ff-KumkumSumit(Tu Mile Dil Khile)Upd20/05 - Page 35

bahut accha tha...par janaki..humein aapka andaaz-e-bayaan kuch zyaada hi pasand aaya... 😳

a super sarvottam to u...but jaldi likhiye na.. 😳

Sorry, sorry. Sorry, sorry. Sorry, sorry. Sorry, sorry.
Actually ye sab late hone ke liye hai. Main hostel me hooon to net par nahi aapati magar ab lijiye ye naya part.

Kya hoga ab Sumit ka jab Kumkum ne is sacchai ko kabool nahi kiya, kya who Kumkum ko bacha payega? Kya Sumit Kumkum ko samja payega? Bahot sare saval hai aur bahot dino ke baad hum mile hai to zyada baat nahi karte Kumkum-Sumit ke paas hi chalet hai………………………..

Kumkum apni rag ko kaat dalti hai aur khoon ki dhara bahne lagti hai, ye dekh Sumit chilla uthta hai,

Sumit: Kumkum, Kumkum………….

Aur chillane ke baad use pata chalta hai ki who sapna dekh raha hota hai aur yahan Kumkum Sumit ke sath uth jaati hai aur usse pakadkar

Kumkum: Kya huva? Sumit, Sumit. Tumhe kya huva?

Sumit bavra ho jaata hai aur Kumkum ko kas ke apne sine se lagta hai aur

Sumit: Kumkum, kumkum, Tumhe kuch huva to nahi naa.

Kumkum: Nahi, Shayad tumne koi bura sapna dekha.

Sumit: Kumkum muje chhodkar kabhi nahi jaaogi naa.

Kumkum: Tumhare bina main adhoori hoon to tumhe chhodkar kaise jaa sakti hoon? Tum so jaao.

Kumkum Sumit ko bahot hi pyar se sulati hai aur phir uske sir par bahot hi pyar se apna hath ghoomati hai aur uske gaal par kiss karti hai

Kumkum: Sumit, ab apni aankhe band karlo. Jante ho kyon? Kyonki main apne Sumit se sapne me bhi alag nahi jaana chahti.

Aur phir Sumit ko pakadkar Kumkum bhi so jaati hai aur Sumit Kumkum ko apni banho keg here me le leta hai aur who bhi Kumkum ko kiss karta hai

Sumit:(Apne man me) Nahi Kumkum, muje tumhare hotho ki hasi nahi chhinnni hai aur uske liye agar muje ye sach chhipana kyon naa pade. Main is sach ko chhipaoonga aur kuch bhi kyon na ho main tumhe nahi khona chahta isliye ye main tumhe nahi bata sakta.

Phir dono ekdoosre ki banho me so jaate hai, Subah dono nikalne ki taiyari karte hai aur aakhirkar India vapas aa jaate hai aur phir dono apne ghar pahonch jaate hai 13th January ko. Ghar pahonchkar

Kumkum: Sumit, akhirkar hum ghar aa hi gaye, kyon?

Sumit: Hummmm.

Kumkum: Magar sabke bina kaisa khali lag raha hai naa?

Sumit: Ye baat sahi hai aur isliye to hum aaj sham ko Farm House ke liye nikal rahe hai.

Kumkum: Magar hum to kal subah jaanewale the naa?

Sumit: Hummmm.

Kumkum: To phir aaj.

Sumit: Tum aaj hi sabko milna chahti ho naa isliye.

Ye baat sunkar Kumkum bahot excitement me aa jaati hai aur daudkar Sumit ke gaal par kiss karti hai aur hug karti hai.

Kumkum: Sumit, main bahot khush hoon ki aaj hum gharwalo se milenge, Thanks. I love you.

Sumit: I love you, too. My Sweetheart.
Ab chalo phir se packing karni hogi.

Kumkum: Haan chalo.

Sumit: Kapde to humko bahar se hi lane hoge.

Kumkum: Kyon?

Sumit: Actually kal lori hai aur har saal lori par hamare ghar me sab naye kapde pehnte hai to lane padege naa.

Kumkum: To lane padege. To kya hum abhi shopping jaayenge?

Sumit: Haan.

Kumkum: Nahi.

Sumit: Kyon?

Kumkum: Yahan khana to banana hoga naa, hum dono ke liye aur vaise bhi muje bahot bhookh lagi hai.

Sumit: To koi baat nahi, hum bahar kha lenge.

Kumkum: Aisa nahi hai.

Sumit: Matlab?

Kumkum: Matlab ye mere pyare patidev ki hum bahar se aaye hai aur main wahan ka khana khake bor ho chuki hoon ab muje ghar ka khana khana hai aur agar uske baad hum shopping gaye to bahot der ho jaayegi.

Sumit: Ek minute ek idea hai.

Kumkum: Kya?

Sumit: Kyon naa aaj hum dono milkar khana pakaye?

Kumkum: What?

Sumit: Hummmm. Usse der bhi nahi hogi aur sab sahi ho jaayega. Kyon? Kya kehti ho?

Kumkum: Tum maga, khana. I mean.

Sumit: Muje khane me kya dalte hai ye pata nahi magar sabji katna aur aisa kaam jot um kahogi who to kar hi sakta hoon naa.

Kumkum: Thik hai.

Sumit: to phir chalo.

Kumkum: Ek minute ruko.

Sumit: Kyon kya huva?

Kumkum: Tumne farm house par phone kiya aur unko bataya ki hum aa rahe hai?

Sumit: Nahi, hum unhe surprise denge. Ok?

Kumkum: Ok.

Baad me dono fresh ho jaate hai aur kitchen me khana pakate hai tab sab pak jaata hai aura b Kumkum rotiya sek rahi hoti hai tab Sumit wahan jaakar

Sumit: Kumkum, ye main karu?

Kumkum: Nahi Sumit, tumne bahot help ki hai ab aur nahi aur vaise bhi tumhara hath jal jaayega.

Sumit: Nahi baba, aisa kuch nahi hoga. Let me try.

Kumkum: Sumit, please, samjo naa.

Sumit: Nahi. Main karoonga.

Kumkum: Thik hai jaise tumhari marzi.

Sumit rotiya pakata hai aur tab Kumkum khana dining table par le jaati hai magar aakhri roti ke waqt Sumit ka hath jal jaata hai aur who chillata hai.

Sumit: Ouch, Kumkum.

Kumkum bhag kar aati hai aur

Kumkum: Sumit, kya huva.

Sumit: Hath…………….

Kumkum Sumit ka hath dekhti hai jo jal gaya hota hai aur who pani ke andar rakhti hai aur

Kumkum: Kaha than a Sumit maine tumse. Ab dekho

Itna kehte kehte Kumkum ki aankhe bhar aati hai aur ye dekh

Sumit: Kya huva Kumkum?

Kumkum Sumit ko hug karke

Kumkum: Sumit, tumhe ek kharoch bhi aati hai to us pal meri jaan chali jaatti hai phir tum kyon aise…………………….

Sumit: Nahi Kumkum. A bro mat. Sorry.

Kumkum: Thik hai chalo ab khana kha lete hai.

Kumkum ek plate parosti hi aur doosri uthati hai tabhi Sumit uska hath pakadkar usse rokta hai.

Kumkum: Kya huva?

Sumit: Who aaj kyon naa hum ek hi palte me khaye.

Kumkum: Jaisa tum chaho.

Kumkum Sumit ekdoosre ko khilate hai aur khana khatm karte hai baad me shopping karte hai aur farm house ravaana hote hai.

To be continued…………………………..

gr8 yar.Tuna to kamal kar dia.What a romantic part ! I just loved reading it.Continue soon...

gr8 yar.Tuna to kamal kar dia.What a romantic part ! I just loved reading it.Continue soon...

hi janu read ur fanfic after long time and it is just awsume. keep continuing it. 😊

hey welcome back
a very sweet part as always
continue soon

nice t see u after a long time janu.
great going 😛

Kumkum-Sumit India vapas aa gaye aura b jaa rahe hai farmhouse, magar wahan kisiko khabar nahi hai, chalet hai ki wahan kya ho raha hai………………………………..

Farm House: Wahan dadaji-dadima, Veena aur Kul sab drawing hall me baithe huve hote hai,

Dadaji: Rajjoji, kal ke liye sab taiy ho gaya?

Dadima: Ji, sab kuch vaisa hi hai jaisa aap ne kaha tha.

Dadaji: Bahu, kuch kami to nahi hai naa kyonki main chahta hoon ki jab baccho ko party di jaaye to usme koi kami naa ho kyonki Sumit-Kumkum ne is ghar ke liye bahot kuch kiya hai aura b jab un dono ki shadi ke baad ki pehli lori hai to sab kuch dhoomdham se hona chahiye.

Kul: Haan, bauji aap sahi keh rahe hai.

Veenaji: Bauji, vaise maine sab kar liya hai magar hum sabhi ko Kumkum ki itni aadat ho chuki hai ki mujse to uske bagair kaam hota hi nahi. Who kabhi kisiko koi kaam karne hi deti.

Dadima: Sahi keh rahi hai Veena.

Dadaji: Hamari Kumkum hai hi aisi ki jahan bhi jaaye har kisiko apna leti hai aur apna khayal nahi rakhti magar doosro ki har waqt chinta lagi rehti hai.

Tabhi doorbell bajta hai,

Kul: Are, is waqt koun ho sakta hai.
Dadaji: Haan, kafi raat ho chuki hai.

Dadima: Methi, darvaza khol dekh to koun aaya hai?

Methichacha: Ji, maaji.

Methichacha darvaza kholte hai aur chonk jaate hai.

Veenaji: Koun hai Methi.

Methi kuch javab nahi deta isliye,

Dadaji: Haan, batana koun hai?

Methi: Who.woh…………..

Kul: Ye who who kya kar raha hai, thehrite bauji, main dekhta hoon.

Aur kul darvaze ke paas jaakar dekhta hai to khushi ke mare uchalkar sabhi ko bulata hai………………………………………..

Kul: Maa, bauji, Veena, jaldi aao. Kumkum-Sumit hai.

Kumkum-Sumit ka naam sunte hi sabme khushi ki lehar daud jaati hai aur sab darvaze par aate hai aur Kumkum-Sumit ghar me aane lagte hai vaise hi……….

Dadima: Thehro, thehro……………

Sumit: Kyon kya baat hai?

Veenaji: Tum itna lamba safar tei karke aaye ho to aarti ke bina andar kaise aa sakte ho?

Phir Veenaji aarti lekar aati hai aur dono ki aarti utarti hai aur baad me dono ghar me aate hai aur sabse milte hai, pehle dadaji ke paas jaate hai,

Dadaji dono ko gale lagakar bahot pyar dete hai aur baad me dadima bhi un dono ko gale lagati hai phir kuyl ke paas jaakar dono pair chute hai

Kul: Bahot bahot khush raho magar tum dono to kal aanewale the to abhi……

Kumkum: Who humne socha ki kyon naa aap sab logo ko surprise de.

Sumit: Haan, aur vaise bhi Kumkum beechen ho rahi thi, aap sab ke bagair.

Veenaji: Bahot accha kiya.

Veenaji ke paaon chute hai tab

Veenaji: Sumit, tu to vaise ka vaisa hi hai magar meri Kumkum ko dkh kitni dubli ho ha gayi hai, uska khayal nahi rakkha kya?

Kumkum: Nahi, nahi. Mummyji. Sumit ne mera bahot dhyan rakkha, uski wajah se……………

Sumit baat katkar………………….

Sumit: Are, mummy kya aap bhi. Hume bhook lagi hai kuch khana to khilao.

Methichacha: Han han. Chaliye, aap dono dinning table par aa jaaiye, main khana laga deta hoon.

Kumkum-Sumit khana khate hai aur yahan sab so jaate hai, khana khan eke baad dono apne kamre me jaate hai, Sumit bed par hota hai Kumkum ke khayalo me Kumkumwashroom se aati hai aur baad me dheere se Sumit ko pichhe se pakadkar uske gaal par kiss karti hai aur Sumit khyalo se bahar aa jaata hai.

Sumit: Are, madam aap apnea dam par mehrbaan ho gayi, kya baat hai?
Kumkum: Who isliye kyonki aaj tumne muje baht khush kar diya ghar vapas laakar………………………………..

Sumit Kumkum ko hug karta hai aur phir

Sumit: To phir chalo main tumhe aur ek surprise deta hoon.

Kumkum: Surprise?

Sumit: Haan.

Kumkum: To thik hai. Do.

Sumit: Magar uske liye aap ko mere sath aana padega.

Kumkum: Kahan?

Sumit; Magar uske liye aap ko ek shart bhi manni hogi.

Kumkum: Shart?

Sumit: Haan, Shart.

Kumkum: Who kya?

Sumit: Who ye ki main aapki aankho me patti band doonga aur phir aap mere sath aayegi.

Kumkum: Magar janaab aap agar patti bandenge to main chaloongi kaise, muje thodi kuch dikhega?

Sumit: Uska rasta hai mere paas. Tum sirf ye bandva lo.

Phir Sumit Kumkum ki aankh pe red colour ki patti band deta hai aur

Kumkum: Ab main kaise chaloo.

Aur Sumit Kumkum ko apni banho me utha leta hai. Aur kahin le jaata hai aur jab patti kholta hai to Kumkum chonka jaati hai…………………………………………..

To be continued……………………………..

hi janu! really nice part. loved all of them njoying famr-house.keep it up and happy valentine day. waiting to see surprise mujhe bhi chuakna hai 😉