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Posted: 14 years ago
#51
Reserved..
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Chali Aaye Chali Aaye Chali Aaye.. Ayi Ayi Ayi Main Chali Aaye😆
Hmmm tit for tat eyyy.. U got me back for reserving a place on yours... 😆
See now.. I will only update when you *unreserve* ur spot😉😆 *Laughs Evilly*😆
Ok.. To the update... Right from the top.. no not the top but the top top! Like before the update..!! Ahh See now everyone should thank me for making u update early😆
Now to the real update aka Chapter number 1..2...3 yh i mean 3😆..
Awwww She saw a her old Dutta .. his possesiveness for her and his love.. awww he was jealous😆 But everything is fair in love and war😉 Ejjaacttllyyy... He was the one who literally pushed her out of his life.. stoooopid boi i tell you phew😆.. Love is greater than anything else! So he should have chosen her over his career.. things like that come and go.. true love comes only once😳 *Sophie's goes in Ali/Baaji dreamland*😆 Ok maybe sometimes love can come twice😆 ok i should stop chatting rubbish😆..
Yaay Abhay going... Is he gonna have an accident? To know more, read ahead sophie😆... I hope when she bid him goodbye, she didnt kiss him😆.. Awww Dutta acting normal... I know he's really hurt and trying to supress all his feelings init😭.. How can someone stay like that infront of someone they love and not break down😭... *Sophie controls her tears*😆.. HA he didnt remember Abhay's name.. Well i cnt blame him, i dnt remember that guy's name as well😆.. I thought it was Aadhi den Aabhi and then it was Abhay... 😆
OMG... OMG...😲😲 All these years he kept a picture of her?😲 Well there a similar track like this in Ehsaas.. but nuffin to do with wallet.. Ahh u sneaked into my head didnt you?😉😆 ... Im jokin.. my bit is different but has something to do with pictures😳.. Anyway.. that was very sweet of him to keep a pic of them hugging.. he loves her.. he loves her😳..
Awwww he still makes her go weak.. that like my nakku in my story...i so understand her ryt now😭 she loves him toooooo😳
Awww D cant control himself.. aw aw aw aw.. but bby u gtta control.. ..YAY lift stopped.. wooohooo lol normally thats a bad thing.. but hey .. they are together and thats great..hum tum ek lift mein bandh ho aur lift stop hojaye😆 Okay that was weird😆...Huggie shuggie *Sophie whistles* Oiii Hoiii... main marjawaaaaaaaan..!! 😲 She asked him??? About the pic??? Hailaaaa😲 Awww he confessed.. he still loves her.. 😭 < Khushi ki aansoo😭.. Haww... humein tumse pyar kitna.. yeh hum nahin jaante.. magar jee nahin sakte.. tumhare binaaaa😆..lol.. excuse my bad singing..😆.. She hugged him when he said it?😳 Hailaaaaaaaaaa😃.. Yahh she has a point.. but he was stupid back then.. he didnt have a brain.. oops he still doesnt have one but still.. jaane do na yaar.. pyar karta hai tumse😛.. Well she cant say she loves Aa..watever his name is .. cause her heart beats for DSP! 😉.. Aww Neha.. bby .. sweetheart.. you go console whats his name.. because he will need someone soon😳.. Neha is nice.. i like her😛 very sweet girl.. yes .. Dutta loves Nakku.. she got the message.. Wohoo *Sophie opens champaigne*😆... Hailaa😲 Whats his name is back? Already? I thought he was going for some days..weeks..months and will have an accident?😆 Sorry... 😳.. Aww Nakku said Dutta when that guy hugged her😲.. Zor ka jhatka hai zoro se laga haan laga 😆 bechara Nakku ka x-fiance lol😆 Well.. Yes he is ryt as well.. she still loves Dutta.. she sud go get him😳.. GO GRAB HIM!!!!!😛😆.. What the hell is Dutta doing on a bridge?😲 Suicide????? Hailaaaaaa😆... But Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww the ending was the besttttt!!!!! *jumps with excitement* Omgg.. She told him she told him .. she loves him.. wooo.. They finally got each otherrrr.. *drinks champaigne*😆 I opened my champaigne earlier but was waiting for the end to drink it😉😆..
One meets his destiny often in the road he takes to avoid it.
Woooooow .. That is one beautiful quote!! So trueeee.. Goes very well with this FF!.. Ohhh and at the end she met him on the road😆 LOL.. ok i sud shut up😆
See see see.. I wrote some loooong comment... Phew..!! I'm so tired now!! *Vents self* .. Now u hop into my Ehsaas thread... Edit ur reserved spot and write a long comment to make me happy😆..
Okk.. Bye bye.. Ohh before i go... How bout you write an epilogue for this? Like 5 years later? 😛 LOL.. Ok im giving u more work to do lol.. just edit ur spot first 😃...
Ohh before i forget.. This short FF was... Beautifully written.. with a great story and I loved it!!! 😳... Ok bye bye again😛
Edited by Sophia21 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
U guys better edit ur comments soon as i dont like seeing those reserved spots....😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
Yay Happy endings😍
aww how sweet of Neha and Abhay ...and soo smart to realize reality soo quickly 😆
and loved the pic in wallet and the lift scene ...it was all soo cute ...
I loved how it ended too...the bridge 😳 such a simple beautiful love story ...
well written...kinda sad it was short thou ... but short and sweet right 😃
Great FF :-)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Bushy_92

U guys better edit ur comments soon as i dont like seeing those reserved spots....😆


I edited mine ........................
see i only reserve when i knw m gonna be the first one 😆
coz u guys hardly give me the chance to be first , specially U, Sophie and Naina 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55
nice story... i suppose cos it was short, u showed both neha n abhay letting go of their respective lovers so easily... altho i wud hav expected abhay 2 b a lil upset... bt wt i liked was hw he end up sayin nakusha n nt naku jus like dutta did...
i liked the end phrase..."one meets his destiny often in the road he takes 2 avoid it..." so tru...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OH Bushy !
ITs such a beautiful Love story !
Definitely they were each other destiny !
Its beautoful how they both have effect on each other !
Love that Neha and Abhay let go of them !
cuz if they wont they know non of can live happily !

very sweet FF !
its gives a big lesson thing thrice before letting ur loved ones go !
Congo bushy u have just done with ur short FF !
btw kab aye ge dosray FF ki bare :P
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: --khushi--


I edited mine ........................
see i only reserve when i knw m gonna be the first one 😆
coz u guys hardly give me the chance to be first , specially U, Sophie and Naina 😆

meri acchi bacchi....🤗😆..u got a chance here na...so better leave the first place for me in sophie's FF's...they r only mine.........😆..kidding.....😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

nice story... i suppose cos it was short, u showed both neha n abhay letting go of their respective lovers so easily... altho i wud hav expected abhay 2 b a lil upset... bt wt i liked was hw he end up sayin nakusha n nt naku jus like dutta did...

i liked the end phrase..."one meets his destiny often in the road he takes 2 avoid it..." so tru...

Ya Yuvi....i just let it go off easily....i didn't had any intention of stretching it coz if i stretch it then i may spoil it....so i left it this way....
BOLD: i wrote that coz D was upset when he heard some1 else call her Nakku apart from him...so i made abhay call her nakusha...😳...
Red: thanx..and it suits my FF so well na? 😳😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bushy_92

meri acchi bacchi....🤗😆..u got a chance here na...so better leave the first place for me in sophie's FF's...they r only mine.........😆..kidding.....😆

yeah i knw u & naina mandraofy everytime in Sophie's FF..................
So that nobody else can get the chance 😆.....................

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Posted: 14 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

nice story... i suppose cos it was short, u showed both neha n abhay letting go of their respective lovers so easily... altho i wud hav expected abhay 2 b a lil upset... bt wt i liked was hw he end up sayin nakusha n nt naku jus like dutta did...

i liked the end phrase..."one meets his destiny often in the road he takes 2 avoid it..." so tru...

@BOLD :- ya Yuvi, I loved this phrase tooo........................
I dunno is it true or not , But i really wish that in my lyf it would be.....................

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