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Haan Bareilly mein hi hai...😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Niraj19

This song is apt for NirLa...🤣


Nop .. not this one ...😆😆
This looks good ...😳

Dil pe patthar rakh ke
Munh pe makeup kar liya
Mere saiyyan ji se aaj
Maine breakup kar liya ...😉
Yeh to best hai...😳😆
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Part 5

Payal: Preeta!

Preeta and Karan come back to their senses...

Preeta: Haan... Ek kaam karo pehle iski chot ko clean karwa do... Bahut bleed kar raha hai aur phir x- ray karwa do... Phir pata chalega bone kitni misplace hui hai...

Payal: Theek hai...

Payal takes Kaya and Arjun too leaves leaving Preeta and Karan alone...

Preeta's cabin

Sameer: Tum kaisi ho?

Shrishti: Main theek hu aur tum?

Sameer: Tumhare bagair main kaisa ho sakta hun? Main bilkul theek nahi hun...

Tere liye.. tere liye..
Tere liye.. tere liye..

Jo main kehta hoon
Jo sunta hoon
Jo sehta hoon, tere liye..
Main girta hoon
Sambhalta hoon
Phir chalta hoon, tere liye..

Shrishti: Main di ke paas se hokar aati hun...

She leaves...

Sameer: Shrishti... Meri baat to suno... Isey kya ho gaya? Aise kyon behave kar rahi hai?

He follows her...

Shrishti while walking thinks in her mind: Sorry Sameer lekin humara ek doosre se door rehne mein hi bhalai hai...

She wipes her tears and moves towards Private ward where Preeta was checking her patients... Sameer comes behind her...

Karan: Tum Mumbai chodkar yahan kyon aa gayin?

Preeta: Karan... Vo...

Karan: Kya vo haan?

He grabs her shoulders...

Karan: Tum jaanti bhi ho ki mera... I mean sabka kya haal ho raha tha? Tumne ek baar ke liye bhi ye nahi socha ki un logon ka kya hoga jo tumhari fikr karte hain? Main kuch nahi jaanta tum abhi mere saath chalo...

He holds her hand and starts to move and suddenly Shrishti comes there...

Shrishti: Karan sir?

Karan: Haan Karan sir... Ab chal...

Shrishti: Kahan?

Sameer too enters

Karan: Vapas Mumbai...

Both Preeta and Shrishti: Hum vapas nahi jaa sakte...

Both Sameer and Karan: Kyon?

Preeta: Dekho Karan yahan patients hain jinko humari baaton ki wajah se problem ho rahi hai... Bahar canteen mein chalte hain... Is waqt wahan koi nahi hoga...

Karan: Chalo...

All four of them reach the canteen

Preeta: Vaise hum kisiko yeh baat nahi batana chahte the... Lekin lagta hai tum dono ko yeh baat batani hi padega...

Shrishti keeps her hand on Preeta's asking her from eyes whether she is sure to tell them...

Preeta closes her eyes and gives her an assuring smile...

Preeta: Tumhe yaad hai Karan us din jab tum mujhse milne aaye the aur maa ne mujhe bulaya tha...

Flashback

Sarla: Preeta zara idhar aana...

Preeta: Aayi maa...

Preeta smiles at Karan and turns to leave... She turns to see him... Karan gives her a wink as he does everytime before going... Preeta gets shocked... Karan leaves... Preeta smiles thinking of his childish antics...

She goes inside

Preeta: Haan maa... Boliye...

Sarla: Ek baat bata... Shrishti aur Sameer ke beech mein kya chal raha hai? Aaj maine Shrishti ko Sameer ki photo phone mein dekhkar muskarate huye dekha aur uss din vo usey gale laga rahi thi... Kya vo usse pyaar karti hai?

Preeta: Maa... Vo...

Shrishti enters

Shrishti: Haan maa... Main Sameer se pyaar karti hun... Lekin aage aapki marzi... Aapko mere aur Sameer ke rishte ko accept karna hai ki nahi...

Sarla: Kaisi baat kar rahi hai? Agar tujhe koi itna pasand hai vo bhi Sameer jaisa itna accha ladka to main mana kaise kar sakti hun? Teri khushi mein hi meri khushi hai... Main kal hi Rakhi ji se baat karti hun...

She keeps her hand on her cheeks... Shrishti gets happy and hugs her joined by Preeta and Dadi who gets happy seeing them...

Flashback ends

Karan: Iska matlab Shrishti aur Sameer ka rishta hone wala tha...

Shrishti and Sameer look at each other tearfully... Sameer has tears of happiness whereas Shrishti was sad and had tears in her eyes...

Preeta: Haan...

Karan: Lekin usse tumhare Mumbai chodne se kya connection hai? I mean Sarla Aunty to khush theen...

Preeta: Sab theek chal raha tha lekin phir...

Flashback

Preeta after talking to Dadi about Prithvi and Karan in Luthra House leaves early due to being called by her mom.

Arora House

Sarla is busy doing preparations not so enthutiastically...

Preeta: Kya hua maa? Yeh sab taiyaariyaan kyon?

Sarla: Preeta... vo... Shrishti ko dekhne... vo... Vo aa rahe hain... Tu Shrishti ko taiyaar kar de...

Preeta thinks it to be Sameer and Rakhi Aunty...

Preeta: Sach... Sach maa? Aap nahi jaanti main kitni khush hun... Aur Shrishti... Vo to khushi ke mare pagal ho jayegi ye sunkar... Main abhi Shrishti ko taiyaar karti hun...

She hugs her and goes to their room...

Preeta: Shrishti... Shrishti... Shrishti...

She gets excited, holds Shrishti's hands and makes her turn...

Shrishti: Oho... Ek minute! Kya hua? Itni excited kyon ho aap?

Preeta: Arey kyon excited na hun... Aakhir... Ek minute! Main tujhe kyon bataun?

Shrishti: Di bataon na... Plz, plz...

Preeta: Nah...

Shrishti starts tickling her and she finally tells her...

Shrishti: Kya Sameer aur Rakhi Aunty aa rahe hain... Yay...

She gets excited and starts jumping followed by Preeta...

Preeta makes her ready...

Preeta: Hayee... Kitni sundar lag rahi hai meri behen aur Sameer ke aane se to iske chehre par aur bhi nikhaar aa gaya hai...

Shrishti: Di...

She blushes...

Preeta: Arey... Aaj koi ladkiyon jaisa behave kar raha hai... Sharma raha hai...

Shrishti: Bas karo na di! Main already bahut nervous ho rahi hoon... Mujhe aur nervous mat karo...

Preeta: Ismein nervous hone wali kya baat hai? Tu to roz usse milti hai...

Shrishti: Aap nahi samjhoge di! Jab aapke saath aisa hoga tab aapko pata chalega... Kisi aise insaan ke saath rishta jodna jisse aap roz milte ho...

Sajdaaa...

Dadi comes and tells them that the boy and boy's family has come and they should come outside...

Preeta: Yeh Dadi ko kya ho gaya? Itni sad kyon thi? Aur inhone ladkewaley kyo bola? Sameer aur Rakhi Aunty kyon nahi?

Shrishti: Di... Aap bhi na choti-choti baaton par tention lene lagti hain... It's okay...

Preeta: Shayad tu sahi keh rahi hai... Main zyada hi soch rahi hun...

Preeta takes Shrishti outside and both are shocked to find someone else than Sameer...

Sarla: Yeh hai meri beti Shrishti...Aur Shrishti yeh hai Ashish... Tera hone wale pati...

Shrishti gets shocked listening this...

Preeta: Maa... Yeh kya keh rahin hai aap? Shrishti to Sameer se pyaar karti hai na... Aur usi se shaadi karna chahti hai phir?

Ashish's mother: Kya? Yeh kisi se pyar karti hai! Sarla ji yeh sab kya hai?

Sarla: Vo...

Ashish's father: Aisi ladki agar humare ghar ki bahu banegi to humare ghar ki kya izzat reh jayegi? Humein maaf kijiyega yeh rishta nahi ho sakta...

They leave... Ashish tries to stop them but in vain...

Sarla: Padh gaya tum dono ke dil ko chain humari beizzati karwakar...

Preeta: Yeh aap kya keh rahi hain maa? Shrishti to Sameer...

Sarla: Haan... Pata hai hai usse pyaar karti hai to... Meri marzi main jisse uski shaadi karwana chahungi karwaungi...

Shouts at them... Preeta tries to console Shrishti who was completely broken...

Shrishti: Lekin maa... Kal to aap maan gayi thi na... To ab kya hogaya?

Sarla: Vo sirf ek natak tha taaki tu aaj ladkewaalon ke saamne acche se muskarakar aaye aur unse milne ke liye raazi ho jaaye... Lekin iss Preeta ne sab kharab kar diya...

Preeta: Aapko lagta hai ki hum aapki iss baat par vishwaas karenge? Humein acche se pata hai ki aap kuch chupa rahi hain...

Sarla: Main kuch nahi chupa rahi... Aur Shrishti ko vahan shaadi karni hi padegi jahan main kahun aur aage jaakar tujhe bhi aisa hi karna hoga...

She says boldly...

Preeta: Maa... Kya aap humein betiyon ki tarah pyaar karne ka vaada bhool gayin? Kya hum aapke liye Pragya di aur Bulbul di ke tarah nahi hain?

She says with tears rolling down her eyes...

Sarla: Nahi ho... Aur na hi kabhi ho sakte ho...

She says with tears in her eyes...

Preeta: Aaj aapne saabit kar diya ki aapne kabhi humein apni betiyaan mana hi nahi... Aaj tak jo kuch bhi aapne kiya vo sirf duniya ke saamne ek dikhaawa hai... Main apni Shrishti ko aapke saamne majboor nahi hone dungi... Hum dono yahan se chale jayenge... Yeh mera aapse vaada hai... Aaj se na hum aapki betiyaan hai aur na hi aap humari maa...

Sarla gets shocked hearing everything and controls her tears...

Preeta holds Shrishti's hands and before going to the room says: Main aapke sach batane ka intezaar karungi jo aap humse chupane ki puri koshish kar rahi hain...

They go their room...

Sarla cries... Dadi who was watching all this comes and consoles her, which was noticed by Preeta making her sure of her mother lying...

Flashback ends

All four of them had tears in their eyes...

Preeta and Shrishti finally break down and cry wheras Karan and Sameer look at them tearfully and sadly... All of them wondering the reason of Sarla doing so...

Keep reading...😉

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Posted: 7 years ago
Finally Finally 👏 sach samne aa hi gaya
Amazing update
hayee Shrishmeer and Preeran moments were painful to watch 😭
This suspense is killing me what is Sarla hiding 😕
Her behavior was annoying how dare she 😡
Aree yar ab toh suspense khol do kya hai yeh raaz
Continue soon will be waiting 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiya23

Finally Finally 👏 sach samne aa hi gaya

Amazing update
hayee Shrishmeer and Preeran moments were painful to watch 😭
This suspense is killing me what is Sarla hiding 😕
Her behavior was annoying how dare she 😡
Aree yar ab toh suspense khol do kya hai yeh raaz
Continue soon will be waiting 😊

Thank you so much di!😛
Ab vo suspense khulne mein time lagega...😆
Will try to update soon...😃
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Originally posted by: HibaHusain

Thank you so much di!😛
Ab vo suspense khulne mein time lagega...😆
Will try to update soon...😃


Itni nanisaafti apni di ke saath 😭
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Posted: 7 years ago
Sarla is an inteligent women, 😆😆 and i'm sure she got a valid reason .. ..😉
Btw fabulous update ...😊
Waiting for the next 😊


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Posted: 7 years ago
Senior yeh aapne suspense disclose kiya hai ya badaya hai ? Itna suspense...Why did sarla do this?
Anyways lovely update
All the dialogues were lovely
Now samishti know about their love for each other without confessing
Perfect !you know very well how to make your readers curious and hooked to your ff
Keep smiling🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiya23


Itni nanisaafti apni di ke saath 😭

Meri di bhi mere saath bahut nainsaafi karti hain...😭
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Niraj19

Sarla is an inteligent women, 😆😆 and i'm sure she got a valid reason .. ..😉

Btw fabulous update ...😊
Waiting for the next 😊


Thanks Niraj Bhai!
Of course she is an intelligent woman... Tabhi to she fell in love with you and we got our NirLa...😳😆
But stupid too... Samajhti hi nahi ki you have moved on... 😆
Will try to update soon...😛

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