TaSha FF - Pyar Ke Dhokhe Part14Pg35.(23.01)

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PYAR KE DHOKHE

Nakku is in her black avatar and she is getting married to dutta again without showing her true face.

I dreamt about this and i thought i would pen it down for you cause im bored lol..

Here we go...

Dutta is in his room, he's happily putting his red and gold sherwani on and his rings. Baaji comes there with a khandani necklace. He makes Dutta sit down and puts it on him. Dutta gets shy and looks at himself in the mirror.

Baaji: Kya bhao..Itna kya sharmana? Aaj aapki shaadi..Main bohut khush hain

Dutta: Baaji... mujhe yakeen hi Nahin ho raha hain ke aaj meri shaadi hain

Baaji: Aur woh bhi Nakku ke saath

Dutta: Vayhini bol

Baaji *holds his ears*: sorry Vayhini ke saath

They both laugh and hug each other. Baaji looks at himself in the mirror and starts brushing his hair and fixing his hair.

Dutta: eyy aaj teri shaadi hain ya meri?

Baaji: bhao samjha karo na.. bohut saare ladkiyan honge neeche

Dutta: chal haat... doon kya ek?

Baaji: Nahin Nahin theek hain chalo...neeche sab aapka intezaar kar raha hain. (not in the hall outside in a big tent)

Dutta: haan haan chal...

Dutta takes another look at himself in the mirror and follows baaji downstairs. He comes down the stairs and the music *sajan ji ghar aaye* plays in the background while dutta walks down the stairs with baaji. Everyone looks at him and praises his looks. He comes to AS and she caresses his face. Roops and Leela takes him to the mandap and makes him sit down.

Meanwhile Nakku is in the room with Babi, she's getting ready. Dutta brought a beautiful red shaadi ka jhoda for her and matching jewelleries. Nakku sits in front of the mirror looking nervous while babi is putting her maang tikka on. She the puts her ghungat on to cover her face (she has her black make up on btw).

Downstairs pandit is getting ready and lights the fire. Leela and Roops goes around with a taali full of flowers and distributes it to everyone. Kala is standing there looking bored, she goes over to where the foods are and takes a laddoo to eat when AS comes there and stops her. Kala gets irritated and goes to stand next to Kishore.

Pandit: Dulhan ko bulayeh...

AS: Ji (yes baby anything for you loool)... Roops jao Nakku ko lekar aao

Roops: Ji AS.

Roops goes to the guest room where Nakku is. She comes in and Babi looks scared. Nakku stands up and she leaves with roops and babi following from behind. Roops, Nakku and babi comes down the stairs and dutta looks at Nakku from toe to head not seeing her face because of the ghungat. Roops helps her to sit down next to dutta and she goes to stand next to Leela. Dutta steal glances at Nakku and the lengha shows her figure nicely. Pandit starts his mantras (im sorry but i don't know much about the mantras and other things). They both stand up and take their phera's. They sit back down and dutta ties the mangalsutra around her and the lift her ghungat for the sindoor. Roops comes there and holds her maang tikka while dutta takes a pinch of sindoor from the taali and fills Nakku's maang while having an eye lock with her. Roops puts her maang tikka back in place. Dutta is all happy and Nakku nervous but she forces a smile. Babi sees this and gets worried.

Pandit: Shaadi sampann hua...ab baron se ashirwaard lijiye

Dutta and Nakku nods and gets up. The take ashirwaard from the elders and baaji hugs both of them. Kala holds a taali in front of Nakku and tells her to leave her handprints on the wall outside. They all go to the doorstep and Nakku puts her hand in the taali and then on the wall leaving a deep red hand print. AS does all the other rasms and then asks roops to take Nakku to the room. (dutta's room obviously). Nakku and Roops goes up the stairs while dutta looks on and starts going up as well but AS stops him.

AS: abhi Nahin dutta.. thodi der baad

Baaji: Bhao... badi bechaini aa rahi hain..

Dutta: chup... *AS laughs and leaves*

Baaji: Kya bhao... mere saath chalo na... ghoru ka ghulam abhi se ban gaya

Dutta: ey baaji...

Baaji: acha sorry.. chalo

Dutta: Kahan?

Baaji: hall mein aur kahan?

Dutta: kyun?

Baaji: areee chal na bhao

Baaji drags dutta to the hall and makes him sit down... Dutta is getting irritated and annoyed. Baaji sits down and shouts for lassi. A maid comes with lassi and gives one to dutta and baaji. Baaji signals dutta to drink it. Irritated dutta drinks it all in on go... and baaji looks on shocked.

Dutta: ab mein jaa sakta hoon?

Baaji: bhao.. let me finish mine first

Dutta: kyun? You drink yours and i'm going

Baaji: theek hain.. vah bappa vah... dost dost na raha pyar ke saath chala gaya!

Dutta: eyy nautanki band kar.. main jaa raha hoon..

Dutta gets up and goes up the stairs and baaji laughs... Nakku is in the room sitting on the bed with her ghungat on scared because when she had so many chances to reveal her face she didn't and now if she reveals it then dutta will think she lied to him. She was in turmoil and didn't know what to do. Just then someone opens the door and Dutta comes in. Nakku gets even more scared and starts pinching her own hands. Dutta turns and closes the door and locks it. (if he doesn't lock it then PN wasis will keep coming lol). Dutta slowly walks to the bed and sees Nakku is fidgeting with her hands. He takes a deep breath and sits down on the bed in front of her. Nakku pulls her feet back and holds her knees. Dutta puts his hands on nakku's and looks at her through the ghungat.

Dutta: tum theek to ho na? Khush ho?

Nakku: ha..haan saab khush hoon..

Dutta: sach?

Nakku: Ji

Dutta lifts her ghungat up and looks at her lovingly. He cups her face and looks in her eyes. Nakku looks down and avoids eye contact. She gets off the bed and runs to the balcony. Dutta smiles and goes after her. He tries to take her dupatta off but she pulls it back.

*Mujhe Haq Hai ' Vivaah* Plays in the background

Mujhe haq hai

(Dutta turns Nakku towards him and nods to her... she hugs him tightly and he's relieved)

Tujhko ji bhar ke main dekhoon, Mujhe haq hai

Bas yun hi dekh tha jaaon, Mujhe haq hai

(he pulls out and looks at her and caresses her face)

Piya, piya, piya, piya, bole mera jiya

(she holds his face as well and they put their foreheads together)

Tumhe haq hai

Tumhe haq hai

Tumhe haq hai

(he takes her dupatta off keeping his forehead to hers and Nakku closes her eyes)

Dhal rahi pighal rahi, yeh raat dheere dheere

(she turns her back to him and dutta hugs her from behind resting his chin on her shoulder)

Bhar rahi hai pyaar ki, baat dheere dheere

(they both sit on the floor and looks at the moon)

Chudiyan, gun gunna ke, kya kahe sajna

Yeh chudiyan, gun gunaa ke, kya kahe sajna

(Dutta caresses nakku's hands and plays with her chudiyaans, she looks away)

Raat ki raat jagaaon, mujhe haq hai

(They both go inside the room and dutta makes Nakku sit down on the bed)

Chand poonam ka churaaon, mujhe haq hai

(he kneels down infront of her and takes her earrings off keeping his gaze on hers)

Piya, Piya, Piya, Piya, Bole Mera Jiya

Tumhe Haq Hai

Tumhe Haq Hai

Tumhe Haq Hai

(he takes off her big necklace and maang tikka and she allows him to do so while closing her eyes)

Kal subaah, tujhse main, door chala jaaonga

Ek pal ko bhi tujhe, bhool nahin paaonga

Yeh chehra, yeh muskaan, aankhon mein bharke

Yeh chehra, yeh muskaan, aankhon mein bharke

Main Teri Yaad Mein Tarpoon, mujhe haq hai

Tujhse milne ko main tarsoon, mujhe haq hai

(He pushes her down slowly and Nakku turns the light off so dutta doesn't see anything in the dark)

Piya, Piya, Piya, Piya, Bole Mera Jiya

Tumhe Haq Hai

Tumhe Haq Hai

Tumhe Haq Hai

Mujhe haq hai

Its morning time and Nakku is sleeping on dutta's bare chest. She wakes up due to the sun light and smiles but then she panics because her colour on her hands has been worn off. She quickly gets up and runs to the bathroom with a shalwar kameez. Dutta who is sleeping turns and screams... He sits up and sees broken chudiyan on the bed. He smiles and pushes them aside as it was hurting him. He then realise that Nakku wasn't there. Just then Nakku comes out the bathroom with her black make up and her shalwar and wet hair. Dutta stares at her longingly and smiles. Nakku also smiles and makes her way to the dressing table. She sits down and open her sindoor ka dhabba.. all this time dutta is still looking at her. Nakku fills her maang with sindoor and dutta smiles. Just then someone knocks on the door. Nakku and Dutta both look at the door.

Nakku: Main dekhti hoon

Dutta: ek minute...

Nakku: kya hua?

Dutta takes his towel and kurta and runs to the bathroom. Nakku smiles and goes to open the door. Kala comes there with a saree.

Kala: goo morning.. sab theek to hai na?

Nakku: ji

Kala: yeh lo.. AS ne beja hai tere liye.. yeh pehenke tum neeche ajao.

Nakku: saree? Lekin..

Kala: ahh tumhe saree pehene paregi

Nakku: ji...

Nakku takes the saree and goes over to the dressing table. Kala looks around the room and notice the broken chudiyan on the bed. Her eyes opens wide and she storms out of the room. Nakku is scared to wear the saree so she goes to babi.

Babi: Nakku...kya hua mere bacchii?

Nakku: aayi..AS ne yeh saree beja hain..lekin main yeh kaise pehen loon?

Babi: tumne sach Nahin bataya?

Nakku: Nahin aayi.. kaise batati?

Babi: theek hai.. andar aao main pehnati hoon..

Nakku goes in Babi's room and they close the door. Nakku is wearing the green saree and her waist is white. Babi gives her the snoot and tells her to apply it. Nakku takes it sadly with tears in her eyes and goes to the bathroom.

Dutta comes out of the bathroom dressed in red kurta and looks around the room. His face drops when he doesn't see Nakku. Just then Nakku comes in with tea. Dutta looks at her and he smiles. He looks from toe to head and likes the fact that she's wearing a saree. She puts the tea on the table and dutta quietly sits down infront of the tea.

Dutta: sirf ek cup?

Nakku: matlab?

Dutta: do log ek hi cup mein?

Nakku: Nahin yeh aapke liye hain

Dutta: main tumhare bina Nahin pee ounga

Nakku: zid mat kijiye.. mein baad mein chai lounge

Dutta: Nahin..

He pulls her to sit on him. She feels shy and tries to get up but he holds her tight. He takes the cup and makes her drink it first. She takes a sip and dutta takes another sip from the same place her lips touched. They look at each other for a while then Nakku runs down.

2 weeks later...

Everyone is in the hall sitting down...Dutta and Baaji are discussing about work and AS is talking to babi. Kala, Leela and Roops were reading magazines. Nakku comes there with a tray and serves tea to everyone. Suddenly she drops the cup she was holding and everyone looks at her... Nakku holds her head and is about to drop but Dutta gets up quickly and holds her, Nakku faints. Dutta picks her up and takes her to the room. Everyone else follows and baaji calls the doctor.

Dutta puts Nakku on the bed and cups her face worriedly.

Dutta: Nakku.. NAKKUU

AS: Dutta pani lagao

Dutta takes the glass of water which was on the side table and sprinkles it on her face. (it didn't take the make up off cuz it's only sprinkles anyway)

Nakku opens her eyes and holds her head. Dutta is relieved and holds her hands. Baaji comes there and tells them that he called doctor and she must be on her way.

A maid comes there with the doctor. She tells them to wait outside while she checks the patient. After a lot of reluctance dutta goes outside the room. Doctor closes the door and checks Nakku.

She comes out after some time and smiles at them. Dutta rushes to her.

Dutta: kya hua mere patni ko? Sab theek hain?

Doctor: Koi gabrane walli baat Nahin hain...khushi ki baat hain

Dutta: matlab

Doctor: Woh ma bane wali hain.. congratulations.

Everyone is shocked. Dutta then smiles and thanks the doctor... He runs in the room and hugs Nakku..AS is delighted and she thanks god. Babi is scared as her daughter's truth ain't out yet. Kala is shocked and can't believe what she just heard. She goes to her room. Roops and leela are happy for Dutta.

Dutta: Nakku tumhe pata hain..

Nakku: haan doctor ne mujhe bataya.

Dutta: Nakku main bohut khush hoon... aaj tumhe mujhe duniya ka sabse bara khushi diya hain...

He picks her up and twirls around. Nakku is worried and she decides to tell the truth before it's too late. Dutta puts her down and hugs her.. Baaji also comes in and hugs TaSha. Nakku hugs them but she's scared and worried. Nakku tells them she's coming back and goes to see babi who is in her room wiping her sweats. Nakku comes in and closes the door.

Babi: yeh kya hogaya? Ab kya karein?

Nakku: meine soch liya hain aayi.. mein aaj hi saab aur gharwalon ko sab kuch kehloongi..

Babi: yedi hain tu

Nakku: aur dhokha Nahin de sakti main... aaj mujhe koi Nahin rokegi..

Babi: Nakku...

But Nakku storms out the room without listening to babi...She runs after Nakku but Nakku gets to the hall. AS, Leela and Roops are sitting there.

AS: aree Nakku.. hamare paas aao

Nakku: mujhe aap sab se kuch batana hain

AS: haan bolo..

Nakku: Nahin.. mujhe sabke samne kehna hain

AS: theek hain.. Roops jao sabko bulake aao..

Roops goes upstairs to call everyone. Babi is standing behind Nakku holding her pallu to her mouth and looking at Nakku, but she doesn't face babi and looks forward waiting for the rest to come down.

Dutta, Baaji, Kala, Kishore, Suds and Roops comes down. Nakku stands in the middle and looks at everyone.

Dutta: kya hua Nakku?

Nakku: Aaj mein apne sabse badi raaz aapke samne lana chahti hoon

Dutta: Raaz? Matlab?

Nakku: Aaj mein ek kahani sunaoungi... sunne ke baad main aapko yeh raaz dikhaoungi.

Baaji: kya? Kahani?

Nakku: Haan kahani.. to suniye..

Nakku starts narrating the story of her and her sister roopa... how she was beautiful and people took advantage of that and roopa went to dubai. She then narrated her story but didn't mention her name.. She talked about a girl who was very beautiful and fair but because of disgusting men that girl lived an ugly life and how that girl's aayi put snoot on her face one day because she was fed up with duniyawalon.. then she started moore's story...how then moore saw the girl's real face and he wanted to marry her but when they found out he was going to marry her so that he can sell her afterwards... that girl didn't want to marry him... moore got angry and then wanted to rape her publically. But the girl's mother found inner strength and stabbed moore and they ran away...

She stops and looks at everyone...They all had tears in their eyes hearing her story except kala who was bored listening so she sat down. She looks at dutta and he looks confused. Nakku walks up to him..

Nakku: koi Nahin poochega ke woh ladki kaun hain?

Dutta: kaun?

Baaji: areee jaldi batao na

Nakku *takes a deep breath* : MAIN! Main hoon woh badnaseeb ladki

Everyone gets shock and those who were sitting stood up.. they all look at her. Dutta still isn't able to understand. He's confused and shocked.

Dutta: kya?

Nakku: ek minute...Aayi... pani lao

Babi: Nakku meri bacchii

Nakku: aayi pani lao

Babi goes to get a glass of water and hands it over to Nakku and steps back. Nakku looks at everyone's face before she takes her make-up off.

She takes her pallu and dips it in the water... She looks at dutta and starts wiping her face. With every wipe everyone's eyes opens wider and wider... She then splash the water on her face for a last wash and wipes it. *Grey screen with 360 degrees around everyone*

Nakku: yeh hain meri sachai

Dutta: Dhokha! Dhokha diya tumne mujhe

Nakku: Nahin saab

Dutta: BAS!!! Mujhe kuch Nahin sunna hain.. jhoot bola tune... JHOOOT!!

Nakku: sa..saab

Dutta storms out of the house. Baaji looks at Nakku who gives him a pleading look and he goes after dutta...AS and the trio are more than shocked.

AS: yeh sab kya hai babi?

Babi: yeh sab basti ke wajayse haono... hamari majboori thi

AS: main kuch Nahin kar sakti... pata Nahin dutta ko kaun samjhayega

Kala: maine kaha tha ke yeh ladki jitna masoom dikti hain uthni hain Nahin

AS: bas kala... yeh sab unki majboori thi

Kala: lekin aayi sahib

AS: iss bare mein koi kuch Nahin kahega Nakusha se

Roops: wow mujhe yakeen hi Nahin ho raha hain ke Vayhini pari ki tara dikti hain

AS: baat so sahi hain... babi tumhari beti bohut khubsoorat hai...lekin dutta..

Leela: dheere dheere bhao samajh jayega

AS: haan lekin Nakku.. tum itni chinta mat karo... bacche ke liye yeh sab theek Nahin hain.

Roops: chalo Vayhini.. main aapko kuch khilati hoon.. aapne breakfast abhi tak Nahin kiya

Nakku: Nahin roops mujhe Nahin khana..

Roops: lekin..

Nakku: bhook Nahin hain... please

Roops: theek hain...

AS: Jao Nakku araam karo.

Nakku: Ji

Nakku goes to her room and stands by the window...she starts having flashback of her telling the truth and dutta's reaction. She goes to the bathroom and takes a shower to remove the black make-up completely. She puts on a plain black saree and let her hair loose. She sits on the sofa and waits for dutta impatiently. Its night time and dutta is still missing. Nakku calls him but he doesn't pick up. Nakku gets worried and decides to go look for him but just then baaji comes there holding dutta in his arms. Nakku runs to dutta but he puts his hands out to stop her. Baaji helps him to the bed and goes over to Nakku.

Baaji: bhao kuch zyada hi peekar aaya hain... if he say anything don't mind him

Nakku nods and baaji leaves closing the door behind him.

INDEX

Part 2 - Page 3
Part 3 - Page 5
Part 4 - Page 8
Part 5 - Page 11
Part 6 - Page 12
Part 7 - Page 14
Part 8 - Page 17
Part 9 - Page 20
Part 10 - Page 23
Promo - Page 25
Part 11 - Page 27
Part 12 - Page 30
Part 13 - Page 32
Part 14 - Page 35
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very nice, can't wait for the next update
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ggrrrrrrrrrrrr 😡 tuney pm kyun nahi ki???
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wow 2 weeks with color but really good update soon, please add me to your PM list

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👏Another FF 👏

But she survived two weeks without revealing .. I know what happens ahead ...



Edited by scorpio10 - 14 years ago
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wow....sophie .....very nice update....really interesting....

even i'm curious ....hw nakku mnged 2 weeks?????

plz...add me in ur pm list plzzzzzzzz ..........




Edited by sonee - 14 years ago
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Sophieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee tune mujhe bhi p.m. nahi kiya.😡😡😡
nxt part mujhe p.m. karna. Warna main tujhse baat nahi karungi.😡
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well written 😊😊😊

update next part quickly ....
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wow nice one .plzz pm me when u update
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very well written sophie.. 2 weeks after marriage alos she was able to keepthe secret..excellent song choice fro SR though.. i really think she should have done the FR by now in the show.. now i dont know when that will happen and not bothered also, as feel sad that he is being cheated..
chalo achha hua that in your OS, the truth is out and Nakku is pregnant too. very fast huh😉.. now waiting eagerly to see how she can manao him😛

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