FF:MERI ADHURI KAHAANI last part pg-62& nt -64 - Page 40

HI rose

Hi rose

lovely UD Nakku forgives and forget what supriya did and said about her sahab and it's all thanks to dutta's words that the sisters have made up.

Thanks for the UD can't wait for the next one

sorry for the double post Rose, comments edited in res place..😳

Lets have a look what damage miss (what to do, don't have a heart to address her Mrs.) nakusha has done to my love life when I wasn't present ! *tries to put a brave face*. Uff! It's not at all easy loving sweetu, he's so bhola bhaala, this naku😡 always succeeds in fooling my gadha! This cunning lady😡 first of all quickly left the place as soon as it got rushed and reached to a safe place then…..then kya? Thoda sa ketchup lagaya and sweetu got fooled! Does she seriously want me to believe that badly cooked story of hers about the mangalsutra? She herself threw the mangalsutra, coz she wanted a new costly mangalsutra. No body believes me😭, but I've faith…………a "sach ka saamna" day will surely come!😳

Hey rosie!🤗 Hugz kisses!😛

Now, mera humsaaya……….hayee dam romantic!😍 The opening para……too good!👏 No doubt dutta respects women (a lot) but with naku on his side he's being attentive towards WOMENHOOD and respecting it, for the first time in his life he's not merely just thinking about the fair sex but trying to explore them. Before naku women to him was a loving mother or a sister or may be a decked up doll who could play his wife, but once naku happened slowly he's realizing what difference actually a woman can make to a man's life. Loved the fact that while watching the wife feeding her husband, he had a mixed feeling a sense of contentment that even he has someone and a sense of void too at the same time! Phir se his head is paining? How much more headache you have planned for sweetu?😆 Aww……..the couch scene, you won't believe but I've always imagined a scene on similar lines at various points during various shows, coz I genuinely believe it's one of the best way to show how badly one is missing other, but finally it's you who have fulfilled my fantasy! Thank you. LOL………..mostly it's the wife who dreams about his hubby stuck in a problem! But it was a nice way to show how deeply dutta is connected to naku! Aah! She goes missing,⭐️ but later is found! The whole searching sequence where dutta realizes the consequences of bloodshot, was no doubt brilliant, when you put on someone else's shoe only then you realize! But are you planning a redemption and reformation for dutta? If yes, kindly don't make it completely just a little bit of reformation, plz I love my bad boy!😳 Loved it when during his search he hoped to see her in every clinic/hospital he went and at the same time he didn't!

And when he found her, the tear drop…now it's a li'l tricky, DSP crying? But then I could very well imagine the single tear drop and how brilliantly Mishal used to hold it! Wah! Maza aa gaya imagine kar ke! And tada the hug, soo romantic, I mean a hug is romantic, but this one had the tasha element more than the previous one! It feels so correct to see that slowly and gradually(not at once) tasha element is getting relevant in their gestures!last time whenshe wasn't well there was a hug and this time also there a hug that's why I keep saying she purposefully gets ill.😆 No matter how I find it hard to swallow but MS is equal to life for Indian women, will I too someday feel like this and poor dutta he's getting so confused with what now a days naku says😆, but am glad that she expressed what she feels about the MS. You know when he was about to take out themangalsutra and the old lady knocked I was like ek aur KMH! but later when he tied it at the mandir, in front of shiv jii…..i was like right time pe right kaam karna koi rose se seekhe! The whole mandir scene………..perfect esp. coz he tied the MS again with right emotions, and also that a sense of faith in HIM is overpowering dutta. I hope he gets what he wished, and with you around I know he will, the end note was perfect exactly the way I like!

Spl, mention.

The flashbacks which dutta kept having, I don't know how to describe it, it was melancholic yet romantic, even when he remembered the dupatta in the car, something clicked, not only in this update but whenever in the whole story comes a FB something clicks!

And now a spl spl mention: the whole twist of naku going missing was a normal accident which could happen to anyone, and not a gangster rivalry or something larger than life………loved this fact!

To be continued…………

😛Remember I always used to find naku's narrative more interesting than dutta's, but now I love both equally, 16 chapters rosie, it's a long way, and you have managed to cover it brilliantly! I still prefer single narratives more than the mixed ones, may be becoz it's more tiring for you this way.😛 "shukriya kaise karoon" kaise bhi karo but at least karo, she is so thankless, it's because I sacrificed my love she's having a gala time! Okay the first scene talks about stem stitch, I had to ask my mom what a stem stitch looks like, that makes me wonder, did you knew about various stitches or even you had to a li'l research?

So, naku is continuing cooking for dutta, good! And great that she persisted on adding more hue to dutta's wardrobe and for that matter life as well, I mean who could imagine that a day will come, when DSP will bother about his attire for the sake of attending a baby shower! Well we get to see various shades of dutta in your various works but one aspect I've always found consistent is "chali JAIYO, le AAIYO,ek kaam KARIYO"!😆 and wait a sec she thinks he needs antics to grab her attention! her? Out of this whole world😲, ek toh she purposefully broke the button, and look at her attitude man!😡 Naah seriously I loved loved loved the sequence, I mean it felt so nice to see a couple having genuine talks instead of blowing curtains, and eye locks,(and no "shirt da button" song..lol) and the dialogue where he says to hell with what others think about their relationship, god! I'm dead, it's my favorite dialogue till now, and the way he tucked her hair, soo casually, finally he got to do tht, his hands are itching to do that since their beech sequence..lol! but my most fav. Gesture of not only this particular update but the whole ff is when she stubbornly shakes her head in no and he grins………don't ask me why, coz I myself don't know why! They getting more and more comfortable!

Don't you think you were way too more "civil" with sups? Okay seriously…..i loved it this way only, that's how real relationships work, bitter sweet, if there would be loud confrontation slaps and all, may be it could worked to garner TRPs but certainly ruined the essence of the FF! it must have been difficult for you na to suppress the desire to dhulaofy her! But since sups got an respectful exit (I suppose it's the end of her track) I want you to compensate it with something good in the coming updates *throws tantrum*

The baby shower was sweet with naku dancing and then getting embarrassed on finding dutta watching, I can totally imagine mishal's tilted smile while watching her! Strange no body teased them about having their own baby shower or may everyone knew that it's not naku who'll get to have baby shower, it's me *blush*

Loved both the updates, do the next one soon!

Waiting for the next❤️

^^luks like a promo is on its way

love the promo rose , dutta realising the feelings for sups for what they were, just an attraction. and bring it on quick uds😃 yayyy

Woww... Update is amazing rose... N its gud u'll update future parts soon... Ummm good for me i'll comment on each update... ;)