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sana

@--ambar--

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Posted: 14 years ago

#571

Originally posted by: daya0628

no worries yaar

friendship ki hai toh nibhani toh padegi

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tamannA

@tamanna1391

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#572

love the update👏 finally dutta confess nakku😳 but in drunk condition😕 feel bad about supriya 😭ab next missy ki baari hai so jaldi karna missy last time ki tarah gayab mat ho jana ok 😃

Edited by rrs1391 - 14 years ago

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naina

@krishaa

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#573

great one buddy,i just loved this part very much.thanks for lovely update and pm.hope now tasha realize that they are made for eachother.please update soon can't wait to see what happens next. 😊😉

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Chinchinchoo

@Prinsesse.Suvi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#574

NO NO NO! You cant stop there! Missy update kar, nowww!!!

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#575

Here we go review time!!: OMG how much in love can you get!!
Ok Amazing update, in my eyes both of them are in love with each other, Dutta in the back of his mind knows yet doesn't want to be hurt again for is avoiding it and as for nakusha. Well shes well and truly fallen for him!!!
❤️😍.. So first thing is first Dutta all angry, frustrated with his inner thoughts..kind of reacts and nakusha comes to see whats going on. Aw i really liked this particular moment for nakusha saw a really different side to her husband. The pain, the anger, the intensity of his feels all in the way he behaves and nakusha was always going to react in this way i feel. To see somebody change there colors to abrubtly ..does make you feel a little insecure and that to Dutta Shri Ram Patil. I think initially she was scared seeing anger and then just equally hurt seeing all the pain in him and hearing the cause of it.

I think with nakus character here the more she gets to know Dutta the more she falls in love with him. From what i see when naku got married to dutta it was a compromise alright but it wasn't something that she was against. She made the compromise because she wanted to so even though she thought she would never fall in love with him..she never shut the doors on him so to speak. She accepted him..and then unknown let him into her heart.

So in the morning she is unable to stop thinking about him..!! pyaar ka asar ho raha hai!!! So the one standard thing is to make chai (actually i could do with a hot drink to..9am and im on i.f ..totally still sleepy)
Anyway and so she burns herself..no doubt pati ke sapne dekh rahin thi yey toe hona hein tha!. Loved duttas reaction here, he cares for her so much and then when he realizes he lets go. Kitni authority hai love it! i can totally imagine the way his face would crease as he realizes, steps away and then..passes one of his looks to baaji. well done..loved this moment👏
Feel sorry for nakusha when she sees him walk away..but at the end of the day he came running for her..and i dont think DSP runs around girls so she should feel privlidged.!😳

So baaji to the rescue then..loved nakusha and baaji conversation, baaji is right dutta totally needs the time and omg..did nakusha say she accepted dutta as her husband!! This is what i love about her she totally wasn't ready to marry anybody yet as soon as she did..she realized that she was somebodies wife now. That is an amazing characteristic this naku carries. i love the way..she has always been so subtle, soft with dutta, even though he wasn't her love when they got married she still treated him with respect. I think Ive said this before but i love the fact that even though there relationship hasn't been of the married type i don't think she has ever forgotten that she is married to him. Actually i think she even said it to him in the past chapter when he had hurt his hand was refusing to get it bandaged..she got half way from what i remember and then stopped.
The way she refers to him as "aap" always reiterates the fact that somewhere down inside she knows that she is talking to her husband. Lets face it..if you become friends with someone..you personalize it a bit.. she could of come out with..like something hey dutts!!!what ya up 2 ok slight exaggeration but you get what i mean. I really love this subtle side to nakusha.

And so ..aw the end of the update..what can i say.. nashe mein dil ki baat zubhan par aajati hai.. i think is very true..and duttas feeling all surfacing now..but then again he is drunk. Dutta shri ram patil is well known for being one person at night and a totally different person the morning after.. but it seems like he is litrarly telling her he loves her..making moves to..
big question mark here then???
looking forward to the next update. Fab update, Thank you very much.
Jagruti

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#576

amazing
awesome
fabulous update daya b

love it

so finally nakku knows anout dutta's past

dutta loves her and he knows that but trying to ignore his feelings but when her hand burn he rushes towards to help her and make sure she is fine 😉

nakku now understands her feelings for dutta that she loves him and always thinks him as husband rather than friend😛

At last dutta in full drunk state says all the truth inside his heart 😳 after all nasha mein insaan dil ki baat bolta hai

thanks for pm

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suhana19

@suhana19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#577

Reserved😉will be back later ...🤗

Edited😃

Hey dear Daya AND Missy🤗

Iam here finally yaara😉Thanx alot for the wonderful update 🤗Loved it as always👍🏼

Omg i love the begining song...its one of my fav song😳..Great pick👏

Seriously what a reaction for Dutta ...Beautifully written ...his feelings ..His inner turmoil ... and poor naku 😳 she is so in love with dutta ...and can"t see him in pain😳

But Dutta is also concerned for naku but can"t get past out of his mind ...The bar scene u wrote was just perfect ,...👏...The way it was going from past and present ...

Loved baaji and sethiji ...Haila Sups story was really sad and heartbreaking💔totally unexpected yaara ..

The ending was just mindblowing yaara ...Dutta blurted out his feelings😉

Superb song once again👏

..now can"t wait for to see Dutta"s reaction nxt morning ...Missy chal get to work😆its ur turn now na ...

Thanx alot Daya ...🤗U take care and see ya around

Lots of love and hugs

suhana🤗

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norey

@norey

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#578

great update, love the progression of this story and sad history of Dutta

please update soon as you did before keep it up. thanks,

norey

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meriyaar

@meriyaar

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#579

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right well where do i start...

a superbly long and beautiful update!

i just love the fact that Naku has fallen for Dutta and she admits it WOW 😲

Just waiting for dutta to admit it as well so they can both confess their love for each other.

they should go on honeymoon that would be amazing and with such amazing writers, you guys will make an awesome honeymoon for our TaSha!

poor dutta tho went thru so much bechara blames himself for supriya's death😭

now that naku is in his life i hope he can forget about his horrible past.

loving baaji as always, he's funny at all times always lightening everyone's mood😊

thanks for the pm

hope for another quicky update😳

xxx

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#580

hiya daya and missy ;apolgies from the late Latif... busy..held up ! okaay daya if this is the quality of work you produce when boarded on a bus,than I would give you an A# FOR effort,A# for creativity and expression... well done lady👏

~ the pangs of past memories and betrayal ,plus the helpessness of the existing undefined bond with Nakku were very well written and the words flowed easily to convey the mood👏

~ the bit where she is introduced to that side of his side which was subtteranean to her was quite moving ,in as much as it showed her complete vulnerability😭..but her desire to nurture this poor big mite, to care for him , was strong enough for her to contemplate that may ,per chance he might open up. but her constant fear of him was unhinging her, and you wrote it well Daya.😃

He,on the other hand did appear to be nothing short of a Bully doing exactly what he does best

walk away,in stead of talking... I would say a certain degree of arrogrance or is helplessnessthat no oe would understand how he feels?😕 but this is what layers his persona, and as a writer yo have touched well on it⭐️

~ discussion between the brother and sister on quite a weighty issue was interesting .. the young lad seems preety smart😛

~ the kitchen scene was inevitable,the incident ,strikes the right cord to show some affectionand concern between the two,simple and sweet😊

~ Wow so Baji takes us into the past! and what a past, very sequential ,very interesting the complete details...as a reader i was expecting from Ltl 1 Tthat thier will be her lover! but Daya😲

you got me flabbergasted... but i liked it very clevery tweaked👏 ... so now one can understand his two fold suffering ..losing sups and being blamed,and blaming himself for the tragedy! ..but makes you wonder..so what is this Nakku meant to do nurse himback to sanity? cure him from his boozing... yes I LIKE THE FEEL👍🏼 of where this story is going...

~ the last scene was very touching ,no pun intended, very moving , very Daya style no thingy migig! ho ha just simple speaking through the eyes,with a few in complete sentences... leaving us wanting for more ...😍

thank you for a wonderfuly written piece of sheer delight... waiting for next... bit

xxxhammie

oops forgot to comment on the sooongs😳...yes the first one personal favvy.. and appropriately used... ... missy ke shayeeri i know ,ar rather we all know... pyar me kuch bhi

bol sakti hai..own ye phir? by the way sharmilee tim tim... for me your fantastic descriptive

passages were enough to transport hammie in the realms of rapture I mean literary raputure

no Missy not panjer!😆 well done the pair of you👏

Edited by Hamlet53 - 14 years ago