New FF - HDDCS last part update page 73

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Character Sketch:
Swara -AS ki dost. Jo kanada me rehti hai.
Ravi Behal-Sawra ka bada beta. Wo ek business man hai. Jiska business Kanada or India dono me hai.
Aadi Behal-Ravi ka chota bhai. Jo ek mast insaan hai. Apni maa or Ravi ka laadla hai. Business ,e kum dhyaan deta hai.
Mili - Aaadi ki fiance. Jo Aadi se bahut pyaar karti hai.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 1st

(scene ki shuruwat me ek car me ek aadmi baith kar jaa raha hai. Wo phone per kisi se baatein kar raha hai. "Mom ----------- haan main thik se pahuch gaya hoo. Thik hai?.. dhoondh loonga??? thik hai???. Aap log kab tajk aayenge???.. ok??. Haan bus meeting khatam hote hi???. Kal tak????.. main wait karoonga??? mom ek minut????." Tabhi use saamne ek ladki dikhti hai jo pool (bridge) ki or jaa rahi thi. Wo pool per cadh jaati hai. Isase pehle ki wo us ladki ko rokta ladki niche nadi me kud jaati hai. Wo aadmi use bachane ke liye uske piche piche nadi me kud jaata hai. Kuch der baad wo us ladki ko nadi se bahar nikal kar laata hai or apni car me bitha kar hospital le jaata hai. Hospital me doctores use admit karte hai.)

Doctor ? aap kaun hai? Or ye sab kaise hua?

Ravi ? ji main ??. Mera naam Ravi behal hai. Or ye ladki ?? pta nahi kaun hai. Main raaste se gujar raha tha to maine dekha ki ye nadi me kud gayee. Main ise bahar nikal kar laaya hoo. Aap ise bacha lijiye.

Doctor ? thik hai hum ise admit kar leta hoo. Aap bahar wait kijiye.

(doctor us ladki ko andar le jaate hai. Kuch der baad doctor bahar aate hai.)

Doctor ? ab wo khatre se bahar hai. Kuch der me use hosh aa jayega. Wiase uske ghar walo ko khabar karni hogi.

Ravi ? dekhiye doctor main to uske ghrwalo ko nahi janta waise bhi main yaha naya hoo. Aaj hi kanada se aaya hoo. Uske paas kuch mila jisase uski pehchan ho sake.

Doctor ? nahi ?? hume to aisa kuch bhi nahi mila. Kahir ab jab wo hosh me aayegi to hum usase hi uske ghar walo ka pta puch lenge.

(Ravi bahar intzar karta hai. Kuch der me us ladki ko hosh aata hai.)

ladki ? mian yhaa??

nurs ? haan??.. aap nadi me gir gayee thi to ek aadmi aapko bacha kar le aaya.

Ladki ? aadmi??. Kaun aadmi?

Nurs ? wo bahar hi hai. Aapke hosh me aane ka intzar kar rha hai.

(ladki tezi se bahar jati hai. Saamne Ravi dikhta hai.)

Ravi ? are aap hosh me aa gayee??. Main aapke hosh me aane ka intzar hi kar raha tha.

Ladki ? aapne?.. bachaya mujhe.

Ravi ? haan??.. lekin aap??..

(Ravi ke kuch kehne se pehle hi wo ladki use zor ka thappad marti hai. Nurs Doctor or Ravi sab hairaan ho jaate hai.)

ladki ? kisne kaha tha aapko meri jaan bachane ko. Main apni zindgi apni marzi se khatam kar rahi thi. Aap hote kaun hai mere mamlo me dakhal dene wale. Aapka kya ja raha tha agar main apni jaan de rahi thi to.

Ravi ? lekin aap apni jaan dena hi kyun chahti hai?

Ladki ? aapko usase matlab. Aap hote kaun hai mere maamlo me dalkhal dene wale. Khabar dar jo aaj ke baad mere kisi bhi maalme me dakhal diya to.

(itna kehkar wo ladki waha se chali jaati hai.)

Doctor ? ajeeb ladki hai ek to aapne uski jaan bachayee or wo aap ko hi thappad maar kar chali gayee. Waise use rokiye ho sakta hai ki wo phir se apni jaan dene ki kosis kare.

(Ravi us ladki ke piche pichew jaata hai per use wo ladki nahi milti. Wo ek nurs se puchta hai.)

Ravi ? are nurs apne us ladki ko dkeha wo white dress me??.

Nurs ? wo jise aap likar aaye??? the wo bahr ki taraf gayee thi tabhi ek aadmi use le gaya.

Ravi ? kaun le gya?

Nurs ? pata nahi per dekhne se lag raha tha ki wo use jaanti hai tabhi to bina kuch kahe uske saath chali gayee.

(Nurs chali jaati hai or Ravi soch me par jaata hai.)

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Edited by vs-kmh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very nice beginning.liked it a lot.plz continue & thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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its sounds interesting..........btw yeh ladki Naku to nahi.....aur woh aadmi dutta/baaji hai kya.......whats about this new character......update soon.........
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey..nice start..waiting for ur next update...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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whoa..awesome FF ! loved it..u have maintained the suspense just like how the CV's do it😆 so who is the girl??...
thanx for the PM and update soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks 4 the pm...hmmmm nice update too much suspense tho abt who the girl is and why she wnts 2 kill herself.......
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Posted: 14 years ago
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bohut acchey
agey likho
mujhey tow bada maza aya
bechari abhi tow hosh mein ayi thiy hosh samabhal ne se pehele ussy tum itna kaaam kyun karwarahi ho??? 🤣
aab jab kaam shuru karwahiy diya tow continue pls.
but jokes apart bohut accha hein saach mein
agey likho n pm me once u update 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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😃Really nice start upload asap

Edited by Naina_Mishal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice one!
plz contiue........
plz pm me whn u update.😎

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