New FF..Yeh Mohabbat..updated..LAST part-pg 57!! - Page 10

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Posted: 14 years ago
#91
yay..basketball,..love tht game!!
oi hoi sum1 is jealous wen dutta was chattin 2 sum other girl...lol...sweet tho luks like the whole world wil realise they love each other b4 tasha thmselves do..lol
precap is shocking... their engagement?????????/ hw i mean she's so annoyed with him????? update soon bushy..2 much suspense
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Posted: 14 years ago
#92
fabulous!!!!!!!!!!!!! fabulous!!!!!!!!!!!!!
both started realisng their possessiveness fr each other................
hahah love da little fight
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Posted: 14 years ago
#93
Hey Bush oops Di🤗 fabulous update..........................
oye hoye Bajji is basket ball player😃.............................
Hailla di itni sari tareef woh bhi apne step pops ki??????
Aap to usse apnane ko tiyar nahi the😆..................................
Chalo back to FF.......................
hooooooo Nakku & Dutta's fight😲......................
Nakku is angry coz he talk to another girl...........................
Yeeeppiiiii Aag dono taraf lagi hai...........................
Bajji n Riya??????? that was unexpected....................
But nice.................. jiski itroduction hi Kiss se start hui hai woah aage kya krega?????😳
Ahhhhh That Kiss was toooooooo hot😳....................chalo chalo ab bas bahut hai........... aur likha to sophia mum will be angry😆.............
Engagement??????? di now whats this???????
Abhi to he even dunno propose her...........................
Oh GOD one more suspense................................
Update sooooooooon..........................PLZzzz.........................
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Posted: 14 years ago
#94

Ok I am in love with this Baaji!!😍 Basketball player!!!hawww

And then he kisses Riya...so romantic na?
But I loved the tasha part the most..how Naku feels jealous lol and then Dutta is all confused and upset...and did you say the precap was tasha getting engaged? OMG!!!!! Jald update karna please otherwise I will die because of your suspense...itni jaldi engaged???
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Posted: 14 years ago
#95
bush loved this part also.its very well written.keep it up.👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
#96
hi bushy!!! 🤗
thanks for the PM and update !!!! 😃

and sorry as usual am late commenting 😳

Wow!!! Wafers aur saath mein diet coke 😆 ladkiyaan kab sudhrengee 😃

aw! so sweet unexplored and unacknowledged feelings of nakku and dutta 😍 pyaar bhee hai aur pata bhaa nahi ... sigh! 😊

wah! nakku ka gussa and nice comic line ... kahan kaa rastaa tumharee ghar kaa 🤣... and giving glaring looks to dutta ke woh dar gaya!!!
aur dutta tumhe nakku pe shout nahi karnaa chahiye thaa!! 😡 but nakku bhee naa bina dekhe ghar ke andar bhee chalee gayee 😭 ... yaar he was just being his usual self ... ab ek din mein kaise badlegaa .... !!! ... nakku palat palat palat ... arey bush use paltaa naa 😆

wah baaji! kya entry maaree hai! and ye lo.... he is already booked with riya!! waise yahan bhee baaji dutta se fast hai😆🤣

arey!!! Engagement? Ye kaisee!!! Jaldee jaldee next update karo!!! 😍

nice work here bushy!!! 👏 keep it up girl!!! 👍🏼

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Posted: 14 years ago
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lovely update...good to see nakku getting jealous and when i read that girls fantasise about baji i couldnt stop thinking about sophie...very well written ...liking the pace of the story...waiting for tasha to get engaged i hope to each other and not to some other ppl
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Posted: 14 years ago
#98
very nice part bushy👏👏👏 ohh man Baaji...player....sophie khush ho gayi hogi😆
awesome entry huyi Baaji ki👏👏👏.....very nice,,,,ohh Nakku jealouse,,,😳.....passessive hun
yaar ye Baaji to fastes se bhi fast nikala😆,,,, Tasha r tooo cute,,,,,😲 precap....itna danger,,,,,plz end dis cliffhanger n update soon swwety,,,😳
n hhan mera naam hatade PM list me se😆 tune pucha na kisi hatana he😆...tu PM nahin karegi na Den also i read ur FF😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#99
Hey all......sorry i cant reply to everyone's comments.....as i am running short of time......Thank u all for liking it....and appreciating my ff.....

Part 6
....Yeh Mohabbat....

Baji and Dutta...are at their PN....(pagal niwas lol)......Dutta thinks ways of getting Nakku forgive him...Baji comes in...and says...bhao...kya kar rahe ho???

Dutta does not say anything...

Baji: Bhao..kya hua....kya soch rahe ho....???

Dutta: Arey yaar Baji...problem ho gayi hai.....and he narrates the whole thing that took place b/w Tasha. In the basketball court......

Baji: Bhao...aapne Nakku par chillaya...???

Dutta: Haan...kya karoon...jistarah se who mujh par shak kar rahi thi..mujhe accha nahi laga....

Baji: Bhao...lekin phir bhi...aapko uspar chillana nahi chahiye tha......

Dutta: Jaanta hoon....lekin abb pachtane se kya fayda...kuch sochna padega...

Baji: Bhao...i have a plan....(he tells Dutta his plan and Dutta approves it...)


At Mehra Mansion...

Nakku was thinking about the whole incident...

Nakku: Yeh aaj mujhe ho kya gaya tha....Dutta se iss tarah sawaal kyun kar rahi thi....yeh uski life hai...woh apni life mein kuch bhi kare mujhe ussey farak nahi padna chahiye......(Just then the phone rings....Nakku picks up the phone...

Nakku: Hello...

Baji: Hello....Nakku...kya kar rahi hai???

Nakku: Kuch nahi..bas aise hi....tu bol phone kis liye kiya..??

Baji: who aaj sham ko kya kar rahi ho....???
Nakku: Kuch khaas nahi...kyun???
Baji: Toh aaj sham ko kahin bahar chalte hain.....to celebrate...

Nakku: Lekin jaana kahan hai???
Baji: Nightclub....tu aayegi na???
Nakku: Ok.....main aaungi....tu bol raha hai isliye....

Baji: Sach.....Nakku u r a sweet heart....theek hai main raat ko 8 baje tujhe pick kar loonga...ok...

Nakku: Baji....woh...Dutta bhi aaraha hai???
Baji(teasingly...): Nahi...woh nahi aarahe hain...

Nakku: Kyun..??? uski tabiyath toh theek hai na???...koi problem toh nahi hai....bol na Baji???
Baji senses the care she had for his bhao in her voice....: Arey main toh mazak kar raha tha....bhao aaraha hai......(chal shaam ko milte hai..ok...tc...)

Nakku disconnects the phone and smiles...(lol see the girl is smiling...)

It's 8.00 pm...and Nakku is ready..she was waiting for Baji and Riya to come....just then she hears a horn outside her house....She comes down...tells Babi..that she is going out..and comes out of her house...

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Dutta was waiting for her patiently...he looks at her and was lost in her....

She was wearing a violet party dress.....with her hair open....high heels.....which were complimenting her beautiful legs......she looked like an angel to him....he was just lost in her....Nakku comes and sits beside Dutta...Baji and Riya who were sitting back compliment Nakku.....

Baji&Riya: Wow Nakku u look stunning...

Nakku: Thanx....(she looks at Dutta..and has a flashback of him complimenting her today morning....then she looks outside....(ego u know)...

They arrive at a nightclub...MacCafartis pub....one of the happening night clubs of Mumbai....lol...

They come in....and sit at a place in the corner..so that they can talk without any disturbance......Duta and Baji sit opposite Nakku and Riya.....Baji starts talking....(as usual....)

Baji talks about their days in college....

Baji: Riya tumhe yaad hai...hamari pehli fight.???
Riya: Usey kaise bhool sakti hoon....uss din ke baad se hi toh hum dost bane the...

Baji: Haan.....tum who pehli ladki thi jisne mujhe BasketBall match ke liye challenge kiya tha...

Riya: aur haraya(defeated) bhi tha....

Baji: Ya r8....

Flashback...

Baji was in his basketball court....practicing...

A gilr dressed in jeans and top was passing by when the balls hits her....she turns around in anger....
Baji: excuse me.....ball please...

Riya: Ball chaiye toh khud aakar lelo....

Baji: excuse me...tum jaanti ho tum kisse baat kar rahi ho???
Riya: Nahi jaanti...aur jaanna bhi nahi chahti....

Baji: Attitude huh???...dekho....main iss college ka basketball champ hoon....so just pass the ball and get going...

Riya: Champ ho iska matlab yeh nahi ki mujhse ais baat karsakte ho.....samjhe???
Baji: OK....so now u gonna teach me how to talk....r8???...agar itna hi shauk hai toh mere saath ek game hojaye...tumhe khud pata chal jaayega...ki tum kisse baat kar rahi ho...

Riya: I accept it....

Soon they start playing the game....Baji was overconfident that he wud win.....but his overconfident made him loose it....Riya was leading....Baji goes to make a basket....when Riya makes him fall by bringing her leg in between his.....Riya grabs this opportunity and makes a basket and she wins....

Riya: yayyyyyy.....i won...

Baji: Aye..yeh toh cheating hai...tumne mujhe jaan bhoojhke(wantedly) giraya hai....

Riya: All is fair in Love and War......and this was a war...I win and u loose Mr.....whatever....Saying this Riya goes away..while Baji looks on...he fell in love with her then and ther...(lol...fast I tell u)....

Back to Present:

They all laugh after talking about the past..

Baji takes this as an opportunity to make Tasha remember their moments in college...

Baji: Bhao aur Nakku ki first meeting kaise thi yaad hai...???

Riya: Wow....wahan in dono ki ladayi toh nahi hui...lekin dosti bhi toh nahi hui........(she laughs...while Tasha look at each other....a bit embarrassed...)

Flashback:

Dutta was standing in his campus flirting with a chick......A beautiful girl passes by.....diverting Dutta's attention.....

Dutta: Hey beautiful......

Nakusha looks at him with an annoyed look...

Nakku: U talking to me???

Dutta: Of course I am talking to u......tumhare siwa aur kaun beautiful hai yahan par.....he winks at her...

Nakusha: Oh Thank u for such a gr8 compliment...but dont u think yeh line bohat cheesy hai.??? Try something new dude.....

Dutta: Wow...u hav some attitude...huh???...thats gud.....he moves his hand forward asking Nakku to be his friend.....when a guy comes there.....He was tall, handsome...guy.......but he was not a flirt....though Dutta was a hero of the college.....girls even swooned over this guy.....he was studious....and Nakusha's best friend....

The Guy: Hey Miss Nakusha Mehra.....

Nakusha flashes a smile and turns around: Hey Mr. Viraj Oberoi...(He was Viraj...Viraj Oberoi...another heartthrob of the Excel College...( Sorry cud not find a better name..lol)

Viraj and Nakusha hug each other tightly.....and Dutta gets a bit jealous...(Someone's jealous...lol).

Viraj looks at Dutta and says..

Viraj: Dutta.....tum Nakku ke saath kya kar rahe ho...???
Dutta: Tum isey jaante ho???

Viraj: Of course jaanta hoon........(Viraj asks Nakku..)

Viraj: Tum isey jaanti ho???
Nakku: No...not at all.....infact....maine toh isey pehle kabhi dekha bhi nahi....anyways....canteen chalte hai...mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai...(and they both go away....leaving Dutta alone...that was the first time he felt jealous but hid his feelings....).....

Back to Present....
Nakku: Chodo na yeh saari baatein......kuch aur baat karte hain....

Dutta could sense that she was still angry on him....He changes the topic...

they were talking when Dutta sees a girl approaching them....He just looks at her and then turns his face to avoid her...

Baji: Kya hua bhao....???

Dutta: Arey who ladki dekhraha hai.jisne black outfit pehna hai....agar usne mujhe dekhliya toh mujhe chodegi nahi.......bohat chipkoo hai...i dont want to go with her....

Baji: Lekin who toh yahin par aarahi hai....

Dutta: Kya..???(shocked)...

Nakku looks at that girl....she was scanning her from top to toe....

Dutta: Yaar mujhe bachalo....(looking at Nakku..for help...But Nakku ignores him...)

The girl was Soniya....she comes to Dutta...

Soniya: Hey handsome....kaise ho???.... Bohat din hogaye...tum yahan aaye bhi nahi aur mujhse baat bhi nahi ki...?? Mujhe bhool gaye kya..???
(Dutta who was so not in a mood to talk to her was forced to talk....)

Dutta: Ermm...Hey....Soniya...ermm....kaisi ho....???

Soniya: Oh thank god tumhe mera naam yaad hai....lets dance....(she takes Dutta from there to the dance floor....while he goes reluctantly.....and Nakku looks on...)

Baji and Riya just watch them dancing while Nakku was fuming...and Dutta was stealing glances of Nakku...

Now she could not take it...She gets up and goes straight to the dance floor...She stands behind Soniya and pats her shoulder as in calling her....

Soniya looks Nakku...

Soniya: Yes..???
Nakku: Can I just take him with me..??
Soniya: Who the hell are you...and what is ur relation with Dutta.....???Dont u see that we r busy dancing......please..leave us alone.......she smirks...

Nakku: Well.....is it ok with u if I say that Mr.Dutta Sriram Patil is my Fiance...U heard it r8.....we r engaged......

She looks at Dutta who was shocked and staring at her with his mouth wide open...he could not believe what Nakku just said.....

Nakku grabs him by his collar...and takes him from there....Soniya looks on....They come to a place where there were no one...

Dutta looks at her and speaks breaking the silence...

Dutta: Did I just hear u say we r ENGAGED....

Nakku: Yes u heard it r8...lekin main sirf tumhari madad kar rahi thi....iska koi galath matlab mat lena.....Maine tumhe maaf nahi kiya......so please....stay away....(she goes from there saying this....)

Dutta tells to himself.....chahe tum mujhe apne aap se door karni ki kitni bhi koshish karlo...lekin main tumse door nahi jaa sakta.....i can't leave u.....for anything in this world....(awww.he loves her ghada..lol)

He goes to the DJ....and turns the music off.....the crowd stops dancing and looks at Dutta asking wats wrong dude..???

Dutta: Hey hey...guyz....i just wanted to tell something....Main kisise kuch kehna chahta hoon.....Please let me do it....please....

the crowd agrees....Baji and Riya stand up and look at Dutta...

Dutta: Mere paas sab kuch hai.....Ek pyar karne wali ma....ek shararti bhai...(Baji laughs)..ek accha business...ek cool life....luxuries....teen behenein(lol)...Lekin in sabse zyada important bhi koi hai....jisey main apne parivaar se bhi important maanta hoon.........Main shayad yeh na kahoon lekin main jaanta hoon ki main uske bina ek pal nahi reh sakta....Hum dono hamesha jhagadte rehta hai.....lekin phir bhi main usi ki baat maanta hoon....kyunki uske chehre ki hasi mujhe jeene ki wajah dikhati hai...uska bachpana mere chehre par hasi le aata hai.....Maine usspe aaj tak nahi chillaya.....lekin aaj maine uasspar chillaya....aur yeh meri zindagi ki sabse badi galati ki....usey upset kiya.....aur aaj main aap sabke saamne usse maafi maangta hoon...

I am Sorry...I am Sorry....Nakku.........Tum theek kehti ho...i am stupid...itna bada stupid hoon ki tumhari aankhon mein aansu le ayaa....(he walks upto Nakku....who had tears in her eyes....He goes on his knees and says....I am Sorry...Nakku...Sorry for hurting u......but plz...dont talk about leaving me....agar tu mujhse baat nahi karegi toh main mar jaaunga....main jhagda kisse karoonga...)

Nakku hits him...and says get up...u dont look good when ur on ur knees.....I forgive u....Lakin haan main tumhara peecha itni aasani se nahi chodoongi....samjhe....

Dutta: Oh God....yaani abb tumhe jhelna padega...

Nakku: Dutta...and she hits him on his chest...

Dutta: Ouch.....ok baba I was just kidding.....and the two friends hug each other...

(Baji and Riya look at them and then at Tasha...They tell to each other...)

Yeh dono ek doosre se itna pyar karte hain...lekin aaj tak samajh hi nahi paaye....Pagal hai yeh dono....(And they hug each other as well.....)

Hope U guyz like it...😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
ohhhh what a wonderful update..loved the way dutta said sorry ..he is so cute ..wanted to pull his cheeks...and nakku is a sweet heart saved him from that sonia...really like this ff a lot

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