FF-Hadsa THE END pg-63 *24.8.08* - Page 10

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Posted: 17 years ago
#91
Very gud part..... sachchi mujhe is part ki Sukk chemistry bohut achchi lagii 😃 😃

Hats Off..... 👏 👏 👏

Esp., jab Kumkum takes care of Sumit, as a friend....

aur ye Kumkum..... koi prank nahi I think there's something serious.... haan Jatin prank kare... ho sakta hai 😉 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#92
Sonu jaldi likhna...even now I wanna know whether its a prank or no 😳 ...

Good part waise 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#93
dhak even resh want to listen abb zaldhi sa nextpart 😆
par su ka engagment 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
#94
@ Roku-thankQ buddy!!..yup will write in a few moments... 😳

@ ambreen di-abhi pata chal jaayega... 😳

@ Seema di-itni jaldi buddhu ban gaye?...I old u na the story is gonna end soon...toh bas kuch aisa hi samjho... 😳 😉

@ Meri pyaari Verni di-u r the only intelligent one here... 😆

@ Reshu di-haan haaan..m writing...n ThanQ 😳

@ Preeti di-dont cry..m writing.. 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#95
Sumit takes the next flight to leave for australia and anjali doesn't seem to be pleased with his idea...

Anjali-u know her na?..kiss tarah ki hai wo?.. 😳 Dekhna..phir se koi prank hi hoga uska... 😳

Sumit-Anju..its not that.. 😳 mujhe nahin lagta hai ki wo iss tarah ka prank karegi ...In fact, usne mujhe call nahin kiya...even to congratulate... 😕

Anjali-sumit..wo meri dost hai...par pata nahin kyun...mujhe aisa lagta hai ki woh hamari shaadi ko lekar khush nahin hai..wo hamare beech aana chahti hai... 😡

Sumit-SHUT UP ANJALI!!! 👏

Anjali stares at him... 😆

Sumit-uss ladki ne tumhaare liye kitna kuch kiya hai....ab abhi wo hum dono ke liye Australia mein notes prepare kar rahi hogi aur tum?.......How can u be so ungrateful?.. 😳

And they have a tiff...Both of them remain silent during the entire flight... 😭
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Sumit and anjali reach sumit's home and find Jatin and some friends at the door... 😕

Jatin-sumit..tu aa gaya..ab dekh...

Sumit-mere paas doosri chaabhi hai..I'll see...yaar tum log jao..Jatin aur hum dono sambhal lenge.. 😳

They open the door and are horrified... 😕

The entire house is luking as if a storm has come... 😕

Even the sofa has been tumbled down, there are clothes everywhere....the tubelights are broken and there's even blood spilled on the floor...anjali gets scared and holds Sumit's hand..Sumit puts an arm around her.. 😳

The sight is blood-curdling..There is some eerie feeling in the air...Sumit and anjali move forward, followed by Jatin... 😕

Every inch of the house has been tampered with...as if it has been an evidence of a battle between some people...a gruell.. 😕

Sumit calls out for Kumkum...

Su-Kk?...kumkum?....KUMKUM?...

But no answer comes...

Anjali-Sumit..wo shaayad apne kamre mein hogi...upar chalo..

Sumit-haan..chalo..jaldi...

Thhey all rush to Kumkum's room and find it locked from inside... 😕

Sumit bangs the door..."kumkum...darwaaza kholo...KUMKUM!!!!...opn the door...kumkum?..." 😳

She is there but she doesn't open the door... 😕 Sumit uses the master key and opens the door...

All three of them are horror-struck...It seems as if the ground has shaken under Sumit's feet..anjali gives out a cry...Jatin doesn't know what to do...

Their legs freeze at the spot and they don't know what can be done know...But, sumit runs to her... 😳

He sits near her and hugs her tightly ...as if the world is about to end.... 😭

She pushes him away... 😭

Sumit removes his shirt and makes her wear it as her kurta is torn and she's covering herself by stretching it on her body...Her bare legs have scratches and blood clots... 😭

They all understand what has happened in their absence... 😭 As Sumit moves closer to her, she tightly closes her eyes and battles against his approach..

Kk-nahin..tum ...nahin....SUMIT?...SUMIT please ...HELP ME...nahin...nahin....BHAIYYA!!!!... 😭

Sumit hugs her very tightly despie her resistence..

Su-main aa gaya hun kk... 😭

She moves away and luks at him..tears flow down her eyes... 😭

She still pushes him away... 😭

Kk-nahin...tum..tum bhi mat chuo mujhe...nahin...mujhe mat chuo... 😭

Anjali takes charge and goes near her, caressing her back... 😭

Anjali-kk?..(in tears)..tu..tu..dekh..?.

But Kumkum crawls away from her also.. 😭

Kk-nahin..mujhe haath mat lagao..main..main apavitra hun..nahin..maine paap...nahin mujhe mat chuo...tum...jao..main..nahin... 😭

Sumit goes near her and holds her hand and hugs her, caressing her hair.. 😭

Su-kuch nahin kiya hai tumne..tumhaari koi galati nahin hai ismein kk...I..I am sorry... 😭

Tears flow down his eyes also... 😭 and he hides her face in his embrace...Anjali too, hugs her from the other side and Jatin looks at the pitiful site... 😭

Jatin-Sumit?...kumkum is unconscious...wo behosh hai.. 😭

He luks at her face..and then, takes her to his room...Anjali and Jatin clean up the mess and call a 5th year friend of theirs..
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Posted: 17 years ago
#96
hilla kk ka saath 😭 😭 😭
abb kya hoga 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
#97
Oh god when i read this types of this na feel like kay kahu....I know the story...But u have written it outstandingly....Must say Superbly written....Really hats off to u buddy...👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#98
oye!!ya kya hogya... tu kya horror ff likhne ki taiyyari me hai??? 😆 😆 😆
well...jo bhi ho..but it ws intersting 😃 😃
continue soon 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#99
Tune KK ke saath ye kya kiya.
By the way it was nice.
Maine aj do parts saath mein padhe, tune kad update kiya pata hi nahi chala.
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Posted: 17 years ago
😭 😭 kk ke saath ye kyun kiya
hope she is back to normal soon
continue soon

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