was happily imaginging myself in her place and sweetu's lips brushing mine when her drama broke my spell!😡😆 Enjoyed the update to the core! Plz plz update soon

Waiting for the next!❤️

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! superbbb yaar...
so tasha r in love with each other,from starting itself...lovely...looking fwd...

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Posted: 13 years ago
@ priya ..i am so happy to know that you are liking this story . thanks a lot

@ tamanna ..glad u liked the updt and why nakku pushed him back you will know soon

@ emily ..yup dutta confessed his feelings only to be rejected by her. he will be heartbroken ..but lets see how tasha handle this ..thanks for your comments.

@ afzal ..thank u so much for appreciating the update hope you enjoy the next part as well

@ sasiri ..why nakku refused him you shall know very soon ..till then enjoy the story

@ daya ..thanks so much for reading all the remaining parts and i am glad you liked them. yes nakku's refusal reminds me of LTL and she too has a reason to do so which you shall know in the next part. i hope it lives upto your expectations.

@ nakusha ..lol this new name is funny ..yup the prologue was quite confusing but i'd said as you will read , slowly all your doubts will be cleared ..so i have stuck to my words and thanks so much for appreciating my writing

@ mirage ...thank u

@ sona ..thanks for taking out time to read the update

@ sinak ..thanks a lot

@ tahera ..i know the story is still a little confusing but dont worry everything will sort out soon . till then just sit back and enjoy reading . thanks for sharing your views

@ fassben ..good to know that you knew that it was nakku who was singing but why she pushed him back that is a big question which will be answered soon. thanks for your comments.

@ dilse ..thank u

@ bluepal ..yup tasha are in love and glad u found the updt superb

@ uwith ..thanks a lot
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aishwish

Hey rosie!🤗hi aish

Why are you looking outside the window, arey baba sooraj purab se hi nikla hai! 😛your bandid queen avtaar in yesterday's PM was enough to bring me on time😆..what to do sometimes i have to change my avtaar ..glad its working

Humko pyaar hua'''ishhh humko bhi!..what's new ..lol.. 😳Thank you thank you thank you thank you, at least a confrontation for sups though civil then too, I feel so satisfied!..me too ..that was much required ..Thand par gayi kaleje witch..thand pe gayi ? koi nah ab kaleje vich aag laga dete hain(no pun😆)hayee the way he stopped her midway, by using his palm, if ever he'll do that to me, I bet I'll kiss his palms,😳 o wait a sec, why will he stop me ever midway, he'll toh patiently go through my chatter sessions with a sweet smile playing on his lips, admiring my capacity to banter''..ishhh how romantic!☺️ Well leaving my love story aside lets focus on this wonderful story of yours!⭐️ Must say you have used sups in a brilliant way👏, thanks so much for appreciating her cameo which always managed to push the story forward ..everything related to her has been in so balanced proportion till now, never ever given extra footage yet made her play a pivotal role in the story, she kinds of plays not exactly a catalyst but definitely some one has till now managed to give right amount of jolt at the right time! Knowing very well the amount of hatred she enjoys from your reader, yet you kept your treatment subtle towards her, remarkable maintenance of the key essence of your writing and this story in particular as well. Unpredictable'''that's what dutta is and that's exactly what his life is! Never ever he'd expected to love naku, but did ever he expected sups to be the first person to witness him confess that! It's heart warming to see how they both became extremely protective for each other in front of sups! You are so mean so so so mean, in the very first update,..lol..i remember very clearly and i had slapped my head in disappointment , i was like , ye lo kardiya suspense ka kachra ..I predicted that it's not sups who sings and what you did? Kept mum! Atleast you should have praised me na!😔

After so many days a duji moment, no one replace baaji, coz no one in this whole world can compliment dutta that who CHEHEK raha hai''..that was so baaji, yaar I love the dialogue or antics you prescribe for baaji, and dutta or naku may go out of character for a moment but baaji''.absolutely ... never👏

So, finally dutta ke dimaag ki ghanti baji'''.. and he realized it was her wife's voice who casted a spell over him. Yaar tell me ye ladki hai ya alladin ka chiraag she sews, cooks..see sewing and cooking is no big deal considering her back ground moreover girls know all these things, i do but i have doubts about u ..lol..studies and even sings? ..yeah singing is extra talent which i lack ..ek toh you gave him dutta upar se so much qualities''not fair! Well jokes apart, that something I kept looking whenever read a dutta's narrative. it was she who's voice touched his soul that's why he felt a connection with her at a different level I knew love isn't about logic..and i had hard time explaining you that ..lol.. yet felt a reason for such strong inclination!.Got it today'''.me is very happy a paisa wasool update! Well you can very well imagine my extent of excitement on getting a rain sequence, absolutely ..i can imagine you dancing ..not only the rains but also the description of the environment before rains, when he came back was a treat to my imagination,,waah! Maza aa gaya and what followed next gave me goosebumps..lol..goosebumps , so quickly ..what will happpen later my dear , it was not passionate (completely) and an glad it wasn't the whole sequence remained a step behind being passionate, which felt so correct...thanks for feeling that the passion was in limits To me the whole sequence was tender, subtle yes erotic in its own sense yet remained in the limits of being the "first step of a couple" and both hugging each other under the rain, picturesque is the only word that comes to my mind! And what? She pushed him, DSP?i knew this was coming ..infact i was surprised that this time your comments didnot start with appreciating her antics 😲This girl is really getting on to my nerves now, give me a broom, I want to😡''agrhh!😡 Kehte hain, jab koi ladki 700 years tak tapasya karti hai tab ja ke DSP usko ek baar kiss karte hain, ok thats news to me ...btw who told u this ...aish mata ?????????and she pushed him, I feel like pushing her from the terrace!😡 But you know what when she said "nahin ye nahin ho sakta" I was like hain, ye mera dialogue kyun bol rahi hai..lol..right!😆 Well now that's confusing, I mean when she too is equally involved with then why? And the flashback it toh the most confusing and probably the biggest twist,..yes its indeed the biggest twist now keep thinking how and why so madam was head over heels from day one and was only acting so indifferently following the golden rule that the more you ignore some one the more you grab attention! God I've never seen some one so cunning in my whole life..so u have started your fav pastime , nakku bashing , chalo carry on And what a luck yaar, even in a dark clody night she gets to meet DSP and here even when I roam using a binoculars in a bright sunny only get to see gandi shakal wale boys.LOL who naku hi kya who doesn't have an extra black coat on her face, be it mud or soot!😆 But seriously I'm dam confused I mean she loved that nerdy right, and if she loves dutta then why didn't she reciprocated his feelings, uff I need answers asap, and I know, all you'll do is seal your lips and enjoy, thank god you have decided to update frequently..and i am loving this ..feels great 😳!

That was a mind blowing delievely, enjoyed to the core, I know from now onwards we'll be getting mixed updates but I don't have a problem if they remain to be so''you know what..i know exactly what u mean , hope you are able to survive those updates ..*blush* but kindly next time make naku act a li'l more sensibly I was happily imaginging myself in her place and sweetu's lips brushing mine..thank god she pushed him back 😡 when her drama broke my spell!😡😆 Enjoyed the update to the core! Plz plz update soon

Waiting for the next!❤️

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