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Posted: 18 years ago
hi nice part.read after long time.continue soon. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hi,janu.Sorry sorry sorry but pls delete some pm from your pm index.I'm trying 2 sent pm but i'm unable.Sorry once again.By the by nice part.Enjoyed reading it. Bye.Take care.
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Posted: 17 years ago
pls pls write...m crazy abt this ff too 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
Graet, mindblowing, excellent. Sachmuch ye padkar meri aankhe nam ho gayi, It's amazing aur muje ye yakin hai ki Kumkum ko kuch nahi hoga.
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Posted: 17 years ago
Yahan Sumit aur Kumkum dono
Switzerland me hi aur Wadhwa parivar farm house nikal gaya hai, Sumit ke alawa ye sacchayi koi nahi janta ki Kumkum ab maa nahi ban sakti, sab apni or se naye mehman ke swagat ke sapne dekh rahe hai magar kya un sab ke ye sapne sach ho payege? Chliye dekhte hai……………………………….

Sumit_kumkum dono samana pack kar rahe hote hai, aur dono kaam me busy hote hai udhar Dadaji, dadima, Kul, Veena sab farm house janewale raste me hote hai tab

Dadima: Kitne khushnasib hai hum ki hume apne pote ki shadi dekhne mili.

Dadaji: Aur haan ab to parpoto ko bhi dekh payenge.

Veena: Kyon nahi. Muje poori ummid hai ki jab dono vapas aayenge to ye khushi sath lekar aayenge.

Kul: Haan, aura b to main bhi dada ban jaoonga.

Dadaji: sach humne bahot punya kamaye hai jisse hume Sumit jaisa honhar beta aur sath me Kumkum jaisi bahu ke roop me beti mili.

Veena: Haan, bauji ye baat to aap ne bilkul thik kahi, varna agar mere Sumit ki shadi us Renuka nam ki dayan se hoti to naa jaane ab tak kya ho gaya hota, magar Kumkum to hamare ghar ki sach me laxmi hai.

Kul: Ab to hum Sumit ke bina kuch din nikal sakte hai magar Kumkum ke bina ek pal nahi.

Dadima: Hamari har chhoti badi chiz ke bare me wahi janti hai.

Veenaji: Magar maine tey kar liye hai ki uske sare kamkaaj ab band usko ab aaram hi karna padega.

Aise khayalo ko lekar who sab Valsad unke farm house pahonch jaate hai, yahan Kumkum-Sumit raat ko dinner lekar sone ki taiyari karte hai, Kumkum jaldi so jaati hai aur Sumit ko nind nahi aati aur who Kumkum ko dekhta hai, tab Kumkum gehri nind me hoti hai aur nind e hi has rahi hoti hai, Kumkum ko aisa dekh Sumit khush hota hai aur uske or karib jaata hai aur uske sir par apna hath ghoomata hai aur tabhi Kumkum ki aankhe khul jaati hai, Kumkum ko dekh

Sumit: So, jaao, so jaao main hi hoon.

Aisa kehte hi Kumkum Sumit ke or bhi karib aati hai aur dheere se uske gaal par kiss karti hai aur Sumit bhi use kiss karta hai aur Kumkum Sumit ke hath par soti hai aur

Kumkum: Abhi tak jag rahe ho.

Sumit: Hummmmmm.

Kumkum: Kyon?

Sumit: Nind nahi aa rahi thi, aur tumhe dekh raha tha.

Kumkum: Muje?

Sumit: Haan, tum muskura rahi thi isliye.

Kumkum: Main? Haan, achha who……..

Sumit: Magar batao to sahi kit um kyon has rahi thi.

Kumkum: Who isliye ki maine apne sapne me aaj kisiko dekha.

Sumit: Kisko? Muje?
Kumkum: Naa.

Sumit: Kya?

Sumit ko shock lagta hai.

Sumit: Muje nahi to aur kisko?

Kumkum: Hai koi tumse bhi khas.

Sumit: Mujse bhi khas. Koun?

Kumkum: Main kyon bataoon?

Sumit: Sach bolo naa.

Kumkum: Sach hi to bol rahi hoon.

Ye sunkar Sumit apna mooh pher leta hai aur Kumkum se naraz ho jaata hai, Sumit ko aise dekh Kumkum hasti hai aur uske kaan ke paas jaati hai aur uske kan me kehti hai

Kumkum: Jante ho Sumit mere sapne me koun tha?

Sumit:(Gusse me) Nahi, janta aur nahi janna chahta hoon.

Kumkum: Suno to sahi.

Sumit: Naa.

Tab Kumkum usko boolane ke liye kehti hai

Kumkum: Ouch.

Sumit jatse Kumkum ke paas jaakar

Sumit: Kumkum, kya huva?

Kumkum: kuch nahi.

Sumit: Kahona.

Kumkum: To idhar aao.
Sumit Kumkum ke karib jaata hai aur

Kumkum: Sumit, (Bahot zyada sharmate huve) Aaj maine apne sapne me hamari pyar ki nishani, ek bahot pyar chhota, hasta gaata, khelta kudta little Sumit dekha.

Aisa kehkar Kumkum Sumit ko tight hug karti hai aur Sumit usse hug karta hai magar

Sumit: (Apne man me) Kya kahoo Kumkum tumhari ye khwahish ek sapna banker hi reh jaayegi aur main tumhe sacchayi bata nahi sakta magar muje ye sab dekhkar lagta hai ki tumhe sach bata dena chahiye kyonki agar sacchayi se tum vakif nahi hui to har roz tum aise sapne dekhogi aur har sapna tootne par tumhe taklif hogi.

Phir dono so jate hai. Doosre din subah dono taiyaar ho jaate hai, Kumkum bhi thik hoti hai aur

Sumit: (Apne aap se) Aaj yahan aakhri din hai, ab muje jaane se pehle aaj hi Kumkum ko sari sacchayi batani hogi, who Kumkum ko apne paas bulakar usko apne baju me baithata hai.

Kumkum: Sumit, main tumse kuch kehna chahti hoon.

Sumit: Main bhi.

Kumkum: Pehle meri baat sunoge tum.

Sumit: Thik hai. Kaho.

Kumkum: Yahin ki aaj yahan aakhri din hai to aaj hum kahin bahar nahi jaayege, hum sirf ekdoosre ke sath waqt bitayege.

Sumit: Ok.

Kumkum Sumit ko tight hug karti hai aur phir Sumit Kumkum ki god me apna sir rakh deta hai, Kumkum Sumit ke sir par bahot pyar se hath ghoomati hai aur

Kumkum: Ab tum kaho.

Sumit: Kumkum actually jab yahan hadsa huva.

Kumkum: Sumit, tumne hi to us din kaha ki usko bhool jaao, phir kyon tumhi.

Sumit: Suno to sahi.

Kumkum: Thik hai.

Sumit: Us din job hi huva usse …. Usse tum par jo asar huva usse……..usse………

Kumkum: Haan, kaho naa.

Sumit: Usse ab tum kabhi………..kabhi..

Kumkum: Sumit, bejijak kaho naa.

Sumit: Usse tum ab kabhi maa nahi ban sakti.

Ye sunkar Kumkum dang reh jaati hai aur uski aankh se aansoo ki dharye behne lagti hai who apne hosh kho baithti hai aur kya kare use kuch samaj nahi aata aur phir uski nazar fruits ke bajoo me rakkhe gaye chaku ki or jaati hai aur who usse lekar apni hath ki rag kat dalti hai…………………………….

To be continued…………………………….



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Posted: 17 years ago
Really fantastic Janu...gr8888888888....mujhe lagta hain tumko hi KUMKUM ka director kar dena chahiye..kiuki tum sacchi dil se likhti ho..
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awesome,amazing,mindblowing,fabulous,terrific,superb,marvelo us.You should be the writter of kumkum.You have wrote nicer than the kumkum writter.Hats of to you janu dearling.
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Posted: 17 years ago
hi 😃
it was really great
i think su is dreaming naa and he wont tell kk now anything
continue soon 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
great one janu 😛 .
cont 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
janu...awesome...please write soon...ur patients will b having sleepless nits...i think its sumit's dream 😳

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