FF: BLOODTIES (Updated Pg 44)

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mIsHeZ.x

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Posted: 14 years ago

#321

awww jess rely missd u babe so glad ur bak

yeahhh cnt wait til u update honey...jaldi karna...

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jessica10

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Hey guys..so sorry for such a late update'I really hope this part is ok..i had visualise the scene in my head but I don't know whether I bought it out properly as I am not so good with fight scenes'anyway hope ull enjoy this part.😳

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Part 13

Baji walked towards the training room where he and dutta generally do their morning workout and at the same time line up their plans of the day'He saw the light on and wondered how dutta got up so early..he thought maybe his vaheni would have made him late'baji smiled at that thought and opened the door to greet dutta but he was greeted with a completely different sight.

Standing there was madhu practicing some martial arts move..he knew he should not be surprised considering she told him about it ..yet seeing it was something quiet different..his eyes roamed over her as he took in the outfit she was wearing..a black track pant with a black sleeveless vest..hugging her frame completely.

She was petite yet her each move had power..and the fluidity with which she moved mesmerized him completely..he didn't know how long he sat there watching her but damn she was hot..how he would just love to be the object of her intense attention.

He was brought out of his dreamland when he heard a low whistle..and both madhu and baji turned to see Dutta standing there..geared up for his morning ritual.

Dutta: You are very good in your forms.

Madhu: Why thank you bhai'you can say I have a good teacher.

Dutta: (He entered the room walking towards madhu)So Atharva has been teaching you to fight'is it necessary.

Madhu: Bhao..considering the dangerous background I have don't you think it is better I know to take care of myself.

Dutta:(Smiled)You are right..So how good are you

Madhu:( Smiled teasingly back) Why don't you find out.

Dutta : (Seeing her challenge) I wont go easy on you.

Madhu:(Both madhu and dutta had unknowingly began circling each other)Am not asking you to..Show me what you are made of.

Baji became nervous..he knew when dutta began fighting he didn't see anything and he could harm madhu.

Baji: Bhao I don't think you'll should do this. you could hurt madhu.

Unknown the three of them Naku had also entered the room.

Naku : Bajirao..you are getting worried for the wrong person..you should be scared for your bhao.

Dutta: (looking at his wife with his intense look) You are saying I will loose. Dutta Sriram Patil has never lost any fight before.

Naku: But this time you are fighting with someone of your own kin.

Dutta opened his mouth to continue..when Madhu interrupted.

Madhu:Alright enough guys..the whole time we have only been talking..Bhao stop talking and start fighting.

Dutta still looking at his wife answered madhu..let the fight begin'. lil sis you are going down.

Dutta and madhu moved toward the centre of the room while baji and naku moved aside'Baji watched over ..worried if madhu would get hurt..naku watched baji and knew he was concerned for madhu.

Naku: Don't worry baji..Madhu can take care of herself.

Baji: You should not have riled bhao ..now he will win this fight.

Naku just smiled and looked ahead and baji too turned his attention towards the brother sister duo.Dutta began his first move..and threw his arm forward to attack her but she moved side ways..this began the pattern..he would begin throwing his blows while she would dance away from each move.

Baji watched as his friend went on a complete attacking mode while madhu began blocking his each move..baji could not help but being impressed by her style..he knew this was making dutta tired..Dutta finally loosing his patience swept his leg over madhu's feet and dropped her down.

Dutta: Is that all you have ..you have not yet actually fought me.

Madhu: (still lying down)This is just the beginning big brother.

She back flipped and stood up straight facing dutta..before dutta knew what happened she began attacking him..dutta began finding it difficult to block her attacks..her agility and speed made it difficult for him stop her blows..and suddenly dutta realised she was not blocking him because she could not fight but she was blocking him because at the same time she was reading his moves'and now she was easily predicting the move which he was going to make.

Just as she raised her leg to hit him on the chest he caught her feet..but as if she knew he was going to do that she raised herself and using her other feet kicked him across his face..and being caught unaware he fell flat face on the ground.

He rolled over to get up but Madhu sat on him and before he could blink had a sharp knife on his jugular vein.

Madhu: Breath and it will pierce your skin .

Dutta: Alright alright'You win.

Madhu removed the knife the knife from his neck and smiled..she got up from him and stretched her hand to lift her brother up.

Dutta:( Dusting himself)This was just a beginner's luck' Next time you wont win.

Madhu: Try many times bhai but I will always win.

Naku bringing forward the orange juice she had brought for madhu..handed over to her.

Madhu looking over at her adorable grumpy brother said: More than me bhao needs the juice.

On hearing this Dutta huffed and left the room .Naku just winked at madhu and followed her husband knowing she has to manofy him big time.Baji still stunned with how the fight turned out..turned to look at madhu'Did you ever loose any match.

Madhu: (sipping the orange juice as no one wanted it)Actually this is the first match I ever won.(she smiled at baji's shocked face)I have never won against Atharva.

Baji (still looking at madhu)Fight me.

Madhu finished her juice and looked at him'her smile dimmed as she saw the intensity in his eyes..she knew he was not joking..but for some reason she did not want to fight him'she did not know why it was easy sparing with atharva and dutta but with baji..it was something else'the car incident was fresh in her mind'whenever he came close she never knew what would come over her..even if she wanted she could not move away from him.

Madhu: (bringing a smile on her face)Maybe some other day.

But baji did not return the smile as he still watched her with that intense look..as if he could read what was going in her mind..Madhu began to have a gut feeling if she did not move from there something would happen.

Madhu began moving towards the door..she had just reached out to open the door..when suddenly her arm was caught in a death grip..she was turned to face baji..with his other hand he closed the door..his grip kept her trapped between the door and his muscular frame..madhu wanted to knock herself for the thoughts she was getting.

He released her arm..placed his hands on the door ..one hand near her waist and the other near her head caging her..Madhu placed her palm on his chest with the intention of moving him away but she might as well tried moving a wall..she closed her eyes as he came closer.

Hey guys..am going to stop here now..i want to know your opinion 'do you want to see baji continues😳😳what he wants to do or do you want madhu..to go free😆'do tell

Edited by jessica10 - 14 years ago

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Yuvika

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Posted: 14 years ago

#323

yay!! nice update

wow so they finally fought..haha naku knw madhu wud win n she did...lol... aww dutta in a mood, m sure he'll soon win her in some fight...loved the madhu - dutta moment...so shweet.. bt wts this,naku onli bought juice for madhu...y nt dutta?

oh wow baji wnts 2 fight to?? haha come on baji she knocked down dutta wt makes u think she wnt giv u a clean chit?lol...

pls do continue...i think baji shud go reali close 2 her as tho he is abt 2 kiss her bt thn suddenly let go...jus 2 c the effect he has on her... 😆

btw wen is atharva cumin bk?

Edited by Yuvika_15 - 14 years ago

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jessica10

@jessica10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#324

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

yay!! nice update

wow so they finally fought..haha naku knw madhu wud win n she did...lol... aww dutta in a mood, m sure he'll soon win her in some fight...loved the madhu - dutta moment...so shweet.. bt wts this,naku onli bought juice for madhu...y nt dutta?

oh wow baji wnts 2 fight to?? haha come on baji she knocked down dutta wt makes u think she wnt giv u a clean chit?lol...

pls do continue...i think baji shud go reali close 2 her as tho he is abt 2 kiss her bt thn suddenly let go...jus 2 c the effect he has on her... 😆

btw wen is atharva cumin bk?

thanks yuvi...glad u liked it.

ya naku knows madhu n atharva as she has watched them for 3 months....ya he might win😆..glad u liked madhu dutta moment...naku bought only one juice as she didnt know dutta would be there ..she was so used to only madhu training...baji wants to fight but is it to win or loose or just get close😉...baji for better words is besotted with madhu and vice versa..so he will let her go would be doubtful😉😆😆...atharva will come back..i am trying to gusofy him but am coming blank😕..but will definetely come back

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kiran255

@kiran255

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Posted: 14 years ago

#325

OH jess

Oh that is so bad

its such a bad cliff hanger !

Though Dutta is always a winner for me

i make an excepotion here:P

cant wait for next update :D

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mIsHeZ.x

@mIsHeZ.x

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Posted: 14 years ago

#326

LMAOOOooooo!! D lost!! haha itz wa rely funny watchng D strugle but ddnt feel bad since its only madhu................

hmm so did she rely observ his every move....................??

haha baji worid 4 madhu...bles...........................

n naku was soo cool lol cnt beliv she dissd D lmaoo!! Sher ko jaga diya n now she needz 2 manao him..............

totally looking 4wrd 4 it...wud b cute romantic

oohh loks like thngs r getin hot in ere

i want baji 2 go ahead but madhu 2 tease him abit but l8r gives in................

thnx 4 pm bbe...cont soon.x

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Yuvika

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Posted: 14 years ago

#327

Originally posted by: jessica10
thanks yuvi...glad u liked it.
ya naku knows madhu n atharva as she has watched them for 3 months....ya he might win😆..glad u liked madhu dutta moment...naku bought only one juice as she didnt know dutta would be there ..she was so used to only madhu training...baji wants to fight but is it to win or loose or just get close😉...baji for better words is besotted with madhu and vice versa..so he will let her go would be doubtful😉😆😆...yh i think u shud jus shw tht he gts reali close 2 her jus 2 c the impact his closeness has on her n thn lets her go n probs leaves with a wink or something leaving madhu looking all thoughtful...becos one fight n one man losing 2day is enuf...hehe baji-madhu cn fight with 1 another after they gt together...lol.. atharva will come back..i am trying to gusofy him but am coming blank😕..but will definetely come back aww cnt w8 for him 2 cum bk...hpe its sum dhamakedaar entry...mayb u can shw an attack on madhu-naku n jus b4 duji can rescue thm, ta-da atharva comes...😉😆 update soon hun n hpe u had a gd vacation with ur parents...😳

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rubal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#328

dutta lost the fight , yippppppppppppppppeeeeeeeeeeee

i m happy ,madhu has guts

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Sophia Khan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#329

Woooo u updated...

Awesomee update...

I love Dutta-Madhu bonding.. I missed that in the show.. i wanted them to actually spend time. And its good to see her winning against him.. big bro gt a tough little sister lol.. very cute..!!

Bechara Dutta.. even Nakku knew Madhu wud win n bless baaji for caring bout Madhu so much lol..

I see something boilin between these 2... i think u shud continue the baaji part lol..

Please continue soon :)