New OS Tere Liye...NOTE pg 10!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! - Page 3

Thankx sAlsa ..........Glad u liked this one too..........Next part asap............Hope u enjoy it too dear............😳...........Yaa achcha tha naa bed waala scene..........Even I was touched when i thought of it.............Don't worry nakku hai naa............Next part making it.............coming soon..............

Thankx Nazia ..........Glad u liked this one too..........Next part asap............Hope u enjoy it too dear............😳...........I am sooooo humbled by ur comment dear and haan me too missing Mishal.............Hope he gets well soon....................

Thankx Jess..........Glad u liked this one too..........Next part asap............Hope u enjoy it too dear............😳

Hiiiiii Sheeba...how ru???

Hi pinky..how r u i am toh missing mishal..........Yaar I am soooooooooooooo ovrwhelmed by ur comment..........Lekin merii aisii ksmet kahaan.............anyways next part soon............😳

Nakku turns to leave and she does this she sees her mom watching her from the doorway………….

Lekin the next instant nakku hears a thud as something falls o the ground………….

Turning around u find that the box of vermillion which was lying at the end of the dressing table had fallen down when Nakku had turned by a push from her dupatta………..

A horrified Nakku and a stunned baabi stared at the floor which became red with all the spilled sindoor……….

Nakku takes in a deep breath……..Today no apshagun………….No wrong indication like that would stop or dishearten nakku from going to save her love..her life……….her dutta……….

Nakku walks upto the exit and looking at her mom one last time she walks out without saying a word………

Outside u see ……….Baaji is getting the cars ready toleave for Hyderabad……….

Nakku comes upto him and says----baaji main bhi tere saath chalegii………

Baaji turns to glare at nakku and says harshly----DEKH NAKKU tu waisey bhi bahot raayta failaa chukkii hai.Aaj aagggar bhau ko kuch hua naa toh main tere ko nahiin chodegaa………..Yeh sab kuch terii wajah se ho rahaa hai………..Saari fasaad kii jad tu hii hai nakku………

Nakku tightens the grip on her gun and says----Dekh baaji…main jaanti hai..tu mere se bahot nafrat kartaa hai………main jaanti hai sabkii tarah tub hi mere ko dhokeybaaz samjhtaa hai…………..Lekin dekh yeh sab waqt inn baton kaa nahiin hai…..Abhi hum donon sirf sahib kii salaamtii chahtey hain………..Isliye abb yeh baatein chod aur jalduii chal……….

Baaji was irritated lekin he finds no point in arguing with Nakku isliye he turns and asks herr to sit in the car quick………….

There u see the four cars drive away while in Hyderabad at an old factory……….Anna sat with his eyes closed………

His righthand Anna come in and says-----anna………….Dutta kaa helicopter girr gayaa………..

A stunned anna looks up and manii and says----Yeh kya bol rahaa hai tu?.............

Manni nods his head and an elated anna stands up----Yeh toh kamala ho gayaa………….Mere ko kuch karnaa bhi nahiin padaa aur who Dutta kii kahaan khatam…………..Nahiin………waisey yeh achcha nahiin hua……….Main apney haathon se ussko khatam nahiin kar paaya manii!..............

Mani smiles and Anna says-----Abb tu jaldii jaa…..aur jahaan usska vo helicopter giraa hai………..Jaa ke dekh………….Vo kya kehtey hain…there is many a slip between the cup and the lip………….Jab tak main apnii aankhon se usskii laash nahiin dekh letaa mere ko sukoon nahiin milegaa…………..

Mani turns to leave and Anna stops him to say----Aur sunn……….Agggar galtii se who kameena bach gayaa ho naa………..Toh waheen khatam kar denaa ussey………….Mere ko phone par jald se jald khushkhabrii denaa………Abb jaa………

There u see Its late in the evning by the time nakku and baaji reach the area………..

The authorities tell baaji----Humney wahaan pahonchney kii bahot koshish kii lekin landslide kii wajah se logon koo aadhey raatey hii waapas aana padaa………..

There anna ke gundey call him up and tell him about the land slide………..

Anna instructs them kii agggar tufaan bhii aa aye still they have to go and find Dutta……………

There baaji stood wondering what to do………..

Nakku had no time………..she sneaks away from the palce where they all stood planning the next step and Nakku herself goes into the jungle alone and with the gun…………..

There is strong wind blowing and u see………..Away in the jungle…………and away from the site of crash………..Lay an unconscious Dutta in the bushes……….His head bleeding………and he was hurt on his arm too………..

The screen splits and on one side u see Manii and his gang in the jungle………….Nakku on the other side and Dutta in between…………….

Kasa lagaa?..........😊

jaldii bataao.............😊

Meri ma...tu pakka LTL ki CV nahii hai na...

Too good sheeba.Baaji had to take naku with him.Naku was not in a mood to take no for an answer.

Originally posted by: pinkyk

Meri ma...tu pakka LTL ki CV nahii hai na...

Kya imagination hai tera...for a second i felt i was watching the serial....

Hats off to uuuuuuu...SUPERB.....👏👏👏👏👏

Aage upload karo yaar jaldi...............

Gr7 man...just loved it.....

Mishal ne yeh padha na toh woh tujhe pakka ek jado ki jhappi dega...😳😳😳

I agree with you pinky.sheeba is too good a FF writer and I too felt like i was watching all this imagining datta injured in a jungle and naku searching for him.

well done sheeba.
go go go.
anna ki band bajane ka.
naku ka pyar bachane ka😉
or
dutta ko ehsas dalane ka(naku is sherni and she loves him)😳
or baji ko uska faraz yaad dilane ka(mein tere ko tera pyar se milaega)😡

update jaldi kerna ka.(yeh mera faraz ha tujhe remind karane ka)😆😆