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Thanks a lot, guys. Aapne is tu Mile Dil Khile ke safar me mera bahot sath diya, is kahani ko mod dene me aapka sabse bada hath tha,Ambreen,Seema Gandhi, Nitya (preethi), jjthomson (Krishna), Saikatbhaiyaa, surkshitaji, aditidi, rah_akki, ankitaji,verniji,hafsa_12,juhimerijaan,luvhussain kain log, muje maaf kar dijiyega agar koi naam reh jaaye to aur haan meri ye ff dekhnewale nami-anami sab log, jisme main to sirf kuch logo hi pehchanti hoon, baki ko nahi magar ap sabhi ka the dil se shukriyada karti hoon, aap ki wajah se main is mukam tak pahonch payi hoon, ab tak ke is ff ke darshak 12000 se upar hai aur ye mere liye bahot bahot zyada khushi ki bat hai aur ye sab aap ke bina mumkin nahi, aap hai to ye kahani hai, main hoon aur hum hai to hi sab kuch hai. Isi tarah muje support karte rahiyega, aap log shayad nahi jante magar main kuch isi tarah ki serial Juhiji ko sath lekar banana chahti hoon, nahi janti ki ye sapna haqeeqat banega yaa sapna hi reh jaayega magar yahan likhkar muje poora satisfaction mila hai. Thanks aur haan is safar ke dauran agar koi galti ho gayi ho to muje maaf kar dijiyega. Main janti hoon ki is kahani ko dekhnewale kain ko main nahi janti, magar who chahe to muje jaan sakte hai, main un sabse baat karma chahti hoon aur uska tarika to aap jante hi hai, yahan ff me yaa phir pm karke aap mujse mil sakte hai, main aap sabko apna dost banana chahti hoon aur haan chand log roz comments dete hai, unka naam ka zikr maine kiya hai magar main chahti hoon ki aap sab jo dekh rahe hai who sab comments kare kyonki usse mere ko pata chalta hai ki kahani aap ko pasand hai aise mod par jaa rahi hai yaa nahi, main aap ke hisabse ye kahani aage badhna chahti hoon aur plz uske liye comments dijiye, maafi agar kuch galat kaha ho to. Thanks, thanks thanks……………………………

45 minutes jaa chuke hai, Kumkum ke khatra abhi talaa nahi hai, aur is ek ghnte me usse hosh me aana hoga magar kya Kumkum hosh me aayegi, jo 45min. me nahi huva who keval 15 min ke andar hoga, Sumit ka pyar Kumkum ko vapas lene ke kamyab rahega? Hum to chliye dekhte hai ki aakhir kya huva??????????????????????????

Sumit Kumkum ki yado me ghira huva hota hai, uki samaj e nahi aa raha hota hai ki who kya kare, pona ghanta nikal jaata hai aura b Sumit ki aankho se aansoo ki dharaye nikalne lagti hai, who apne man me bhagvan se prarthna karta hai,

Sumit:(Man me) Hey, bhagvaan. Aisa koun sa gunah kiya hai humne ki aisi saza de raha hai, Kumkum to galti bhi nahi karti to who to gunah kar hi nahi sakti magar main nahi janta phir bhi mujse gunah huva ho to do hath jodkar tuje uske liye mafi mangta hoon aur uski saza tu muje de meri patni ko nahi, who har kadam par mere liye kurban hoti rahi, aaj muje nahi to uska mere prati jo pyar hai use hi jitvde, who kehti hai ki agar sacchi shitat se prarthna ki jaaye to who khali nahi jaati, meri patni ko hosh me lao bhagvaan, hey murlidhari tune bhi to Radha se pyar kiya tha aur tere Mathura chale jaane ke baad tere jane ke dukh me jab Radha bimar ho gayi thi to tu bhi to ek vaid banker Radha ko bachane aaya tha, maine meri Kumkum ko apne aap se zyada chaha hai, iski gavahi khud kudart deti hai to phir kyon usse mujse jooda kar raha hai, hey bhagvaa usse mere paas bhejde, uske bina main nahi jioonga aur yahi tere kadmo me tera dam tod doonga, aur agar aaj koi chamtkar nahi huva to hum sabka tere me jo vishvaas hai who chala jaayega. Ab faisla tere hath me hai.

Aisa kehkar Sumit diye ki low apne hath me le leta hai. Ye dekhkar

Diya: Ye kya Sumit?

Aarti: Haan, tum ye kya karne jaa rahe ho?

Raj: Aaj usse mat rokiye. Aur hum sab prarthna karte hai ki uske pyar ki jeet ho.

Sab log aarti karte hai, aur aarti bajti hai

(Vasudevasutam devam kanscharun mardanam, devaki parmanandam krishnamvande jagatgurum.
Jai kana kala prabhu natvar nandlala,
Mithi morliwala, gopi naa pyara,
Om jai kana kala.)

Sumit diye ki low ko apne hath me rakhkar aarti karta hai aur tabhi uska hath koi pakadta hai aur usse dekhta hai aur bahot bahot khush ho jaata hai. Aur who aur koi nahi Kumkum hoti hai.

Sumit: Kumkum, tum.

Kumkum: Haan, Sumit.

Kumkum diye ki low diye me rakh deti hai aur dono ekdoosre ko gale lagte hai, Sabki aankhe khushi ke aansooo se bhar jaati hai,

Thodi der baad

Sumit: Hey, bhagvaa tera lakh lakh shukr hai, tune aaj sabit kar diya ki hamara pyar saccha hai.

Kumkum: Sumit, ab tum apna hath muje do, main kuch lagati hoon, tumhara hath jal gaya hai.

Sumit apna hath deta hai aur

Sumit: Kumkum, is hath ko agar ek bar tum chhu logi to turant ye thik ho jaayega, kisi marham ki zaroorat nahi hai.

Jeet: Ab Mrs.Wadhwa aap apna checkup karva lijiye.

Kumkum: nahi, Dr. Ab iski koi zaroorat nahi hai, mere Sumit ki prarthna ki wajah se main yahan aapke samne hoon usse zyada or kya chahiye.

Aarti: thik hai, aap jaisa kahe. Magar aap janti hai ki aap ke pati.

Kumkum:(Bich me rokkar) Aap yahin kehna chahti hai naa ki mere pati mujse kitna pyar karte hai?

Aarti: Haan.

Kumkum: Janti hoon, inke pyar ko mujse behtar koun pehchan sakta hai? Aaj meri ye zindagi inhi ki den hai. Sab pati ko parmeshwar kehte hai magar mera pati mere liye khud bhagvaan hi hai.

Sumit: Kya Kumkum tum bhi.

Kumkum: Nahi Sumit, jo sach hai usse hum joothla nahi sakte aur sach yahin hai kit um mere bhagvaan ho.

Diya: Thik hai, chalo. Ab khana lagvati hoon aur dinner le lete hai.

Sab dinnig table par aate hai, sab dinner lee hai aur sab khush hote hai aur Jeet aur AArti chalte hai aur tab Kumkum andar jaati hai to akele Sumit ko

Jeet: Ye Kumkum ki reports hai Mr.Wadhwa.

Aarti: Sumit, ye sach ko tumhe manna hoga ki Kumkum maa nahi ban sakti.

Sumit: Ji Dr. Agar Kumkum mere sath hai to muje koi shikayat nahi ki muje baccha nahi hai aur aap chinta mat kijiye main usko sambhal loonga.

Aarti: Haan, agar koi chamatkar ho to possible hai.

Jeet: Magar ye baat aap ab mat bataiyega varna sadma bhi lag sakta hai.

Sumit: thik hai, Thanks Dr.

Jeet: Bye.

Sumit: Good Bye.

Aur Sumit Kumkum ke paas aata hai aur Kumkum uske pairo ki aahat se usse pehchan jaati hai.

Kumkum: Sumit.

Sumit: Tumhe kaise pata chala?

Kumkum: Tum mere karib aate ho vaise hi mere dil ki dhadkan badh jaati hai is tarah tumhri pairo ki aahat se.

Kumkum Sumit dono bed par baithte hai aur tab

Sumit: Jnati ho Kumkum. Ab sab…………..

Kumkum Sumit ke mooh par hath rakh deti hai

Kumkum: Shhhhhhhhhhhhh.

Kumkum Sumit ko phir se gale lag jati hai, aur Sumit bhi uske apne sine se lagata hai , dono tight hug karte hai.

Kumkum: Sumit, aaj kuch mat kaho, bas mere itne karib mere paas aise hi raho, aaj hum nahi hamari khamoshi baat karegi, hamari aankho ko bolne do, dil ki dhadkan ko aawaz banakar sanso ki khushbu se apne pyar ko mehakne do.

Sumit: Kumkum.

Kumkum: Haan, Sumit. Jante ho jab maut paas thi tab ye ehsas huva ki kab kya ho jaaye kuch pata nahi chalta to hum aaj to jile.

Aisa kehkar Kumkum Sumit ke galo ko chumti hai aur phir Sumit Kumkum ke chehre par kiss karta hai, dono ekdoosre ke pyar me doob jaate hai aur light band ho jaati hai.

To be continued…………………………….
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wow lovely part, do continue fast
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great
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great one janu.
kk is fine 😳 .now cont
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Shukr hai ki Kumkum thik ho gayi, aakhir Sumit ki duva Kumkum ki zindagi bacha le aayi, magar who ab maa nahi ban sakti, kya hoga jab ye baat Kumkum ko pata chalegi? Kya guzregi uske dil par jab is sach ka samna hoga? Kya Sumit Kumkum ke pyar ki nishani ab kabhi sanse nahi le paayegi? Chaliye zyada sochte nahi un dono ke paas hi chale jaate hai……………………..

Kumkum-Sumit dono us hadse se bahar nikalte hai aur doosre din subah dono taiyar hokar eksath chai pite hai tab

Kumkum: Sumit, maine tumse kaha tha…….

Bich me rokkar

Sumit: main janta hoon kit um India vapas jaane ke bare me kahogi.

Kumkum: Nahi, Sumit. Main ye kehna chahti hoon ki abhi bhi tumhari aur meri halat aisi hai ki hum dono ke ye bahari ghaav dekhke gharwalo ke hosh ud jaayenge. Is hadse ke androni zakhm to hum dono aapas me bantkar sulja sakte hai magar jab tak ye bahar ke ghaav nahi bhare tab tak hum yahan rook jaaye taki gharwale pareshaan naa ho. Aur baad me ghar ja kar sab bata denge magar ab batana bahot khatarnak sabit ho sakta hai, Dadaji, dadima, mummyji, daddyji, sab bahot fikr karenge aur hum bhi to wahan nahi hai to.

Sumit: (Apne man me) Kumkum, shayad is hadse ke ghaav kabhi bhar nahi sakte kyonki isse jo huva hai usse tumhare, mere aur hum sabke sapne chaknachur ho gaye hai? Kaise bataoo tumko ki isse, khair jab tak tum poori tarah thik nahi ho jaati tab tak to ye baat main tumhe nahi bata sakta aur muje koi afsos nahi kit um kabhi mere bacche ki maa nahi ban sakti kyonki tum sirf meri jeevansathi nahi balki jab bhi zid karti ho, soti ho to bacche ki tarah hi hoti ho to muje zaroorat nahi hai aur rahi baat gharwalo ki to ye sab sunkar muje yakin hai ki who bhi mera aur tumhara sath denge.

Sumit ko yun khayalo me dekh Kumkum uska hath pakadkar use hilakar

Kumkum: Sumit, Sumit……..

Sumit: Hum, Hummm…

Kumkum: Kahan kho gaye?

Sumit: Who bas yunhi.

Kumkum: Tumne suna maine kya kaha.

Sumit: Haan.

Kumkum: To phir kya kehna hai is bare me tumhara aur aisi koun si soch me doob gye.

Sumit: Sach me Kumkum itna kuch hone ke bavjood tum gharwalo ke bare me I mean tum, sachmuch main bahot bahot khushnasib hoon jot um muje mili.

Kumkum: Nahi, nahi Sumit. Khushnasib main hoon ki mere sath itna kuch ho gaya aur phir bhi tumne mera sath nahi chhoda, har kadam par mera sath diya. Agar tum naa hote to aaj meri izzat

Sumit Kumkum ki mooh par apna hath rakhkar apna chehra hilakar naa bolta hai

Sumit: Nahi, Kumkum. Usse ab yaad mat kro aur vaise bhi tumhara koi kusur bhi nahi tha aur tumhare sath aisa kuch nahi huva jisse tumhe koi anch aaye aur vaise bhi ab main bhagvaan se prarthna karoonga ki ab job hi musibat aaaye who muje mile tumhe nahi.

Kumkum: Sumit, tum par bhi nahi,

Dono ekdoosre ko hug karte hai aur

Sumit: Tumhari baat sahi hai Kumkum, aura b 10dino me lori hai to hum lori k eagle din India pahonche vaise hi niklenge.

Tabhi phone ki ring bajti hai, Sumit phone uthata hai.

Sumit: Hello.

Receptionist: Hello, sir. There is a call from India for you. May I transfer?
Sumit: Yaa, Sure.

Recep: Ok sir.

Receptionist call transfer karti hai aur

Dadaji: Hello, Sumit beta.

Sumit: Dadaji, kaise hai aap?

Dadaji: Beta, tu aur Kumkum kaise ho?

Sumit: Dadaji: Hum yahan thik hai. Aap bataiye.

Wahan Wadhwa House me Veena Sumit se baat karne ke liye utavli ho rahi hoti hai ye dekh

Dadaji: Le beta, pehle teri maa se baat kar who utavli ho rahi hai.

Sumit: Thik hai.

Veenaji: Hello, Sumiot, kaisa hai, Kumkum who thik hai naa? Tum acche se reh to rahe ho naa?

Sumit: Hum thik hai aur bas vapas lori se pehle aa jaayenge.

Veenaji: Jaldi aa aur meri beti kahan hai, usse de.

Kumkum Sumit ke bajoo me hi baithi hoti hai

Sumit: Maa, who meri bagal me hi hai, lijiye baat kijiye.

Veenaji: Hello, Kumkum beta. Kaisi ho?

Kumkum: Mummyji, hum dono thik hai, aap sab daddyji, dadaji, dadima. Sab kaise hai?

Veenaji: Hum thik hai magar tum dono ke bina to ye ghar jaise ghar nahi.

Kumkum: Hum jaldi aa rahe hai.

Veenaji: Haan, is bar ki lori hum sab bahot dhoomdham se manayenge aakhir tumhari shadi ke baad ki pehli lori jo hai. Le apne daddyji se baat kar.

Kul: Kumkum, beta kaisi hai aur Sumit tumko zyada pareshan to nahi karta?

Kumkum: Nahi, daddyji, who to mera bahot zyada khayal rakhte hai.

Dadima: Kumkum, tum dono yahan ki chinta mat karna aur shanty se vapas aana.

Kumkum: Ji, dadima.

Dadima: Le tere dadaji teri awaz ab nahi sunenge to bekaboo ho jaayenge.

Kumkum: Kaise hai dadaji?

Dadaji: Beta, tere aur Sumit ke bina tera ye dada aur hum sab sirf sharer hi hai, jaan to hamari tumhare sath hai aur haan humne isliye phone kiya ki yahan aap logo ke bina man nahi lag raha aur lori to hum farm house par hi manate hai isliye hum sab aaj hi farmhouse nikal rahe hai, yahan tum dono aao to car aur baki sab hoga tum yahan aakar wahan farmhouse aa jaana.

Kumkum: Ji, dadaji. Aur hamari fikr mat kijiye . Ab hum jald hi aa jaayenge.

Dadaji: Main tum dono ki9 raah dekh raha hoon, thik hai, ti se aa jaao. Main phone rakhta hoon.

Wadhwa House me sab farm house ke liye nikal jaayte hai.

To be continued……………………………..

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