hey guys this iz gona b da story i'll b submiting for the valentines day contest on pulkitmouni.piczo.com...plz comment on how i m doing...so i can submit a best one!!!
PART 1
This story takes pplace efore kt n lakshya had confessed their love to each other
They loved each other very much… but didn't really hv the courage to say it.
Kt in the kitchen as usual along with damini n ganga.
Lakshya meanwhile was in this room tlking to him friend Amit on the phone.
Lakshya {lying on his stinky 😆 bed} : no yaar, I cant cum to the valentines day party
Am: y not!!
L: cuzzz…cuzzz…. I dunt hv a date
Amit waz shocked… thinking dat the most popular (n HOTTEST) guy of da college refusing to cum b/c he doesn't hv a date
Am:wa r u serious… our college's heartrob no hving a date… I dunt believe dat!
L: no itz not dat… I can find any date anytime…but I m in love
Amit bursts into laaughters
Am: (laughing)lakshya tum aur ek ladki…. Its soo im-
Lakshya interrupts him
L: wats soo funny….aur haan yaar …leking
Amit does the same , interrupts
Am: kya lekin… u r sooo good w/ girls… aur sari ladkiiya tumpe toh marti hai toh fir problem kya hai
L: wohh meeri college ki ladkiyon ki tarra nahi hai…bohot simple si…kute hai…pyarri si smile ( kt's pic cums up in his head… as he describes it to amit)
Am: ok ok… she wont say no…trust meee yaar… n I DUNT CARE UR CUMING!
Amit hangs up on lakshya
L: ammmit.>!! phone kat diya….
Lakshya put the receiver down… n shuts his eyes. Lying on the bed he thinks abt all the special moments he spent with kt… his dreams r once agin interrupted by the knocking
It waz archita…
A: lakshya bhaiyya… mein shopping jaah rahi huan…
L: toh mein kya karoo.. naachu (smiles n gets up from his bed)
A: (makes an angry face) verry funny….
Lakshya begins to laugh
L: ok sorry …bolo kya hai
A: who… kya hai… mami bahar gayi hai aur memre pas enough money nahi hai
L: (touches his forehead) haii bhagwan… tum ladkiya kitna shopping kare the hoh.
A: (irritated) paise dene ho toh doh varna mein jaah rahi huan (starts to leave)
L: thhekk hai… de that huan…(he reaches for his bak pockets n takes out ten Rps.500 bill (srry dunt knoe Indian currency sign) yeh loh.. khush
Archita jubilantly hugs lakshya… n kisses him on his cheeks
L: ok ok… lekin mera ek kaa,m karogi
A: kya hai
Lakshya whispers stuff in archita's ear
A: (smiles) ok bahiyya…thnkx again for the money
Archita walks downstairs and runs to the kitchen
She sees damini, ganga… n kt… working
G: arree …itni tayaar hoh kar kaha jahrehi ho
A: waise mein shopping jahrehi huan….mein wohh kehe nahi aaiiya hi keeh lakshaya bahiyya paani chiaayya( she raises her eyebrows at kt.. n smiles.. kt shyly proceeds doing the dishes)
G: bilkul baap peh gaya hai….khud neechai aah sakta tha. Anywayz….kt tum hamare raja koh pani dekar aooh
Kt smiles..: "ok"
IN LAKSHYA'S ROOM
L: who abh tak nahi aaiya
Then he hears footsteps coming towards his room. Kt cums in with a glass of waer to is room
Kt: paani
Lakshya takes the glass n drinks from it. But her eyes on the shy kt looking down
Lakshya gives kt the glass n kt proceeds to leave … as she waz leaving lakshya holds her hand
L: sunno
KT: (shyly): kya hai… choodo muhje
L:9pulls her closer to his chest) aaj raat.. kaaha khaanai keh baad kyat um thoode tyme keh liye aaogi terrace paar.
Kt shyly says, " choodona muhje"
Lakshya lets go off her
L: loh chood diya
Kt smiles n runs downstairs.
continuing soooon
rani