TaSha FF - Pyar Ke Dhokhe Part14Pg35.(23.01) - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
#51
pls update soon i love it
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52

nice part.......loved it......so Dutta is normal again............excited for god bharai......update soon......

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Posted: 14 years ago
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wooow!!! what an update!! soo emotional, naku was crying her eyes out and this gadha took 7 months to finally understand. just loved this part and can't wait for the next part plzz update soon!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
yaar why do u make nakku pregnant so soon in your ffs? u seem to have taken the idea of 'dutta patil football association ' too seriously.
one complain you used the song tadap tadap i was saving it for my ff ka sad tasha judaai scene. sniff sniff sniff.😭...but now i m gonna use it anyway....😛 loved ur updates tough.. hey please let this baby be a girl..i think dutta will make a amazing daddy for a princess like baby.😍


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: shilpita87

yaar why do u make nakku pregnant so soon in your ffs? u seem to have taken the idea of 'dutta patil football association ' too seriously.
one complain you used the song tadap tadap i was saving it for my ff ka sad tasha judaai scene. sniff sniff sniff....but now i m gonna use it anyway.... loved ur updates tough.. hey please let this baby be a girl..i think dutta will make a amazing daddy for a princess like baby.


YES i was thinking that the baby should be a girl..would be so cute... Hmm we think alike...
LOOOL i cant wait to see TaSha's football team n yes i have taken it seriously...Tadap tadap is a heartwreching song thats y i used it but doesnt mean you cant...
Will update 2day people watch out😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: shilpita87

yaar why do u make nakku pregnant so soon in your ffs? u seem to have taken the idea of 'dutta patil football association ' too seriously.
one complain you used the song tadap tadap i was saving it for my ff ka sad tasha judaai scene. sniff sniff sniff.😭...but now i m gonna use it anyway....😛 loved ur updates tough.. hey please let this baby be a girl..i think dutta will make a amazing daddy for a princess like baby.😍


😆 she loves doing tht doesnt she? in her other ff she gt naku preg quick with twins n str8 after they wer born sophie wrote abt dutta keen on havin another baby..lol😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

she loves doing tht doesnt she? in her other ff she gt naku preg quick with twins n str8 after they wer born sophie wrote abt dutta keen on havin another baby..lol

YES i love making her pregnant looool😆😆😆😆
I made her pregnant in this ff because i wanted dutta to know that she didn't cheat him overwise she wouldnt be pregnant with his kid.. n he will melt seeing her in such condition especially that now she's pregnant.. 😳😳😳
But our dutta is a gadha you see.. he took care of her but ignored her😭
ALL IZZ WELL nowww😆.. Happy time in PN...😳
And nowadays dutta is getting more and more besharam in the actual serial.. annoucing nakku will stay in his room... coming close to her... tellling baaji to re-decorate the room.. holding her... Ahem ahem dunno what else...
So in my ffs he's more than besharam... off the limit loool😆😆😆
Haila that reminds me.. I CANNOT WAIT TO TOMORROWS EPISODE😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@ sophie...
yeh dutta is gtin romantic in the shw bt we r due 2 c this side of him...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Babes
We really think alike .. I had the similar thoughts at one point of time .. That they might consummate the relationship before the FR ... which will leads to Naku being pregnant ..nd then FR ...

I so want to see Dutta romance Koyal naku ...she looks preety dark nd sweet ..

I love the way he takes care of her .... nd at end breakdown with her ....he gets the shopkeepers to reopen their stores ...so Funny 👏

Sorry I have not been able to comment for a long time .... but pls go on
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Part 4

Its night time and PN is decorated. Everyone is in the hall playing the dhol and dancing except for Dutta and Nakku. Dutta comes out the bathroom carrying Nakku in his arms. Nakku is in her gown and wet hair and Dutta has his towel wrapped around him. (basikly they had a bath together samjha karo yaar.. don't make such faces loool)

He makes her sit on the bed and takes out a purple with gold border saree for her.

Dutta: ermm.. mera choice itna accha Nahin hain..lekin i like this saree

Nakku: toh phir main yehin pehnoogi

Dutta smiles and gives it to her. He takes out a red kurta and wears it. Nakku gets ready and dutta ties her dhori softly tracing her back as well. He hugs her from behind and his cheeks brushes against her... They both look in the mirror and dutta strokes her belly and teases her.

Dutta: tum bohut moti ho gayi ho...work out karna chahiye

Nakku: main moti hoon? Apko lagta hain ke main moti hoon?

Dutta: Haan khud dekho.. kitni moti ho gayi ho... *points to the mirror*

Nakku: jao yahan se.. mujhe aapse koi baat Nahin karni hain..

Dutta: sach ka samna karo Nakku

Nakku: maine kahan na.. JAO

She shrugs him off and makes a moody face and crosses her arms... Dutta smiles and turns her to him.. He holds his ears and gives her a puppy look face. Nakku smiles and dutta pulls her close to him but her belly bumps into him... Nakku lets out a little "Ouchh" and holds her belly. Dutta gets scared and starts rubbing her belly but Nakku starts laughing. Dutta gives her a serious look and then laugh as well. Baaji comes there saying and closes his eyes seeing Nakku and Dutta close.

Baaji: Deva re deva.. main hamesha galat waqt pe entry kyun marta hoon.. *TaSha looks at him* (serial mein bhi aur ffs mein bhi.. ufff yeh baaji)

Dutta: kyunki tu kebab mein haddi hain.. (saahi pehchaana)

Baaji: Kya re bhao.. mujhe to AS ne beja hain

Nakku: kya hua?

Baaji *sarcastically*: kya hain na Vayhini.. aaj meri godh Barai hain.. to aapko aana to parega hain na?

Dutta: eyy nautanki band kar..

Baaji: kya bhao... aaj Vayhini ki godh Barai aur aap dono abhi tak yahan hain? Jaldi chalo.. varna AS mujhe marege..

Dutta: Haan haan chal... Hum tayaar hain..Chal

Baaji goes downstairs and starts doing his dinchak dinchak and Dutta holds Nakku by her shoulder to support her and comes down the stairs. Some women starts singing songs among themselves. Dutta makes Nakku sit on the palki and he sits next to her. AS comes there and puts a red and gold dupatta on Nakku's lap and tells her to hold it out. Everyone place their gifts and whispers something in her ears about the baby. Dutta is amused by all this. After the rasms, baaji is bored.

Baaji: Aisa Nahin chalega.. Aaj meri Vayhini ki godh Barai hi.. Jashn hona chahiye..

Roops: bilkul theek kahan tune...

Baaji: Koi nach gana Nahin?

Roops: ek minute...

She goes and puts the music on...

*Solah Shringar karke Godh Barai re – Filhal* (i didn't find any other good godh Barai song sorry)

Roops starts dancing and pulls baaji who was standing aside enjoying the song aside...They both dance together and Kishore joins in... Kala looks at Kishore with a killer looks and to tease her Kishore pulls kala to dance. Kala stands there fuming but because everyone's eyes is on her she starts moving slowly. Suds starts dancing and pulls Leela but he ends up dancing with baaji and the boys' moves out leaving the three sisters to dance. Roops goes over to Nakku and makes her stand up. She takes her to the middle and they twirl around her. Kala stops dancing and goes to stand aside with a fake smile on her face. Baaji pulls dutta and makes him dance with him...Dutta gets shy and stands next to Nakku. They look at each other while everyone is dancing around them.

*Song Finishes*

Dutta and Nakku are still looking at each other, lost into each other. Everyone notice them and laughs.

Baaji: Yeh lo sabke samne shuru hogaya yeh dono... Aree bhao kuch to sharam kar..

Dutta comes to him sense: Huh.. eyy chup

Nakku looks down shyly.. Dutta makes her sit back down on the palki. Some women comes and starts dancing on a Marathi song , baaji is smitten by one of the women's beauty and imagine himself dancing with her but when someone bumps into him he comes back to his senses and looks around to see if anyone saw him drooling over a woman. To get close to the woman he joins the dance group and tries dancing like them but instead gets kicked every time they move. Everyone laughs at him and he goes sit down. The dance group blesses Nakku with more kids after their dance and they leave. Dutta who is sitting next to Nakku puts his hands behind nakku's back and starts tracing her back with his fingers lightly sending shivers to her spine. Nakku smiles and pushes his hands away without any noticing but dutta gets naughty and opens her dhori. Nakku gets shocked and pinch him on his thigh which makes dutta scream. Everyone looks at him and Nakku is controlling her laugh

Baaji: kya hua bhao?

AS: Dutta? Why did you scream?

Dutta *stammers*: aah..erm.. woh.. AS..mujhe aap sabse baat karni hain..

AS: haan bolo dutta

Dutta: woh *thinks* Nakku ko neend arahi hain..

Nakku looks at him shockingly as dutta was lying.. Dutta looks at Nakku and smirks..Nakku tries to talk but dutta interrupts.

Nakku: Nahin woh

Dutta: woh kya hain na...nakku aapko Nahin bataye gi lekin woh takki hui hain..

AS: theek hain.. usse kamre mein lee jao aur make sure she rests.

Dutta: ji AS jaise aapki marzi

Dutta stands up and makes Nakku stand up as well.. He puts his hands around her shoulder to hide the dhori and to support her. They both go to their room.

Nakku: apne jhoot kyun bola?

Dutta: kyunki tumne mujhe pinch kiya...ab saza to zaroori hain.. hain na?

Nakku: saza to main aapko doungi..

Dutta: kyun maine kya kiya?

Nakku: apne meri dhori kulwadi

Dutta: maine? Kab? Nahin to

Nakku: mujhe kuch Nahin pata.. main aapko saza zaroor doungi

Dutta: tumhari har saza sarankhon par

Nakku: aap mana to Nahin karenge na?

Dutta: Nahin

Nakku: vaada?

Dutta: vaada!

Nakku: theek hain.. aakhein band kijiye

Dutta *naughty*: kyun?

Nakku: areee band kijiye na

Dutta closes him eyes and Nakku goes to the wardrobe and takes something on. She hides it behind her back and comes back to dutta..

Nakku: kholo

Dutta *opens his eyes*: meri saza kya hain?

Nakku holds the empathy belly infront of him with a big smile on her face.. Dutta looks at it confused and looks at Nakku..

Dutta: yeh kya hain?

Nakku: empathy belly

Dutta: iska kya karoon?

Nakku: pehen lo

Dutta: KYA?

Nakku: aapne vaada kiya hain..

Dutta: lekin Nakku yeh main kaise...

Nakku: koi bahana Nahin chalega... pehen lo!

Dutta: Nahin please.. sab log hasenge mujhe par.

Nakku: mujhe kuch Nahin pata... aapko pehena hi hoga.. main aapke bacche carry kar rahi hoon.. bohut bari hain woh.. aur aap mere liye itna bhi Nahin kar sakte?

Dutta: Nakku samajhne ki koshish karo... log kya kahenge?

Nakku: aapko log ki parva hain aur mera Nahin? Agar aap Nahin pehneinge na to main jaa rahin hoon

Dutta: kahan..

Nakku: guest room mein.. main yahan Nahin rahoongi..bye

Dutta: acha theek hain.. do

Nakku *happily*: yeh lo..

She hands it over to dutta and he looks at it sadly...He goes to the bathroom to wear it, Nakku pace around the room waiting for him to come out. The bathroom door opens and Nakku looks up. Dutta comes out slowly. Nakku and Dutta looks at each other. Nakku is stunned but she cracks up seeing dutta. He looked pregnant, just like her. Dutta is embarrassed and looks down.

Nakku *controlling her laugh*: theek to lag raha hain.. people won't even notice it..

Dutta: theek hain, Ab nikal loon?

Nakku: nikal loon matlab? Jab tak hamare bacche payeda Nahin hote tab tak aap yeh pehen loge.. samjhe aap?

Dutta: KYA??? NAHIN.. 2 MAHINE AUR??

Nakku: haan

Dutta: rehem karo... mujhe kaam par bhi to jaana hain

Nakku: to jao..kisne roka hain?

Dutta: iske saath?

Nakku: haan!

Dutta: Nakku please... aisa mat karo...itni badi saza?

Nakku: Ji haan...

Dutta: sab log hasenge Nakku..

Nakku: Hasne do... aapko kya?

Dutta: Nakku...

Nakku: agar aap mujhse pyar karte hain toh aap yeh empathy belly tab tak Nahin nikaloge jab tak main aapko permission dedoon

Dutta: yeh na insafi hain

Nakku: ok... Chalo mujhe sachmuch needh aarahi hain.. mein saune jaa rahi hoon..aap bhi aaye..

Dutta: saune ke waqt se to main nikal sakti hoon na?

Nakku: kyun?

Dutta: main iske saath kaise sau ounga?

Nakku: jaise main sau rahi hoon apni asli peth ke saath... natak band kijiye aur sau jayiye..

Dutta gets on the bed and lays flat on his back, Nakku lies down next to him, she strokes his belly and smiles. Dutta is sad.

Precap – Dutta comes down for breakfast with his big belly and everyone laughs at him... When it's time to go work, Dutta pretends to be ill to stay home because of his belly. Baaji and Nakku treats dutta like a pregnant woman and feeds him.😆😆😆

Edited by sunshiine21 - 14 years ago

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