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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: --SONEE--

Hey jessi🤗

awsome update yaar...soo all in PN😛 .....great i luv madhu n baaji convo n lyk hw der r getting close to eachother......😉 wow soo madhu knw evrything abt ET👏 she will shw dem der real face n d meaning of calling his sis n being his sis👏 specially i luv dis bit👏 n d way u shw d title n its meaning... BLOODTIES .... lovely 👏....very nice.....i luv evrything ......very nice update jessi.....👏....thanks for pm dear🤗

hey sonee..glad u enjoyed it
i am happy u like the way i brought the meaning of the title..must say now the real story begins
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey guys really thanks for all the lovely comments i must have not replied to all but i have read each one of them..so without further ado will give you this chapter
Part 12

It was night time and everyone had their dinner and settled in for the night..dutta had already freshen up and he was waiting for naku to come out..nakusha this name had the strength to bring out so many emotions in him..the three months away from her was like being pushed into darkness having no way to escape it..it was funny he thought he was in pain when seema had left him..it was nothing compared to torture he felt being away from her.

This night was a start of so many relations..old and new..today after so long his whole family sat together..he smiled thinking of the closeness between nakusha and his lil sister'both of them were so close.that he wouldn't be surprised if they began completing each other sentences..he knew madhu was the first friend naku ever had..all this time she had to fight alone..but now she has madhu with her.
Dutta remembered how his breath caught when he saw his lovely wife coming down the stairs..dressed in a red saree..her hair loose framing her face..and as she came and stood near him he felt lost in her eyes..as he continued looking at her..he came close to her and lifted his hand to palm her cheek when suddenly..he was brought out of his trance with baji's singing
Do dil mil rahe hai magar chupke chupke

Sab ko ho rahi hai kabhar chupke chup oww.

Dutta laughed as he saw baji getting a knock on his head by madhu.
Baji:*rubbing his head*..what is wrong with you..why did you hit me
Madhu : don't you have any other work but pulling my brother's leg..from the day I saw you..you always interrupt when someone is talking .
Baji:*smiled*but they were not talking.
Madhu :then what were they doing
Baji : why don't you ask them.
Dutta who was smiling stopped when he saw both baji n madhu turn as one ..fixed him with a steady gaze..baji smiling at him standing behind madhu and madhu looking at him seriously..dutta began to stutter an explanation..never in his life he was caught in such a situation..as he tried to find something to say..he saw a smile coming on madhu's face and realised he was being had.
Dutta : why you..
And both baji and madhu cracked laughing and moved before he could catch them..dutta smiled as he heard nakusha laughing behind him..he turned to see naku..she looked lovely her eyes twinkling with mirth while she tried to stop laughing..dutta deciding to play..he turned away from her with a frown on his face..naku thinking she hurt him..moved and stood front of him
Naku: I am sorry..are you angry with me.
Dutta : I don't want to speak with you.
Naku hugged him'I am sorry..naku looked up and seeing no reaction..she raised herself on her toes and pecked him on his chin.
Dutta : *smilingly* how about a little higher
Naku looked at him and realised he was having fun..she thought to herself like brother like sister.smiling innocently at him she said why don't you bend down lower..dutta bent down obediently expecting to get a kiss but all he got was a sharp twist of his ear.
Dutta stood straight rubbing his tortured ears..which had become red'he glared at her and before he could tell naku anything..AS came there.
AS: arey dutta naku why are you'll standing here come to the table food is getting served..*noticing the redness of dutta's ears worriedly she went to him and asked*..beta what happened.
Before dutta could answer..he saw baji and madhu coming out from the side and he realised they had seen what happened..and looking at naku blushing red ..he knew that she too hadn't expected anyone to see them..
Baji : arey aaisaab..now a days there are so many mosquitoes'I think our bhao has gotten bitten by one.
Dutta glared at baji while madhu began sniggering at the side..and in a voice so low so that only tasha and baji could hear she said..must say it was a very pretty mosquito..and both her n baji collapsed in a fit of giggles..
Dutta smiled as he remembered all the antics during the dinner time..and he looked at the moon and remembered how he had asked 2 nights back to give him his naku and baji back..looks like whoever up there had felt pity on him and gave his happiness back
He closed his eyes as he felt to hands encircling his waist and he was being hugged from the back by his naku..she leaned her cheek on his shoulder blade as she held him.
Naku: what are you thinking about.
Dutta :*placing his hand on her joined hands*you'of how wishes comes true..i never thought I will be able to find you..and if I did whether you would have forgiven me..i don't know what I would have done if you didn't forgive me.
Naku removed her self from his embrace and made him turn so he could see her when she spoke
Naku: Saab..i have always loved you..i know keeping the truth away from you..i must have hurt you a lot..you felt that I didn't have faith in you..in your love but that was never the case..to tell the truth I was scared'I was in love with you for so long..i always felt I would have this unrequited love..i have never once expected for you to love me..but when you did it was as if all my dreams came true..i suddenly got so much happiness that I was scared that one wrong move and I would loose it..and then one day without warning my truth came out and I didn't know what to do to prove myself.
Dutta :* walked away and sat on the bed*and I not caring to hear your side pushed you and baji away for hiding it.
Naku walked towards him and did something that at one time would have shocked her too..she went and sat on dutta's lap..winding her arms around his neck she placed her forehead on his'he too place his hands on her hips to balance her.
Naku:But now all that does not matter..now all that matters is that we are together *placing her hand on his cheek*and this time I wont allow any misunderstandings separate us.
Dutta looked up and in naku's eyes he could see all the love she had for him..everytime this only intensity used to humble him..used to stop him from punishing her when he thought she was his enemy..how much ever he tried he could not run away from it..and finally his heart too gave in and now there was no turning back..he knew if anyone was to open his heart and peep in all they would see was his naku.
He could not say anything else..so he place his hand on her face and brought her closer..and then gently kissed her..both trying to convey their emotions in the kiss..how the comfort became passion neither knew..as hands began roaming each other bodies and the silence of the night
disturbed by their sighs and moans.
He laid her on the bed and hovered over her..for her no other place was safer than to be caged in his arms..he worshipped her body with his hands and lips..and kissed her..taking in her moans as he finally entered her and began moving ..bringing them both to that brink of complete pleasure.
As she came down from the height of pleasure ..she closed her eyes feeling him ..peppering kisses on her neck to shoulders..and his hand rubbing around her waist..the minute she opened her eyes she saw him watching her..and than he bends down and kisses her..as he deepens the kiss he turns them around so that he is lying on the back with her on top..naku broke the kiss and looked at the arrangement, she saw his expression'so smug ..as the cat got the canary and ate it too..she moved around as she found a more comfortable place on him..and placing her head on his chest she closed her eyes allowing the sound of his heartbeat to lull her to sleep.

Dutta stretched his hand..and taking the bed sheet and covered them both..and finally holding her tightly in his arms he too went to sleep

ok i hope ull liked it..it was really hard as ididnt know how much more to go in detail n how much not so i really hope ull enjoy this part..do comment

also tomorrow i will be going out of station with my parents will be back in the first week of feb..so will miss ull guys n hope ull dont forget me😳

Edited by jessica10 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jessica10

if atharva is her teacher she is a better fighter..ok many are going to hit me but atharva is stronger n more powerful than dutta but in the 10 years he has never come in his way..is it out of fear or out of debt..to know more see bloodties😆

😲 😡 yuvi throws chappals at jess...😆😆
i wudnt mind seeing madhu beat dutta bt thn we shud hav dutta v/s atharva fight wer dutta wins😳😳😳 tht wud b well cool...
ahaaa i see u hav updated..amazing update...awww tasha finally became 1...😳 ...madhu n baji r cute..its gd 2 c thm laughing like nothing eva happened!! 😳
Edited by Yuvika_15 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awww Finally TaSha became oneee😳.. Nakku aint shy anymore... im glad they are really comfortable with each other.. n dey understand each other so well..
Madhu and Baaji are normal yay.. lol.. im happy to see them joking around with TaSha😆 How cutee..!.. I cnt wait for atharva to come bak.. Will be awesome to see how baaji reacts... lol he will most porbably be jealous and insecure😆.. And i wana see how Dutta feels when Nakku talks to atharva.. 😆 ..
Great update.. Thnks for the PM😛.. Continue soonEmbarrassed ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. CTRL+F5 reloads the whole page.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

😲 😡 yuvi throws chappals at jess...😆😆
i wudnt mind seeing madhu beat dutta bt thn we shud hav dutta v/s atharva fight wer dutta wins😳😳😳 tht wud b well cool...

atharva will not fight dutta..and why will disclose soon..a small hint..atharva loves and respect damodar patil a lot😃
chal yuvi have to go now..gn hun 😳
Edited by jessica10 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jessica10

atharva will not fight dutta..and why will disclose soon..a small hint..atharva loves and respect damodar patil a lot😃 awww so thts y he neva gt in the way of dutta... thts so sweet...he's a nice guy!😳 hpe 2 c him bk soon... n cnt w8 for madhu-dutta's fight... 😆m super excited 2 c hu wins...

chal yuvi have to go now..gn hun 😳 tke cre jess..n thnx for the update

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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely part jess.. very romantic and touching.. it was wonderful reading the thoughts in dutta's head to gte back baaji and naku in his life.. loved the comfort level between tasha.. and esp the nok jhok of baaji-madhu!
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

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hey jes hw u doin hun.ope u enjoyn ya tym out..((excludin hw much us miss u n da forum😛😆)) gna miss u..cum bak soon...
awwhh D in dreamland😳 😍
madhu n baaji abh yeh na kehna keh abh 2 KMH haogaye hain...baaji was enuf lol😆
mosqito bite😉 lmao😆😆
awhh dey bcum so close 2 eachoda sinc dey reunitd😳 so cute na 😆
☺️gyall i was feeln ol hot wyl readn da oda haf of ya upd8😉😆
reli sweet n romantic...
awh bth fel asleep..dont rly blame em dey must rely b tired afta *ahem ahem*🤬😆
thnx 4 pm jes ..do continue soon
xoxox
Edited by mIsHeZ.x - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update............loved Tasha and baji-madhu's banter
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Posted: 14 years ago
So Dutta in his room remembering of times when nakku was not with him and now that she is back home with him and........ also his frnd and his cute little sis is back to him...........Madhu and Baaji pulling his legs.......... Dutta is feeling guilty to what he had done to Nakku and Baaji........Dutta is so relieved to hav Nakku back in his life.........and atlast they became one in evry sense.............
So beautiful updt...........the relationship now Dutta-nakku-Baaji-Madhu-AS all of them share with each other is so heavenly............
Continue soooooooon..........Thanx 4 PM........
Do njoy ur vacation with ur parents............hav a wonderful vacation..... will be waiting fr ur updt after u return......Cya.....

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