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Posted: 18 years ago
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hope u guyz r liking it sooo far....
PART 5
FOUR DAYS LATER…( 3 DAYZ BEFORE VALENTINES)
Lakshya as his daily rootine…got up dreaming abt kt… gets dress. Has breakfast n left for work.
Lakshya reaches his office, parks the car… n waz walking, discussing sum business matter with him secretary jus then his cell phone rings
L; (to secretary) excuse me, (he moves away from da secretary n answers the phone) hello?
Guess who waz on the phone …. KT…she says, " kaise hoh?"
Lakshya gets SURPRISED, n astounded. He yells in excitement…. "Arreeee KT…..OMG.. OMG… I cant believe tum aagayi"..he runs toward his office.. "mein office kyun jaahraha huan…mein ghar aata huan…omg dis is soo un believable" then he runs bak to his car…
"arree ruko tho sahi" says kt hastily, " mein ghar nahi aaiyi huan abhi"
Upon hearing this, lakshya 's excited face frowns. "KYA??!!"
Kt smiles n says, " haan… pooja joh karni thi wohh toh katam hogayi…leking voh baa koh kuch kaam finish karnaa hai.. so hum.. arrive karenge ghar on feb 13..theek hai
"kt …aur kitni meri agni pariksha laogi tum... yeh char din char saal keh tara katee hai…aur abh tum kahrehiho keh muhje dusre 3 din wait karna padega" reply's lakshya in a sad tone of voice.
Kt: Choodo use baat koh…waise batao…tumne mera letter padha
L; (smile ) haan… kavita bohot pyari thi… tumhe kavita shock kabse hai… muhje toh pata nahi thaa..
Kt sees tulsi cuming towards her…she panics… "OMG.."
Lakshya gets worried "kya huwa??"
Kt hurriedly replys " baa aagayi…mein chalti huan…apna khayal rakhna… khanna tyme paar khalena… aur muhje miss maat karna ..ok
L: (smiles) sari cheez karonga, besides one…
Kt wonders " wohh kya..?"
L: tumhe miss kise nahi karsakta… (Smiles…n looses his self in thoughts of kt)..
KT: shyly smiles. she hears tulsi calling her…
Kt: ok lakshya mein rakti huan…aur Happy valentines day…!!
L: (surpised) ahhhaa..kya…miss kt…valentines day koh 3 din bakki hai.. aur aise wish karnese nahi chalega….tum mere sath valentines day party mein aahhrehi ho…theek hai..
KT: (smiles) ok baba… apna khayal rakhna… khanna tyme paar khalena… aur muhje miss KARNA .. happy!
L: ( gets all excited) bohot khush…aur yeh toh sirf biwi hi kaisakto hai … keh apna khayal rakhna AUR khana tyme par khalena!! (n laughs) I love uuuu….I LOVE U!!! muaahh muahhh muahhhh (he kisses his cell)
Kt laughs n hangs up
AT NIGHT.... SN
Archita, lakshya, eklavya… joydeep, n nakul are all sitting around the dining table eating while ganga n tanya were serving.
G: aur chaiye…(referring to food)
A: omg chcachi… voh bacha thodi hai…aur nahi voh koi guest keh yaha hai…khud lalenga nah…abh aap plzz jayeyai yahase… mein subh sambhal longi…aur lakshya kah khayal rakhongi…
Ta: chalo ganga chalteh hai bahar…aur khana khazana deektai hai.,..
Both Tanya n ganga leave the dining room
A: finally who gayai… (she looks at lakshya who waz busy concentrating on eating food, not talking or anything)bhaiyya….( lakshya doesn't hear her) LAKSHYA!!
L: (snapps outta his dream)kya hai
A: ek baat poochu
L: kya…
A: aaj apne breakfast tyme peh kiya, luch tyme peh kiya aur abh dinner bhi tyme peh karerahe hai..kyun kya baat hai
L: yeh kaisa stupid question hai… since I hv to respond to it… I 'll say dayt I jus learned dat its good to eat on tyme
Eklavya interrupts, he elbows archita, " techinally baat yeh hai keh aaj uska phone ayya tha." Archita giggles
L: kya bhaaiiya mein apko kuch bolta huan …aap subh koh kehadetai hai…
Eklavya n archita smile…
Shobha cums in…
Sh: wah lakshya tum toh abhi she uski baat maanai lagai…
Everyone laughs n lakshya looks down in embarrassment
IT s feb 13 no sign of kt….lakshya wonders whrere she iz but cant find her….he tries all the places in haridwar….but doesn't work…he gets worried abt her….


luv
RANI...
p.s actual "valentine's day" part will b posted tommm
stay tuneee!!n pplzzz comments...for improvements and/or ur opinion.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
NOOO COMMENTS>>>AWWWW>.... DOES DAT MEAN u PPl DUTN LIKE ITT

RANI 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
no rani ur stories are always gr8 and i specially loved this one it was gr8......

and ya may i check the distruction topic today is friday...?

i think it's because people didn't notice...

but it's gr8 and sooo romantic...

love
pari
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Posted: 18 years ago
#14
omg rani is story is soo cute adn romantic eagerly waiting for teh next part
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Posted: 18 years ago
#15
Omg..i absolutely luvvvvvvv this story....
ur doing an excellent job..its jus soo romantic n sweeettt...keep up da gud work....im enjoying ur FF..lotz..dont think we dont like em rani..i dooo...!!! 😆 😉 ...
Lotsa luv: AmaN 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thnkx for gr8 comments guys....by da way.... I WON DA L-KT VALENTINES DAY FF contest!!! m soo happy!! 😃
Part 6
IT s feb 13 no sign of kt….lakshya wonders whrere she iz but cant find her….he tries all the places in haridwar….but doesn't work…he gets worried abt her….
ITZ VALENTINES DAY!! FEB 14
Lakshya wakes up as usually does his thing….sees the calendar…
L: itz valentine day!!!
He gets dressed up…n leaves for work…
At work…all gurls kiss lakshya on his cheek n wish him happy valentines day….
Lakshya continues to think abt kt…whr she cud b…n she didn't even call to wish him or tell him when shez cumin home.
AT NITE
Lakshya gets home….tired n exhausted from all the wisheing in roses
L: hey mom…whr u goin
G: (getting re\ady) oh ya …lakshya can u plz stay home cuz tulsi maa jus called saying they'll b bak by 9pm today….n me, sahil, karan, Tanya, damini, n gautam r going to the valentines day party….n all the kids went to this other party…they said dat u wernt going….so can u not leave the house today
L: k mom…
Inside lakshya waz sooo excited dat finally kt waz cuming home…
Everyone left the house…leaving the poor laskhya alone like a bhooot (lol)…

luv rani
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Posted: 18 years ago
#17
here iz
PART 7

It waz 8;30pm..
L; abh tak nahi aayai !
While he said dat he heard tulsi's voice
Lakshyha ran to the door n saw tulsi n kt…. He ctood there stareing at kt…while she pretended to ignore him…
Tulsi snapped his figers in front of his face
T: kya huwa…
Lakshya wakes up from his daydream…
L: kya..kya..dadi..kuch nahi
Kt giggles..
T: yeh saman toh ootha…
Lakshya picks up the 2 of tulsi's suitcases like a coolie (porter) n goes toward tulsi's bedroom
T; Krishna…aur tumhare rah bag tum upar lakshya keh sath jakare mere room meh rakh aavo…tab tak mein khana lagati huan..
Kt(smiles) : ok baa..
Kt follows lakshya into tulsi's room…
Lakshya stampps all the luggage he waz holding on the floor…
L: omg kitna bhari hai…
KT: saman uutha neh keh liya muscles aur takkat (strength) ki zaroorat hoti hai joh…ajkalke guys mein nahi hain…voh toh sirf mera fav salman khan hi karsak ta hai…
L: ( pretends to look angry) kya kahha…( he chases her while kt tries not to get caught)
Lakshya gets a hold of her dupppata as usuall…. N pulls her towards him…he hold he by her waist , takes the strand of her hair n kisses tehm to the other shoulder.
L: tum kuch kahrahi thi… keh woh saman uutha neh keh liya muscles aur takkat (strength) ki zaroorat hoti hai joh…muhje mein nahi hain…aur kis me sirf hai
Kt: choodo nah…baa aajaigi
L: pehle bolo
Kt holds lakshya by his collar… pulls him towards her…Lakshya gets all excited….
Kt says "bolu"…lakshya replyies, "bolonah"..tehy continue coming closer n closer to each other whn… taking advantage of the moment kt pushes lakshya away on to the bed… n say running away, " SALMAN KHAN ONLY MERI JAAN"
Lakshya tries to catche her but misses.
In dinning room…
Tulsi prepares the food as lakshya n kt start to eat….soon tulsi cums n joins them.
While eating they talk abt their bizarre tript o haridwar….soon they are done… kt picks up hers n tulsi's dish n puts it into the sink.
T: (tired) mein bohot thakgayi huan ,… mein jahkar soojati huan…. Tumbhi soojao Krishna…
KT: nahi baa muhje neend nahi aarahi hai.,..
T: theek hai…yeh sab kam khatam karke soona…aur lakshya kehliya thoda fruits nikana desert mein khan eke liya..
KT: (smiles)ok baa…app jayeh
Baa leaves while kt takes out the tray of fruits from the refrigerater n begins to cut the apples…
She takes the tray of fruits out side in the living whr lakshay cums n grabs a handful of them…
KT: deekho kaise janwar jaise kharaheho….
Lakshya smiles… 'tumse matlab"
Kt makes a funny face n turns on the tv… she puts on salman khan's maine pyar kiya (movie)…n says" wow…kitna HOT haina..
L: (makes ajealous face…) ewwwh…kitna pagal lagta hai…
Kt (gets pissed) : kya…tumhe aisa kyun lagta hai mr lakshya virani keh maine tumhari opinion pooocha…
Lakshaya takes the converter from her hand n turns off the tv…
KT (yell):lakshyaaaaaaaa!...bandh kyun kiya…
L: kyunki tumne abhtak mere sawal kah jawab nahi diya…
Kt: (pretends she has no idea wat he's talking abt) kaunsa sawal..???
L: tumhare paas short term memory hai…theek hai…yaad dila daita huan...HUM APKE HAI KAUN?????
KT blushes due to her shyness n reuns away into the kitchen…
Lakshya follows… her in
Kt ties her hair up in a bun….n starts washing dishes…
Lakshya cums from behind…holds her by her waist pulls her over close to his chest n takes the hair tie outta her hai..
L: muhje tumhare baal khoole aache lagte hai…
Kt smiles
L: toh kyat um pasan karogi….MRS. LAkshya virani bane keh liya…
Kt gets fulfilled ith happiness..hugs him tightly….n lakshya hugs her bak
L: will u b my valentine…
He gives kt a beautiful rose… n aks her to dance with her…
Kt agrees….n then they spend the rest of the rite dancing along

luv rani
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Posted: 18 years ago
#18
RECAP:
L: toh kyat um pasan karogi….MRS. LAkshya virani bane keh liya…
Kt gets fulfilled ith happiness..hugs him tightly….n lakshya hugs her bak
L: will u b my valentine…
He gives kt a beautiful rose… n aks her to dance with her…
Kt agrees….n then they start to dance

Part 8
KT: lakshya....
L: kya
KT: maine tumhara valentines day ruin kare dala nah...
L: nahi toh...mera valentines day abh start huwa...jab tak tum mere sath hoh...tabtak hare din mere liya valentines day hai...
Kt smiles shyly n stops dancing...
L: kya huwa...???
KT:Mr.Lakshya Virani...
lakshya interrupts.."apne honewale pati koh name seh bulate huan sharam nahi aati...
kt gets annoyed, " nahi...meribaat toh sunno..hum valentines day dance music keh bina???"
Lakshya makes a 'opps i forgot ' face, " opppz mein toh bhulhi gaya..muhje thodi pata tha keh tum romantic bhi ho sakti ho..."
KT(gets pissed) : kya....tumhe kya laga keh mein ek samwali huan kya...sirf tum ek padhe likhe nahi ho isse ghar mein...."
L: (joins his hands) ok meri maaa sorry...choti si baat kah itna bara issue kyun bana rahi hoh tum...
KT:kyaaaaaaaa yeh choti si baat hai....abh muhje samaj mein aaya...
lakshya intterups in confusion..."kya??"
KT: keh tum ladke hum ladkiyon koh har baar underestimate kyun kareteh ho..
L:(sarchastic) reallly...(comes close to her n says [romantically]..) toh batayehi nah MRs..lakshya virani (holds her from her waist...)
KT: choodo muhje...(lets her self go from lakshya's grip)eeisse liya...keh tumko dar hota hai keh hum tumse aagai nah nikal jayai...
L: really....( crosses his arms)mein nai toh aisa soocha hi nahi....but ur soooo wrong...ladke ladkiyon koh apne muthi mein kare sakte hai....lekin ladkiya ....hahha impossible...
KT: (comes close to him) waise ek baat baatao ....tum yeh kaise karsakti ho...
L: (gets a fishy feeling)Flirting....jaise...(he touches her hair)tumhare baaal bohot khubsurat hai...or..wow ur lookin soo gorgeous sweet heart....
aur bohot otehr tricks hai...
kt's eyes widen...." choodo muhje...mein tumse kabhi baat nahi karrongi.."
L: kya...kyun...maine kya kiyas... sirf tumhare sawal kah jwab diya
kts start to move away from him...
L: kt sunnno toh..( holds her hand, n comes closer to her) meinai kya kiya
KT: yeh sabhka matlab yeh hi huwa nah keh tum abh tak mere sath flirt kareteh thai....
L:(confused)kya kya...
KT: haan...(she starts crying)
L: every single time kt.,...y do u alwayz misunderstand me....muhje ofsos hota hai keh aaj tak meinai tumhe prove nahi karpaya...keh mein tumhe kitna pyaare kare tah huan.
KT: (wipes her tears) kya matlab
L{making a frowning face) matlab yeh..keh kisna ki bohot sari gopiya, chahanai wali thi lekin... uske chahat sirf RADHA....aur woh mere liya tum ho kt....sirf tum...
the song
channe ho channe ho mere dil kah...
sirf tum sirf tum sirf tum hoo
ohh janna

lakshya kisses her tears away n Kt feeling reliefed...hugs him tightly...n he hugs her bak....
L: ubh tum ek baat batao....tum ladkiya...itni roti kyun ho...
KT: kyaaaaaaaaaa???
L: ok jus kidding....( he smiles)
kt puches him on his shoulders playfully....
L: ouuuuch...
kt:( scared) ommgg...lagga....
L: nahi...jabh lagta toh aisa hi lagta nah

end of part 8 ...hope u liked it

Luv rani.... 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#19
👏 that was really funny too! 😆 do continue if it was not your last part for your fans.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
rani i love part8 i will put it up on site...
great work keep it up..

love
pari

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