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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
Is ravi n dutta the same person?😕 or dutta has gone away? 😕what a suspence? wo ladki kaun thi yaar?😕
anyways loved the mystery..lagta sherlock holmes ki story beech se padh rahi hun..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update waiting 4 the next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
nice update......kaafi suspense he......nakku trying to do sucide...means nakku is d same girl,,,
means ravi save nakku?😕 n she ran from hospital😕😕😕
here roops n baajiohh no
noce update......plz open d suspense
n pm me wen u update next😉
Edited by sonee - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
oh so ravi is sum next person... i thrt tht myt b dutta bt lost his memory n is living with a new name n tht..bt looks like he isnt..wer is dutta m sure he's nt dead? bechari naku yaar..tryin kill herself al cos of kala..
i hpe ravi dunt fall for naku
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
Hey thanx for the update and PM 🤗Omg naku trying to commit suicide ...waiting for the supense ...pls jaldi update karna.....pls take care and see ya around👍🏼👏🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
awesome write up.👍🏼
cant wait for next part.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
great update yaar
is ravi n dutta the same
if not then dutta kaha hai
hope u update the next part soon..cant wait to find out
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48

Part 5th

(Ravi or baji dono Nakku ko bachane ke liye uper pahuchte hai. Nakku jaise hi chat se kudane wali hoti hai tabhi Ravi uska hannth pakad kar use uper kheench leta hai.)

Nakku – chodo mujhe………. Mujhe maar jaane do.

Baji – Nakku tu yer kya kar rahi hai? Apni jan kyun de rahi hai?

Nakku – kyunki mujhe nahi jeena maar jaana hai. Mujhe maar jane do.

(Nakku rone lagtri hai or rote rote behosh ho jati hai. Ravi use god me utha kar neeche aata hai. Neeche AS, Kishor, Kala , Roop sab uske liye pareshan ho rahe hai. Ravi Baji ke saath Naku ko uske kamre me sula kar aata hai.)

AS – hume to pehle hi lag raha tha ki kuch na kuch garbad zaroor hogi. Kal raat ki baat se Nakku bahut pareshan thi.

Roop – jis tarah se wo kamre me band ho gayee thi usase hum sab ko samjh jaana chahiye tha ki wo pareshan hai.

Kishor – dekha Kala tumhari bato ka asar. Kisne kha tha tumhe aisi baat karne ko.

Kala – maine kuch galat kha kaha tha. Jo bhi kha tha such hi kaha tha.

AS – bus bahut ho gaya. Ghar me mehmaan aaya hai. Main nahi chahti ki uske saamne koi tamasha ho.

Baji – AS nakku thik hai use kamre me pahucha diya hai.

AS – Ravi beta tumne humari bahu ki jaan bacha kar bahut ehsan kiya hai hum per.

Ravi – aisi ki baat nahi hai . per aunti ji ye aisa kyun kar rahi thi?

AS – zarsal wo……..

(tabhi Nakku aa jati hai.)

Nakku – aap ko mujhse koi dushmani hai kya? Kya bigara hai maine aapka kyun aap mere piche pare hai?

Ravi – main aapke piche para hoo. Ye aapse kisne kha?

(Sab un dono ki ye baatein sunkar chauk jaate hai.)

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Posted: 14 years ago
#49

finally ravi saved nakku 😊

hmmm poor girl 😕
nice updare😃
Edited by sonee - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART - 6th

(Sab un dono ki ye baatein sunkar chauk jaate hai.)

Nakku - haan aap har us jagah kyun pahuch jaate hai jaha main jaati hoo.

Ravi - galat main her us jagah phuch jaata hoo jaha aap khud khushi karne jaati hai.

Nakku - aapko isme kya pareshani hai?

Ravi - or aapko aapki zindagi se kya pareshani hai jo aap apni zindagi khatam karna chahti hai.

Nakku - ye mera personal mamla hai aapko isase koi matlab nahi hona chahiye.

Ravi- ji nahi ye aapka personal mamla nahi hai. Ye aapke pue pareevar ka mamla hai. Aap jaanti hai. Aaj jab aap chat se kudne ki kosis kar rahi thi tab aapke ghar walo ka kya haal hua tha. Or us din agar maine aapko apni jaan dene se nahi bachaya hota or aapko kuch ho jata to aapke ghar walo ka kya haal hota. Dekhiye duniya aisa koi gum nahi jise bhulaya nahi jaa sakta. Jaan dene se aap apni taklifo se to aazad ho jaayengi per aap apne piche pane ghar walo ko kitni taklif de jayengi ye bhi socha hai aapne. Main nahi jaanta ki aapko kya taklif ho. Ho sakta hai aapko apni taklif ke saath jeena bahut muskil hoga per iska matalab ye to nahi ki aap apni jaan de de. Is tarah se to aap apni nahi apne ghar walo ki musibate badha rahi hai. Zindagi ki muskilo se bhagna bahut aasan hota hai per aap ye kyun bhool jati hai ki aapke saath kuch or logo ki zindagi bhi zuri huyee hai or is tarah ke kisi bhi faisale se aapke ghar wale bhi pareshan honge.

Nakku - per agar unki taklifo ki wazah bhi main khud hoo to''''

Ravi - aapko such me aisa lgta hai.

Nakku - mujhe lagta nahi balki mujhe maloom hai.

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