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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanx fr the PM and updt both............A real superb updt..........luved the dutta-madhu challenge.......... Dutta lost to his sis.........so sad............ but luved their fight............Baaji should cum very very close to her and then leave her.........jst to see how she feels abt his closeness......... plzzzzzzzzzzz bring Atharva back.........would luv to see jealous and possessive Dutta and Baaji ......with the kind of relation Atharva-Nakku_Madhu share..........a very understanding and close one ............
Jessica u r a awesome writer.........u know how to keep ur readers tied to ur FF...............Gr88888888888 job.........keep writing.........updt sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon..........
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Posted: 14 years ago
welcome back dear ...................
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it was superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb update yaar................
dutta n madhu fight was nice...............
ya i wanna baji to continue.........
looking fwd.................

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey jessica.

nice update....... well, there was nothing to b worried abt the fight sequence, it was good.......

tc
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey dear

very nice update

oh dutta lose fight from madhu .
i think baaji let go free madhu after teasing her .but madhu and aathrav love each other na then is it gonna be triangle.

thanks for pm

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran255

OH jess

Oh that is so bad
its such a bad cliff hanger !

Though Dutta is always a winner for me
i make an excepotion here:P

cant wait for next update :D

i am evil😆
glad u can make an exception here😳..will definetely update soon

Originally posted by: mIsHeZ.x

LMAOOOooooo!! D lost!! haha itz wa rely funny watchng D strugle but ddnt feel bad since its only madhu................

hmm so did she rely observ his every move....................??
haha baji worid 4 madhu...bles...........................
n naku was soo cool lol cnt beliv she dissd D lmaoo!! Sher ko jaga diya n now she needz 2 manao him..............
totally looking 4wrd 4 it...wud b cute romantic
oohh loks like thngs r getin hot in ere
i want baji 2 go ahead but madhu 2 tease him abit but l8r gives in................



thnx 4 pm bbe...cont soon.x




glad u liked the fight and didnt feel bad..what to do madhu is sometimes a real danger zone..i know naku here is real naughty..cant blame her madhu n atharva are a bad influence😆..she will manofy him..will be romantic and serious...baji has seriously got it for madhu..but what about madhu😉..will definetely continue soon

Originally posted by: Sophia21

Woooo u updated...

Awesomee update...
I love Dutta-Madhu bonding.. I missed that in the show.. i wanted them to actually spend time. And its good to see her winning against him.. big bro gt a tough little sister lol.. very cute..!!
Bechara Dutta.. even Nakku knew Madhu wud win n bless baaji for caring bout Madhu so much lol..
I see something boilin between these 2... i think u shud continue the baaji part lol..
Please continue soon :)

Hey sophie..glad u liked the update
even i missed dutta madhu bonding so am including it in the fic..afterall the fic does revolve around them...i know poor dutta got a tough lil cookie as his sister..ya baji cares about madhu a lot..will definetely continue soon
waiting😆

Originally posted by: ushankitvc

Thanx fr the PM and updt both............A real superb updt..........luved the dutta-madhu challenge.......... Dutta lost to his sis.........so sad............ but luved their fight............Baaji should cum very very close to her and then leave her.........jst to see how she feels abt his closeness......... plzzzzzzzzzzz bring Atharva back.........would luv to see jealous and possessive Dutta and Baaji ......with the kind of relation Atharva-Nakku_Madhu share..........a very understanding and close one ............

Jessica u r a awesome writer.........u know how to keep ur readers tied to ur FF...............Gr88888888888 job.........keep writing.........updt sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon..........

i am really glad you enjoyed this part..and loved the fight..was nervous about it,,baji affects madhu a lot and vice versa😉..will bring atharva soon..but his presence will always be felt😛..ya in future there will be lot of jealous and possessive baji n dutta..and really a lot of thanks for your compliments..will update soon
Edited by jessica10 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: blueopal

welcome back dear ...................
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it was superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb update yaar................
dutta n madhu fight was nice...............
ya i wanna baji to continue.........
looking fwd.................

thanks for the welcome...glad you liked the part..will def continue soon

Originally posted by: dc17-7

hey jessica.

nice update....... well, there was nothing to b worried abt the fight sequence, it was good.......

tc
divya

thanks divya glad you liked it

Originally posted by: neverforget

hey dear

very nice update

oh dutta lose fight from madhu .
i think baaji let go free madhu after teasing her .but madhu and aathrav love each other na then is it gonna be triangle.

thanks for pm

thanks yaar..i am glad you liked the part..madhu and atharva are not lovers for now they are really close friends who have been together for nearly 18 year..so there might times it will feel that it is a triangle but truthfully not decided yet😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey guys...here is the next part..hope ull enjoy it...btw tried my hand in pic..how do u like the banner..know it is simple😛
Part 14
Baji had trapped her completely'he wished he could keep her like that..but knowing madhu he knew for now that would be impossible..he looked down at the delicate palm that was trying to stop him from coming near..if only she knew how hard it was for him to keep away from her.
He enclosed her palm in his..interlacing their fingers..and placed it on the wall near her head..and stepped closer..he felt her breath hitching as he came closer..it was nice to know that he was not the only one who gets affected with their closeness.
With his other hand he palmed her face'gently caressing her face..his finger traced a wound which madhu didn't even realise she got when she was fighting dutta..as his finger passed it..the wound suddenly stung and she closed her eyes at the sudden sting'suddenly she felt a soft pair of lips pressing on her wound as if kissing away the pain.
She felt her heart flutter at the gentleness of the action'his lips moved across her cheek till he reached her neck ..still in a daze..madhu placed her free hand on his shoulder..as he buried his face in the crook of her neck.
Madhu :Baji
Madhu could not believe how breathless she sounded..calling his name..she wondered if he noticed'but then she felt his lips curve into a smile..and knew he had..instead of letting her go his grip on her tightened..he moved his face so he could face her..yet he was still so close..she could feel his breath fanning on her face.
Baji gently moved her hair behind her ears and made her look at him..when he got her attention..he said:you know..when you fight you are the most stunning sight I have ever seen..(he smiled when he saw her eyes widening in surprise as his statement and he continued with his finger tracing her wound)yet I hate to see when you are hurt'next time do be careful.
Before madhu could reply he released her and moved away..she suddenly felt cool missing his warmth..and watched as he still looking at her opened the door and walked out leaving her to understand what had actually happened.
She fingered her face..where she could still feel the imprint of his lips on her cheek..she thought to herself..wish you knew this should be the last of your worries..because for what I have come here to do..this wound is nothing..blood will spill..whether mine or someone else's only time will tell.
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Dutta stood under the shower as the water began to pour..he knew they must have felt he was not happy with the defeat..but they were far from right..infact he was very proud of madhu..it was good to know that she is capable enough to take care of herself.
Yet something bothered him..her eyes..when he was attacking madhu he could still see her eyes dancing with that playful laughter of hers..as if it was just fun for her..but the minute she began her attacking mode..the sudden change in her eyes had caught him off guard..her eyes looked so cold..for a minute it was as if his sister had just changed..and standing front of him was just a fighter who wanted to win at any cost.
The way she looked at him when she held the knife at his throat..there was such steadiness in her..that for one moment he felt that she would not have hesitated to draw out blood..and minute he said she won..her stance changed and the girl holding him down again became his sister with the same naughtiness in her eyes.
He came out of the bathroom wearing just his pants and drying up his hair..she was nothing how he would have expected his small sister to be..yet there was nothing he wanted to change about her..at times when he used to watch her..he realised how similar they were and yet how different they were.
He realised how difficult her life might have been that she had to be trained to take care of herself..he had no doubt that so many years atharva had taken care of his sister..but now even he was there..he will protect her and give her a life where she never has to worry to take care of herself.
Dutta had not realised how deep he was in his thoughts'he left the towel on the bed and just stood there thinking 'when he was brought out of his thoughts when he felt someone wiping his back'he closed his eyes and began to smile..other than his wife who could do such a thing.
He opened his eyes the minute he felt her coming to face him..in the morning he did not look at her properly..but as she gently wiped the side of his face..he saw her draped in a lovely blue saree that made her eyes look even more lovely..she had left her hair..which she had pulled to one side of her neck..dressed in the simplest of manner she looked the most beautiful woman..and as she looked at him..her eyes never leaving his ..he could not help but feel proud that she was all his..she would never belong to anyone else but him.
He removed the towel from her hand..and placing his hands on her waist brought her close to him..she willingly went in his arms..placing her hands around his back..and her head on his chest ..she closed her eyes hearing his steady heartbeats'he would never know but this was the most soothing music to her ears..she could spend her whole life like that feeling safe in his arms.
Dutta could not help but feel happy..the three months away had changed his nakusha so much'he wondered whether she was always so affectionate..anytime she got she was never shy of showing her love for him..there were times when he caught her just looking at him so intensely as if she was afraid if she would blink he would disappear ..it pained his heart to know that he had hurt her so much by separating her from him.
He suddenly felt her grip on his back increasing..as if knowing the direction of his thoughts and bringing him out of it.

Naku: What is in your mind that has distracted you so much.

Dutta: Just thinking how my wife is so happy seeing me loose.(T.he minute he said it he felt he giggling in his chest.)
Naku: You should get used to it..madhu is very good in what she does.
Dutta releasing her ..and stepped back to look at her with mock anger : you seem to like her a lot more than me.
Naku : (catching on his tone) You should be thankful that she is your sister..because if she was a he..then I would have left you for him.
Dutta was stumped at her answer..looking at the mirth in her eyes..he went forward and caught her and before she could do anything began tickling her..he found all her tickle spots as she began squealing with laughter and tried to get away from him..in the fight they both fell on the bed..seeing her breathless dutta stopped ..and held her hands by one hand above her head and used his other hand to pin her on the bed.
Dutta: So you would leave me for someone else.
Naku looked at him..and answered him sincerely : I could never leave you for anything in this world.
Dutta who had just meant to have fun didn't know how such a fun moment became so serious..he looked at her dishevel state..her palu had shifted giving him full view of her stomach..he looked back at her and saw her watching him..finally giving into his desires he bent down and kissed her 'and proceeded in removing any thoughts she had of leaving him for anyone else.
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Kala watched as dutta left for work with baji in a cheerful mood..she hated seeing him so happy'he has enjoyed this peace a lot..it was time to start attacking him where it hurts..and this time she would play her game carefully'she smirked as her mind came up with plans to destroy him'unaware that someone was watching her carefully
I really hope ull like this part too..I know it is slow..but will catch up...waiting for your comments😳

Edited by jessica10 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
need to catch up on all the parts soon....plz do write something for yun hota to kya hota thread in ltl forum.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shilpita87

need to catch up on all the parts soon....plz do write something for yun hota to kya hota thread in ltl forum.

heyshilpita....good to see u..even i have been recently catching up with ur fics..they r really good..am already thinking on what to write on that thread😆😆..will try to post something😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow Jess
love It so much !
Baaji is adorable and their romance
LOve it

but what Maddhu said i last scares me alot
kya honay walal hai 😲

Love DUtta
love how he interpretating madhu during thefight !
ah LOve tasha romance as always and what kala is planning on destroying Dutta happiness 😡
but whoo is lestening to her

hmm so much going on
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love this update Jess !

cant wait fro next one :D
Edited by kiran255 - 14 years ago

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