ff-pyara rishta**coming soon**note pg28 - Page 7

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 5
wht is happening

Its early morning
veena is seeing tht all preparations go well
she is getting ready and also going to wake up su

v- su get up ut abhi der ho jayengi jaldi kar chal
su gets up from his bed and sits up he is not in the mood to get up

he is very sleepy
his mom comes to him

su keeps his head on her lap and closes his eyes

v-su kya kar rahe ho dher ho jayengi

su-hmm

v-chal jaldi kar abhi tayaar ho jaa aur jaldi se

su-hmm

v-kya huwa su tumne hi haa kaha tha naa

su-ha maa lekin mujhe ajeeb lag raha hai mujhe pata nahi

v-aisa hi hota hai beta sab ke saath ab chal jaldi kar

su-thik hai maa

he gets up and goes to the washroom to get ready
veena comes to dada dadi to see if they are ready

after sometime su comes out of his room

he comes in the hall and sees tht his family is ready and are waiting for him
seeing su coming in the hall all get up and are ready to go to start a new relationship

In the sharma's house raj and priya are busy seeing the preparations and are making sure that all the work is done properly and they can welcome the wadhwa's properly
raj tells priya to go and see tht tanvi is ready or not

priya goes to tanvi's room and sees tht tanvi is talking to someone on the phone
as tanvi sees priya entering the phone she closes the phone
priya comes to tanvi

p-tanvi yeh kya abhi tak tayaar nahi hoye hai aur kisse phone pe baat kar rahi thi

t-arey maa main woh hmm

p-bata naa

t-kk ha kk se baat kar rahi thi main abhi tayaar ho jaati hu

p-thik hai aur accha huya tune kk se baat karli usse bhi batana tha chal mera ek aur kaam kam ho gaya

tanvi smiles
t-thik hai maa aap bhar ka kaam dekho main abhi tayaar ho kar aati hu

when priya reaches the door the residence phone starts ringing
priya is near to the phone so she picks it up

p-hello

p-arey kk tu abhi tune tanvi se baat ki thi naa

kk-tanvi se

tanvi hears this and comes and takes the phone from her mom
t- maa aap ko bahot kaam hai naa jaa kar kaam dekhiye main kk se pooch leti ho kya
kaam hai usko

p-are ha kk ko kehna jaldi aa jaye

t- jee

priya goes away and tanvi talks to kk
t-kk

kk-dii yeh kya keh rahi thi maa

t-kk woh actually main aapne hmm woh actually meri sab dost mera majak oda rahe the tohmaine maa se keh diya mein tere se baat kar rahi thi woh kya hai naa maa bhi fir shuru ho jayengi

kk-thik haa baba acha all the best mere hone wale jiju se ache se baat karna aur jaise engagement ka din ya fir shaadi ki date fix ho jaye mujhe bata dena aur mere bina kuch bhi decide mat karna

tanvi-thik hai meri maa lekin tu aa kab rahi hai

kk-3 din mein meri flight hai

t-thik hai jaldi aa jaa teri bahot yaad aa rahi hai

kk-hai aa jaongi chal abhi jaldi se tayaar ho jaa mujhe pata hai dii app abhi tak tayyar nahi hoye hogi

t(giggles)-ha sahi kaha chal bye

kk-bye

after sometime the sharma's are ready to welcome the wadhwa's
the whole family of wadhwa's reach the sharma house

su isnt happy but he knows tht he has told his mom abt this and he cant understand why isnt he happy cause he doesnt liek anyone but still he feels as

if this isnt right
something is wrong
something is happening which shouldnt happen and which is not right

he puts a fake smile on his face and along with all walks towards the sharma's house

Edited by panjwani - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#62
Great, Ambreen aur muje woh Tanvi ki baato se kuch gadbad lag rahi hai ho naa ho daal me kuch kaala hai. Shayad itni story se aage ka part mere dimag e aa gaya hai. Magar tumhara likhne ka tarika bahot accha hai to padne me bahot mazaa aa raha hai. Get going.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#63
hey Ambreen good part cont soon plzz
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Posted: 17 years ago
#64
Sweet one ambreen.... continue soon bachcha.... lets see aage kya hoga??? ๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awesome Ambreen di... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Galat toh lagega hi buddhu sumit...tu kumkum ki jagah uski behen se takra raha hai.. ๐Ÿ˜†

But i have a suggestion di... ๐Ÿ˜ณ ..pls pls pls either give space for words or write in bold...yeh isiliye...coz my eyes r weak..i feel uncomfortable in staring at the screen for so long..(maybe thats coz my specs r not with me..) ๐Ÿ˜ณ if u pls pls pls take care of that..it will help me..
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Posted: 17 years ago
#66
superb dear ๐Ÿ‘ continue soon and pls kk aur su ko amne samne to ano ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 17 years ago
#67
hiii ambreen...nice part dear...hmmm lagta hai tanvi kuch gadbad karne wali hai...
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Posted: 17 years ago
#68
i just love the way Su has some sort of unhappy feelings.........which is good.......
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Posted: 17 years ago
#69
Very nice part Ambreen ๐Ÿ˜Š ...i wonder what Tanvi is upto..but whatever it is...hopefully it stops the marriage ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ..can't wait till SuKk meet again ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ...this is going really awesome ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 17 years ago
#70
ambreena such sweet part abb kk ko zaldi ana hoga ๐Ÿ˜†

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