FF: KUCH LUV JAISA - LAST pt pg-72 NOTEpg-75

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maria

@maria_awan

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#71

hi dear loved dutta looking at nakku silently and loved the baji and roop teasing plz update soon waiting 4 tasha scenes

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Iridescence

@Iridescence1

Alumni

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Rose...I love the way the story is progressing...and your writing is great as always :)

so Dutta is seeing the impact of his wife dearest on making his family actually behave like one ...and loved how he thought about whether she would be able to change him too...although he concluded 'no'...it's already slowly happening.

Loved the dining scene. Her cooking spicy for him and then teary eyed eating the food as she doesn't eat spicy ...but how sweetly he gave her curd...LOL @ Baaji's comments...he has work to do at night haha yeah well how else is that baby he wants coming haha ...poor naku all embarrassed and Dutta chokes on his food and takes her water and drinks it ...lol I loved how she caught that and called it out like a child haha...

Naku getting wet in rain and him all admiring her and then they have their moment that came out so casually, which was the best part...their is no strain in the relationship although it was initiated with reason.

See the change has already began ...he has ate her breakfast...LOL that too like a child...literally digging his hands into the food ...and even regretted missing out on breakfast that day...

so she does arati for him and leaves him so effected by her smile...he's so cute ...he finds it infectious lol...

wonderful update...loved it to the core...update soon...

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Shreeya1

@Shreeya1

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#73

😃 I was so excited to see your new update.. read it first thing this morning while sipping my coffee.. your update made my day. Love how the story is progressing. I cant to hear how she breaks him down.

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usha

@ushankitvc

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

superb updt... dutta falling fr nakku full on... and also started changing... he is having his breakfast... liked baaji legpulling Tasha... updt sooon...

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ramya90

@ramya90

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

fantastic, awesome lovely and romantic update dear

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mIsHeZ.x

@mIsHeZ.x

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#76

'her smile was infectious he thought '

all i can say is dat so are ur updates ^^

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Yuvika

@Yuvika_15

Moderator

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#77

thnx for the update

awww naku already making a dif in his life...it mus hav been refreshing for him n his mum 2 cum down n eat with evry1 else...esp considering its summut they do very rarely...aww bechari naku, made spicy food bt cudnt eat it...hayee dutta drank from her glass...afterall its dutta tht needs 2 love naku, naku already likes him...n its dutta tht needs 2 break the long wall he's created around him n nt naku so m sure it wil happen...

oi hoi naku prayin tht dutta's long wish is fulfilled bt she duz no tht it means she wil leave post the child's birth...i hpe u introduce a track wer she has 2 remain with the kid evn after birth becos he/she cnt seem 2 accept ne other source of food except milk from the mother in the natural way... tht wud mean naku has 2 stay longer...

i loved the tasha scene...naku wet in the rain n dutta carrying her...so romantic...yt he feels she's nothing bt a contract wife...

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droopy_asleep

@droopy_asleep

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#78

Great update Rose...please add me to your PM list; want to catch up when you update next!

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prncz

@prncz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#79

i almost missed this update ,, jut tght to open this thread and lo behold i realised u have already upated ( only then did i see the topic date \ )

awesome update rose ,, me really liking the way the pace is , the way the story is growing ,, dutta has started seeeign the eff of nakku in his life in1 day imagine pure saal mein kya hoga 😆😆

house now seeeming like home ,,

AS cmng dnwn to eat and nakku looking after her ,,

nakku cooking saab;s fav ,, inspite of not beeing able to eat herself 😳

rain wala scene was full on romantic 😳

awesome update ,👏,,looks like nakku has realised the way to a man's; heart is thru his stomach ,,hehe he is missing not eatign brk fast the earlier day ,,this is just the begiinign my dear dutta bhau aage aage dekho hota hai kya ,,

rose keep ur pen rolling my dear ..

waitign for the next update

Raj