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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part-4
**Some strange feelings **

Veena reaches home in a cheerful mood she is very happy tht she has found her bahu

she is sure tht tanvi will be a girl with good values since she is priya's daughter

she came home and told dada and dadi abt it

they were also very happy and were sure abt veenas choice

su came home tht day late as he was working on a important project
as he entered he saw his mom waiting for him

su- arey maa maine phone kareke kaha tha naa ke mera intezaar mat karna

v- ha kaha tha lekin main tere ko kuch kehna chahti thi

su- kaho

v- tu jakar change kar kahan laga ti hu phir batati hu

su-thik hai

su changes his clothes and comes out and sits on the dinning table

v- main aaj apni ek college ki dost se mili aur tere liye uski beti ka haath manga hai aur kal humhe jaana hai unke ghar

su- maa itni jaldi kya hai

v-kaise nahi hai mujhe bahot hai

su-thik hai aur kuch

v-kal tum tayaar rahena aur office mat jana

su-thik hai maa

su finishes his food and goes to his room

he goes in the balcony and sees the stars

he doesnt know why but he is having a odd feeling in his heart
he was always ready abt this
he always told his mom tht he is ready to marry the girl she chooses for him
then why now he is feeling this way as if he is not happy
why
he doesnt get any answer so he thinks maybe every boy gets this feeling
when he is abtto enter his new phase in his life

keeping these thoughts away from his mind and thinking tht maybe it happens with everyone he goes to sleep


after meeting veena at the mandir priya is very happy
getting a proposal from a family which is well valued wht else she wanted
she didnt care abt money but she knew tht her daughter will be happy
she was happy for her daughter
she goes to her house and tells her husband raj abt it
raj is also happy abt it

whtelse a father wannts then his daughter getting a good proposal

tanvi comes home after some time
she sees her parent waiting for her in the hall
she asks them wht happened

her mom informs her abt the proposal she got
tanvi becomes very happy because they are rich people
she is happy tht she will go into a famiyl who are wealthy enough to fulfil her wishes

t-maa mujhe koi problem nahi hai aap mere liye sab acha hi chahige

p-khush reh aur wo log kal aa rahe hai isliye tu ghar par rehna

t-ji

p-main abhi saara kam sambhalti ho


Here kk will be returning after soem days she is happy tht at last after

2 long yrs she will be coming back to her family

she is standing in the balcony and has a smile on her face

in this place she always felt strange

her house is the place she always wants to be
she is happy tht soon the day will come when she will return home

the place she is staying now is beautiful everyone says tht they want to come to visit this place once atleast but she knows how this place is strange it doesnt feel as if it a place she wants to stay

she feels very strange here and always waited for these years to end soon

all her friends are very happy here they dont want to go back they all want to stay there for ever but kumkum she was a different girl she always respected her roots for her ,her house is the place she wants to live

she remembered how tanvi used to tell her tht when she will marry she will have to leave this house but kk told her father tht she wants a ghar jamai and her parents had laughed

this thought made kumkum smile with this smile on her face she went to sleep waiting to return abck tot her family
Edited by panjwani - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#52
Fantastic Ambreen ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ abhi proposal has come for the elder sis & Su will fall in love with younger sis!! ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 17 years ago
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fantatic ambreena
abb aga kya hoga
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54
gr8 going dear... ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ .cont soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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coollllll part please contuied soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey panjwani i just read all the part it's fabulous.
Hope they will meet soon, hmmm kawab mein hadi to hai lekin itni achi writer hai to kawab mein se hadi bhi nikal jayeghi,right?


kashish
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wow Ambreen ๐Ÿ‘ ...this is going greatttttttt so far...ab jaldi likhna...am tooo excited...can't wait for the next part ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š Fabulous, Fantastic ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
Edited by SuKk_forever - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sab raaz ek ek karke khulenge..woweee....didi jaldi likhna... ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Nice part............i like the way u have written about Sukk's feelings...........that's a good start.....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks will continue

Originally posted by: janu_kumkumjuhi

Great,fine. Continue soon.



thanks well lets see ๐Ÿ˜‰

Originally posted by: Rah_HuJu

Fantastic Ambreen abhi proposal has come for the elder sis & Su will fall in love with younger sis!!



thanks

Originally posted by: preethi

fantatic ambreena
abb aga kya hoga



thanks will continue

Originally posted by: sweetpoorvi

gr8 going dear... .cont soon.



thanks will continue

Originally posted by: Shafoo

coollllll part please contuied soon



thanks

Originally posted by: Irika

nice part cont soon



thanks alot and my name is mabreen u can call me tht

Originally posted by: kashishk

hey panjwani i just read all the part it's fabulous.
Hope they will meet soon, hmmm kawab mein hadi to hai lekin itni achi writer hai to kawab mein se hadi bhi nikal jayeghi,right?


kashish



thanks alot will continue

Originally posted by: SuKk_forever

Wow Ambreen ...this is going greatttttttt so far...ab jaldi likhna...am tooo excited...can't wait for the next part Fabulous, Fantastic



thank u ya ill continue

Originally posted by: sumitwadhwa

Sab raaz ek ek karke khulenge..woweee....didi jaldi likhna...



thank u

Originally posted by: Pearl29

Nice part............i like the way u have written about Sukk's feelings...........that's a good start.....

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