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Posted: 18 years ago
So sorry pari. Ill try to continue as soon as i get time. Its just that, i have to take care of 9 or 10 FF's at the moment, and im making a new FC if it is approoved, and as you know, im incharge of the kt siggy contest, but its coming up soon, so no worries :)
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Posted: 18 years ago
Take your time kitkat di! 😊 Dont worry, and we all know that you have a lot of resposibilities around IF... just do one thing at time, and do continue whenever you get time kitkat di. 😃 And congratulations for being a MOTW in the FC. 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago

So sorry guys ! I didn't update for so long ! And , i promise you guys ! That by Friday , i will try to get up , atleast 3 LONG parts ! Otherwise , i dunno , LOL!! But , i will , i promise !! So sorry , to keep you guys , waiting for so long ! <3 .. :)

Why ?! Read my Siggy , and you'll know ! :)

Regards ,

- Zinu ! :)

Edited by Zinu29 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 35

Recap:
Laksh and his Employee 'Vishal' are forbidden to go home, due to difficulties, occured.

Part 35 - Will they reach home, on time??

Time passed by, and by, everyone didn't hear from Lakshya !
The party has been long over ! It is about to be 2:00 a.m.
No sign of Lakshya !
Everyone Tensed , and wondering what could've happened !
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The bright Sun rises into the sky , birds chirping , and welcoming the brand new day !
Lakshya enter's Shaanti Niketan ! Running in , and finally stops , and looks at , Tulsi , and Ganga sleeping on the Couches , in the Living Room !
He knew , they would've been worried for him ! So , he quietly , without making any noise , went up to his room !
He kept his luggage in there ! And , slowly walked to kt's room !
Befor he entered , he peeked in , through the glass , of the door , and saw , he standing by the railing , in the balcony !
He walked in , and behind her ! He tightly hugged her from her back ! Which made her scared ! ..
He rested his chin , on her shoulder ! , and let out a deep sigh !
L: Kt ..
She suddenly turns , and faces him ! ..
Tears roll down her cheek , as she hugs him tightly !
K: kaha the itni derr tak ! kya hua tha ! sab theek to hai !
Lakshya sweetly keeps his hand , on her head , while them both hugging !
Lakshya explains , and tells her whatever had happened !
L: bas yehi hua tha ! aur kuch nahi !
They pull out !
K: meri toh jaan hi nikaal di thi tumne , phone kyun nahi kiya ?!
L: Kt , phone hota to karta naa !! ..
K: Cellphone bhi to tha--
L: signal nahi tha naa ! Acha ab yeh chodo ! Itni subha subha , kya kar rahi ho ?! Soyi nahi naa ?!
Kt nods her head as a "No" ! ..
L: Kyun nahi ?!
K: tumhari chinta ho rahi thi !
L: kyun ho rahi thi ?!
K: Laksh ... yeh bhi koi sawaal hua ?!
L: Kt .. mujhe kuch nahi hua naa ?! Jab , tum mere saath ho toh , mujhe kuch nahi ho sakta hai !!
K: tumhare saath nahi thi mai !!
L: kt .. tum mere paas naa ho kar bhi , mere paas ho , mere dil mein ! Aur , yeh , koi nahi badal sakta ! Acha , toh .........
K: toh ?!
L: miss kiya !?
K: bahut !
L: acha , chalo mere saath !
K: par kaha ?!
L; tum itne sawaal kyun poochti ho ?! chalo naa !. .. ... .. chalo !!
He takes her hand , and quietly walks towards his room , trying to wake nobody up !
He enter's his room , with her , and makes her sit on the bed !
K: kya hai .. kuch to batao !! ..
L: ok , ruko !! ..
He opens up his luggage , searching for something ! And , finally is succsessful !
He takes out a present , and walks towards kt !
He sits beside her on the bed ! .. And , hands it to her !
K: yeh kya hai ?!
L: khol ke dekho !
She starts unwrapping the gold Wrapping paper !
She opens up the box , and finds , a Beautiful Embroidered Saari in it !
K: yeh kis liye ?!
L: tum sawaal kyun poochti ho itne ?! mujhe samajh mein nahi aata ! Tumhare liye laaya hoon ! Aur (he picks up the Saari) tum yeh , humari shaadi ke baad , humari nayi zindagi ke pehle din pe pehnogi ! .. pehnogi naa ?!
K: kyun nahi pehnoongi ?! itne pyaar se laye ho !
L: toh , tumhe pasand hai , naa ?!
K: kyun nahi hogi ?!
L: haan waise , Lakshya Virani ne jo pick ki hai , aur meri pick to laakhon mein ek hoti hai ! hahahaha !!
Kt suddenly gets up , and throw's the box on the bed ! and walks away , in anger !
Lakshya stops her , by holding her hand !!
L: kya hua ?!
K: mai tumse naaraaz hoon !!!!
L: arre .. aise hi ?! sudden change ?! koi khaas wajay !?
K: haan !!
L: arre , par kyun ?! kya hua ?!
Kt walks towards his luggage , and opens his bag , and finds the bag , filled with presents !!
K: yeh sab kya hai ?!
L: kya hai ?! kya hai ?! presents has sab ke liye .. kyun tumhe aur chahiye kya ?!
K; nahi ! tum sabke liye presents laye , aur apne liye nahin !
L: isme naaraaz hone ki kya baat hai ?!
K: hum shopping chalenge aaj !
L: par--
K: maine kaha naa , ab koi par war nahi chalegi ! waise bhi , mujeh shaadi ka saamaan lena hai !
L: (laughs) .. to aisa bolti naa , maine kab maan kiya ! acha waise ! ek baat batao !
K: poocho !
He sits on the bed , and pulls her on his lap !
L: acha , jab , mai itni derr tak nahi aaya , toh kya hua !?
K: kya hua ?!
L: i mean , sabne kaisa react kiya ?!
K: kyun ?! bahut maza aata hai , aisa sunke , ki sabki jaan hi nakal gayee thi ?!
L: Mmmm.... BAHUT !!! tumhe chidhane mein bhi bahut mazaa aata hai .. hahahahhaahahah!!!
K: acha !! yeh majaal ! tum ruko abhi ! ..
She grabs one of his pillow's , and chases after him ..
Laksh stands on one side of the bed , and kt on the other ! ..
L: (laughs) dekho kt .. aage mat badhnaa ..
K: kyun ?!
Kt walks on the bed , and jumps down !
Lakshya runs away , and she falls !
K: ooowww !!!!!
He walks back to her !
L: kya hua ?! kya hua ?! tum theek to ho ?!
K: ufff ! nahi !
L: kya hua ?! pair mein moch aayiee ?! {did you sprain your foot ?!}
K: haan ! ..
L: lo .. yeh , ho gayi tumhari shopping ! ..
K: Laksh !! you're not helping !!
L: Ok !! dikhao , kya hua hai !!
He picks her up and puts her on the bed , and then , takes a look at her foot !
L: Kt!!!
K: kya ?!
L: tum kitni nachadi ho!!
K: KYA ?!
L: haan ! mujhe maarne ke liye , apna hi nuksaan karwa liya ! Ab , bhugto ! ..
Kt makes a "Hmph" face , and looks the other way !
Lakshya touches her foot , in the spot , it got sprained !!
K: OOOWWWWW !!!!!
L: ok , ok , ruko !! mai dawa leke aata hoon ! {i'll go grab some medicine}
Till then , Kt gets up , and starts walking towards the door , just when he comes back !!
She get's scared , and "pretends" to fall ! But , is caught bu Lakshya !!
L: toh , yah sab mazaak that ?! uhn ?!
K: haan !! kyun , tumhe kya laga , ki sach mein meri moch ayiee thi !! hahaha !!
L: tum ho hi bahut natkhat !! abhi dekhta hoon tumhe !!
K: nahi !!!
She gets up , and runs out the door , running into the hallway !! .. and goes down the Living Room !!
Lakshya follow's her , chasing after !!
Kt run's behind a couch , and Laksh opposite her !
And both moving to spots as their playing "Kabadi"
Meanwhile , Ganga and Tulsi , who were sleeping on the couches , woke up , and saw them , chasing after eachother !!
T: Lakshya !!!
Lakshya suddenly stops , and turns around !!
Kt comes and stands beside him !!
T: tu aagaya ?! Kab aaya ?! uthaya bhi nahi !!
Kt takes her hand , and slaps Lakshya's head , from the back !!
L: oww !! kt !!
L: darasal , daadi , woh , mai aaya tha , par aapko jagana nahi chahta tah !! to isiliye !!
Now everyone came out of their room's , and gather's around trhe Living Room !
Lakshya once again , explains everyone what had happened , etc !
Mihir[M]: Acha , yeh chodo , tum aa gaye , itna hi kaafi hai ! Arre haan ! Tulsi , tumne inhe bataya nahi ?!
T: haan , woh !! Tum dono ki shaadi , agle hafte hai !! Budhwaar (Wednesday) ko !! Isiliye , aaj tum dono , shopping ke liye chale jaane , theek hai ?!
L: jee daadi !!
Ganga[G]: Acha , ab chalo !! Khaana khaa lete hai , kaafi derr se aaye ho !! Aur , dekho , kya haal bana rakha hai !! tumne khaana nahi khaaya kya waha par ?!
L: khaaya tha ! ab , aap please , mujhe itna khaana mat khilana , nahi to phat jaunga !! {or i'll blow} ..
Everyone Laughs , as they all go to freshen up !!
Coming Up Next - Shopping with Lakshya and Kt ! :)
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Okay , i finally contionued ! Guys , sorry for the delay !! I will updated 2 more parts , if possible ! Can't say ! But , i will try !
Hope you like this part !
Regards ,
- Zinu ! :)
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Posted: 18 years ago
YAAYYY!!! I am the first one to comment. (for the first time.. 😆 ) Kt nai laksh ke saath jo mazaak kiya tha, woh wala scenario bohot pyaara tha. 👏
Plz conttinue soon. Cnt wait till the shopping. 😊
perfectpiscean thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey zinu....kute part!!! keep up da gud upda8s...
luv,
Marisha
xoxo
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Posted: 18 years ago
nyce zinu....great update...after like a gazzion years...lol continue sooooon 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
Aww..cute part zinu, dear! continue soon, when u have the time to, hun! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
👏 👏 👏 gr8 part!-even tho u made us w8 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
awsome part zinu its worth the wait.....gr8 job 👏

Shona 😳

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