New FF: Yeh Ishq Hai Kaisa Ajeeb...part 18-1-pg42

Dibya Nanda

@swati2008

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Posted: 14 years ago

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hey guys,

i am bored of sups track and want it to end on monday. bt i think cv's are not going to end the drag so easily.so this is my take on tasha story.

my story will start where it ends on friday.

Yeh Ishq Hai Kaisa Ajeeb......

supriya succeed in his attempt and safely came out of dutta's house. At the parking lot rabindra is waiting for her.

naku is crying in her room. she could not tolerate sounds of the ongoing party. its quite painful for her. so she comes out of her room and started walking towards parking lot. she sat beside dutta's car and she could visualise all tasha scene from their meeting to saving her from morey to dutta declaring his marriage to supriya. she remembers how he hold her hands in mandir.

then she could heard some voice. she raise her head and could she sups and bg hugging each other. naku totally shocked. then she heard their convo

supriya: achha hua us mawali ne mujhe nahi pehchhana. tumhe pata hai mein kitna dar gayi thi.

machhar: arey supriya, dar kyun rahi ho? use kuchh pata chala kya? ab yahan se bohut door chale jayenge. us datta se bohut door.

naku super shocked to here all this. she could not believe her eyes supriya and rabindra together, betraying her dutta sahib.

naku: tai, yeh aap inke saath. aapki sahib se kal saadi hone wali hai.

supriya: mein us khooni se nahi saadi karungi. pata nahi kitne logon ko mara hai usne.

naku: par tai, aap galat samajh raho ho. sahib dil ke bohut achhe hai.

supriya: us mawali ke dil hai kya?

naku: aisa na kaho tai. sahib ka dil tut jayega.

then they realise someone's footsteps. when they look they see a man emerging from darkness.

they realise it's dutta. supriya and bg terrified.

PRE- dutta : (to naku) dekh liya apne supriya tai ki asliyat. tu bolti thi na teri supriya mujhe kabhi dokha nahi degi na. aaj sara ach samne aajayega.

i hope u all like it. then i'll post my next part. i can't get a suitable title. any suggestion?

Index

Part 2- page 2

Part 3- page 3

New promo-page 5

Part 4- page 6

Part 5- page 8

Part 6- page 10

Part 7- page 11

Part 8- page 12

New promo- page 14

Part 9- page 16

Part 10- page 19

Part 11-page 21

Part 12-page 26

Part 13- page 29

Part 14- page 32

Part 15- page 35

Part 16- page 37

Part 17- page 40

Part 18-1- page 42

Edited by swati2008 - 13 years ago

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betty123

@betty123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#2

swati ur FF is very gud 👏⭐️👏⭐️

i wud have helped u 2 get a title bt i myself got my title wid much difficulty....so sorry cant help

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Anu

@Anu-Reddy

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Good one........... but iam sure it wont be as simple as this one........instead they will make Sups go back to that mansion and drag the track for two more weeks :( .......

but neverthless ........ thanks for sounding so poisitive in the FF........its very good

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Dibya Nanda

@swati2008

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Posted: 14 years ago

#4

Originally posted by: betty123
swati ur FF is very gud 👏⭐️👏⭐️
i wud have helped u 2 get a title bt i myself got my title wid much difficulty....so sorry cant help

i am happy u liked it. getting a title is most difficult.

actually my name is dibya. i dnt get a username on my name so choose swati as i like this name very much.

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Dibya Nanda

@swati2008

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: Anu-Reddy
Good one........... but iam sure it wont be as simple as this one........instead they will make Sups go back to that mansion and drag the track for two more weeks :( .......

but neverthless ........ thanks for sounding so poisitive in the FF........its very good

actually mujhe bhi aisa hi lagta hai. bt i m really bored of this dragging and i really wish they show tasha story this week.

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shonapinky

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Posted: 14 years ago

#6

very well written swati...👏if todayz epiz happenz juz like ur prediction...v wd b d happiest people in d world...!! keep up d gud work yar...!!👍🏼

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Dibya Nanda

@swati2008

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: Irika95
nice ff
continue soon

i'll post the update soon. i have the story bt have to work on the dialogues.

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betty123

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: swati2008

i am happy u liked it. getting a title is most difficult.

actually my name is dibya. i dnt get a username on my name so choose swati as i like this name very much.

kk dibya..........welcum 2 da forum............cont d FF soon😊

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Dibya Nanda

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Posted: 14 years ago

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here's the next part,

A man emerges from darkness. Sups and bg terrified and naku shocked.

slowly his face face is revealed and its dutta.

Naku: sahib,aap yahan? woh.......

Dutta (interrupting her): achha hua tune sach apne aankhon se dekh liya.

Naku: sahib, aap sab jante the?

Dutta: dutta bhau ko dhoka dena itna asan nahin. (to sups) tune kya socha ter jhoote ansu par mein bharosa karega. dutta bhau hu mein......dutta sriram patil......ekbar kisike ankhon mein dekhke uska niyat bata sakta hu main.

Sups and mawali both shocked. they can't believe their ears. dutta had known all their plans.

Sups: woh mein....mein ravi se bohut pyar karti hoon.

Dutta: pyar ka matlab bhi samajhti hai. mein kitni baar tere se puchha.......mujhe batao kya baat hai.....mein kuchh rasta nikalega...phir bhi tune kuchh nahi bataya.

Mawali: woh hum dono dar gaye the, bhau.

Duuta: jo sacha pyar karte hai woh darte nahin. pyar to insan ko himmat deta hai.

(to naku) dekhliya apne supriya tai ki haqeekat. tu kehti thi na teri tai ko apnao.....woh kabhi dhoka nahin degi. ab sari sachayi samne aagayi.

naku too guiltrideden to speak anything. she could not believe she was pushing dutta for such dumbo sups.

dutta again spoke,

Dutta: (to lovebirds) tum dono kya laga mein tumhari chal mein phas gaya, mein usidin chhat par tum dono ko eksaath dekh liya tha.

he tells how he returns back and saw bg kissing sups hand and sups tellig her hand still smellig as she fed dutta with her hand.

Dutta: mein usidin hi sab kuchh samajh gaya tha. bas intejar kar raha tha tere se sach sunne ke liye. main janna chahta ta tu yeh kiske kehne pe kar rahi hai. maine tujhe bohut mouka diya par tu kuchh nahin boli. dutta sriram patil ko dhoka dene ka anjam kya hota hai dekh.

then he calls baji and instructed him something nd baji took the lovebirds away.

PRE- Dutta: (to naku, holding her shoulders) Naku, teri ismein koi galti nahin. tu bohut bholi hai. tera dil bohut saaf hai, masoom hai.

kaisa laga?

Edited by swati2008 - 14 years ago

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