New FF: Yeh Ishq Hai Kaisa Ajeeb...part 18-1-pg42 - Page 21

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Posted: 15 years ago
cn't wait 4 next .
plz update asap.
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update swatiii
waiting 4 the next part update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana19

Hey swati thanx for the update and PM yaar 🤗 wow baaji is such a true friend he is playing Cupid btwn Tasha ..Iam loving this twist ...aakash helping baaji to unite Tasha ...that"s wonderful yaar ...Awww..dutta is gettin jealous and insecure but still not ready to confess...I hope he soon realize that ...really intersting precap...pls jaldi update karna...thanx ...take Care and see u around 🤗

thanks Suhana.......glad u liked my twist........yup Baaji n Aakash are really wonderful friends........dnt worry gadhha jaldi hi insaan banne wala hai.........next part ASAP.........
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

yay...so my prediction came right...knew this akash wud play cupid...hehe

nice update...loved the promo...plz continue...naku in dutta's arms...r we expecting a confession here? oh plz dnt mke it a dream...other wise i wil seriously kill u... m tired of al these dream sequences we hav had enuf in the shw, plz dnt mke ur precap a dream

yup dear.......ur prediction came true........glad u liked this part............dnt its not a dream.........next part ASAP......
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Tina-Saigal2002

Very nicely written Swati.. I really liked your twist.. and esp. the Baji and Aakash's dialogues.. Where Aakash says that he can see the love in Nakku's Eyes and Baaji says that Thank God atleast some one saw the love in her eyes or else there are some people who notice nothing inspit of knowing everything.. I really liked Baaji's sarcasm on Dutta's stubbornness of acknowledging his love for Nakku.. Too Good yaar too good.




u liked it........thanks dear.......i always want this to happen in the show.......i hope Baaji say something sarcastically to Dutta on mon.......
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Posted: 14 years ago

@Naina, Moully, Irika, Nazia, Nilam, Kiran, Sparkle, Madz, Marie, Sheeba, Kinno, Saki, Ishy, Rose, ........thanks for ur comments......glad u all liked this part.........Dutta will soon realise his feelings.......

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi girls.........so i m here with the new update........thanks for all ur comments......glad u all liked my twist........hope u all like this part too.............
here's the next part...........
Part 13

Baaji n Aakash hugs each other……….then they go to the hall…..n Aakash seeks AS permission to leave……after bidding goodbye to Aakash n his family……AS goes to Naku…….

AS: Naku……beta tujhe Akash kaisa laga…..tu is rishte ke liye tayyar hai na……..

Kala interferes…….

Kala: tayyar kyun nahi hogi…….aisa rishta use aur kahan milega……. AS shuts her shuts her up n speaks to Naku…….

AS: Naku……yeh rishta teri marji se hi hoga……tujhpar koi jabardasti nahi hai…….agar tujhse achha nahi laga tu mana kar sakti hai….. n she waits for Naku's reply…..but Naku doesnot say anything……to which AS says……..

AS: abhi batana nahi chahti…….koi baat nahi……tujhe jitna bakt lena chahti hai…..le sakti hai……..

Then she goes to her room……..n the evil trio goes to Kala's room……..

Dutta in his room…….sitting the couch n drinking continuously………Aakash words ringing in his ear…….

Dutta (to himself) : yeh Aakash kaise kah sakta hai……Naku kisise pyaar karti hai……usne mere ko bataya kyun nahi…….yeh sab kyun ho raha hai mere saath……

Evil trio are in Kala's room…….having their drinks n celebrating their success……

Leela: chaal to achhi chali tune tayi……Naku ko is ghar se nikalne ka…….par ek baat samajh mein nahi aai……tu us Naku ki saadi kyun karwa rahi hai……..

Roops: Han tayi…….tujhe us kaloti ki phikar kabse hone lagi……..

Kala: tum bhala samajhti ho na bura…….to Kalwati ko kya samjhongi…….mujhe us Naku ki phikar kyun hone lagi………bina haat gande kiye……use ghar se nikalne ka isse achha tarika kahan milega……….Naku Bhau ke jindagi se bhi jayegi……..aur saath hi us garib ka kuchh bhala bhi hojayega……kher tum yeh sab nahi samjhogi…….kyunki Kala I chaal samajhne ke liye…….dimag chahiye……..jo tumhare paas hai nahi………..

Kala sips her drink while Leela n Roops look her annoyingly………

Its night time…….Naku in the garden thinking about her marriage proposal…….

Naku (to herself) : me kya karoo Deva…….yeh tu kis mod mein le aaya hai mujhe…….mein Aakash se saadi kaise kar sakti hai……jab ki me to sahib se pyaar karti hai………sahib ke alawa kisi aur ke bare mein soch bhi nahi sakti…….me na bhi to nahi karsakti……kya jawaab degi me AS ko…….kya kahegi jab Kala tayi wajah puchhegi……..me kya karoo Deva……..ab tu hi kuchh rasta dekha…….

Dutta comes down…….sees Naku moving in the garden…….he goes near her…….

Dutta: Naku…..tu yahan…….is bakt…….kya kar rahi hai…….tujhe need nahi aarahi…….

Naku notices Dutta…….n hides her tears…….but Dutta realizes she's crying n asks her………

Dutta: Naku……tu ro rahi hai…….kisine kuchh kaha tujhse…….kya hua bol……..

Naku turns her back towards him……..but Dutta grabs her hands……n pulls her towards him…….

Dutta: kya hua Naku…….tu kuchh bolti kyun nahi…….kya tu mujhe is laayak nahi samajhti…….apna duk bant sake…….bol Naku……..

Naku could not control her more n breaks in his arms……initially Dutta is shocked……but then he cuddles her in his arms n tries to console her……..the CVs zoom this hug for 5 minutes from all angles……..then Naku realizes what she actually doing n breaks the hug……..Dutta too comes into his senses……..Naku tries to speak…….

Naku: sahib……woh me……me……. Dutta interrupts her………

Dutta: Naku…….tu ro kyun rahi thi……agar tu mujhe apna samajhti hai…….to tujhse mereko batana hoga……..

Naku: woh sahib…….me is rishte ke baren mein soch rahi thi……..

Dutta: (trying to control his emotions) ismein sochne ki kya baat hai…….AAkash ek achha ladka hai…….tujhe khus rakhega…… (yeh gadha ka gadha hi rahega) …….woh tujhe pasand bhi karta hai……..

Naku looks at him pleadingly for some time……but Dutta looks away……Naku speaks in a deep thought……..

Naku: pasand kyun nahi karega……is sundar chehre ko kaun bhala pasand nahi karega………par asli Nakusha use kaun samajhta hai…….sab sirf mere sakal ko dekhte hai…….mere roop dekhne ke baad sabka bartab kaise badal jaata hai……..jaise pehle me ki aur thi…….Nakushha thi hi nahi……..

Dutta: tu aisa kyun sochti hai…….duniya ka har insaan aisa nahi hota……..

Naku: nahin sahib…….aisa hi hota hai………aapko nahi pata……jab me apne basti mein rahti thi……aur kali thi…….basti ke ladkon mein sart lagti thi……..jo harega woh Naku se saadi banayega………par jab mera roop dikha…….tab bhi sart lagti thi……bas phark itna tha……jo jitega woh Naku se saadi banayega……….

Dutta: (understanding the depth of his words…..) Naku…… but Naku interrupts her………

Naku: sahib……har insaan aajtak mere sakal ko hi dekha hai…….kisine mereo samajhne ki kabhi kosis hi nahi ki…….sibaye aapke……aapne mujhe har roop me apnaya……aapne Naku ka sakal nahi uska dil dekha……..use samjha……usse dosti ki…….aapko na meri kaali roop se nafrat hui na aapke aankhen mere gori chehre par atki…….isiliye to me aapki itni ijjat karti hai……..ijjat karte karte kab aapse pyaar karne lagi pata hi nahi chala……..

Suddenly Naku realizes what she actually said……she turns n look at Dutta…….n then run towards her room…….leaving a shocked Dutta behind……….the epi ends on shocked n confused face of Dutta………

Pre- TaSha are in the outhouse……..Dutta grabs Naku's hands n takes her to the parking area……..n makes her seated in the car……..n drives speedily……….

Kaisa Laga????
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Posted: 14 years ago
very very well written..........mast hai yaar.........u rock!!update more..........waiting to read more desperately!!!...........
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Posted: 14 years ago
Anjane mein hi sahi...Nakku ne apni dil ki baat keh di...!!!!...i really wish i could see that scene when Nakku tells her dil ki baat and runs away from there leaving Dutta all SURPRISED...!!! 😍.....

and the precap......!!!!!!! Dutta is driving fast....wat is with him...is angry again at smtn...????...or are they fleeing away from there...??...GOSH... cant wait....!!!!!!



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Posted: 14 years ago
swatiiiii.....did a fabulous job dear 👏
loved what nakku said..izzat se pyaar wala dialog...superb.. 👍🏼
and the precap!!!...ufff cant wait any longer!!!!...jald se update karo!!!!😆
thanx for the PM swati!

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