valentine’s day... L-KT FF...MUST READ! - Page 18

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zinny.xo thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
^^^Thanks Rani, and Aliya Di .. im still shaking of joy .. this is such a big news .. im thrilled .. this is just like when i found out i was gonna b the MOTW .. but, this time, im shaking more, and not taking the name to stop.. 😳 Thankoooo Rani .. 🤗 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 18 years ago
zinu u know i'am a big fan of ours!!! 😳 😳 😳 so "JALDI UPDATE KARNA" 😆 😆
WAITING FOR U...................... 👏
-ABHI
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Posted: 18 years ago
cnt w8 for your update zinu! 👏
zinny.xo thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
Recap:
They both hangs up and pari puts kt's phone on her bed and leaves……after a while kt comes out of the washroom and sits on her bed……she looks at her phone…and she was thinking should she call or noo….but she picks up the phone and calls laksh…..
L: sees it was kt and picks up the phone and started saying soorryyy soorrryyyy sooorryyy……plzzzz muje maf kardo….?
Kt: amiles and sooorrry….ye sorry kaha se agaya beech mai…
L: tumne to meri jaan hi nikaal di thi….
Kt: ye to ho hi nahi sakta…..
L: kyu…?
Kt: tumhi ne kaha than a ki meri jaan tumhare paas hai waise hi tumhari jaan mere paas hai…..
L: par phir bhi dara diya tha tumne muje…..
Kt: sorry….
L + Kt: ye sorry kaha se agaya beech mai….and they both started laughing…….
Now:Part 33
L: Tumhare liye kuch lau ??
K: haan...
L: kya??
K: tum...
L: woh toh mil jayega..aur kuch??
K: nahi..
L: kuch to bolo .. nahi to mai wapas nahi aaunga...
K: Laksh..aisi baatein nahi karte...
L: to phir bolo..kya laye hum aapke liye...
K: jo tumhe pasand ho...ab khush...
L: hmmm.....
L: acha..ab mujhe jaana hai..phir baat karenge..
K: okay..khaana time pe khaa lena--
L: sab karloonga kt..tumhe yaad bhi karoonga..(smiles)..
K: badmaash!!!...
They both share a sweet laugh, and hang up, saying "bye"...
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LATER THAT AFTERNOON ..
Kt was sitting in her room .. thinking of Laksh<3
When .. Ganga comes in ..
G: Kt ..
K: Ji maa??
G: mandir jaana tha mujhe .. tu chalegi mere saath?? isi bahane ghar se bahar niklegi ..
K: ji mai .. mai abhi 2 minute main neeche aati hoon ..
G: okay...
She leaves.....
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SCENE SWITCHES TO THE TEMPLE ( Mandir ) ..
Kt is holding the 'Aarti Thaali' and praying, while Ganga is also praying, but, by just simple, folding her palms ..
K: (praying in head/heart) Hei Thakur Ji .. Laksh jo bhi maksad se waha gaya hai .. usse poora karwa dena .. aur usse sahi salamat shar wapas bhej dena .. mujhe aur kuch nahi chahiye .. bas uski raksha karna .. har bure saaye se bachana usko ..
She now brings the Thaali close to her head..and dows down to it .. and finally opens her eyes ..
She then, rings the bell, which is hanging on top of the celing ..
Ganga then opens her eyes .. Smiles at Kt ..
They both then, take some 'Holy Blessing(s) of God' ( Parshaad ) .. from the preist .. and proceed towards home ..
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THE SCENE SWITCHES TO NIGHT ..
(am i taking too many 'Scene Switches' Scenes😆😆😆)...

Kt was laying on her bed .. thinking of Laksh<3 (once again) ..
On the other side .. Laksh was upto the same . .
They both, kept on twisting on the bed, trying to find Sleep ..but weren't succsessful .. 😔 ..
Laksh got up, and decided to call Kt...
Kt was crying, since she missed her to-be hubby so much<3
*ring ring*
K: Laksh.......
Kt ran, and picked up the phone, that was across, near her closet/near her window ..
K: Hello...Laksh.....
L: ... (no reply) ..
K: Laksh, tum hi ho naa....mai jaanti hoon tum hi ho .. kuch bolte kyun nahi...kuch to bolo..hello?? Laksh...
L: offo...bolne ka mauka to do naa.....
*silence for some moments*...
L: tumne khaana khayaa??
K: haan..aur tumne??
L: haan...
L: kaisi ho....
K: tumhare bina adhoori...
L: mai bhi.....
L: Miss me .. ?? ..
K: bahut??
L: mai bhi .. acha, saari baatein mai karoo .. ya tum bhi kuch bologi ..
They both laugh ..
K: wapas kab aaoge??
L: pata nahi .. par aaounga zaroor .. tumse itni derr tak doorrr nahi reh sakta....
K: tumhara din kaisa guzra??
L: theek tha...
L: neend nahi aayiee???
K: nahi...
L: mujhe bhi nahi....
K: kyun nahi ayieee....
L: kyunki, tumhe dekh nahi sakta.....
Kt starts crying, once again...😔...
L: heyyy.....kya hua??? aasooo poncho...
She wipes them off...
L: kt...aise rogi toh mai kya karoonga...dekho mujhe tumhari bahut yaad aati hai...par agar tum toot jaogi, to meri girlfriend ko kaun sambhalega...
K: girlfriend??
L: baaa....
Kt laughs, and Laksh joins in...
L: acha, kt..mujhe abhi jaana hoga..kal jaldi uthna hai...haan haan..mai sab karloonga :)
K: paagal!! phone karte rehna...
L: karoonga...
L: I Love You!!
K: Love You Too!!
L: apna dyaan rakhna..
K; tum bhi...
L: Bye..!!..
K: bye.
They hang up, and now are able to go to sleep :)
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Ello :)
I know this is NOT as good as Pari, or Rani Di .. but, ive been wished "Good Luck" by Rani Di .. So hopefully, you'll like my work :)
Love,
Zinu😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
great Part Zinu!! 👏 continue sooN!! 😛
Angelic_Pari thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow zinu lovely part beter than mine.... 👏

Keep writing.... 😳 GOOD LUCK 😃

Pari
zinny.xo thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
^^Thanks Pari. No, it's not better than urs or Rani Di's. 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
😳 aww... The missing part was soo cute but yet a bit sad because of them being apart. 😊 All of you 3 writers are excellent writers. Plz continue soon zinu di, Rani, or Pari, whoever is continuing the next part. 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
that was amazing part zinu!!! 👏 👏 👏 uru is right u r ALL amzing,fantastic, marvellous, outstanding......
upadte soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
Great part Zinu..! 👏
Continue soon!! 😳 😳

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