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Posted: 13 years ago
hi pappy... faithful,relieable,durable...woh tu hai Baji ,dutta ka liya! listen the siggy picture of Dugi is mind blowing ,just the way hammie likes it, col,cut throat no nonsense! but then this kind of stuff,apart from writing a brilliant on going FF,and making tailor made [in my case] Vms remains your strength

Aagai ...mein aagai and surprisingly first to reserve as well :)
So me now getting to your UD...talk about catching up big time...you know it was four UD's for the other one, jagz just posted last chapter today so went all in one go...now me back here again...you know me already read yours so let me get going with the comments for your wonderful UD...ready ready..Chapter 42 "now go we in content"...

So Khan dearest is being interrogated as to what in haywire happened and she handled that situation quite well in my point of view. Not saying too much but just enough to keep the quiet...well done lady! I guess the thought is Khan should've been able to get herself out of the mess herself really but when it comes to family emotions always play no matter how strong you are elsewhere some become weak before family for they consider the repercussions of their actions...that may be harmful/hurtful, before they are able to take any action. I'd like to believe that was the case with Khan as well, for her situation was quite sticky for if she had just walked out of there somehow she may have lost the support of the only family member she had and on the other hand there was not be able to make them understand her stand point on the marriage at this point in her life...anyway all done dusted from one side and now to be rid of this issue in the school and she'll be back to what she loves...

it appears Daya you might be the lone person who supports hammie on the extience of Khan,she remains the most unpopular character since all the villians of LTL1 put together, so thank you for seeing it my way..

I am sure you have gathered by now, I like the way Naku handles her patients...professionally yet allowing enough comfort for the build of trust to be able to hear her patients with words bringing more depth. I absolutely love Nandi and Naku's relationship and always quite enjoy their little chatter...and the fact that with each day improvement is evident and moving one step closer to becoming independent...that sense of accomplishment at the ending of each therapy...and loved the added views on disability, it's a great issue that does need to be addressed and tackled in many places...starting with something as simple as benches...great going Naku...am glad to see her heartfelt passion for this career...great hammie...well written scene :) the issue of disability..I suspect you covered ,or certainly touched on it,in one of your own,FF's ,now which one I can't really put my finger on it..

Parekh, Dutta, and Khan in meeting...and after the questioning session with her Parekh informs her of the fact that this will be brought to court...and of course that leaves Khan surprised, shocked and probably already foreseeing the possible repercussions of what may happen if it goes that far...she is asked to leave while Dutta puts in his assessment and opinion of the situation. Yes, as parekh states, this man is not short of compassion...or emotions...Dutta correctly pointed out the imbalances that may happen between family ties and the situation was believed to be one and turned out to be another in her defense...now Parekh is agreeing to the thought yet the idea is that Khan will have to say this all on her own and find that loop hole without anyone's influence...and of course when called back khan does exactly that...I am not surprised..I know she would've thought of a way out as well :) of course she will still get her share of the punishment in terms of not letting others know of her absence and what not...but I would say this was well handled ! well written mate !

thanks for your positive comments daya ,now if you found it well written,the reason well may be that I was motivated to write about it ,it was almost a respite from the usual gist of the original tale!

Butter will not melt in his mouth...expression ...next step after tutoring ...most probably marriage...liked Parekh's teasing and his response...haayee ...looking forward to that house arrest... hummh ,up to my neck about his topic,seems I can never really veer far enough from it..I suppose,I have to accept this final outcome ..

So Naku is all set with a plan to start to fix a problem...it needs to start somewhere right...good going girl! Am proud to see her take that extra step :)yes this you might say is in the true spirit of LTL1...the story of Nakusha...a strong one

Oh my lord...look at these two...again naku letting the kurta engulf her as he dives into the chunni to engulf it LOL...the pair of them are quite something I tell you ...glad you enjoyed the incorporation of innate objects

Haaa omg regrets on what they missed out on...their first flight trip together and yes he bloody did nothing...ahhh he thinking about her and how attractive she was...and becoming that inflatable mattress with her eating habits LOL haahaa loved his reasoning for that...her depression without him lmao he is the way he is daya ,take it or leave it!..after all for Naku he remains an informed choice,so.. you know where the inflatable mattress remark came from...😆

He rung her up and here we go... hammie ...why this kolaveri ...kolaveri...kolaveri di! He should've sang it to her...you know the part up about empty life-u girlu come-u life-u reverse-u gear-u lol...or the god-u I am dying nowu ...she is happy how-u? :P look what you have done...i have not listened to this song in a while and now its all stuck in my head haha ...waise I am in love with the other songs in this movie...all are very nice..lyrics bhi...but are in tamil so not international hits ...anyway back to the telephone conversation...aww Naku also in sulk after missing out on all that could've been esp at holi...the woman does desire a little too much in public from a military man :P yup well indeed major did miss his chances he had...at least he took note of that :P ... anyway the whole of this scene was lovely...hmm and now she has his support in some way to make the difference with her fund raising plans...sounds good...what a nice end to the U..thanks for recaping the hilarious lyrics of the song.yes maybe he should have sung it to her,but the only music to his ears is the rattle of gun shot!ok.may be I should listen to the other songs..hummh. Naku can dream on ,but that's about all..even we don't really expect dutta to do something ,and most definately not in public... fund raising ,I tell you paps it's doing my head in!

Now loved the UD all in all...enjoyed it ...thank you for the pleasurable read...a great writer you are daya is a huge fan ...ab me going for breakfast and then will need to get ready for uni...soo phir milenge chalte chalte...saturday classes SUCK! thanks Daya for your lovely ,extensive comment ,enjoyed it ,very grateful to youfor making the time lardki...mujhe pata hai, you don't know whether you are coming or going...thank you..more so for the picture below...xxwith love hammie


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baat sun,when you told me yesterday you had unreserved...I only came to check the baacha, tera comment nehi parha tha ,but Daya read it raat ko and she said it is good...so it had better be worth while...sorry me being shirty...but you know that me kiya hoon..chaal its good to see you punctual on my thread!😆

Loved the update hammie 😊 thanks baaby..means a lot to me..
BAck to business both the parties ... i always enjoy this two different scenarios ..the way your ff proceedsone dealing with tasha...family and other side is work...such is life,tried to imitate life
khan getting grilled by her course mates...their cuirosity to know about what happened with her was at peak..specially major rescuing her made it even more spicy for them... kapur ohh felt a bit for the lad ...poor guy finding the hints if she got married ...his insecurity made me feel for
him...but still im glad khan stood by her words of getting settled with waseem..kind of liked him more... harmless ...insaan ki zubaan...nice..yes Khan is professional,only discloses on a needs to know basis,plus she is enough trouble,s it is, Kapur tu pagal hai, lagta hai pheli bar soni kurriye dekhi hai.. word of mouth ,thujhe pata hai how important it is especially in our part of the world, although, not always,as in formal situations,marriage ,property, and other legal matters,written binding is important.

AS is such a sweet MIL... sending sweets with naku for her collegues...hai jalebi...yumm.. now i can see quite a lot of food items coming in the last two three updates...lol.. haan jab se tune ladoo,aur gujar ka halwa kheliya hai mujhe...haaha ,ker muhje obese tu..bad kurri!
oh great progress in nandi ...learning how to sit and stand on her own... at last naku close
to her target...both the girls deserve applauses ...naku for builting that confidence in nandi...and nandi for keeping that positivity to get recovered alive in her 😊 yess,I rember when I got ill, how you ,daya ,brv, naku ,tamanna ,ivy,and others gave me positive input by their caring remarks😊
i hope the young girl starts walking soon...i love her a lot when like a teen age girl she gets excited to hear about nakus love life...her keen interest brings a smile on my face ... though naku smartly keeps it brief always :)Nandi,chaska leti hain ,and yess,Naku knows when to stop,mind you ,Naku too ,some where along the line,likes to talk about her man

Pity what ever Nandi said about the way disabled people are treated exists in our socity...will take ages for us to treat them as a normal person... i always found two extremes in such cases ...either we pity them too much by giving special treatment to them or ignore them as if they are not a part of us ...not like us... the second glance we give them when passing by them i assume is enough to deteriorate their self confidence...i hope the day comes soon when we start treating themas somebody who is very much like us ...capable of doing things the way we do ...or sometimes far better than a normal person...for i belive when Almighty takes away any one thing which He has blessed every other person ...He gives something special in return soon...something which overshadows your weakness ,...He is always Just with His creation 😊tune mujhe se zayeeda aachi thran se express kiya hai kurriye! loved the comment. Remember when Dutta lost his eyes he had to sharpen his auditory senses,amazing the biological make up of he human body...it looks to replace what is lost ,by honing into what is left..

Dutta-Parekh-Khan ... good that the three came to a conclusion... the way parekh suggested khan mama to go through the trial...ohh that would have been painfull for khan to see her elders suffer that too because of her... what ever they did with her in terms of house arrest though was not tolerable but i take them to be less educated and they handled the thing the way they found it right... the way after major came in and khan's family did nt created any big scene ...
and dutta too waiting for house arrest ...hai ...when will that lucky day come ..😍
that day i will be distributing loads of ladoo on thread 😃ok yes,loved doing the meeting between the three..had to come to a reasonable,plausible out come..to to me this was the best..people my disagree with me..and I have to accept this..dutta/naku ke shaadi..tu sab ko ladoo khale ge ,phela mujhe kahla..you forget that un ke shaddi kerna mera haat ka khel hai,kaki!

very informative session between major and OUts ...in fact both the sides be it their training or nakus PT session both have been informative for the readers... exploring something we already did nt know...makes you read it more keenly...at lest im not associated with any of the two fields...so both the worlds have been new and exploring for me :)I certainly enjoying covering these sessions,always ws interested in the core of he armed forces especially land forces!

oh great naku going for a fund raising campaignn...this is one thing i always love ...dont sit and feel bad about the things you feelare not at right place ...come forward and amend them... and naku ofcourse is one of those people who want to bring a ray hope
in others life...and glad her saab there too to help her ... 😊 thanks for he remark baaby ,yes Naku is a go getter,and a sherni!..haan saab is there to back her,his family always supports the community they live in..

Chunni vs kurta returns in action again... lol... love the way the interact
with each other posseissions ...well,jab tak ek dosera se doe hain ,tu they have to make do with what they have ,and get on with it!
ohh that missed opportunity at plane is still alive in side major...aww...btw he
had no good plans if she was sitting with him... ** cough** when does he had good plans when she is with him😆 naughty lardki ,what are you saying ?cup kr ke baith,zayaada shokhi maat ker tu ,nehi tu ghum ke ulte haat ka ,tera kan ke neeche...and dont giggle!
their teasing was enjoyeable ...haha the most enjoyeable part was
major thinking that naku eating too much in depression...lol pata hai they say here that copulisive eating too isa classic ,but silent sign of some underlying mental health issue!
the call always end on a good note making the reader smile too :)
thanks...I try.Warda..
Thank you for yet another amazing part...which makes you wait for next friday even more impatiently...yeh six days itne dair baad kyn guzartee hain !!!you are sooo kind baaby ,you are,great motivator...key for any writer form a reader.. thanks for my munno's picture lovvve him
Lots of love...See you yes see you lardki xxhammie
Stay Blessed!!!
heres hammie the baby you loved 😊 helllooo,baacha,munno miya! hammie giving you a kissey and stroking your cheek with index finger ..did your mummy not feed you today?or dirty smelly boy you have done a phoo! oye mummy ! change him!


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Posted: 13 years ago
Here she comes the woman who crawls under my skin and makes me go monkey nuts! turns me into a primate..actually on second thought lion/lioness which ever!
daya n warda ke peeche peeche mein😃 ...lagta hain in dono ko secret pm mila hai😆 ya hammie ma'm ki chabook se dargaye😉 oye teri tu main...
waise what shampoo u using under the shower Hammie? 🤣 i gues we have to make do with just u instead of mishal this time😆😆 why do you want to know about shampoo ?i thought you'd be interested in the shower gel hummmh, ah ja mera pas will show you!
Here me back again hammie,😳 yeah hard to miss ,me biting my lower lip ,ab kiya sunye ge ,me wondering..waise some body out there hates me and my khani! my beauty with almond shaped narrow eyes...
Khani meri nani, kabhi toh peecha chodde meri maa! must say Rajoo, salut thee, blessed r thy with the high n mighty backing you, i give up, here's the white flag me surrendering to your wily charms. To me u come across as a confused person with not much to look uptothat's because you're not looking at the right places ,meri nazar se dekh, check her brain,smart lass that's why the bosses like her...she's not confused but clued on! knows she has a leg to stand on!

...When Parekh Sir for once took a tuff decision, la Voila! Major rescues her😳. Ofcourse! she had family issues n she was tricked into going etc, etc.. but darling fortunately organisations dont run on emotions especially n most importantly The Army. ok ,will have to take your critical veiws on borad...hummh may be regiggle the story
Where is the lesson? she goes scot free! how do u justify when another crosses the line.. brv,she has now got a written warning..which is bad enough,not a verbal warning but documented and dated!
even in a game like football after two yellow cards you r shown the Red card n that's it. This is where women score over men with their strongest weapon, tears tears n the strongest men go weak in their knees.oh excuse me but she did not turn the waterwarks on, I was aware myself s a writer not to use that ploy,gosh you are out to gun me aren't you, keep on doing it and it'll surely give me a reason to be a goner or a loser!,forgive me if I sound irate ,but thats what hammie is, transparent!,yes your comments did throw me,and yes i do need to lern to take criticisim,so there!I don't spare myself either! Im shell shocked with major's defense of khan, I am glad dutta as an officer, spoke up in the voice of reason...if the case had gone ahead ,the employers would have looked stupid...he merely pointed that out as an officer! atleast there has to be a reasonable reaction for the[wayward] action, anyway no takers for my views. The only saving grace came when she decided to leave her mama frm the blushes of an investigation..
Well! well! the very private person revealin a different side to his personality n his best kept secret revealed to Parekh? Gadha! he thinks of imprisoning naku, but the irony is that he is falling faster than naku. well all his falling is going to stop mid way now! ,he needs to grow up!bas kam pe he needs to pay attention!he's not the only chap n the world who is engaged!
As is evident nandi making grt strides towards normalcy n the babble of the two ladies fun n meaningful. Naku the crusader is at it again, giving her all to the service of the general good. Yes! here she scores high. But naku me disappointed a bit with just jalebis where r the gujiyas? now i need one desperately[off to the store next door] yes now emphasis on bigging up the role of Naku, am inspired by Daya's naku from NTL...woman power ...mad erratics like dutta need to go under cover! from now on..
Naku n specially major surprise me with their disgruntled chat for the missed opportunities of what could've been, hahaaa! too late fellas!! goodluck next time. Hammie's symbolic hints of how the two handle the kurta is not missed this time, thanx to daya's previous remarks in her comments. In all this couldnt help feel sad for kapur the lad is yet to know the full version of khani's kahani jo thamne ka naam nahi leta... thanks for liking their repetitive, chatter.
The topic of major's class albeit short had my full attentiion, me in awe with the snipers.. the lonely warriors n very effective in urban/jungle warfare.. movies like enemy at the gates, assasins, behind enemy lines, etc.. highlight their role, ..luv this one hammie!👍🏼 i gues ill go to the dvd library now 😃thanks brvv, me to enjoyed doing this section..and in particular loved the sniper picture...wow impressive saved it in my pictures!

Hey hammie aplogies for the boringly repitative comments as regards ur pet lady, but cant do any other way girl. N im aware me spamming ur thread these days😆, hope u dont mind me engaging in some light talk with friends here. And me will wait as ever for the next, thanx for the wonderful update.🤗 thank you brvv for your comments ,this time they are very frank,and truthful, although at first they come as a hain?..they are eye openers..thanks for that, and sure do respect you for that! No... I love you and others spamming on my thread.. IAM OK as long is it's ok with the dev.team...many thanks brvv...yours hammie
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hi hamlet hi nakuuu!what a lovely lady you are..no seriously jokes apart..your best part is your awareness of when people cross milestones...yaar tu highway department tu nehi kam kerti ,ya accountancy mein? ,you certainly have a keen eye on numbers... thanks for your congrats on my 175p...ab tu to jante hai..me to busy to notice such things .but tu jo hai mera bas is kam keliya ,hummmh?
mein aa gai .175 pgs ke liye congrats .i was waiting for u to cross this mark .plz late 😆comment ke liye kuch toh excuse chaihe ye aur hammiee ka attention grab kane ke liye 😊 .ud ke bare mein detail mein jald lekhonge .have a nice weekend tc 😊
keep up writing hamiee such great stuff waiting for 200 pgs hain?oye rok ja Naku!bahut tayeezi mein hai tu, 1st ,i hope 1st to congrats u Iam sure you will be naku 1st, you care so much for me... hummh ache lageti hai tu mujhe...,sab accha bhi lekho toh u have problem .naku toh chup kiyo hai .i 'm taking a microscopic view 😊chalo lets start chipoko is back & haa pata hai her name is rajoo .parakeh thinking of mama peh case military court .i think wht happen between khan & mama is criminal case & military can't interven .lot of rules were broken local police had to be involved army can't step into somebodys home & they weren't terriost or waging war against country .search warrant had to be issued FIR has to be launched at local police station under IPC unlawful confinement of an adult , miltary is n't involved in civil cases & criminal even if the victim happened to be a army officer .thankfully coz of strict restiction we haven't faced military coup .democracy has survived . well done lardki! touche! you are spot on .and for that i am well pleased... thank heavens you understand ,still I tried to resolve this issue as best as I could..
naku & nandini convo loved it .naku is very sincere & hope she se her 1st patient walk soon .naku taking up charity issue with dutta .hope they organise a charity function . thanks for enjoying their convo..now me still racking my brains about this fund raising issue..hummmh.dekho what I come up with..
overall loved the ud waiting for the next soon .have a nice weekend tc 😊
as always u r amazing hamieee thanks for your always encouraging remark...all was can predict it will make me happy...lots of love..thanks for your pm as well naku it was a pleasant surprise ,was down ,so you cheered me up! xx hammie
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Posted: 13 years ago
oye tahera where are you? why so quiet?sab theekh haina?

hammie,well done for another duty packed episode.thanks for liking it, I try to inform as well,its like life long learning for me as well.

khan hamesha ek officer first hai,she'sdiscreet also not gossip for a few mins of girly satisfaction. good charecter i think she's doing mostly how dutta would like a good officer to behave.pleased to note you can see her professionlism, mind you she has to watch her back ,as she has landed herself in trouble..

falling for dutta wasn't her choice but to accept it for what has to be, and get on with being an excellent officer. i like her too.thank you, that you can see her positive attributes, rehi baat dutta ke tu it is hard not to notice him,and then not to be taken in by his standoffish manner,especially females! i must say woman ur a glutton for punishment, for choosing to write on a difficuilt subject, i tell you thera its hard work,have to think about a certain degree of accuracy especially in fiction for it could be iterpreted as fact ,which is dangerous! but doing full justice to it by writing in details all thats involved. otherwise we would remain ignorant in these matters. an jahan major kay chahne wale hongay wo toh padh hi lenge. sath mein mirch masla major kay moods ka bhi milta hai. major wanting to tie the knot now brig ko bhi hairaan kar gaya.nandini nakku bhi progress kar rahe hain, nakku sure will do good work towards raising awareness and raise funds.👏 thanks for your interesting comment mate,keep reading and commenting .hammie loves it! xxxhammie... well done again for hot seating...⭐️.

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Hi hammie , awesome update loved it will wait for next update till then lots love & hugs take care enjoy your Sunday
hi pushpa,great to see you! and thank you my mate for reading my lonnng UDs and commenting on them...with much love xxhammie


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Hi hamlet hellloo sona!
congrats for 175 feat ...😊Loved the UD D-N back to their respective ...work ...hardcore professional ...naku & nandini scenes were really touching ...looking frwd to next UD soon
hi sonaa...thanks for your congrats..goes to all the readers,who give me the pep to write on..
gld you liked the key scenes..keep reading and commenting my friend ..xxx much love .hammie
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hi hamlet hellooo uvi, good to see you on the thread

congrats :) a very interesting ud regards uvi thanks for your congrats and for enjoying the UD

much love xxhammie

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Thanks for the lovely update, Hammie 😃 hiya mate...missed you...

Feeling slightly under the weather ..longer response for the next chapter. Sorry pal 😳
what's up baaby?you slightly under the weather?ya kam ka pressure? what ever I hope you are better my mate...and this I have noted ke you still commented ..and for that Hammie loves you sweetheart!...xxmuch love hammie



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me back

Me not going to give big comment so please bear with me because first I had fever then my right hand big finger got small cut so here is the brief update

Kapoor and other coligues want to know everything khan explaining them now khan understand dutta is lucky to have nakku nakku come with jalebinakku nandi discussing about dutta and the course session and holi nandi think tasha romance boring nakku defending him then their course session nandi recovering

khaan scolded by brig parekh and poor mama phasne waala tha dutta defending her in absence of khaan khan intelligent come with same solution dutta given parekh parekh teasing dutta this line of dutta "I guess that's one house arrest I am looking forward too! Sir!, dutta taking weapon classesso nakku boss praising herlove nakku concern about patients nakku doing romance with kurtaand dutta with chunni when did they romance with each otherdutta angry on nakku for not callingbut then called her love tasha conversation





now I cant say meri tammana,because ab tu sab ke tamanna hai baaby...har ek ko aage lagiya hai tune apne comments se..me thinks mera UD se zayeeda people wait for your fantastic ,presentation,every time number one! listen Iam delighted that your fever has left you ?looks like the finger cut got septic...listen you need an anti Tetanus injection..please check with family if you have had one ...it usually lasts for 4years, must hai, for open wounds when in contact with metals ...iam not joking get one !that's an order..baki ye hai ke the presentation is sooo amusing,that not just me but others have also commented in praise...my fav was the jalebis .yummy ,sweet ,and shiny..dil chate tha teen chaar utha ke mau mein dal loon.. unfortunately for some reason i' can't annotate in the presentation itself... but dosen't stop me from having fun..thank you my dearest tamanna ..keep smiling and stay healthy. love you loads xxhammie






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