New FF..Yeh Mohabbat..updated..LAST part-pg 57!! - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: sonee

Hey bush i forget to mention one thing dear😳....wen i read abt D n GAnpath i ws lyk😲....

D keep mum in front of D... n Ganapath;s question🤣🤣🤣...ohh Bush...this is too much 4 our Don D haan😆
i would' luv to see der interaction in next part😳😉😆🤣
awesome bush 4 dis u gt full marks👍🏼👏👏👏👏👏

aww thank u.....yeah..he is not a don here...he is flirt here...and he is scared of Ganpath......thanx for giving full marks....hope i live up to ur expectations....Embarrassed
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Posted: 14 years ago
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please continue soon hun..n pls drop me a pm when u do
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey all thank u for ur lovely comments.....and sorry for updating late....i was struck with my assignment and when i finished my assignment..my lappy had problems and the whole assignment is lost now...i hav to start it again...but never mind.,..i can't let u guys wait for so long.....here's the update...a bit long one...hope u like this as well....😳
Part 4...
....Yeh Mohabbat....

Dutta: woh.....Aaj shaam ko kya kar rahi ho???

Nakusha: Kuch khaas nahi...kyun???

Dutta: Toh Dinner pe chalein...

Nakusha: Aaj nahi...thoda thak gayi hoon.....phir kabhi chalte hain..

Dutta: I knew it...main bas mazak kar raha tha....ok.......see you later.....

Nakusha: Maine tumhare cabin mein ek file bheji thi.....tumne dekha usey???

Dutat: kaunsi woh Sinha's ki file....nahi dekha...ghar jaake dekhloonga.....

Nakusha: Ok....

Its 8 pm and Nakku was getting ready to go home....Dutta follows her....hey...tum yahan se seedhe ghar jaarahi ho.???

Nakusha: Jaise ki tumhe pata hi nahi.....Riya ko pick karti hui jaaungi...

Dutta: Ya r8.....bhool gaya tha....

Nakusha: Ok....Gudnite....take care....

Dutta: Gudnite...drive safely...and take care.....(He hugs her sideways.....)

Nakusha picks up Riya from her boutique....

Riya: Hey.....how u feeling???

Nakusha: Much better....

Riya: thank God ur fine...

Nakusha: U told Dutta everythng r8???

Riya: Yes i did...

Nakusha: kyun???

Riya: Kyunki main chahe jitni bhi koshsish karlun lekin tum sirf Dutta ki hi baat manti ho..isliye.....tum usey dekhte hi saari tensions bhool jati ho....

Nakusha: You r r8....pata nahi kyun lekin jab bhi uski aawaz sunti hoon...chehre pe apne aap hasi aajati hai...sab kuch bhool jati hoon....

Riya.smiles and thinks to herself....yeh dono ek doosre ke baare mein khudse bhi zyada jaante hain....ek doosre se baat kiye bina ek din bhi nahi rehte....ek doosre ki fikar khudse bhi zyada karte hain....phir bhi yeh dono ek doosre se pyar nahi karte.....aisa kaise ho sakta hai....

Nakusha stops the car infront of Riya's house...which brings Riya back to her senses...

Nakusha: Ok.....gudnite...kal subah milte hain.....take care...

Riya: gudnite....

Nakusha drives and reaches her home...

She parks the car and enters Mehra Mansion...which was a beautiful bunglow...with beautiful interiors.....it had many servants but Nakku preferred to do her petty works on her own....She comes in and greets her father...

Nakusha: Hello Papa...

Ganpath: Hello Beta......u look tired...

Nakusha: yes i am a bit tired...Mom aur Sethji kahan hai..???

Ganpath: She is in the kitchen and Sethji is in his room...

Nakusha: I gotta meet him...didn't see him from morning....(and she goes upstairs to Sethji's room....)

Nakusha: knock- knock...may I come in???

Sethji looks at her with angry face and turns his face to the other side....

Nakusha smiles and comes in: Kya kar raha hai mera chota bhai???

Sethji; Mujhe aapse baat nahi karni...aap subha mujhse miley bina hi chali gayi aur mujhe school bhi drop nahi kiya....

Nakusha: Toh isliye naaraaz hai mera bhai....I am sorry.....i was getting late....dekho main apne kaan(ears) pakadke tumse maafi maangti hoon....mujhe maaf nahi karoge....She looks at him pleadingly...

Sethji looks at her and smiles:Its ok...i forgive you...

Nakusha: phew.....kya kar rahe ho??

Sethji; Yeh puzzle solve kar rah tha...

Nakusha: Yeh game tumhe kisne diya???

Sethji: Dutta bhao ne...

Nakusha: oh...That's nice....u play...(saying this Nakku goes into her room and freshes up...she wears a pink night dress and her hair is left open....she comes down and sees around...)

Nakusha: Mama....Papa kahan hai???

Babi: Woh Business associates ke saath dinner pe gaye hain...

Nakusha: Unhone mujhe bataya nahi...shayad bhool gaye honge...(She turns to go when the door bell rings...)

Nakusha: Main dekhti hoon....(as she opens the door she gets surprised...)

Nakusha: Tum?? Yahan?? Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho???

Dutta: Tum kabhi bhi normal logon ki tarah behave kyun nahi karti???

Nakusha: What do you mean by normal logon ki tarah behave nahi karti???

Dutta: i mean ke normally jab koi mehmaan aata hai toh usey andar aane ko kehte hain...baithne ko kehte...iss tarah sawal nahi karte...

Babi comes there and sees Dutta...

Babi: Arey Dutta beta tum....main abhi Nakku se poochne wali thi ke tum ghar kyun nahi aarahe ho...humse naaraaz toh nahi ho???

Dutta moves Nakku to a side and goes to Babi...while Nakku looks on with a "How dare you" kind of look on her face...

Dutta: Arey nahi aunty...main aaplogon se naaraaz kyun rahoonga....bas kaam kuch zyada tha na isliye nahi aapaya...Lekin aap apni yeh beti ko sikhayiye...ke mehmaano ke saath aise behave nahi karte....

Nakusha: Mehmaan my foot......tumhare saath aise hi behave karna chahiye....

Dutta was about to say something when Sethji comes and hugs him from behind...

Sethji: bhaooooooo......

Dutta: Arey Sethji..kaisa hai.,....

Sethji: main theek hoon aur aapne jo game diya na..woh toh ekdum mast hai...

Dutta: Tujhe pasand aaya na...

Sethji: Haan bohat pasand aaya....accha main khelne jaaraha hoon...(and he goes to his room while Babi goes into the kitchen....Nakusha sits on the sofa and Dutta sits on the other sofa which was next to her's...Dutta sees around...

Dutta: uncle dikhayi nahi derahe hain...kahan hai woh???

Nakusha: Woh ghar pe nahi hai...business associates ke saath dinner pe gaye hain..

Dutta....You mean uncle Date pe gaye hain...(and he starts laughing..)

Nakusha laughs as well and says: Woh bhi ek ke saath nahi...teeno ke saath gaye hain....

Dutta: Haila.....uncle toh mujhse bhi aage nikle....woh toh triple date pe gaye hain.....And the two starts laughing loudly...)

Dutta: waise accha hi hua ke uncle ghar pe nahi hai......warna pata nahi mujhe dekhte hi unhe kya ho jata hai.......Hello bhi aise bolte hain jaise mujhpe ehsaan kar rahe ho...

Nakusha: Kya kaha tumne......atleast mere papa hello toh bolte hain...tumhari Kalatai ko dekha hai...pata nahi unhe kya hojata hai....mujhe dekhte hi apni nazrein pher leti hain....

Dutat: Oh hello........tumhare Papa bhi kuch kam nahi hai...Unka naam G for Ganpath nahi G for Gabbar hona chahiye tha....

Nakusha: Tumne mere Papa ko Gabbar kaha...toh tumhari Kala tai bhi peeche nahi hai....hindi serials ki vamp se bhi do kadam aage hai woh...

Dutta: tumne meri Kala tai ko vamp kaha....

Nakusha: haan....kaha kyunki woh mujhe dekhkar ajeeb se expressions deti hai....jaise maine unse kuch cheenliya ho...

Dutta: ismey unki koi galti nhai hai...kabhi kabhi tum itni scary lagti ho ki koi bhi darr jaaye....isliye woh ajeebse expressions deti hai....atleast woh expressions toh deti hai....lekin tumhare Papa....mujhe dekhte hi expressionless face banalete hain.....

Nakusha: huh.....kya kaha tumne....main scary lagti hoon.....toh tum bhi kuch kam nahi ho.....apna face dekha hai.....arey funny face competition mein tum Charlie Chaplin ko bhi peeche chod doge...isilye Papa apni hasi rok lete hain.....kisi ke face par hasna acchi baat nahi hoti na....

Dutta: Mera face funny hai..Nakku ki bacchi ruk...abhi batata hoon....(and in no time they start throwing cushoins at each other and begin running around the whole house....Nakku runs and he follows her to catch her....they go into Nakku's room...she tricks him......suddenly..they trip and fall on the bed....

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F4dHPPfOfpk&feature=related

please hear this tune while reading the rest of the part.....

Nakku on the bed and Dutta on top of her....Nakku holds Dutta's shirt with her hands softly....They share a long eyelock.(its a really long one..lol)...they look at each other lovingly......they were so close to each other that they could feel each other's warm breath on each others face....they were lost into each other's eyes....and forgot about the whole world....they wanted to freeze this moment.......they break the eyelock when Babi calls them for dinner....they stand up and look around feeling embarrassed....Nakku goes out of the room while Dutta stands there and thnks about the moment.....he felt different...as if someone has touched his heartstrings....he moves his hand through his hair....and goes downstairs....

He looks at nakku and then looks down....Babi tells them to sit and have dinner.... they both sit down....Nakku doesnot look at Dutta..while Dutta was stealing glances....

he then thnks to himself: Tu pagal hogay hai Dutta....aise mat dekh usey....warna pitega....

Babi sees Dutta lost in his thoughts

Babi: kya hua Dutta...kahan khoye ho...khana kaho.....

Nakku looks at him and then looks down....

Dutta glances at Nakku and then haves his dinner....

after dinner....

Dutta: Abb main chalta hoon...bohat late hogaya hai...Bye aunty...Sethji gudnite.....

Nakku comes to drop him to his car

Duta: ermm...bye...gudnite...kal milte hain...

Nakusha: Gudnite...kal toh hum waise bhi milenge.....and she smiles...

Dutta drives and reaches his home...Patil Niwas...

He straightly goes to his room changes into a track and tee....and lies down on his bed.....

Here Nakku was soundly sleeping...while Dutta was struggling to sleep.....he turns from right to left...and left to right....he thinks about the eyelock......was thinking how beautiful she looked....how innocent her eyes were.....suddenly he comes back to his senses...

Dutta to himself: yeh tujhe kay hogay hai...Dutta Sriram Patil.....woh teri dost hai.....tu uske baar emein aisa kaise soch sakta hai...chup chap so ja warna agar kal bhi late hogaya toh Nakusha Mehra tujhe nahi chodegi....saying this to himself he falls asleep....

Precap: Baji's entry....😉

Hope u guyz hav liked it....😳

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Love....Bushra...

Edited by Bushy_92 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Edited;;
Yaay Me First.. Me First Lol
Awww She refused ... Yu Just wanted to prove us wrong init bush? lol...😆
Exactly Riya.. Im thinking the same thing.. they care for each.. know each other mre dan any1 but still doesnt love each other.. yeh kya majra hai😕? lool😆
Sethji and Nakku scene was so cute... Arre vah hone wale jiju lool gave sethji game? lage raho😆 LMAO... Haila.. So Nakku refuse Dinner, he comes to her house for Dinner😉😆... Kya Baat Hain.. Vaah maan gaye bush😉..
LMAO G for Gabbar 🤣 Kala vamp of TV? 🤣 BINGO!! lol 😆
Haila eyelock already... Hmm nice tune😉 I can totally picturise the whole thing.. 😃
Aww they both embarrased.. 😳 How cute!!!...
Hailaa.. DSP the cassanova cnt sleep cause of a girl.. that too his friend? lool 😆 Great.. looks like Dutta will fall for her first! Embarrassed ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. CTRL+F5 reloads the whole page.
Awesome Update...
Haila... Meri baaaaaaaaaajiiiiii *jumps excitedly* Now i really cnt wait for the next part lol 😆
Continue soon... No do ur assignment first and make me proud!! 😃
Thanks for the PM.... x
Edited by Sophia21 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65

very sweet and interesting ..... like their conversation on ganpat as gabbar and kala as vamp 😃😃😃😃😃😃

eyelock😳😳😳😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
amazing update
tasha r so cute, fighting with 1 another..lol..loved the bedroom scene, they r obv attracted 2 1 another...
wow baji's entry in nxt update..cnt w8
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
awesome update.........TaSha fighting scene was really cute........n bedroom eyelock was also good........waiting for Baaji's entry........update soon.........
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Fabulous!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! gr8 updt...........
So Tasha eyelock..........dat too a long one...........Dutta has started to feel special feelings for Nakku ............ Nakku doesnt feel ....only sligtly embarrased...............Hope Dutta realise his feelings fr her first ....... smultaneously even Nakku should strt realising.......
Waiting for nxt updt...............
Thanx fr PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oh GOD Bush u lost ur assignment.....................
Thats so sad............................ But i hope this time its not gonna be that much tough as earlier.................
Bush very smart😉.......................... U knw ur nxt move was so predictable sooooooo u just made her saying nooooooo😆.......................... Rest TaSha Scene was super awesome Funny & cute..................
Convo b/w TaSha on her father & his kala tai was soooooooo
hillarious🤣.......................
oye hoye u gonna introduce Bajji in nxt update...........................
update soon sweetheart🤗.......................................
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awhh gr8 epi hun tasha fyt wz soo funy lol 😆 n da eyelok wz 2 cute awhh duta tryna steel glancz lol at least der LS muvn alng lol ...

gr8 epi ovrol lol luvd ganpath on d8 wv 3 lol!!! 🤣
enwyz thnx 4 pm bbe n do continue soooooon...mwah.xx

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