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tamannA

@tamanna1391

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#51

awsem so dutta felt guilty but nakku made his heart free of guilt and finally they became one😳 and nakku made tea and breakfast but our lovely donkey doesn't eat gadha please do next as soon as possible

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-bharti-

@-bharti-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Grt work Rose! liked the conversations of tasha especially.

Dutta still coming to terms with a contract marriage nd nakku being nakku has taken out the burden off his heart. Amazing words of nakku nd how she has completely surrendered to the will of God. But is it so easy for nakku to mould herself into this new role moreso as she will be the wife for just one year nd how has she reconciled to the fact that she would have to leave in future not just the marriage but also a child, i wonder? But i guess circumstances force people to take such decisions.

She is already into the job of a wife but dutta will take time to get accustomed to his new role. Im sure very soon he will realize that in nakku he has found a perfect partner nd his life will be no longer the same.😊

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naina

@krishaa

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

awesome rose finally they accepted eachother nakku words eased him and now their relation will take a u turn and love story will start waiting for next part plz make it soon some talks btw tasha can be included like dutta tensed and nakku easing his tension and dutta feeling attracted if u can include them.thanx for update and pm.

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rahima a.k.a. pinks

@pinks86

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Wow ... brilianttt ... loved it

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

hey..!! thank you very much for this update! i have to say you have an amazing storyline here and this chapter was none the less.
Each moment i thought was very well thought of indeed..and there was something very significant about every interaction. As as i read your pm i took a quick glance over the post and then came back to read with some time on my hands. So i think the first thing that came to mind is how dutta has seemed to change totally over night. Dutta Shri ram Patil has amazing character, hes stern..yet has so much emotion and feeling within that it cant help but arise and thats what i love. The moment he asked nakusha for her hand in marriage and the moment he lay down all his rules that was one side of him ..and the man that walked into the room and explained himself and his actions so sincerity was another. l love the sincere nature of this man, he doesn't hide anything.
Moving on to nakusha she as ever she is her very innocent self.. loved her words.. and i very much agree with them .. jo hamari marzi se hota hai..woh atcha hai ..magar joe hamari marzi se na ho woh aur bhi atcha hai - i actually believe this myself..and the lines were so simple, it seems as if nakusha has really accepted dutta as her fate.
shes going to give it 100 percent thats for sure, liked the way dutta is very much a man of principles..even though he has tied her in what is a relationship for his own need of a child he totally keeps the level of respect for nakusha. "Gentlemen" in most respects anyway..
Liked the way in which nakusha totally takes the whole wifely approach breakfast..accessories..and her line about the duties in regards to a wife and a servant.. loved that very nakusha indeed..
However moment of the update for me had to be dutta telling nakusha that he had found her ear-ing and bless her..she is confused to how and where..uhum..blush moment right there.. what an strangely awkward but effective noment that was..,kind of reminded the reader that at the end of the day there was still a lot of awkwardness and distance between the too.
loved i..thank you very much indeed..you have done a fab job.
jagruti.

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

awesome update rose
love it
nakku has taken out the burden odf dutta's heart as he feels guilty
so they are trying to understand each other and respect each others feelings
tea breakfast so nakku start doing work
lovely update dear
thanks fro pm

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suhana19

@suhana19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Hey dear Rose🤗

Thanx alot for the wonderful update and Pm🤗Loved it as always yaar👍🏼Loved Tasha"s convo ..really superb ..Awww naku took burden off dutta"s heart and accepted him wholeheartedly ,,,😳...Well hope dutta try to understand her ...Though he will take his own sweet time ...

She already responsibilities as his wife ...Can"t wait for nxt part ...jaldi update karna ...U take care and see ya around

Love and hugs

suhana🤗

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spandana11

@spandana11

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Hello Rose 🤗 How are you ?😊 You are back with another awesome part ,😳 I am liking the track you selected and the way you are building it ,very nice😊 coming to update first dutta mono log was pic of what is going in dutta mind ,very well written ,his guilt ,his explanations every thing thing was vey nicely written then after coming in to room he was true gentlemen wit those initial lines to nakuu 😳 and nakuu to being nakuu her words and taught were very true ,she accepted dutta 100% as god wish ,the line nakuu said which happenes according to us is good which do not happen accprding to us is more good as god wish is there was so true😳 liked the way you written nakuu taking guilt away from dutta mind and finally they became one😳 morning scen was well designed nakuu in to her new responsibility ,but dutta had just tea and left with out having BF ,and ear ring scene was a blushing moment ,but really nakuu what she will think when it strikes she have to leave this in one year that to the child 😭 ,any way this part is very nice now hope dutta even take his time understand nakuu is his life time partner ,as usual waiting for next update jaldi next part update karo na😊 waiting for it 😊

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Lekz

@Lekz

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Loved the updates Rose. 👏👏👏

Will wait eagerly for the next.

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Nileshni Devi

@nileshni679

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#60

Wow what an update. Love the touching moments between the 2 but how rude of Dutta of not listening to Naku. Lovely update doll i hope Naku will simply make a place in Duttas heart soon.😍

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