New FF..Yeh Mohabbat..updated..LAST part-pg 57!! - Page 8

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Posted: 14 years ago
#71
awesome update duta & nakusha fighting with 1 another..lol..loved the bedroom scene,wow baji's entry in nxt update..cnt w8
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Posted: 14 years ago
#72
G for Gabbar!!! 🤣

awesome bush!!! 👏 i like the warm friendship between nakku and dutta!! hmm par yahan bhee kala and G are creating problems... !!
am loving this FF!! please update soon .... am waiting to meet baaji! 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
bush its very well written.I didnt know you could write so well.I read all 3 parts together and must say its awesome.👍🏼👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
wonderful update...ohhh dutta manages to bring a smile on nakkus face how cute...and he calls ganpat gabbar lol..so finally dutta has started to feel differently for nakku...great...very well written...now waiting for baajis entry
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Posted: 14 years ago
#75
Hey bush very nice part yaar,,,,wow both r fighting so sute 😉 wow kala ki itni taariff woohoo nakku in form haan,,,,man G for Gabbar,,,,,expressionless🤣 suddenly G richie rich ho gaya,,,sethji n Bhao ki acchi jamti he😛.....ohh N sed D to Charlie 😆😆😆.....wow Eyelock....longone....😳.....so D strt to fill sumthing special...n try to hide is filling n not accept😳😉 D's man k dialouge ws nice specially at dinner tble😆,,,,,nice update bushy,,,,,precap....baaji ,,,,wow,,,,,Do fast girl😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76
Dutta loves nakku...ohhhhoo..atleast in ur ff dutta will feel what nakku felt in the begining inthe show...nakku ko thoda dheere asar hoga...
great update...baaajiiii wah bhai wah baaji finally aa hi gaya...good yaar waiting tha uska....
plz update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#77
Awesome!! I just read all of the parts and I really like the concept. I loved the Dutta- Nakku fight it was so cute, the funny fac- scary face thing... I can't imagine Dutta being scared of anyone lol but him being scared of Ganpath omg lmao....I really want to know how you're going to portray Baaji in here. waiting for the next part😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78
very nice update yar keep writing and update soon i am eagerly waiting for next update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Edited by Bushy_92 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey all..Hope everyone is in good health....thank u guys for liking my ff.....hope i continue living up to ur expectations....here's the next part...

Part 5..
.....Yeh Mohabbat.....

Next...day....Dutta gets up early....freshes up.....changes into a purple shirt and blue jeans....He calls nakku..

Dutta: Hello....

Nakusha: Hello...good morning....

Dutta: good morning...maine bas itna kehne ko phone kiya ki tum ready rehna..main 30 mins mein tumhe pick karne aaraha hoon...

Nakusha: Ok...will be waiting.....(She calls Riya and tells her to be ready.....)

Dutta comes to Mehra Mansion and waits for Nakku in his car.....Nakku rushes out saying bye to everyone.......She is wearing a white tee blue jeans and a black jacket with sleeves rolled up...She was looking stunning....Dutta sees her and is mesmerized by her....Nakku comes and sits in the car beside Dutta...He looks at her and compliments..

Dutta: wow u look hot...

Nakku: Oh....hold on....did I just hear Mr.Dutta Sriram Patil compliment me..???

Dutta: yeah u heard it r8... I complimented u......u look hot..

Nakku: Thanx.....abb chalein...???

Dutta drives the car and stops in front of Riya's house...Riya comes out..sits in the car and they reach a place....Dutta leads the two ladies in...they search for a place and Riya points at a place..

Riya: wahan chalte hain...wahan se view accha hoga....

Nakku: Haan chalo......wahin chalte hain...And the 3 go to that place....

Nakusha: Mujhe kuch khane ko chahiye...am hungry....(she luks at Dutta pleadingly...

Dutta: I got it.....tum dono yahan baitho..main kuch khane ke liye laata hoon..

Nakku: Diet coke mat bhoolna...

Dutta : Aur kuch chahiye madam???

Nakku: Nahi bas itna hi kaafi hai....

Dutta sighs and goes to get some wafers and diet coke....while Riya and Nakku sits and waits for him to come...The players start coming.......and Riya gets excited...and says..

Riya: Nakku players aarahe hain....dekh...

Nakku was waiting for Dutta.....she was worried where he had been as it had been a while..he didn't return yet...

Nakku: Haan jaanti hoon players aa rahe hain lekin yeh Dutta kahan reh gaya.???

Riya: Arey usey chod na..woh aajayega...

Nakku: Lekin who abb tak kyun nahi aaya....kahan hoga???

Riya turns to see and spots Dutta talking to a girl...

Riya: who raha tumhara Dutta....flirting with a girl.....isey bas mauka chahiye..kahin bhi shuru hojata hai.....such a flirt...

Nakku looks at Dutta as well and she fumes in anger....It was a normal thing and Nakku never reacted to these things..but today she was feeling differently...she didn't knew whether she was angry or jealous..but she just knew that she didn't like Dutta talking to that girl....she turns her face and tells Riya...to concentrate on the match....

Riya: Main toh match par hi concentrate kar rahi thi...tuney hi toh Dutta ke baare mein poocha...

Nakku: Theek hai theek hai...lekin abb toh match dekhte hain...(Riya gets confused at Nakku's behaviour...

Dutta comes there with wafers and diet coke...he gives some wafers to Riya and the rest to Nakku...Riya takes it happily but Nakku does not even look at them.....

Dutta: Nakku yeh lo wafers aur diet coke...

Nakku: Mujhe nahi chahiye....

Dutta: Kya???....Mian tumhare liye yeh sab laya hoon aur tumhe nahi chahiye...

Nakku: oh toh tum wahan mere liye gaye the....jhoot mat bolo...tum uss ladki ke saath kay kar rahe the..???

Dutta: Ladki??? Kaunsi Ladki???

Nakku: Toh tum nahi jaante kaunsi ladki???

Dutta: Nahi..

Nakku: Wahi ladki jiske saath tum abhi flirt kar rahe the....

Dutta: Flirt.oh who toh main usey raasta bata raha tha,,,,

Nakku: kahan ka raasta...tumhare ghar ka..???

Dutta: Nahi...woh..main...(he thinks for a while...)...Hold on.....tum mujhse itne saare sawaal kyun poochrahi ho...???
Nakku: Kyun...nahi pooch sakti...???...Mujhe jaanna hai ki tum uss ladki ko kaise jaante ho???.(Dutta could not take it...he shouts at Nakku..

Dutta: Enough Miss. Nakusha Mehra....Stop behaving like a kid....yeh koi nayi baat toh nahi hai...main toh hamesha se flirting karta hoon...tab toh tumhe koi problem nahi thi...phir aaj achanak kya hogaya hai tumhe..???...(Nakusha could not believe Dutta just shouted on her.....even Riya was taken aback...

Nakusha: Theek hai Mr. Dutta Sriram Patil.....tum kya karte ho...kyun karte ho..mujhe issy koi lena dena nahi hai..(pointing finger at Dutta).u can just go to hell....(Nakku along with Riya...starst to go and sit somewhere else...Dutta stops her...)

Dutta: Kahan jaa rahi ho??

Nakku: Tumhe issey kya matlab...main kahin bhi jaa sakti hoon...dare u follow me...

Dutta gets a bit scared at her look...and stands still...while Nakku and Riya go and sit somewhere else...

Dutta burries his face in his palms and regrets his mistake....just then the whole basketball court is filled with one name...every girl...was screaming only one name....the cheer girls were dancing screaming only one name....

Baji Baji Baji....and there comes the cool....handsome...sexy...guy.....wearing blue tracks and white tee.....he was Baji Sriram Patil....youger brother of Dutta Sriram Patil....and a perfect professional Basket ball player....He was every girls fantasy.....His dimples were to die for....girls would do anythng to get that dimpled smile.....But his smile was reserved for only one girl in the whole world..Just one single glance at her and he could get the strength of concurring everything....Every girl knew that he was booked for one girl and she is none other than Miss. Riya Singh....but still they could not stop themselves from dreaming and drooling about him...Baji enters the basket ball court waves at everyone....and then winks at Riya...who smiles shyly....her smile made him faint but he could not as he had to play the match...lol.😆...He then looks at Nakku and smiles but he searches for his bhao...who was no where to be seen....His gaze then falls on Dutta who was struggling to get one glance of Nakku so that he can say sorry.....

Baji looks at him and then at Nakku...he gets a bit confused as this was the first time these two were sitting separately and Dutta was not looking at his brother but at Nakku.....then Dutta feels a gaze on him...he finds Baji staring at him....he realizes that Baji was waiting for his wishes....

Dutta and Nakku at the same time: Go Baji Go.....win it....

And Baji smiles at them and the match starts....And soon Baji's team was ahead of the the opponent team.....with one basket.....Baji runs with the ball towards the basket and as he reaches the basket a guy from the opponent team pushes him which makes him loose his balance and he falls on the ground....

Riya...Nakku and Dutta...stand up and shout Bajiiiiiiiii.....

Baji looks at them and signals them that he is fine.There were only 5 minutes left for the match to finish....he then looks at the guy who pushed him....and gets up.....He again grabs the ball....runs to the basket...he reaches it....the guy also follows him to defend......Baji jumps to make a basket...he hits the guy with his elbow......and he falls on the ground.....Riya..Nakku and Dutta smile...as they knew this would happen...

Baji makes the basket.....and the referee whistles...the match finishes....Baji turns towards the guy..gives a hand for him to get up....and he whispers in his ears...
Baji: Dobara aisi galati karne ki sochna bhi mat.....bohat pachtaoge(regret)...and he pats the guy on his shoulder and says sarcastically...well played dude.....better luck next time and he goes from there winking at him....

The players of the winning team comes and picks Baji up....and they celebrate.....Riya..Naku and Dutta comes there...Baji gets down....and comes near Riya....he hugs her.....and whispers in her ears....

Baji: Hey sweetheart....missed u..

Riya: Missed u too..

Baji kisses her on her forehead....

Nakku clears her throat: Agar love birds ki baatein ho gayi ho toh humse milenge...Mr..champion of the day....

Baji: Yeah sure...and he hugs her....( then he goes to Dutta..

Baji: Bhaooooooo.......hows u???

Dutta: Main toh theek hoon...tu bata kaisa hai..??

Baji: main toh mast hoon....aur abb toh aur bhi mast hoon (looking at Riya....

Nakku and Dutta: We know that.....Tasha look at each other.....and then Nakku gets back to her anger mode...

Nakku: Abb mujhe chalna chahiye...woh kuch kaam yaad aagaya...so guys u carry on...i gotta go.....Dutta stops her by saying....Tum jaaogi kaise....main tumhe drop kardoonga.....Nakku could not say no...as she didn't had her car...so she had to go with Dutta....But she doesnot speak to him nor look at him....on the way....Dutta stops the car in front of her house...she gets down...and goes inside..without even looking at him....Dutta felt as if 100 swords have been pierced into his heart....

Baji and Riya are left alone.....Baji looks at Riya....

Baji: Hmmm..so we r alone now...toh abb hum kuch bhi kar sakte hain...without any disturbance....

Riya: tum kya karne ki soch rahe ho...???

Baji with a mischievious smile: Wahi karne ki soch raha hoon jo mujhe kana chahiye....

Riya a bit scared after seeing Baji's mischeivious smile: Baji..no....tum saisa kuch nahi karoge....

Baji: Nahi Riya...main wahi karoonga jo mujhe karna chahiye...

Riya: Baji....agar tumne aisa wasia karne ki koshish ki toh main chali jaaungi....

Baji: Oye dirty mind....main toh bas baatein karne ki soch raha tha,....

Riya shocked: Kya....matlab tum sirf baatein karne ki soch rahe the...

Baji: Haan Riya..main SIRF baatein karne ki soch raha tha....lekin tumne kya socha.???

Riya gets embarrassed at her stupid thinking: Nahi...woh main toh bas....

Baji stepping closer...: Kya socha tumne...

Riya moves backwards: Maine socha ki...

Baji moving closer: Kya socha..

Riya moves back and she was stuck between the wall and Baji: Maine socha ki...tum...

Baji: Bolo Riya...kya socha tumne....(Now they were very close to each other...they could feel each other's heart beats.....)

Plz listen to this tune while reading the rest of the part...😳

Riya: Maine yahi socha ki....b4 she could complete the sentence...Baji presses his lips with hers....Riya who was reluctant..initially..gives in...Baji holds her waist with one hand and her head with the other....Their heartbeats were talking....Baji was biting her lips....they were kissing sensually.....they didn't wanted this to end.....they wanted the whole world to stop at this moment.....Riya moves her hands on Baji's back..she moves it up and down giving Baji adrenaline rush....he breaks the kiss to let her breathe....she was out of breath.....they look at each other.Riya looks down shyly while Baji looks at her lovingly and moves his hand through his hair....

Precap: Tasha engaged....😆

Hope u like it....😳

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Edited by Bushy_92 - 14 years ago

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