Humdard - (Penned down my thoughts)

I don't think Preeta is sticking around with Rishabh. In this case, this is what i would love to see.

Rishabh divorces Preeta, is heartbroken but apparently everyone is too busy in celebrating Karan's return. He finds himself standing alone. lonely, in pain, in the corner while his family is celebrating with PreeRan. He is happy for them but can't help feel this deep emptiness and pain in his heart. After all he is human too who has a beating heart and today his heart is bleeding. He quietly leaves without anyone noticing.

He is driving his car, no clue where he is heading, wherever the road takes him, somewhere far away from, where no one knows him, has no expectations from him, somewhere where he can be his own person without any bondage and expectations. Rishabh was lost in his thoughts and didn't see the truck approaching him, before Rishabh could react, the headlights of the truck blinded him, he moved the steering wheel and the car took a sharp right to avoid the collision but in the process headed for the cliff instead. The car fell in the cliff, Rishabh's life flashed before his eyes, His dad, mom, Karan, Preeta and then his entire family. That was the last thing Rishabh remembered.

When Rishabh opened his eyes, he found himself in a shady place. He was in a brothel. He looked around, confused and weak, he tried to get back, lost his balance and was about to fall when someone rushed to his side and held his hand. His eyes fell on the hand that was holding his hand and the bangle jhoomar in the hand (he noticed the sound (khanak) of the jhoomar)

'Aap uth gae??? Aap theek toh hai? Main abhi doctor ko call karti hoon'.

He adjusted his eyes and finally saw the face. She was beautiful, she wore a dark lipstick and her make up was not subtle at all BUT beneath that layer of foundation he could see a beautiful, innocent face. There was something about her, her eyes was so expressive, for a sec it felt as if he could peek through her eyes right into her soul. There was something so different about her, what was it? And the realisation dawned on him, SHE WAS HOLDING HIM, supporting him so that he doesn't fall. This has never happened before with him !

Rishabh Luthra, the one who had always supported others, his family, Karan, even Preeta. He was the pillar of strength for others but himself never had someone who could do the same for him BUT this time around, for the first time in his life, there was someone who was holding him, supporting him, preventing him from falling. Koi tha Rishabh ka haath thamne vala, uska saath dene vala, usse girne se bachane vala.......... (To be continued I guess)

Continue .......

Then the girl saves him . Take him to the hospital . Rishabh's car fell into the ditch with some of the belongings of Rishabh which have his blood .

The girl take Rishabh in her car , they were going to the hospital , But again their car colloid with a truck .And this time Rishabh had a major head injury . And that girl have minor injuries .

Someone took them to the hospital .

SCREEN CHANGE :

Luthras come to the cliff ( donno from where they find that its Rishabh's accident . Ignore this 🤣)

They find the car with those all belongs which force them to think that Rishabh was in car and he blasts with the car . There was not body part even . The blast is worse . They all broke down so much . ( Preeta also now feeling something loosing a huge now . She thinks that she was in love with him .

( However she was married to Karan again 😂 But firbhi she was feeling it afterall Karan thinks the worst about them .And The time nd respect which rishabh gave her forced her to think this all .)

Karan ko bhai ki maut ka dukh 😭 . They all was going but Rakhi finds a diary there . It was a rishabh's diary . He writes diary daily . So she thinks that it is his .. They then go from there

SCREEN CHANGE TO RISHABH AND GIRL

The doctor treats girl . She was treated well some injures were there . Then she asked about the guy with her ( as she doesn't know Rishabh's name ) .

Doctor says that he has a Head Injury and forgot all things about his life . You have to take care of him very carefully . So abhi ke liye kuch bhi boldo .She tells Rishabh that he is her neighbour nd his name is Rishabh but didn't named him unlike

( Nidhi gave to Karan - Arjun )

I don't want to givup his identity his name . He is Rishabh for us 😭.

Doctor says he needs rest . So girl giver him shelter to her house . The girl's house was far from that crowded city in a beautiful and soulful village where there was chirpings of birds . Rivers mountains etc .

She take him to there . Girl was living with her old grandmother.

( who was ALWAYS after girl to marry as her age is ☝️ nd she is feared that she will die soon so who will take care of her )

Abhi to vo khush ho jayengi 😁 .

As Anshvi said , She was beautiful as the heaven . Her bangles . Her natural curl hairs 💕.

( Dark lipstick exception 😂)

So as she said that R is her neighbour, to suit buit to daalega nahi vo businessman vala , girl gives him dress of her older brother ( dies 3 yrs ago , you all can make alive him if u want when continuing this story 🤣) .

That dress suits very much him .

💁🏻‍♀️Look in this dress is ahead , but after this .

SCREEN CHANGE TO LH :

Rituals of Rishabh's demise was happening without his body as they don't find any body . Rituals completed. All were broken .

NEXT DAY :

Rakhi finds that this is personal diary of Rishabh which have all rishabh's thoughts about daily routine . She asks Karan to read that diary . Karan while crying start reading that diary . This diary contain the all from childhood , but he start with here -----

How he meets with preeta , he falls in with her . He mention there that Preeta ji , don't worry dad knows about us , I will marry u if u agree to marry me ( when her marriage was cancelled and all were tensed , he also said to Srishti this )

Sudden mahesh also get his memory about those days also .

They all were shocked specially Preeran nd Rakhi Mahesh ..

So is also describes how he finds that Preeran loves each other so he gives up there . Then he start to love sherlyn but she was also vamp ........................................... all happenings till death )

Lo bhai Karan yaha pagal ho gaya .🤣

He becomes mentally unstable ( Guys mujhe isko pgl banana jaruri tha , kyuki Preeta Rishabh se pyar jo karne lagi thi , ab dobara Karan se pyar krvane k liye use karan ke pas rehna jaruri tha , or rishabh ki life se dur krne k liye bhi 😑)

So lag gye vo Karan ko thik karvane uske pagalpanti ko sehen karne . This will be going for long time ....... bcz I m not changing screen to them .

SCREEN CHANGE TO RISHABH & GIRL

So Rishah's look was like Krish that natural dress . Dark kajal in eyes , he becoms more handsomes . Long hairs . Yr dekhlena krish thik hai jyada nahi pta mujhe 😂.

The girl goes to forest , Rishabh also goes with her as he wants to see the beauty of the place . There she starts cutting woods ( chuhla suna hoga ) . So Rishabh sees that she is cutting them with very difficulty ,

He helps her . Her tied hairs open and it falls on rishabh's face . He smoothly removes them . Then catch and fall .

The girl was already lattu on him , She went from there while blushing . Rishabh sees her confusioly .

She was bubbly with close ones and simple decent with olders nd strangers

SO THIS WAS MY CONTINUE

Yaha girl ka pyar to start nahi ho skta abhi se , to aage pyar start krne ke liye kuch karvao Rishabh se 🤩

Ab aage continue karoooo 😍 .

And yesss , plz choose actress with continuing .This will help in making more interest . And also plz describe the nature of a girl also like I describe . Make changes kf u want 😀

CONTINUE _____________________

Originally posted by: anshvi

I don't think Preeta is sticking around with Rishabh. In this case, this is what i would love to see.

Rishabh divorces Preeta, is heartbroken but apparently everyone is too busy in celebrating Karan's return. He finds himself standing alone. lonely, in pain, in the corner while his family is celebrating with PreeRan. He is happy for them but can't help feel this deep emptiness and pain in his heart. After all he is human too who has a beating heart and today his heart is bleeding. He quietly leaves without anyone noticing.

He is driving his car, no clue where he is heading, wherever the road takes him, somewhere far away from, where no one knows him, has no expectations from him, somewhere where he can be his own person without any bondage and expectations. Rishabh was lost in his thoughts and didn't see the truck approaching him, before Rishabh could react, the headlights of the truck blinded him, he moved the steering wheel and the car took a sharp right to avoid the collision but in the process headed for the cliff instead. The car fell in the cliff, Rishabh's life flashed before his eyes, His dad, mom, Karan, Preeta and then his entire family. That was the last thing Rishabh remembered.

When Rishabh opened his eyes, he found himself in a shady place. He was in a brothel. He looked around, confused and weak, he tried to get back, lost his balance and was about to fall when someone rushed to his side and held his hand. His eyes fell on the hand that was holding his hand and the bangle jhoomar in the hand (he noticed the sound (khanak) of the jhoomar)

'Aap uth gae??? Aap theek toh hai? Main abhi doctor ko call karti hoon'.

He adjusted his eyes and finally saw the face. She was beautiful, she wore a dark lipstick and her make up was not subtle at all BUT beneath that layer of foundation he could see a beautiful, innocent face. There was something about her, her eyes was so expressive, for a sec it felt as if he could peek through her eyes right into her soul. There was something so different about her, what was it? And the realisation dawned on him, SHE WAS HOLDING HIM, supporting him so that he doesn't fall. This has never happened before with him !

Rishabh Luthra, the one who had always supported others, his family, Karan, even Preeta. He was the pillar of strength for others but himself never had someone who could do the same for him BUT this time around, for the first time in his life, there was someone who was holding him, supporting him, preventing him from falling. Koi tha Rishabh ka haath thamne vala, uska saath dene vala, usse girne se bachane vala.......... (To be continued I guess)

Lovely.

Someone who is just like him

His own carbon copy.

Sane, composed, sensible, supportive and caring

Originally posted by: Kriti_1

Continue .......

Then the girl saves him . Take him to the hospital . Rishabh's car fell into the ditch with some of the belongings of Rishabh which have his blood .

The girl take Rishabh in her car , they were going to the hospital , But again their car colloid with a truck .And this time Rishabh had a major head injury . And that girl have minor injuries .

Someone took them to the hospital .

SCREEN CHANGE :

Luthras come to the cliff ( donno from where they find that its Rishabh's accident . Ignore this 🤣)

They find the car with those all belongs which force them to think that Rishabh was in car and he blasts with the car . There was not body part even . The blast is worse . They all broke down so much . ( Preeta also now feeling something loosing a huge now . She thinks that she was in love with him .

( However she was married to Karan again 😂 But firbhi she was feeling it afterall Karan thinks the worst about them .And The time nd respect which rishabh gave her forced her to think this all .)

Karan ko bhai ki maut ka dukh 😭 . They all was going but Rakhi finds a diary there . It was a rishabh's diary . He writes diary daily . So she thinks that it is his .. They then go from there

SCREEN CHANGE TO RISHABH AND GIRL

The doctor treats girl . She was treated well some injures were there . Then she asked about the guy with her ( as she doesn't know Rishabh's name ) .

Doctor says that he has a Head Injury and forgot all things about his life . You have to take care of him very carefully . So abhi ke liye kuch bhi boldo .She tells Rishabh that he is her neighbour nd his name is Rishabh but didn't named him unlike

( Nidhi gave to Karan - Arjun )

I don't want to givup his identity his name . He is Rishabh for us 😭.

Doctor says he needs rest . So girl giver him shelter to her house . The girl's house was far from that crowded city in a beautiful and soulful village where there was chirpings of birds . Rivers mountains etc .

She take him to there . Girl was living with her old grandmother.

( who was ALWAYS after girl to marry as her age is ☝️ nd she is feared that she will die soon so who will take care of her )

Abhi to vo khush ho jayengi 😁 .

As Anshvi said , She was beautiful as the heaven . Her bangles . Her natural curl hairs 💕.

( Dark lipstick exception 😂)

So as she said that R is her neighbour, to suit buit to daalega nahi vo businessman vala , girl gives him dress of her older brother ( dies 3 yrs ago , you all can make alive him if u want when continuing this story 🤣) .

That dress suits very much him .

💁🏻‍♀️Look in this dress is ahead , but after this .

SCREEN CHANGE TO LH :

Rituals of Rishabh's demise was happening without his body as they don't find any body . Rituals completed. All were broken .

NEXT DAY :

Rakhi finds that this is personal diary of Rishabh which have all rishabh's thoughts about daily routine . She asks Karan to read that diary . Karan while crying start reading that diary . This diary contain the all from childhood , but he start with here -----

How he meets with preeta , he falls in with her . He mention there that Preeta ji , don't worry dad knows about us , I will marry u if u agree to marry me ( when her marriage was cancelled and all were tensed , he also said to Srishti this )

Sudden mahesh also get his memory about those days also .

They all were shocked specially Preeran nd Rakhi Mahesh ..

So is also describes how he finds that Preeran loves each other so he gives up there . Then he start to love sherlyn but she was also vamp ........................................... all happenings till death )

Lo bhai Karan yaha pagal ho gaya .🤣

He becomes mentally unstable ( Guys mujhe isko pgl banana jaruri tha , kyuki Preeta Rishabh se pyar jo karne lagi thi , ab dobara Karan se pyar krvane k liye use karan ke pas rehna jaruri tha , or rishabh ki life se dur krne k liye bhi 😑)

So lag gye vo Karan ko thik karvane uske pagalpanti ko sehen karne . This will be going for long time ....... bcz I m not changing screen to them .

SCREEN CHANGE TO RISHABH & GIRL

So Rishah's look was like Krish that natural dress . Dark kajal in eyes , he becoms more handsomes . Long hairs . Yr dekhlena krish thik hai jyada nahi pta mujhe 😂.

So girl was become lattu on his look & body

The girl goes to forest Rishabh also goes with her as he wants to see the beauty of the place . There she starts cutting woods ( chuhla suna hoga ) . So Rishabh sees that she is cutting them with very difficulty ,

He helps her . Her tied hairs open and it falls on rishabh's face . He smoothly removes them . Then catch and fall .

The girl was already lattu on him , She went from there while blushing . Rishabh sees her confusioly .

She was bubbly with close ones and simple decent with olders nd strangers

SO THIS WAS MY CONTINUE

Yaha girl ka pyar to start nahi ho skta abhi se , to aage pyar start krne ke liye kuch karvao Rishabh se 🤩

Ab aage continue karoooo 😍 .

And yesss , plz choose actress with continuing .This will help in making more interest . And also plz describe the nature of a girl also like I describe . Make changes kf u want 😀

CONTINUE _____________________

The diary part was the best😍😍

But i have a different version.

Rishab unites preeran. Rishta divorce takes place with preeran marriage rituals. Rishab driving late from work meets with deadly accident. The driver was drunk. Hit and run case.

Taken to hospital. In coma.

Rakhi finds the diary in his drawer as she was looking for his insurance docs. Then she reads it aloud to the whole family.

His feelings for preeta . Everything.

Preeta was affected. On preeran marriage day, she stepped back. Rishab woke up in hospital with memory loss

The day preeta wanted to confess her feelings to him he forgotten her

Lutra brings him home. The hospital sends a nurse to take care of him. A beautiful sober lady. Rishab gets attracted to her. I chose drashti dhammi as the actress.

Whenever rishab sees her, the bkg song plays

Tune mari entry yaar baje dil ki ghenti

Ting ting ting

Preeta sees rishab and tried to woo him instead. He gets annoyed with her. Luthras tries to patch rishta . But rishab after the nurse

Another guy also likes the girl.

Who is none other than prithvi Malhotra.

Rishab prithvi brawl for the nurse.

Preeta face off with the nurse and trying to woo rishabji.

Karan struggling between anjali and needhi

Grils by continue I meant I will probably continue it 😆

But your thoughts are interesting too I guess 😆

Originally posted by: Aniash

Lovely.

Someone who is just like him

His own carbon copy.

Sane, composed, sensible, supportive and caring

Someone like Chhavi Pandey or Drashti like u said will work.

I have pictured her as a girl who works in a brothel hence the loud make up and lipstick. Someone who is from a completely different world than Rishabh yet she holds the same values as Rishabh and that's what will make their relationship complex yet beautiful.

I can see her taking a stand for Rishabh against the whole world including his family ! Rishabh who usullay plays a shield for others, will have this girl who will become his shield and vice versa.

Originally posted by: anshvi

Grils by continue I meant I will probably continue it 😆

But your thoughts are interesting too I guess 😆

Oh Thats mean 😂 .

Originally posted by: anshvi

Grils by continue I meant I will probably continue it 😆

But your thoughts are interesting too I guess 😆

We just got excited, i guess. 🤣🤣🤣🤣

Originally posted by: anshvi

Someone like Chhavi Pandey or Drashti like u said will work.

I have pictured her as a girl who works in a brothel hence the loud make up and lipstick. Someone who is from a completely different world than Rishabh yet she holds the same values as Rishabh and that's what will make their relationship complex yet beautiful.

I can see her taking a stand for Rishabh against the whole world including his family ! Rishabh who usullay plays a shield for others, will have this girl who will become his shield and vice versa.

Drashti is an actress that suit any actor. Old or young. She's got baby face. Cute and sober. Village girl or small town type would be the best role for her. Like a nurse.

Loki and vir are missing in action today

Don't worry tmrow they will come with their continuation part as well 🤣🤣🤣

This time majority rishta in forum wants new girl for rishab.

I won't be surprised if the non active ones also join in the creativity league