manthan and neha ff parts 9/10/11

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Posted: 18 years ago
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all the previous parts are in the ff index, just about to post part 7 and 8 there to, they are on the same page

parts 9 and 10 and 11 will be in this forum

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manthan and neha are in the park, they are hugging each other and just playing about. laksh and KT see them!

laksh: manthan! what's he doing with neha? why is he hugging her and holding her hands and everything?

KT: are you blind? can't you see they are in love and they two are doing something which we two never did!

laksh: he smiles and bring KT close

laksh: so what do you want me to do?, you want me to hold you like this

laksh holds KT's waste and tightens his grip around her, KT pushed manthan and runs, she falls on NEha

both look shocked, neha and manthan get up and after seeing laksh is there too, they both slowly walk away.

meanwhile in SN everybody is having dinner, manthan kicks neha's leg from under the table, but he is acctually kicking tanya's leg and tanya thinks karan is doing so.

tanya looks in a wierd way to karan who does not respond.

manthan is eagerly looking at neha who does not respond. neha gets up and is going upstairs. manthan thinks she is doing so for him.

neha tells tulsi she nneds to call her friends for some notes for their research(the reason why neha came to SN)

manthan too gets up and tells tulsi he is going up to study some office files

karan: manthan, what office files

manthan: ummm dad the project that you gave me about bharat oil

karan; that was 3 months ago and we aldready got the tender and finished the project.

manthan: i need to show it to neha

manthan goes upstairs and enters neha's room. he grabs neha from the back and turns her around to face him. they stare at each other for a moment

then neha says: manthan, leave me someone will come. manthan tightens his grip around her and brings her closer, neha and manthan were so close that there was only and inch space from them.

manthan: i have made the decision to let let you go for the rest of my life so i am not going to let you go now

neha: oh so forever you are going to hold me?

manthan: yes!

neha: huh! tanya chaachi!

manthan immediatly lets go of neha and turns around he sees nobody aand turns back. neha laughs

neha: you said you wern't leaving me forever, but you left me in less than a minute.

manthan grabs neha again and says: this time i won't be fooled.

he is about to kiss her on her cheek.....

neha: tanya chaachi!

manthan: i know you are lying i won't let you go now!

neha: really! believe me!

tanya: uh huh huh

manthan: faces tanya and his face is in shock but he is still holding neha, he looks back at neha and then immediatly lets go of her. he looks back at tanya

matnhan: mmmm...mom

tanya: did you finish giving the file to neha?

manthan: ummm haan

tanya: chalo! out now !

neha : tanya chaachi!

tanya: YOU WILL NOT CALL ME TANYA CHAACHI FROM NOW ON! (she has an angry look on her face)

you will call me maa (she smiles while saying this)

neha goes and hugs tanya. manthan is very happy. tanya leaves but is standing behind the door

manthan: i'll kick your leg tommorrow also

neha: what? you did't kick my leg

manthan? what? if i didn't kick your leg then who's did i kick?

tanya: you kicked mine!

manthan is looking bewildered and neha laughs

tanya: now come on.

-------midnight---------------

neha is feeling very hungry and goes down to the kitchen.

manthan also feels hungry and goes down to the kitchen. he sees neha and smiles neha sees him too. manthan moves foreward and corners her. he moves closer to her and pushes her hair back. he comes closer and his lips are almost touching neha's lips, manthan touches neha's cheek and kisses it.

neha: manthan, yeh tum kya kar rahe ho?

manthan: sshhhh!

manthan holds neha's hands and comes closer again and gives her another kiss. neha smiles and goes away.

---------------------------following morning---------------------------

manthan is asleep in his bed, tanya comes there to wake him up, but he dosen't. tanya goes out saying: kab yeh suddharega?

neha come in and looks at manthan sleeping, she bends down and kisses his forhead. she gets up to go, but manthan hold her hand and pulls her down. neha is now on top of manthan. neha laughs and turns so she is bellow manthan, manthan hears karan's voice and he turns around again, but falls to the floor on the other side of the bed, neha is now on top of him again.

karan: manthan! where are you. karan could not see manthan as manthan was on the floor on the other side of the bed towards a wall.

karan: where is he? karan goes away

neha: ouch........ manthan closes her mouth

manthan: not another word.

tanya come sback and she too is looking for manthan but can't find him.

neha gets up and is about to go out.

karan comes in again: aare neha, you here? when i came you wernt here so...

neha: i was in the baathroom,

karan: ok, where is manthan?

neha : i dont know and she goes out.

karan goes to the other end of the room and finds manthan on the floor sleeping (pretending to sleep)

karan lightly kicks manthan: up! its 10 o'clock

--------------------neha is behind the door and laughs--------------------

part 10 comming soon!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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haaaaa kiya part tha love it and love the part when fell i mean haha kiya idea hai lol
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thnks vry much vry nice 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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aww..so cute! plz cont soon 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice ff. cud u plz give me the link 4 the 6,7 & 8 part.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Excellent cnt wait for da nxt part... n dnt worri bout ur exams!!!! Best of luk for them!!!!
Edited by nehagupta_9 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Oh from what i see u have exams. Then don't worry. I was gonna ask about ur next update but take ur time cause even I'm going through the same thing - 6 science exams next week which r 30% of my final grade. Good luck and revise well.

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