FF: KUCH LUV JAISA - LAST pt pg-72 NOTEpg-75 - Page 7

Chapter 2

Wooo so finally iam here to do comment on one of the best ff of rosy "kuch love jaisa" …..

itni late latifi k liye dil se mafi chahte h hum….

Kya kare koshish to bahot ki jaldi aane ki….

Kyunki aapne koshish ki thi hame fasane ki (obviously through ur brilliant story to which iam totally addicted)

Hum fase to aise fase

Ki dil ne kabhi jurrat he nahi ki tumse durr le jaane ki……hahahaha😆😆😆😆

Its enough ….just enough, don't stare at me rosy actually iam saying all this to my fattu shayrana andaaz that I wrote above lolzzz😆😆😆😆😆

k….lets come to urs tadkta fadakta update …..loved it yaar…..really awesome…..boleto ekdam fultoo fatak…the way u visualize everything infront of ur readers is just awesome

so babi is in the update……she get disturbed when naku told her that dutta agrees to free ganpat only if nakku marry to him….(babi stuffed her mouth with her pallu…oh my my it's the only thing which will never changed in this character lol)

nakku is tensed becoz of all that which happens in her life in a few moments …..her dream get ruined (kaash I were in her place…..she is tensed naa…I will b danced bole to chak de fatte…..lol) loved the scene when nakku was thinking abt those few moments with dutta…gazing out of the window ….and the best lines that u use was "she always loved the rain but today the clouds were crying with her" I just loved this line…it says everything.

So nakku is ready to accept her fate…..and the best thing is that she understands dutta and his problems too...she know that dutta was honest and will always remains honest for her in future …he is a powerful man who can do anything but still he explained her everything and wannna marry her with all rituals n his mothers wish(that's a difference between an ordinary don and DSP ….'a don with goldenheart')

She is happy with her decision and wanna look forward only n reassures babi too….bappa h naa sab sambhal lenge

Loved the naku-babi scenes…..

Wooo marriage ceremony comes …. Itni fast yaar…oh so our dutta don't want to delay the marriage…..baji dancing (iske yaar ki shaadi h) n throwing money too…..hahahaha sudarshan have nothing to do so he was busy in collecting the notes OMG ye nahi sudhrega…

Haaye haaye dutta the prince….most apt word yaar….me remembering that day when first time (before the wedding of that kabab m haddi sups and dutta)…. I saw him in that mehroon sherwani …..the white pagdi (hey yaaar don't know the apt word …..so pagdi se kaam chalana padega lolzzz) and that preety smile on that cute face…..oh my my khushi k aansu aa gaye…..

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Isi baat pe arz kiya h

Yaad mein teri ankhe bharta hai koi….
Har saans ke saath tujhe yaad karta hai koi….
Maut ti aisi cheez hai jisko aana hi hai….
Lakin teri judai mein har roz marta hai koi..!!

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Another one on those preety eyes of our dream boy…….that can speak

Arz kiya h

Tumhari un khoobsoorat aankho ne mujh pe jaado kya chalaya
samhaj mein nahi aata ye kaisa jaam tumne pilaya
din ke ujhale me bhi na jane kaha kho jati hoon mein
samandar se gheri unn aankho m doob jati hoon mein…

Wo aankhe jo bolna bhi jaanti h

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Dutta fill nakus maang….n some of the vermillion falls on her nose hehehe and kala said that it's an achchha shagun n dutta will shower love on her…..muahhh kala can say love u for this achchha shagun wala dialogue (rosy indirectly iam saying this to u….u wrote it naa )…..

Loved the whole marriage scene rosy n the way u display it is just superb…..

Dutta nakku in the PN….. and aayi sahib hugged her daughter-in-law n make her feel that she is hugging her mother babi…..awww ….u know rosy,what is the best thing of ur ff's ???????????????guess yaar…..no negative character ……no vamp……isse badiya lov story or kya ho sakti h..hmmm

Loved this update rosy…..

Dutta is going to his room ………..wooo

Looking forward…….

Tasha romance is there or not….heheheehe

Chapter 3

* big hug * 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗for this chapter rosy…hats off to u

OMG ye to double tadkta fadakta update nikla rosy….. Bin bole mere dil ki awaaz tumhare dil tak pahunch jati hai ( nope that's not ri8 naa…..i always keep shouting for full of tasha wala update …..so here my wish completed)

I thought that dutta nakku will interact wid each other but it will take time…….but u again give me a shock😲😲 (hehehe but iam really happy becoz of this shock) after a gap of one update …..n our nakku is the initiator hahaha ye tha bada wala shock…….who cares koi b initiator kaa kam kare

Super liked the dialogue of naku when she said that "zindagi m har cheez jo hoti h wo sahi yaa galat nahi hoti bas ho jaati h…kehte h jo aapki marzi se ho wo achchha h magar jo aaki marzi se naa ho wo aur b achchha h kyunki usme bappa ki marzi shamilhoti h"……her all words was making him less guilty a make him more closer to her ……….he even now feeling proud of his decision of marrying wid naku…….me waiting for the day when he get proud of her wife and n fall in love wid her .

The whole conversation of tasha was mindblowing…..itna that I have no words to describe it ….its amazing that few minutes ago dutta was….. like…..try to keep himself away from nakku becoz somewhere he feels that he is not right but nakkus word made him close to her …..they behaves like it was not their contract marriage ….

And the scene u displays after that….is awesome yaar….loved it

Next morning …….n they start their married life…..unaware abt that what will happen in the next 1 year. Nakku behaves like a normal housewife who take care of her husband……and dutta too get impressed…..(dutta ji it's a starting…aage aage dekho hota h kya…LOL)

Wah rosy I think u have make ur mind to give us the update that will make ur readers faint and they will give u a wow wala look again and again…..

Here too "meri aayi kahti h"…..awww but dutta can't hear that "meri aayi kahti h" wala bhashan becoz of our vry own KMH (kabab m haddi "baaji")

Loved the every bit of this update rosy…it makes me speechless…iam in tasha land after reading it

Looking forward….

Lets see how tasha will become more n more close of each other and fall in love ….

Thanks for this pyara saa dulara saa natkhat saa update…..

Love u

Originally posted by: MishalsFAN

Chapter 2

Wooo so finally iam here to do comment on one of the best ff of rosy "kuch love jaisa" ?..oye hoye itna maska ..lol..

itni late latifi k liye dil se mafi chahte h hum?.

Kya kare koshish to bahot ki jaldi aane ki?.

Kyunki aapne koshish ki thi hame fasane ki (obviously through ur brilliant story to which iam totally addicted)

Hum fase to aise fase ..itni jaldi aap kahan fasne wale ho ..lol..

Ki dil ne kabhi jurrat he nahi ki tumse durr le jaane ki??hahahaha😆😆😆😆

Its enough ?.just enough, don't stare at me rosy actually iam saying all this to my fattu shayrana andaaz that I wrote above lolzzz😆😆😆😆😆.i am not staring but laughing at u

k?.lets come to urs tadkta fadakta update ?..loved it yaar?tadkta fadakta toh 3ch tha lol...really awesome?..boleto ekdam fultoo fatak?the way u visualize everything infront of ur readers is just awesome...glad u could imagine it coz i am very bad at describing things

so babi is in the update??she get disturbed when naku told her that dutta agrees to free ganpat only if nakku marry to him?.(babi stuffed her mouth with her pallu?oh my my it's the only thing which will never changed in this character lol)...couldnt describe her feelings better than this ..lol..

nakku is tensed becoz of all that which happens in her life in a few moments ?..her dream get ruined (kaash I were in her place?.really ..married for 1 year and too only for a child ..would that be ok with u ..lol...she is tensed naa?I will b danced bole to chak de fatte?..lol) loved the scene when nakku was thinking abt those few moments with dutta?gazing out of the window ?.and the best lines that u use was "she always loved the rain but today the clouds were crying with her" I just loved this line?it says everything.thanks so much it was't easy for her to accept his conditions

So nakku is ready to accept her fate?.yup she doesnt have a choice.and the best thing is that she understands dutta and his problems too...she know that dutta was honest and will always remains honest for her in future ?...his honesty impressed her a lot ..he is a powerful man who can do anything but still he explained her everything and wannna marry her with all rituals n his mothers wish(that's a difference between an ordinary don and DSP ?.'a don with goldenheart')...stop drooling over him ..lol..he is getting married

She is happy with her decision and wanna look forward only n reassures babi too?.bappa h naa sab sambhal lenge

Loved the naku-babi scenes?.thank u so much.

Wooo marriage ceremony comes ?. Itni fast yaar?..u know me n dutta dont like to delay things ..we both are very focussed ..lol..oh so our dutta don't want to delay the marriage?..baji dancing (iske yaar ki shaadi h)..absolutely n throwing money too?..hahahaha sudarshan have nothing to do so he was busy in collecting the notes OMG ye nahi sudhrega?...can u imagine ..lol..

Haaye haaye dutta the prince?.most apt word yaar?prince charming ..haye haye ..maar daala...me remembering that day when first time (before the wedding of that kabab m haddi sups and dutta)?. I saw him in that mehroon sherwani ?.oye hoye dont remind me i get emotional ...the white pagdi..its sehra .. (hey yaaar don't know the apt word ?..so pagdi se kaam chalana padega lolzzz) and that preety smile on that cute face?..oh my my khushi k aansu aa gaye?..

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Isi baat pe arz kiya h...irshaad

Yaad mein teri ankhe bharta hai koi?.
Har saans ke saath tujhe yaad karta hai koi?.
Maut ti aisi cheez hai jisko aana hi hai?.
Lakin teri judai mein har roz marta hai koi..!!

???????????????????????????kya bat hai apki shayari ne dil le liya

Another one on those preety eyes of our dream boy??..in aankhon ki masti ke mastaane hazaaron hain ..i can remember this song .that can speak

Arz kiya h..irshad again

Tumhari un khoobsoorat aankho ne mujh pe jaado kya chalaya
samhaj mein nahi aata ye kaisa jaam tumne pilaya
din ke ujhale me bhi na jane kaha kho jati hoon mein
samandar se gheri unn aankho m doob jati hoon mein?

Wo aankhe jo bolna bhi jaanti h

????????????????.lovely ..agree with u completely

Dutta fill nakus maang?.n some of the vermillion falls on her nose hehehe and kala said that it's an achchha shagun n dutta will shower love on her?..muahhh kala can say love u for this achchha shagun wala dialogue (rosy indirectly iam saying this to u?.u wrote it naa )?oye hoye thanku ji ..

Loved the whole marriage scene rosy n the way u display it is just superb?..

Dutta nakku in the PN?.. and aayi sahib hugged her daughter-in-law n make her feel that she is hugging her mother babi?..awww ?.u know rosy,what is the best thing of ur ff's ???????????????guess yaar?very bad at guessing u tell me ..no negative character ??no vamp??..for a long time there will be no character ..hopefully isse badiya lov story or kya ho sakti h..hmmm

Loved this update rosy?..

Dutta is going to his room ???.obviously shaadi kari hai toh ..rest u can imagine ..lol...wooo

Looking forward??.

Tasha romance is there or not?..naughty girl ..lol...heheheehe

Chapter 3

* big hug * 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗for this chapter rosy?..ha ha ..hope it lived upto ur expectations ..hats off to u

OMG ye to double tadkta fadakta update nikla rosy?.aaghe aaghe dekho hota hai kya ..lol... Bin bole mere dil ki awaaz tumhare dil tak pahunch jati hai ( nope that's not ri8 naa?..i always keep shouting for full of tasha wala update ?this ff will have lots of romance ..dont worry ..so here my wish completed)

I thought that dutta nakku will interact wid each other but it will take time??..they have lots of time to interact now is the time to get into action ..lol...but u again give me a shock😲😲 (hehehe but iam really happy becoz of this shock) after a gap of one update ?..n our nakku is the initiator hahaha ye tha bada wala shock??..now who would miss such a golden opportunity ..??? would u ??? tell me .lol...who cares koi b initiator kaa kam kare

Super liked the dialogue of naku when she said that "zindagi m har cheez jo hoti h wo sahi yaa galat nahi hoti bas ho jaati h?kehte h jo aapki marzi se ho wo achchha h magar jo aaki marzi se naa ho wo aur b achchha h kyunki usme bappa ki marzi shamilhoti h"??...thanks a lot for liking the dialogues ..her all words was making him less guilty a make him more closer to her ???.he even now feeling proud of his decision of marrying wid naku??.me waiting for the day when he get proud of her wife and n fall in love wid her .have patience that day will also come ..

The whole conversation of tasha was mindblowing?..itna that I have no words to describe it ?.its amazing that few minutes ago dutta was?.. like?..try to keep himself away from nakku becoz somewhere he feels that he is not right but nakkus word made him close to her ?..they behaves like it was not their contract marriage ?.hmm they needed to be comfortable with each other which nakku did

And the scene u displays after that?.is awesome yaar?....what scene ..lol..loved it

Next morning ??.n they start their married life?..unaware abt that what will happen in the next 1 year.yah lots will happen Nakku behaves like a normal housewife who take care of her husband??and dutta too get impressed?..(dutta ji it's a starting?aage aage dekho hota h kya?LOL)..well said picture abhi baaki hai mere dost

Wah rosy I think u have make ur mind to give us the update that will make ur readers faint and they will give u a wow wala look again and again?.i dont intend to faint u ..just want u to have fun ..lol.

Here too "meri aayi kahti h"?..awww but dutta can't hear that "meri aayi kahti h" wala bhashan becoz of our vry own KMH (kabab m haddi "baaji")

Loved the every bit of this update rosy?it makes me speechless?iam in tasha land after reading it ..thanks so much for ur lovely comments

Looking forward?.

Lets see how tasha will become more n more close of each other and fall in love ?.

Thanks for this pyara saa dulara saa natkhat saa update?..

Love u

❤️

Originally posted by: Stranger2rose