valentine’s day... L-KT FF...MUST READ! - Page 19

WOW beautiful part, jus mind-blowing ....c i told u, u wud do a fantastic job!!!!u were nervous for no reason...! 😉 😛 👏 👏 👏 its soo much better then mines....truly!
continue sooon...! 😃
keep up the great work dear!
👏 👏 👏

rani

Originally posted by: uru_hershey

aww... The missing part was soo cute but yet a bit sad because of them being apart. All of you 3 writers are excellent writers. Plz continue soon zinu di, Rani, or Pari, whoever is continuing the next part.

hey uru....its only zinu that'll b continuing....itz HER FF now!!! 😉
rani

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PART 34
Sevral of weeks pass by .. No one heard from Lakshya at all, since the day Kt talked to him at night ..
But no one either knew, that Kt and Lakshya used to talk on Phone, at night, mostly everyday ..
No one except Ganga knew this .. and she never said anything about it either ..
THAT MORNING....
Everyone was gathered up in the Living Room, talking about Lakshya...
"Jaane kab lauteyga Lakshya" said Tulsi, in a saddened manner.
"Aap theek keh rahi hai Maa, kabse gaya hua hai, aur humse baat taq nahi ki" Said Ganga.
"Krishna. Tere paas Lakshya ka phone number hai??" Said Tulsi, wanting to hear a Yes.
"Ji Baa, Mia abhi laati hoon"..
She runs up to her room, and comes back down, after a while, with a Chit in her hand...
She hands the Chit to Tulsi, saying "Ye Lijiye, Baa!!"..
Tulsi gets up, and walks to ther Phone..
She is about to pick it up, just when the phone rings itself...
Tulsi picks up the phone, and answers it...
"Hello"
"Sach..."
"Kab Tak".......
"Theek hai"
"Bye,"...Saying that, she hangs up, and has a big smile on her face...
"Kaun tha Maa.." Said Ganga...
"Lakshya" Said Tulsi, gleefully.
{Okay...im getting back to my 'Script-Writing' Technique, I just wanted to 'try' the 'Novel' Technique..hope you don't mind 😭 😆}
K: Kab taq aayega??
T: aaj shaam taq, usne yehi kaha tha...
Everyone smiles happily.....
T: Ganga, kyun naa, aaj hum, ek party rekhe, jab woh wapas aayega, to usse surprize karenge..
G: haan maa, yeh toh bahut acha idea hai..hum abhi taiyariaan, shuru karte hai..
T: krishna, tujhe koi aitraaz to nahi hai naa??
K: mujhe kaisa aitraaz hoga?? bahut acha idea hai..woh bahut chonk jayega....
T: theek hai, phir abhi shooro hote hai..itna waqt nahi hai
G: par maa..
T: haan??
G: kya hume guests ko bulana chahiye?? mujhe nahi lagta..aap kya kehti hai maa??
T: haan..mai bhi yahi soch rahi thi..ab guests aayenge to, raat bahut ho jayegi..deri se jayenge..aur woh tired bhi toh hoga..toh hum choti se, humare liye, party karlete hai..
K: haan baa..yeh acha rahega..
T: to chalo, sabhi, kaam bahut hai...
Everyone gets busy in the preperations of the party...
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SCENE SWITCHES TO LAKSHYA..
Lakshya was giving his Employee 'Vishal' a ride home .. He live quite far from lakshya's house, so they had to take the long way ..
Lakshya was driving peacefully, just when his tires screech, and makes a loud noise..He had stopped his car, in a shock..
He quickly gets out of the car..and walks over to the police, in front of his car..
OUTSIDE..
L: excuse-me???? (to the police)..
Po: Yes......
L: yaha par, kya ho raha hai..mujhe iss raste se jaana hai..bahut jaldi mein hoon mai..
Po: sorry!! par, yaha aage, bridge toota hua hai..aur peeche ka rasta bhi band ho raha hai..i think, you cant go..
L: acha..kab taq theek hoga??
Po: aaj raat 10 baje taq theek ho jana chahiye...
L: damn!! acha, yah par aas paas, kahi rehne ki jaga milegi, tab taq...
Po: uhh!!! haan!!! aap waha chale jaiye....(he points in a direction)...
Lakshya takes out his phone, and dials the house number...He hangs up...
L: damn!! no signal...!!!..
L: (to the police) yah kahi pe koi phone hai???
Po: nahi..sorry!! is ilake[area] mein, koi phone nahi hote hai..
Lakshya walks back to the car, with a weird face...
Vishal[V]: what's wrong?? why is the police here???
L: we cant go, until the bridge gets fixed. its broken. and we dont even have signal, and no phones here. oh god!!! they'll be so worried...
V: oh shoot!!! then wat do we do?? cant you reverse???
L: nope!!! they closed the other way too. so were stuck here. i have to inform my family. Kt will kill me..
V: don't worry. we'll get home, atleast..even if its later...
L: i guess so!! well, lets go to the cottage i guess!!
V: cottage???
L: yeah!! that's where, we have to stay till all this time..!!!
V: okay..lets go..
They get out the car, and start walking towards the cottage!!...
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Okay..here's my next part :)
Hope, you like it :)
Love,
Zinu😳
P.S.: Thanks Everyone for ur comments :) and Rani Di, especially :)

Great update... 👏 👏
Continue sooon! 😳 😉

oh wow!! zinu hunny. i didnt know, you are working on this from now on. lovely part. aww, i hope they get home on time. 😳 plz continue soon. Missng ur updates as well rani/pari. 😉 😉

Guys, the next part, might be up by tomorrow :)

gr8 part zinu cont. soon.... 👏

very good zinu continue soon 😃

Great part 👏
Continue soon

hey zinu when r u updating..?????