New FF: Yeh Ishq Hai Kaisa Ajeeb...part 18-1-pg42 - Page 19

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Posted: 15 years ago
great part swatii
loved it
update asap
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Posted: 15 years ago
@Suhani, Naina, Sheeba n Irika.......thanks dear.......glad u liked it.......
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hi friends.......here i m with the new part.....but there is a twist in the story.......hope u all like it.......n sorry for being late........

here's the next part...........

Part 12

After some time……Babi returns with Naku……..Naku is looking really pretty in the pink saree………Nivedita could not stop herself n speaks……

Nivi: Dada……dekho na wahini kitni sundar dikh rahi hai……..
Aakash looks at Naku n can't take off his eyes from her…….at the same time Dutta too looks up n is equally smitten by her beaty………Naku looks up n her eyes meet Dutta's......she looks at him pleadingly......Dutta looks away…...Babi makes Naku seated next to Aakash.......Naku looks at Aakash…….Aakash gives a friendly smile to her......Dutta could not see this......so he excuses himself n goes to his room.......Baaji too follows him……. Sujata n Nivedita hav a chat with Naku.......then Kala suggests they should leave Aakash n Naku alone so that they can interact………so Naku n Aakash goes to the backyard garden……..
Aakash: Naku……mein aapko Naku bula sakta hoon…….
Naku nods her head in yes…….
Aakash: to aap is rishte se khus hai…….

Naku: sab khus hai……

Aakash: me sabki nahi aapke bare mein puchh raha hai…….aap is rishte se khus to hai na………

Naku: han….me khus hai……

Aakash: par mereko kyun lag raha hai……aap khus nahi hai……

Naku: aap aisa kyun bol rahe hain…….me sach mein khus hoon……

Aakash: jab aap bol rahi hai aisa hi hoga…..par mujhe kyun lagta hai……aap kisise pyaar karti hai……. Naku looks at him in shock………

Meanwhile in Dutta's room…….Dutta sitting in the couch n drinking…….Baaji on seeing his state sarcastically asks him…….

Baaji: kyun Bhau......wahan se aap chale kyun aaye…….Naku ko kisi aur ke saath dekhkar bura laga……..

Dutta: (stops drinking n gives him a serious look) aisa kuchh nahin hai……bas mereko wahan achha nahi lag raha tha…….

Baaji: Bhau tereko pata hai……tu mujhse apni dil ka haal nai chhupa sakta……

Dutta: Baaji tu jaanta hai jo horaha wahi sahi hai…….phir baar baar yeh sawaal kyun karta hai…..

Baaji: Bhau…..kahna bohut aasan hai Naku ke liye Aakash hi sahi hai…….par iska samna karma utna hi muskil…….

Dutta: Duttta Sriram Patil ke liye kuchh bhi muskil nahi hai…….waise bhi mujhe isse koi phark nahi padta…….

Baaji: (annoyingly) koi phark nahi padta……agar koi phark nahi padta na bhau…..to aap yahan is tarah nahi hote……aapko phark padta hai Bhau…….aap mujhse jhut bolsakte ho……par apne dil se…..apne dil se kab tak bhagoge…..abhi bhi bakt hai Bhau…..rokdo is unhoni ko…….

Dutta: ab yeh nahi ruk sakta Baaji….yehi hna chahiye……

Baaji: aur Naku…..uske bare mein to socho……uske saath aap sahi nahi kar rahe ho Bhau……

Dutta: usike bare mein to soch raha hoon…….uski khushi Aakash ke saath hi hai……… (standing up) chal…….niche chalet hai…..sab phikar kar rahe honge…….. n he leaves from there……

Baaji (to himself) : nahi Bhau…..Naku ki khushi tere saath hai……aur me Naku ko uski khushi deke hi rahunga……maine wada kiya hai Naku se……use uske pyaar se milaunga…..aur me yeh wada pura karke hi rahega……

Meanwhile…….on hearing Aakash's words……Naku looks at him with shock n tries to speak…….
Naku: woh me….me……

Aakash: (changing topic) aaj mausam bada achha hai……chaliye andar chalet hai…..sab intezaar kar rahe honge…….

Aakash goes from there n Naku follows……at the same time DuJi are coming from Dutta's room…….Aakash sees Dutta n speaks…….

Aakash: arey Dutta….tu kahan chala gaya tha…..me itne din baad mila tujhse aur tu apne kamre mein baitha hai…….kyun dost se baat nahi karma chahta……..

Dutta: aisa kyun bol raha hai……bas thoda kaam tha……isliye chala gaya tha……..

Naku seeing them chatting…….excuses herself from there n goes in……..

Baaji: kya tum log bhi……itne din baad mile aur tum shikayat karne lage……..waise Aakash tera kaam kaise chal raha hai……..

Dutta: sab kuchh achha chal raha……is saal to dugna munafa hua hai……

Baaji: wah kya baat hai……munafa…..aur ab saadi…..sahi jar aha hai boss…..waise Bhau (tauntigly) apni Naku aur aakash ki jodi achhi lagti hai na……

Dutta doesn't reply………

Baaji: waise Aakash….teri abhi baat huyi na Naku se….kaisi lagi woh tujhe…….

Aakash: (smilingly) achhi hai…..bohut achhi hai…..bohut sundar bhi hai……usse kaun saadi karma nahi chahiyega……kyun Dutta mein sahi bol raha na……

Baaji: bilkul sahi…..waise Bhau se achha yeh kaun samajh sakta hai…..kyun Bhau……

Dutta looks away……..then Aakash again speaks…….

Aakash: pan Baaji………muje sirf ek hi baat ki phikar hai……Nakusha is rishte se khus hai ki nahi……..

Baaji: aisa kyun bol raha hai……tujhe kuchh kaha usne……

Aakash: kaha to kuchh nahi…..par mujhe lagta hai……woh khus nahi hai…..woh kisise pyaar karti hai……

Baaji: (pretending to not knowing anything) tujhe aisa kyun lagta hai……

Aakash: ismein lagne ki kya baat hai….uske aankhon mein saaf jhalakta hai…..uska pyaar….

Baaji: accha hai…..tujhe uska pyaar dikh gaya….nahi koi aisa bhi hai jo dekhke bhi andekha kar raha hai…….

Dutta could not take it more n walks away from there n goes to his rooms n starts drinking thinking about Baaji n Aakash's words……….

Meanwhile in the garden Baaji n Aakash are talking………
Aakash: kyun kaisa laga mera acting…….waise hi kiya na jaise tune kaha tha……..
(kyun...kaisa laga mera twist)

Baaji: waisa….usse kahin guna achha kiya hai tune…….manna padega tujhe yaar…….jo me itne dinon se Dutta ko nahi samjha paya tere baaton ne Bhau ko sochne mein mazboor kardiya……..

Baaji remembers……how he had met Aakash n his family after failing in making TaSha realize each other's feelings……..how he told him about whole thing n ask for his help……and how Aakash readily agreed to help…….n how he planned everything…….Baaji comes to reality when Aakash speaks………

Aakash: kya soch raha hai tu……..

Baaji: kuchh nahi……bas yehi soch raha hoon……agar tu nahi hota to yeh sab kabhi nahi hosakta tha……..tera yeh ehsaan me kabhi nai bhulega……..

Aakash: ehsaan kaisa ehsaan……..Dutta kya sirf tera dost hai……mera bhi to kuchh lagta hai……bachpan ka saath hai hamara…….kya uske liye itna bhi nahi kar sakta……waise bhi Seema ke dhoke ke kaaran……kitne dard sahe hai usne…….ab uski jindagi mein Nakusha aayi hai……bohut achhi ladki hai…….uski jindagi khushiyon se bhar degi…….usse milne ke baad ab mujhe pura viswaas hai……..

Baaji is really touched by Aakash words n he hugs him……

Baaji: tune sahi kaha Aakash…..Naku bohut achhi hai……Bhau ka saath kabhi nahi chhodegi……

Aakash: bas yehi phikar hai……hamare plan kaam kar jaye aur Dutta apne jajbaaton ko samjhe……

Baaji: is baar jaroor samjhega……tere baaton ka jadoo jaroor chalega……aur hamein kuchh karma hi nahi padega…..jo karega ab Bhau karega……….

The epi ends on determined face of Baaji in middle…..with faces of Dutta n Naku on both sides…….

Pre- it's the night time……Naku in the garden crying thinking about her marriage proposal……Dutta comes from behind n see Naku crying…..he comes near her n try to console her……..Naku breaks down in his arms………. (this is for Kavi…..hope u enjoy the scene)…..

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Posted: 15 years ago

its amazing swati..keep writing😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey swati thanx for the update and PM yaar 🤗 wow baaji is such a true friend he is playing Cupid btwn Tasha ..Iam loving this twist ...aakash helping baaji to unite Tasha ...that"s wonderful yaar ...Awww..dutta is gettin jealous and insecure but still not ready to confess...I hope he soon realize that ...really intersting precap...pls jaldi update karna...thanx ...take Care and see u around 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago

thanks for the update

lovr the twist...akasha helping baji to get tasha to gether is real good

hope u update soon...am really interested in dutta's reaction if he sees naku n aakash coming closer...would b fun to watch how long dutta can control himself..the precap is also good...

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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG Swati
the update is aweosme
i am loving it
love the twist
it was sooo unpredicatble
but the best twist i have ever come to
gr8 update
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks for the update seriously love the twist do continue soon.😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
yay...so my prediction came right...knew this akash wud play cupid...hehe
nice update...loved the promo...plz continue...naku in dutta's arms...r we expecting a confession here? oh plz dnt mke it a dream...other wise i wil seriously kill u... m tired of al these dream sequences we hav had enuf in the shw, plz dnt mke ur precap a dream
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow Swati..great...!!!.....Loved Aakash's and Baji's convo...!!!!! Aap tho CVs se bhi bada twists deti hai...!!...Hayyeee..!! hope Aakash kho bhi koi achi ladki mil jaye aur Dutta bhi apne jazbatho ko samjhe...!!! ...Baji...you are soooo sweet...!!!!



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