Originally posted by: tinkerbe11
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Mmmwaaahhh thanks 4 updating!!!!!! Gimme sum tym I'll be back😉
n woohoo I'm first !!!😃
Omg Tink kyun...why you flooding the post with your precious tears...ro mat!
Yes I am starting with my ansooon woh bi balti bhar bhar ke, so u better get that mop out lol,but seriously Sups and Dutta were gonna get married. Oh man I can't handle the truth, I feel like hitting my head against the wall, I hated it when she was gonna get married to Dutta in the show, but the tasalli was dat she was a traitor, but even when Dutta tried to make an effort with her, I couldn't stand watching that part. And here now she sounds like the good guy, and yeh kya kar diya tune Daya, why couldn't you make her a traitor, why does Dutta have to spend that many years dwelling on her death, and that too in a way where he didn't even get to meet her! I wish I could cheek cheek ke cry my eyes out!
Me ready mop in hand...LOL omg u r crying because supriya was not a traitor ROFL
haha sorry it was necessary and you will see why 😉
Dutta will soon realize the difference in feeligs with sups and Naku dont worry 😛
Nahiiin Daya, nahiiin!!!!!! Why why why Daya'.bolo kyun!!!!
because i wanted to ...bas 😆
Okay so now I'm a little together now, but it doesn't mean I forgive you.
😭 you upset with me for telling you the truth...
and then if i hid all that you probably would yelll Dhoka...Dhoka...for nothing telling u
i know truth hurts...woman suck it up !
Right so Dutta my darling, you need to understand one thing, there is no point in questioning yourself as to why you let Naku in. The answer to this is simple, you let her in the day you married her, so stop blaming that one beautiful dance sequence that made our whole day'.(allow me to daydream for couple of seconds-it's very important to me).
LOL aww u daydreaming about that dance sequence...i feel good...it was such a big hit 😳
yeah he is yet to realize he can run but can't hide
and that will become sooo true soon 😉
It's really cool how she manages to read Dutta, while he's going through the torturing moments of his past. She understands that something is eating him up inside, but what she doesn't get is that she is the reason to stir up all these emotions, a few moments spent with her has caused him to question his faith to dead Supriya.
That is her effect on him...her mere presence is enough to stir up feelings that end up leading to old memories as he feels guilt...he needs to snap out of it and think about why he is even feeling so strongly about Naku in the first plce
He tries so hard to stay away from her, but the minute she comes before him, he forgets fighting was even an option and I love the way you portrayed that time and time again throughout the whole update. But it is sad the way Naku's is kind of in a dilemma with her feelings for her husband, but the part where she remembers his words of 'never loving someone else' again, is kind of heart-breaking.
She is like a brain teaser for him LOL...he gets all boggled seeing her...and he can sense more with her and he wont want to hurt her...so needed to make sure that is conveyed 😛
yeah Naku is at a point where she feels deep inside that this man needs her but she also knows that he won't accept her...and she is stuck between her love and his mind 😆
Lekin Dutta you need to understand that the happiness that is carried out with unselfish motives is the happiness that is greater than other joy in the world. Which is exactly why you're gonna end up loving Naku more than your very own life.
haha you will see in due time what happens btwn these two 😉
Okay so we have Naku in denial here. This is usually a good sign, as love always starts with denial lol, but I like the way she tries to deal with this. Even though Seth ji isn't trying too hard, he's got his point across real well.
Thank you i actually worked hard on writing this part 😆 to get it across strongly ...and sethji just there to let her vent
You know Daya I really like the last sentence in that paragraph where Naku speaks out loud, stating her smile fades when she thinks of them as 'us'. Lovely use of words girl, it was so right, it made so much sense when you put it like that.
OMG thank you for picking on that line...it took me a while to word the point in a way that makes sense and sends the emotion across...i thought so many different ways to put it until i thought of this one
So she's accepted her duties towards him as a wife, but doesn't realise carrying them out in such manner, where the concern for Dutta is almost becoming like second nature within days! I love it! Her worries towards him coming home late, and then sending Baji out to look for him, it's all slowly becoming the missing pieces to the puzzle.
Yes the puzzle is being solved slowly...but lets see if we can manage to put the pieces together in one PEACE 😛
And ohmagawd!! The concern is slowly rolling in on both parties, woh kehte hai na ke taali do haathon se bajti hai! But you in this scene it feels like Dutta's fear is more towards Naku's actions, which is causing him to react. Every time he gets close to Naku, I think he's actually more fearful towards the fact that she may just fall for him, and he's afraid that he won't be able to love her back. And by avoiding her abruptly he's trying to get a point across to her, and of course to himself too. Wow this is pretty complicated stuff you know.
good good u too picked up on the fact that his fear is more for himself ...and for Naku's actions...yup D is seeing things and feeling things he was running from
yes so he acts out to get his point across...exactly tink :P
Very complicated !
So is Baji getting whiff of Naku's feelings towards Dutta then. But I like the relationship him and Naku share. As usual it is Baji who spills the beans, now why am I not surprised lol. But you know I think this was important for Naku to know. Even though I absolutely detest the outcome of this story, it's no short of a nightmare for me, believe me when I say that!
LOL yes Baaji spills the beans ...but i felt she would be able to hear at peace if it can from him...maybe it was a nightmare for her after too...lol just like for u ...sorry hun ...didnt mean it to be horrifying 😆
However the bitter truth is, as Naku was listening to Baji narrating the story to her, I could feel my own fear growing with Naku as the end grew near. I was like no no please don't let her die, not like this. I swear man you had me on the edge there, I was really feeling the suspense during that whole paragraph, so hats off to you man.
Haha u were seating in Naku's seat that is why...am glad you liked the suspense build up was not intended kinda just happened that way 😆 but thank you thank you
And you know I got to say, the line where she confesses to Baji about not really knowing what he was doing when she got married, but then also added 'that somewhere along the lines she accepted him as her husband'. This actually makes so much sense! Because the truth of the matter is the day someone accepts a marriage they automatically make a compromise with their partner of staying faithful to them. So this point of yours is totally valid with full due respect. I really liked the way you made that clear, and it shows that deep down Naku has gained good values from her parents.
Yes yes omg tink ...exactly why i wrote it like that...to show that there was nothing really stopping her from accepting the marriage and the way she was brought up would eventually land her in a situation where she will acknowledge what the marriage truly meant to her...aww am gld u got that 😳
So now both newlyweds are bechain. So where Naku has whole heartedly accepted that she is falling for her husband, Dutta on the other hand is using all his will power to do the opposite. And man I have got to say Dutta's bar is a vardaan in Patil Niwas for Naku boy, every time Dutta gets buzzed, Naku gains a brownie point lol!
I love how Naku acts first and thinks after lol'this theory really works for her heheee. The best part of the whole fighting against his feelings has got to be the fact that he spends so much time arguing with his thoughts and 'wasting' time remembering Supriya, he don't realise this job is actually HARD!
Yup its intended to show she kinda works to the beat of her heart rather than with her mind...
Whereas Naku comes into the picture and that's it before he knows it all those thoughts are out of the window lol, and he thinks, understands, says is Naku!!!!!!!! Woohoo!!! Now I forgive you, poore update mein itna tarpa ke aur end mein itna acha scene dogi, I am totally latoo over your chapter lol, you could have just said'
haha yup that is her efffect on him...she is now flooding his mind like a tsunami 😆
aww tink u r latoo over my chapter me all blushing 😳
I love the way he describes her to her!!!!! Aaahhh I'm gonna die, his grip on her, his words, haye he may as well sing 'main shayar tho Nahin, magar aye haseen, jab se dekha maine tujhko, mujhko shayareee agaye'''cause I swear that's what it sounds like man, that was classic.
You know i enjoyed writing his drunk part LOL...really did ...lmao o ur song so suited for him
By the way, this reminds me your few words of poetry were really touching, even though you claim you're not as talented as Mish, but hun you are failing to see you are still talented. It isn't easy writing with such feel and emotion, and the way you do it, you make it look easy you know. You're good, how good, well if only that had a limit, but the best part is it don't!
omg tink ...wow thank you for such a compliment...
i am glad u think that of my writing...means so much
I dont think i am that praise worthy...i see flaws in everything I write always
but thank you ...coming from a person whom I think is brilliant writer and admire too
really means a lot 😃
Fantastic update chick! Loved it, I know I had my moments but still I hate that feeling I had when my heart did this sort of fluttery fluttery feeling and my mind was saying 'oh god please no' over and over again. And for that I have a gift for you, yes it has made it appearance here before, and now it's on its second one''.
haha ok i will take this just because i made you cry...now i will probably be seeing this around as the future track comes forth 😆
Loved your comments and presence ...thank you
Love you lots...take care and see u in ur thread
as i am coming there in the morning to comment
Now when is the next update?!???!!??
MISSY howz the update ..have u even started?
I'm wating'.tick tock tick tock'..tick tock'
p.s. I forgot to tell you I love you both!!!
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