FF-Hadsa THE END pg-63 *24.8.08* - Page 11

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Posted: 17 years ago
@ Preeti Di-thanQ...ye haadsa pre-planed tha...

@ roku-thanks buddy

@ Jasmine-Thanks

@ Raina-it had to be done..thats y named it haadsa na..

@ ambreen di-iss baar nahin predict kar payin bacchoo?..
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Posted: 17 years ago
I was guessing it right 😳 ...

nways wd love to c how u take story fwd now frm here 😳 ...

good job 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
Reshu maine bhi yahi socha tha.... sachchi... 😳

Hope Sumit can Give her strenghth.... I won't say support... 😊 😊

Support to Kumkum ko khud ka hi banna hogaaaaa 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
oh no 😭 😭 bechaari KK 😭 😭 Sonu tune tho aaj rulaa diya 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
itss nicee part who did this to kumkum she feel scred for what happend to her
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Posted: 17 years ago
@ reshu di-thankQ...ok here i am.. 😳

@ Verni di-u r intelligent.. 😉

@ Rahi di-mat ro na.... 😆

@ Shafoo-ThanQ
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Posted: 17 years ago
Tanya, Kumkum and Sumit's final year friend is checking Kumkum while all of them are outside...All 3 are silent and Anjali is sobbing...Sumit too has tears in his eyes... 😭

Tanya comes out of the room..

Tanya-Sumit?..please can u come inside for a few minutes?..I need to talk to you.. 😕

Sumit-haan tani... 😳

Sumit gets inside the room and is tensed...

Tanya-sumit?..she's been....do u know?...she'd been..

Sumit looks down.."raped..." 😭

Tanya-Sumit...ye sab?...kaise?...kya?..I mean.. 😭

Sumit tells her in brief about it.. 😭

Tanya-Tu hospital kyun nahin le gaya ise?..

Sumit-tani..hospital se baat aage failegi...aur..main nahin chahta aisa kuch.. 😳

Tanya-..hmm...theek hai...Sumit u'll have to support her...she'll be mentally disturbd...use sambhalna hoga..

Sumit-jaanta hun..par Tani..she's all right?..uski tabiyat?...

Tanya-Neither she has eaten anything since last 4-5 days and nor she has slept...usne bas uthe rehne ki koshish ki hogi...kamzor hai wo...maine injections diye hain...8-10 ghante wo soyegi...par uthte hi...use kuch khilakar medecines de dena..

Sumit-hmm..I'll take care.. 😳

Tanya-dressing bhi ho gayi hai...main chalti hun..
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Sumit and Anjali enter the room with dinner..Kumkum is sitting on the bed, crying pathetically...

Sumit takes the food from Anjali and both of them sit near her..

Su-kumkum?...chalo...khana kha lo...phir medicines logi... 😳

She's simply crying.. 😭

Anjali-main khilati hun Sumit...Kumkum...dekh tera favorite hain sab kuch..even soup bhi...aur tu fikr mat kar...ye Sumit ne nahin banaya hai..its edible.. 😳

Kk-su..sumit...main...bas...bas 3 din de do aur...main...main room khaali kar ke chali jaoongi...i swear..

Su-kk?..ye kya keh rahi ho tum?... 😳

Kk-haan..main chod dungi ghar bas.. 😭

Su-kyun chodogi tum ghar?..hmm?..

Kk-tum mujhe yahaan mat rakho ab....sumit..main..main iss laayak nahn hun..main...mera...unn logon ne..sumit..

She breaks down into tears and Anjali hugs her... 😳

Sumit caresses her hair...

Su-kk...tum kahin nahin jaaogi..naa mujhe jaanna hai naa tumhe mujhse kuch kehne ki zarurat hai...jo hua...wo sirf ek haadsa tha...usse zyaada kuch nahin...theek hai?.. 😳

Anjali-5 logon ke alaawa koi aur ye baat kabhie nahin jaan sakega...tu bilkul pareshaan mat ho..hmm...

Sumit-ab khana itna bhi bura nahin hai ki tum khao hi na...chalo..main aur anjali khilaayenge tumhe..hmm?... 😳

Both of them feed her and put her to sleep.. 😳
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Anjali-main chaloon?..

Sumit-hmm...goodnight.. 😳

Anjali-Sumit...pls use raat mein akele mat chodna...wo waise hi bahut sehem gayi hai...aise mein.. 😳

Sumit-hmm...main aaj sofe par shift ho jaaoonga.. 😳

Anjali-hmm..bye..

And she leaves...
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As he goes to be with Kumkum, he finds her in a state of discomfort...She's perspiring and is crying badly..

Kk-nahin...ab nahin...nahin.. 😭

Sumit rushes and sits besides her, caressing her hair.. 😳

Su-kk?..kkya hua?... 😕

She starts narrating the scene which had been torturing her mind...

Kk-wo..teen...teen aadmi they.. 😭 ..wo..unhone...phine par..par notes ke liye...college...bulaaya..aur...bahar...unhone mujhe...wo..pakad kar..wo.kamre... 😭 wo..Sumit...wo unhone..mere saath...sumit wo.. 😭

Sumit puts his hand on her lips and lets her cry for sometime...He hugs her... 😳

Su-sambhalo apne aap ko kk.. 😳 aur darna bilkul mat..ab toh main hun na..hmm?...koi kuch nahin karega..hmm?... 😳

As he sedates her, she falls asleep in his arms... 😭 😳

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Next morning, anjali comes to help Sumit...

Anjali-raat ko tabiyat kaisi thi?.. 😳

Sumit-bahut darr gayi thi..aur wo haadsa dohraane lagi.. 😭

Anjali-darr toh gayi hi hogi...abhi uthi hai?..

Sumit-so rahi hai...

Anjali-Sumit main kal soch rahi thi...ki hamari shaadi mein iss baar hum Kumkum ko bhi saath le jayenge.. 😳

Sumit-shaadi?...anjali?...uski haalat dekhi hai?..No, I've decided ki hum ye shaadi postpone kar denge.. 👏 😉

Anjali looks at him aghast...
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Posted: 17 years ago
hi.. 😊
wow a great part ya 👏 👏
ok...so this was the haadsa??or still some more haadsaas left??? 🤔 😲
arre waah yaar sumit ne shaadi cancel kardi!! 👏 that gr8...
bechari kumkum 😭 😭 😭 hope she gets well soon.. 😊
do continue soon.. 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
loved this part...its going exactly it needs to be 😳 ...

keep it up sonu..m writng frm univ... 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
😭 😭 poor kk
good tht su cancelled the marriage
now anjali will be angry
continue soon

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