New OS Tere Liye...NOTE pg 10!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi everyone.........well Ther's nothing good about the morning still Good Morinng.........Misiing Mishal..........
Kal toh Nakku ne kamaal kar diyaa.........😲⭐️
Itnaa confidence...........Itnaa attitude.........😳
Kalaa kii authority ko challenge...........Wow..........Yeh hui na Mrs. nakusha Dutta Patil waali baat..........👏👏👏👏
Coming to Mishal............I know like me u all must be missing him like hell.............😭😭😭
Phir yeh lagtaa hai he need rest too..........Isliye ajj se Jabt Mishal doesnot return..........😳😳😳
Guys I will be oig on with this Ones shot and try my level best kii dailyy apni ek naa ek FF update zaroor karoon...........Mera bhii farz bantaa hai kii U All Don't miss mishal.........And well...........dekhnaa I keep u engrossed itnaa kii u will not realise it and it will be Monday.............😳😳😳😳
Part 1 coming soon..........Hope u all enjoy............😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey sheeba your FF's are definitely substitue for LTL.Make it more interesting that we dont miss Datta over the weekend.
Waiting eagerly for your FF😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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sheeba ....sheeba ........sheeba
faraz bata rahi ho nabho b to sahi.
part 1 update nahi kiya
coming soon
yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy.

wating dear .u always try ur best.(bohat tareef ho gai)
chalo ab kam pe lago.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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iam missin him too its just 2 days it feels like forever 😭 but naku saved the show .....i will wait for ur FF something to survive till monday ....i hope we get to see him soon ....thanx alot
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Ok everyone I know part 1 bhejney mein thodii derr ho gayii lekin kya karoon aajkal meraa ghar ek dum logon se bharaa hai……..😳

I mean mere sab cousins kii holidays hain and they all r here at our place…bahot mazaa aata hai ek saath time spend karnaa………….talking for hours together and roaming around………ek dum rocking time………..😳Lekin duniyaa kii bheed mein bhi USS EK INSAAN KII KAMI BAHOT zyaada khal rahii hai..........Missing Mishal soooooooooooooo much..................😭

Coming to part 1………

It begins from yesterday's last scene………

Baaji coming and giving the bad news about dutta's chopper crashlanding………..

Every one stood horrified lekin nakku she stood calm and ek dum expressionless…………….😲

Everyone was upset and aayisahib cried……….tears welled up in the eyes of the thre sisters too…………..Afterall Dutta hai toh daulat hai for them……….

Lekin Nakku she stood emotionless………

Baabi who was crying to turns to find to her surprise that her daughter stood ek dum shaant………..😭

Baaki baaji talks about finding chappa chappa to look for Dutta………….PEHLEY ussey akele jaaney diyaa tumney baaji aura bb iss sab concern kaa kya faayda?..........

Anyways………..

Nakku takes in a deep breath and turning around she walks away………across the hall…up the stairs.....slowly she netrs dutta's room………..

A little hesitant at first she steps in ………….

She looks around as baaji's words echo in her head----Bhau kaa helicopter girr gayaa……….

Nakku walks to Dutta's bed………..

She goes down on her knees and then……….she recalls how just earlier that day Dutta had been lying there when she had come to attend to his wound………….😳

Nakku lays her head down at the same place where Dutta had been lying down…………..

A tear falls from her eyes………..and wets the bedcover………….😭

U see Nakku embraces the place where Dutta had been with her hand…………..

She says to herself----Main jaantii hai sahib………..Main jaanti hai….Aapko kuch nahiin ho saktaa………….kuch nahiin………….

Baabi who had come after to console her daughter stood at the doorway watching her daughter talk to herself………..😕

Nakku says softly----Aap meraa pyaar nahiin……….Merii zindagii hai sahib………..Agggar………….agggar main zindaa hai………….meraa yeh dil abhii bhi dhadak rahaa hai………….Merii yeh saansein chal rahii hain toh Appko kuch kaisey ho saktaa hai?..............😍

Baabi stood at the doorway stunned………..

She knew her daughter loved Dutta………..

She knew she cared for him……….

She knew she adored and respected him………….

Today as she stood watching Nakku………….baabi realized………….Dutta was her daughter's life………..and she felt a little surprised to realize how true…………how pure……….and how unconditional was naku's love for Dutta………….😳

U see a determined nakku get up and walk to the dressing table……….

Opening the drawer she takes out the gun…………clinging to it she hold it close to herself……….She thinks to herself----Main aapko………..Kuch nahiin honey degii sahib………..Maut ko aaptak pahonchney se pehley meraa saamna karnaa padegaa……………aur main jaantii hai……….Mere pyaar ko……….Aapko mujhse Koi nahiin cheen saktaa……….👏

Nakku turns to leave and she does this she sees her mom watching her from the doorway………….

Lekin the next instant nakku hears a thud as something falls o the ground………….

Turning around u find that the box of vermillion which was lying at the end of the dressing table had fallen down when Nakku had turned by a push from her dupatta………..😲

A horrified Nakku and a stunned baabi stared at the floor which became red with all the spilled sindoor……….😭

Kaisaa lagaa?..........😳

Jaldii bataao………….😊

I am still building on the track hope u all enjoy………..Do send in ur valuable comments guys……………😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Arey yar........ur FF's keep us going through weekends..........n dis one was also very gud like d rest of urs.......

very well written............just loved it.........cont soon👏⭐️👏⭐️👏............Bt no Dutta here also
Edited by betty123 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Fantastic yaar Sheeba........thank you soo much for starting this.......otherwise weekends are neverending without LTL n our Tasha.....

looking forward for the next part dear 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Sheeba your imagination and FF writing ability is so good.Its really gripping and entertaining. 👏 .By the way the sindoor dibba fell.hope datta is safe.

I liked it when you said even though you are busy with your cousins you still miss Datta.Same here.See the effect he is having on us.There's not a day when we dont think of him.
Waiting for the next part eagerly.
Edited by aarathikb - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wonderful Sheeba. Can't wait for the next part!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: PremLeoManav

Hi everyone.........well Ther's nothing good about the morning still Good Morinng.........Misiing Mishal..........

Kal toh Nakku ne kamaal kar diyaa.........😲⭐️


Itnaa confidence...........Itnaa attitude.........😳


Kalaa kii authority ko challenge...........Wow..........Yeh hui na Mrs. nakusha Dutta Patil waali baat..........👏


Coming to Mishal............I know like me u all must be missing him like hell.............😭😭😭


Phir yeh lagtaa hai he need rest too..........Isliye ajj se Jabt Mishal doesnot return..........😳😳😳


Guys I will be oig on with this Ones shot and try my level best kii dailyy apni ek naa ek FF update zaroor karoon...........Mera bhii farz bantaa hai kii U All Don't miss mishal.........And well...........dekhnaa I keep u engrossed itnaa kii u will not realise it and it will be Monday.............😳


Part 1 coming soon..........Hope u all enjoy............😳



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