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Yuvika

@Yuvika_15

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Posted: 14 years ago

#621

Hey missy and daya! Finally gt round 2 reading dis ff… haha guess wt missy…I had onli read da prologue of this ff…nt any update…lol..n here I was thinking I've read a few chapters…LOL

Chap 1- aha spelling error u wrote barbarahat…u mean ghabrahat…LOL😆😉…anyway gr8 update👏…loved hw u described naku's feelings and hw the rain reflected the sadness of the clouds…as tho nature understood her sorrow😭… bechari…marrying sum1 who she doesn't evn love n to top it off its sum1 tht loves sum1 else…. Thts the worse thing for ne girl…marrying sum1 u no tht loves sum1 else….i cnt believe her parents let her go thru the marriage😲 n she sed yes evn after knwin he loved sum1 else..m sure this is dutta n he's probs talking abt sups or seema…

Chap 2- hmm so they r deciding 2 act in front of the families as tho dey r blissfully happy bt behind closed doors they'll remain strangers? Hw sad… felt sorry for naku wen she questioned herself if this marriage means she'll neva experience love😭…awww bechari…. M sure via this act of being happy they wil fall in love😃 bt for the time being m feeling bad for naku💔…. Oh wow they sharing the sme bed😉😆….lol… AS n Baji convo was gd…. Both concerned abt tasha bt m sure things wil work out…their rishta cnt remain benaam foreva!!!🤔

Chap 3- hayeee so it seems naku wil fall for dutta 1^st😳😳… hmmm wow she was noticing hw he is handsome😍…awww….haha the breakfast scene n post breakfast scene was funny…esp baji n his teasing😆….non stop bak bak---reminded me of hw koyal naku used 2 b in the shw😃… haha bechari naku finds dutta's screams too loud😆…wel she wil hav 2 gt used 2 it…. We al knw abt dutta's temper… jus hpe naku personally doesn't becum a victim of it like she was in da shw… aww naku feeling guilty abt playing with AS emotions😕…I can see why she's feeling like tht bt I think they knw the truth so probs hav sum fair idea tht tasha aren't all tht loved up etc…😲haila dutta hurt…n naku left 2 nurse his wounds n feed him😉…hmmm im wondering if we'll gt dutta sayin "bhook lage hai khana de dey" 😆😳😍LOL

Will read the next 3 chaps soon and post my review… til den cya l8r alligator! LOL…😆😆

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Yuvika

@Yuvika_15

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Posted: 14 years ago

#622

ok...final lot of review 2day!!

chap 4- haha naku gtin irritated tht dutta doesn't value the importance of food...awww she's so sweet... 😃...hayee she starts nursing his wound...good in it she has 2 gt used 2 it cos knwing dutta's profession m sure der wil b mre wounds 2 nurse...loved the fact hw naku made dutta realise tht he aint suffering alone he;s causing the 2 ppl he loves the mst pain n suffering 2... its impt for dutta 2 realise tht becos many times a person 4gts in his sorrow tht seeing him pained his loved ones r affected 2... i felt bad for naku wer dutta sed "he's living for his family already if he wasnt he wud hav married her" it mus hav been painful 2 hear bt naku seemed 2 brush it off i guess😕 aahhh so der benaam rishta gt a name..Dosti...brilliant start 2 the relationship for sure!...loved the food scene...naku feeding dutta with her own hands😳😳😳

oh no dutta shivering... it seems hes gtin a temperature becos of tht wound😕😭...awww nakku helpin dutta with the kurta n KMH baji cums...lol...he's 2 in 1...playin cupid as well as KMH 😆...wow naku doin acting 2 gt dutta in2 hospital...wow she's 1 ziddi larki..m sure she wil rule dutta once dey r fine with 1 another becos it seems wteva da case she wil gt her way round n dutta wil jus giv in2 it😳😳...haha loved naku teasing baji abt feeling duttas pain...tht was funi..bechara baji bt it seems war cos he gt payback by gtin tasha 2 dance...awww both lost in 1 another...surely summut is going on between thm tht they themselves dnt realise as yt😳😳😳

chap 5- wt a dreamy update..i loved the poetic feel u gav 2 tht update with obv the beautiful poems u used... i reali liked this 1 Dil ki dhadkan ko phir se kisi ne cher khani ki ho jaise...un dabe hue jazbaaton ko phir se kisine jagah diya ho jaise...un anderi aur sunsaan galliyun mein phir se roshini ki ek kiran dikhayi ho jaise...un bikhre huwe hue tukrun ko phir se zinda kar diya ho jaise...👏👏👏 well done..u thrt of this urself! very talented ho tum ji??? mujhe toh pata he nahi tha! do inc mre such poems wen u gt a chance😃 ahh dutta gtin angry with himself for havin such feelings for naku?? wel anger wnt do nethin... the feelings r der n dey wnt fade away

chap 6- hmmm so naku is heartbroken tht dutta didnt say anything bt m sure she cud c he's going thru so much...fighting himself... its nt as simple as it is for naku...she had no past...wer as dutta it seems he feels if he moves on with naku he wil betray his past... sups n dutta fallin in love n wnting 2 marry broke my heart 2 like it did 2 tink...bt im kinda happy the scenario u 2 presented in da ff is dif 2 wt it was in da shw...ere sups loved dutta bt died...so the pain is der bt is dif 2 wt it ws in da shw...sad story bt knwin it wil mke it easy for naku 2 understand dutta...it seems history may repeat itself...naku n dutta becme friends 1st n thn fall in love like wt happened with sups n dutta...oh my dutta drunk😲 hmmm n he's being all close 2 naku...m sure naku wil ensure nothing of tht sort happens bt imagine if it does...😆😆😆 cnt w8 for next update man..pls update soon...i wna knw if SR happens or nt... 😆😆😆

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mIsHeZ.x

@mIsHeZ.x

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Posted: 14 years ago

#623

^^awww u finaly managed 2 read all...wil cum bak nd comnt on it ;-)

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Iridescence

@Iridescence1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#624

Originally posted by: mIsHeZ.x
^^awww u finaly managed 2 read all...wil cum bak nd comnt on it ;-)

Missy 🤗🤗
lol long long long time since i talked to you ...am so gayab these days arghh...hmmm so how is the next update coming along hun ...*ahem ahem* as i remember correctly someone said weekend pakka for update and i think that was a long while ago 😆😆 ...just kidding take ur time...u r buying me time too...this way i dont have to worry about this FF for long time...and now am getting pms from many for WOL ...😕 and i have no time to even read ppl FF let a lone write mine 😆

wuu2? how is the fasting :)

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mIsHeZ.x

@mIsHeZ.x

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Posted: 14 years ago

#625

Originally posted by: daya0628

Missy 🤗🤗
lol long long long time since i talked to you ...am so gayab these days arghh...hmmm so how is the next update coming along hun ...*ahem ahem* as i remember correctly someone said weekend pakka for update and i think that was a long while ago 😆😆 ...just kidding take ur time...u r buying me time too...this way i dont have to worry about this FF for long time...and now am getting pms from many for WOL ...😕 and i have no time to even read ppl FF let a lone write mine 😆

wuu2? how is the fasting :)

omg daya!!🤗🤗🤗

u gta long life mashAllah...i was jus b out 2 send u a scrap!!😳

iknooo uv been missin since ages nd it feels lyk i hvnt tlkd 2 ya in bare time

relly missing u bbe😳

arrggg ikno man i promised 2 update las week..but cudnt 1stly cuz i was in sooo much pain...2nd ramadan nd 3rd cuz of fd riots nd stf...its been horrible man

awww ikno im missin wol aswel u hvnt update in months! .

am nt update much as such but stil busy sumhw..seriously evn i duna wa i am busy doin..if dat evn makes sens😆😆

fasing is goin or8...missd sum due to *ahem ahem*...but gna strt agen inshAllah😳

hw u been

hws weddin prep goin

wuu2 des saysS??

luv u bbe

🤗🤗

xoxoxox

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Iridescence

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Posted: 14 years ago

#626

Originally posted by: mIsHeZ.x
omg daya!!🤗🤗🤗
u gta long life mashAllah...i was jus b out 2 send u a scrap!!😳
long life lol...dont want just live till i have to :P 😆
iknooo uv been missin since ages nd it feels lyk i hvnt tlkd 2 ya in bare time relly missing u bbe😳
I know...i have been busy with wedding stuff...its going and going and still seems to be going...we do so much yet feels like nothing is done yet lol if that makes any sense
arrggg ikno man i promised 2 update las week..but cudnt 1stly cuz i was in sooo much pain...2nd ramadan nd 3rd cuz of fd riots nd stf...its been horrible man
koi baat nahi like i said u are buying me time 😆😉
awww ikno im missin wol aswel u hvnt update in months! .
heehe i know ...i will try to write today ...as i am kind of free in the morning. ..but dont know wen i will have something to do 😕
am nt update much as such but stil busy sumhw..seriously evn i duna wa i am busy doin..if dat evn makes sens😆😆
lol mee too wondering becuz u shud be totally free atm 😆
fasing is goin or8...missd sum due to *ahem ahem*...but gna strt agen inshAllah😳aww ok ...good good :)

hw u been
busy re...still working and in between so much wedding stuff going on ...shopping is annoying and i am finding myself in middle of it all everytime 😆 ...actually two of the days we did a video shoot for my sister...it was fun, i choreographed a few steps for the video and the rest were all just random shots...but we tried to make it go with the song we selected...that was fun days ...really enjoyed it and honestly after watching them shoot just simple things for a small video my respect for actors increased...its damn hard work to shoot one little thing i tell u 😆

hws weddin prep goin
wuu2 des saysS??
WEDDING STUFF & Work ...what else is new 😆

luv u bbe
🤗🤗
xoxoxox

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Yuvika

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Posted: 14 years ago

#627

daya u gtin married? oh man y am i always da last 2 knw everything??

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Iridescence

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Posted: 14 years ago

#628

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15
daya u gtin married? oh man y am i always da last 2 knw everything??

LMAO yuvi i am not getting married...i have clarified this a million times i swear 😆 my sister... i am too young to get married not at this age never 😛

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Yuvika

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Posted: 14 years ago

#629

Originally posted by: daya0628
LMAO yuvi i am not getting married...i have clarified this a million times i swear 😆 my sister... i am too young to get married not at this age never 😛

acha well make sure m da 1st 2 no wen u do😆😆😆 @missy...update karna yaar! wil giv u chocs😆