ff-KumkumSumit(Tu Mile Dil Khile)Upd20/05 - Page 3

very good part. I love how u put so much detail that i can actually picture the scene. Keep up the good work! 👏

Hey guy. I'm back. Let's go to the next part of the story...................................................

Kumkum & Sumit introduce themself and go together to Wadhwa Company. Raste me Kumkum kuch pareshan hoti hai. Ye dekh ke Sumit woh kyon pareshan hai ye janane ki koshish karta hai.

Sumit: Kya baat hai, Kumkumji? Aap bahot upset hai. Kya huva? kuch to bataiye.

Kumkum: nahi, Mr.wadhwa woh to me us ladki ke baare me pareshan hoon. Jiska abhi abhi accident huva hai. Woh thik to hogi na? Muje uski bahot chinta ho rahi hai. Use jyada kuch to nahi hoga naa? Aur uske gharwalo ko driver bata to dega naa?

Sumit: are, aap kyon itni fikr karti hai. Hamse jitni ho payi utni madad ki hai aur aapne driver se unke hosh aane par unse puchke unke gharwalo ko batane ke liye keh bhi to diya hai aur vaise bhi aap khamakha tensed hai. Unko itni jyada chote nahi aayi thi. isliye unhe jaldi hosh aa jayega. Aur ab aap bilkul fikr mat kijiye.

Tabhi Kumkum apne purse me kuch dundhti hai. Magar use woh chij milti nahi.Isliye Sumit Kumkum KO puchhta hai.

Sumit: Ab kya huva? Aap kuch dhundh rahi hai? Kya apko kuch chahiye?

Kumkum: Shayad me apna cell apni car me hi bhool gayi.(use kuch yaad aa jata hai) Vaise to accha hai. Mr. Wadhwa aap plz yahan ke koi Telephone booth ke paas apni car stop karenge?

Sumit: magar kyon? Apko kisise baat karni hai?

Kumkum: Woh kya hai ke mera cell car me hi hai. to me uspe phone karti hoon aur us ladki ke baare medriver se pooch leti hoon.

Sumit: are, itni si baat hai. aap mere cell se pata kar sakti hai.

Kumkum driver ko phone karke us ladki ki tabyat ke baare me pooch leti hai aur Sumit se baat karti hai.

Kumkum: Woh ladki ko hosh aa gaya hai aur uske gharwalo ko bhi driver ne phone karke bata diya hai. Ab me chen ki saans le paaongi.

Sumit: maine to aapse pehle hi kaha tha. Sach me aapke baare me jo suna tha woh sab sach hai.

kumkum: mere baare me? kya?

Sumit: yahi ke aap ek pal me kisiko bhi apna bana leti hai aur samnewale ko woh paraya hai iska ehsas tak nahi rehta.

Kumkum aur Sumit dono ek dusre ke samne haste hai.

Sumit: Ab hum company ke bich me rishta bana rahe hain to hamaare bich me bhi to koi rishta hona chahiye. Isliye aap mari dost banegi? Aur vaise bhi agar aap meri dost banegi to woh meri khushnasibi hogi kyonki aisa accha dost bahot khushnsib logo ko hi milta hai.

Kumkum: Muje bhi apke sath dosti karke bahot accha lagega aur ye meri bhi khushnasibi hogi kyonki aap bhi to bahot acche insaan hai.

Dono Shake hands karte hai aur woh dono adhwa comoany pahonch jaate hai.
Sumit Kumkum ko apni cabin me lejata hai aur do coffe order karta hai.

Sumit: shall we start?

Kumkum: ya, sure. Why not.

Kumkum Sumit ko apna presentation aur assignment dikhati hai. Aur presentation poora hota hai.

Sumit: It's amazing. Isse dono company profit me rahegi. Isliye hum ye deal sign karlete hai.

Ye sun kar Kumkum bahot khush ho jaati hai aur dono deal sign kar dete hai.Aur is khusi me kumkum Sumit ko raat ke dinner ke liye apne ghar invite karti hai. aur Sumit uske ghar jata hai. Wahan Sumit Kumkum ke gharwalo se milta haiaur bahot khush hota hai aur woh wahan se ghar jane ke liye permission leta hai to Mr. Sharma Sumit ko bahar chodne ke liye Kumkum ko kehte hai.

Kumkum: Mr.wadhwa, ab to hum dost ban chuke hai ab to aap muje tum kehke boolaiye.

Sumit: Ek sart par.....

kumkum: kaisi shart?

Sumit: Aap bhi muje Mr.Wadhwa nahi Sumit hi kahegi.

Kumkum: Thik hai. aap hamare dost hai to itni shart to manani hi padegi.

Dono haste hai aur tabhi Sumit ka cell bajta hai. Sumit dekh ke Kumkum ko kehta hai

Sumit: Are, ye to meri honewali biwi ka phone hai. Me niklta hoon, aap se kal milta hoon. Ab to mulakate hoti hi rahegi. Good bye.

Kumkum: Good Bye........................................

To be continued........................................

very good 👏 👏
oh no niklta 😭

Hello, guys. Me ab apko apni story me aage kya hota hai ye batanewali hoon. To taiyaar ho jaaiye................

Sumit ko good bye wish karke Kumkum ghar me jaati hai aur sochti hai ki Sumit ki sagai ho gayi hai to main kal usko milne ke liye zaroor kahoongi aur apne office ka pending kaam poora karne ke baad so jaati hai...........

Idhar Sumit apne cell par apni fioncey ke saath baat karta hai..........................................

Sumit: Hi, Renuka. Achanak tumhara phone,

Renuka bich me se Sumit ki baat kaat ke,

Renuka: Of, oh. Sumit. phone uthane me kitni der lagate ho, aisa kya kar rahe the aur me tumhari honewali patni hoon to tumhe phone bhi nahi kar sakti?

Sumit: Nahi nahi aisa kuch nahi hai magar har waqt me hi tumhe phone karta hoon aur vaise tab bhi tumhe baat karneka man ho tab hi tum mujse baat karti ho aur aaj achanak tumne muje yaad kiya. Chalo, yeh sab chhodo aur muje yeh bataao ke tum kaisi ho? Tum thik to ho?

Renuka: me thik hoon. Me tum se keh rahi thi ke,

Sumit: tum pehle meri baat suno. Jab tum India vapis aaogi tab me tumhe ek surprise dene wala hoon. To tum kab aa rahi ho?

Renuka: woh sab chhodo aur me yahaan ek kaam khatm karke aanewali hoon to muje teen hafte to lag hi jayenge. Accha me phone rakhti hoon.

Sumit: hello, suno to sahi...............

Magar phone kat gaya hota hai aur phone rakhne ke baad Renuka akele hi apne aap se baatein karti hai.

Renuka: Yeh kaam to muje karna hi padega varna India me mera kaam tamam ho jaayega. Vaise bhi shaadi ke baad to kisi bhi tarah muje yahhan hi aana hai.

Udhar Sumit bhi apne aap se hi baatein karta hai.

Sumit: ajib hai yeh, meri to koi baat sunti hi nahi. Chalo koi baat nahi. Woh aajayegi to hum shaadi kar lenge aur hum dono apne parivaar ke sath khushi se rahenge aur jab woh aayegi to me use Kumkum ko milva ke surprise doonga. Kumkum se milke woh bahot khush hogi. Kumkum hehi aisi, pal me sabko apna bana leti hai. Usko pehli baar milne ke bawjood muje woh apni hi hai aur kai janmo se hamara rishta hai aisa lagta hai.

Yahi sochte sochte Sumit ghar jaa kar so jata hai.......

Doosre din Sumit aur Kumkum ghar se nikalkar Wadhwa Company me pahonchte hai aur apna kaam shuru karte hai. Kaam poora hone ke baad Kumkum Sumit se poochhati hai.

Kumkum: Apni honewali biwi se nahi milaoge?

Sumit: are, woh to India se bahar hai.

Kumkum:Woh vahaan rehti hai?

Sumit: nahi, woh kai baar wahaan aati jaati rehti hai. Tum mere ghar aana me tumhe uski photo dikhaunga.

Kumkum: Magar uska naam to batao....

Sumit: uska naam.......................

Tabhi Sumit ka cell bajta hai,

Sumit: Excuse me, mere Singapore ke project manager ka phone hai.

Kumkum: Koi baat nahi tum baat karlo.

Sumit usse baat karke aata hai aur bahot khush lagta hai.

Kumkum: Sumit, tum bahot khush lag rahe ho, kya baat hai?

Sumit: Kumkum, baat hi aisi hai, Muje woh project mil gaya jis se wadhwa company ki value international market me top par hogi par....................

Sumit ke chehre ka rang fika pad jata hai...............

Kumkum: par kya? Tumhare liye to bahot khushi ki baat hai aur tum aise kyon? koi problem hai?

Sumit: Kumkum, iske liye muje Singapore jana hoga aur hamara yahaan ka kaam?

Kumkum: are, tum fikr mat karo. yeh main sambhal loongi. Tum chale jaao.

Sumit: Thank you Kumkum.

kumkum: dosti me koi Thank you nahi. Aur ab me chalti hoon. Bye & Congratulations.

To be continued........................................

Hey, guys.
I have a problem.
I'll have to go Ahmedabad for my addmission.
So, I can't write for 4-5 days.
So, I'm sorry , Please forgive me.
And yes when I'll come, the story will be moved & soon Kumkum & Sumit will get married, so keep watching .
Good bye. I'll be here soon.

Hey guys, I'm back & the story has begun..................

Sumit apne kaam ke silsile me out of India hota hai usi dauran Sumit ki company ke shares koi giraane lagta hai aur yeh khabar market me aag ki tarah felti chali jaati hai aur isliye Wadhwa company lost me jaanewali hai yeh khabar Kumkum ko pata chalti hai. Aur kumkum ko bahot chinta hoti hai.

Kumkum:(apne aap se) Yeh , sab kya ho raha hai, Wadhwa companies ke shares ke daam kaun gira sakta hai aur yeh sab Intrnational market me hone ke karan Sumit ko bhi yeh sab jaldi hi pata chal jayega aur Sumit bhi ahaan nahi hai, Ab muje hi kuch karna hoga................

Tabhi Kumkum ke cell me ring aati hai,

Kumkum: Hello, Sumit.......

Sumit: KUmkum yeh sab kya ho raha hai? shares ke daam itna niche gir chooke hai ki ab kuch nahi kiya gaya to Wadhwa company doob jaayegi.

Kumkum: Sumit, me yahaan hoon aur me yahaan sab kuch thik karne ki koshish karti hoon, bas sirf tum woh deal sign karlo agar yeh deal sign nahi huyi to Wadhwa company ki value aur prestige ko itni thes pahunchegi ke barso se banaya huva aur tumhare parivaar ka yeh sapna mitti me mil jaayega.

Sumit: Shayad tum thik keh rahi ho, magar muje kuch acch nahi lag raha, main kya karoo?

Kumkum: Tum yahaan ki koi chinta mat karo, me apne sources se yeh pata lagaati hoon ki yeh sab kaun kar raha hai aur kyon kar raha hai. aur tum muj pe itna bharosa to karte hona ki me tumhi niraash nahi hone doongi?

Sumit: Kumkum, is waqt me tumhare siva kisi pe yakeen nahi kar sakta, ek tumhi ho jo muje bacha sakogi. Is waqt to muje tumhare siva apne aap pe bhi yakeen nahi hai. janti ho Kumkum jab se tum mili hona tab se zindagi me kuch karne ko ji chahata hai, magar sochta hoon ki is tufan se kaise bahar nikloo?

Kumkum: Tum chinta kyon karte ho, tum to us tufan se bhi bade tufan ho jo kabhi nahi harta .To kyon fikr karte ho? aur tumne muj pe itna yakeen kiya hai main tumhare yakeen ko tutne nahi dooongi? aur ab tum woh deal sign karke vapis aa jaao main yahaan sab sambhal loongi.

Sumit: sach me Kumkum agar tum jaisa saccha dost mil jaaye to jivan ki har mushkil aasan ho jaaye. Thank you very much and Best of luch.

Kumkum: isme thanks kehne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai aur tum bhi safal ho kar lauto yahin prarthna me bhagvaaan se karoongi. Bye.

Kumkum mandir jaa kar Sumit ke liye prarthana karti hai,

Kumkum:(Bhagvaan se) He bhagvaan muje itni himmat de ki me apne kaam me safal ho jaaoon aur Sumit bhi safal ho kar laute. Me us logo ko dhoondh saku jo yeh galat kaam kar rahe hai. Muje shakti do...........................

Kumkum ek press conference boola ke jo hoova uske baare me batati hai aur share ke daam jisne giraye unka naam dhoondh ne ke liye Kumkum apna detactive department ko batati hai aur sab kuch thik karti hai aur Wadhwa company ko apni vahin position dilvaati hai. Yeh sab baate Kul ko pata hoti hai aur isliye woh sab thik ho gaya ye batane ke liye Sumit ko phone karta hai to use pata chalta he ki Sumit India ravaana ho gaya hota hai aur Sumit air port se sidha office jaata hai aur Kumkum se milta hai.

Sumit: Thank you Kumkum, agar tum naa hoti to ye sab kuch possible nahi hota, me tumhara shukraguzar hoon.

Kumkum: bas bas, me tumhari dost hoon aur business colleague bhi, isliye yeh mera farz bhi hai aur haq bhi, isliye tahnks mat kaho. tum baat baat par thanks kehte ho. agar thanks kehna hai to dosti mat rakkho.

Sumit: thik hai, galti ho gayi, aage se thanks nahi kahoonga. magar ab me kuch sunnewala nahi hoon. Tumhe kal mere ghar par lunch ke liye aana hi hoga. sab log ghar pe tumhare baare me pooch rahe the.

Tab Kul vahhan aata hai.

Kul: haan, beta. Sumit sahi keh raha hai. Sach me yeh sab karke tumne hum pe bahot bada ehsaan kiya hai.

Kumkum: kya uncle, beti bhi kehte hai aur ehsaan ki baat karte hai, me ek shrt par hi aaoongi.

Kul & Sumit: kya?

Kumkum: yahi ke aap yeh baat ab dohrayenge nahi.

Kul: thik hai. jaisa tum kaho.

Kumkum: Chaliye ab me ghar jaati hoon.

Kul: thik hai, magar kal lunch mat bhoolana.

Sumit: Aao Kumkum me tumhe drop kar deta hoon.

Kumkum: Nahi, aisi koi baat nahi me chli jaaoongi. aur vaise bhi tum thak ke aaye ho to me chali jaaoongi.

Sumit: sorry madam. aapki yeh baat hume manzoor nahi hai. apko mere sath aana hi hoga varna aapka yeh dost aap se baat nahi karega.

Kumkum: thik hai. chalo.

Dono raste me deal aur business ki baate karte karte Kumkum ke ghar par pahoonchte hai.

Kumkum: Sumit chalo, coffee pikar jaao.

Sumit: aaj nahi, ghar pe maa rah dekh rahi hogi, so, I'll have to go. please.

Kumkum: Thik hai, bye.

Sumit: Kal milenge, lunch par. Good bye.

To be continued.........................................

Ab aage...................................................


Sumit Kumkum ko uske ghar pe drop karta hai magar good bye kehne ke bavjood Kumkum ko hi jaate hoove dekhta rehta hai aur jab woh chali jaati hai to uske kamre ki khidki ki baajoo jaankta hai. Thodi hi der me kamre ki light on hoti hai aur ye dekh ke Sumit bahot khush ho jaata hai aur khidki ki taraf dekhta hai, achanak use yaad aata hai ke maa ghar pe uska intezaar kar rahi hogi ye khayaal aane se woh khidki me se Kumkum ki ek zalak dekh ke nikal jaata hai. magar saare raste bas Kumkum ke baare me hi sochta rehta hai. Use khayaal aata hai ki zindagi me pehli baar Kumkum ke milne ke baad use zindagi jine ko maan kar raha hai, bas Kumkum ko haste hoove dekhna chahata hai, uske khwabo me bhi Kumkum hi aa rahi hai. Kumkum ki har baat use acchi lagti hai. Har waqt woh Kumkum ke sath rehna chahta hai aur uski company woh jibhar ke enjoy karta hai. Kumkum jab uske sath nahi hoti to uske paas jaane ko ji chahta hai. Kumkum use bahot acchi lagne lagti hai aur engagement hone ke bavjood Renuka ke baare me use aisa kuch nahi hota woh apne aap se savaal karta hai,

Sumit:(apne aap se) Ye muje kya ho raha hai? achanak muje meri zindagi itni hasin, khoobsurat aur rangin kaise lag rahi hai? Ye kaisa jaadoo mere dil pe hone laga hai? Aur kya ye sahi hai?

Tab ghar aa jata hai aur woh Kumkum ke khayaalo me hi andar jaata hai aur Veena piche se aavaaz lagati hai,

Veena: are, Sumit sun to, yeh kin khayaalo me dooba huva hai? aur kitni der se tuje aavaaz laga rahi hoon tu sun nahi raha kya?

Sumit:(apne aap par hi hasta hai) Nahi, maa aisa kuch nahi hai, aur aap kya keh rahi thi?

Veena: me yeh keh rahi thi ke yahaan jo kuch bhi huva woh tu to janta hi hoga aur Kumkum ko hum mile nahi hai to hum sab usse milna chahte hai.

Sumit: mamma, maine use kal khane pe invite kiya hai, aap usse mil lena, OK

Veena: OK. Ab tu bhi khana khale.

Sumit: Chaliye maa.

Sumit khane ke baad so jaata hai to use sapne me bhi Kumkum hi nazar aati hai aur uthne ke baad bhi usike khayaal aa rahe hote hai. Woh taiyaar ho jaata hai aur doopehar ka intezaar karta hai.Doopehar ko Kumkum aati hai aur Sumit Kumkum ko welcome karta hai.

Sumit: are, Kumkum tum aa gayi, hum sab tumhari hi wait kar rahe the, aao naa.

Kumkum ghar me aati hai aur sab bado ke pair chhooti hai.

Dadaji: beti, tum apne maa-baap ka gooroor ho, sach me tumhare maa-baap ne bahot punya kamaaya hoga ke unko tum jaisi beti mili.

Dadimaa: Haan, beti. Tumne hamari bahot madat ki hai.

Veena: Tum to jis ghar me jaaogi wahaan apni roshni faila dogi.

Kumkum muskuraati hai.

Kumkum: Uncleji kahin dikhayi nahi de rahe hain

Sumit: Papa upar hai. abhi aate hi honge.

Kumkum: Sumit aaj to apni honewali biwi ki tasvir dikhao.

Sumit: Zaroor. Tum baitho me lekar aata hoon.

Sumit tasvir lene jaata hai aur Kul sidio se niche utarta hai. magar uska pair sleep ho jata jai aur Kul sidi de gir jaata hai aur bahot sara khoon behne lagta hai. Ye dekhkar Sumit ke hatho se tasvir gir jaati hai aur sab log Kul ki taraf jaate hai. Kumkum Kul ko asptal me le jaane ke liye kehti hai aur sab log Kul ko hospital le jaate hai.................................
To be continued.....................................

very good 😛 👏 .
humm su statred liking kk 😳 😳 😃

gud parts........the story is very well knitten... 👏

bachcha yeh tasveer baar baar saamne aate aate kyun ruk jaati hai.........something fishy.....well i understood 😛

Iski aage ki ye dastan muj se sun, sun ke teri akkal chakra jaayegi.....................................

Kul ko hospital me admit kar diya jaata hai aur doctors kehte hai ki khoon ki bahot beh chuka hai isliye blood ki zaroorat hogi. Magar doctors ye bhi kehte he ki bottle se effect nahi hoga isliye koi direct blood donate karde to hi khoon ka asar ho sakta hai. Poora Wadhwa Khndan blood donate karne ke liye taiyaar hota hai magar Sumit, Veena aur Rajjoji ka bloodgroup match nahi karta aur Dadaji ko diabetise hone ke karan doctors mana kar dete hai.

Veena: He, bhagvaan yeh sab hamaare ghar me kya ho raha hai? Hamaare itne khushhal parivaar ko na jaane kisiki nazar lag gayi hai. Jab se Sumit ki sagai hui hai tab se kuch na kuch galat ho raha hai. Sumit ko apne dream project ke liye government certificate ki zaroorat thi , use woh nahi mila.Baad me shares ka gir jaana aur ab inka sidio se gir jaana. He bhagvaan ab hum kya karenge?

Kumkum: Aap fikr mat kijiye aunty, mera bloodgroup O+ hai. Mera khoon har kisiko diya jaa sakta hai. Uncle ko kuch nahi hoga. Me blood donate karoongi.

Ye sab keh kar Kumkum doctors ke paas jaa kar ye baat bataati hai. Doctors Kumkum ko check karne ke baad kehte hai ki aapka khoon kam padega. Tab Kumkum zid karti hai aur blood donate karti hai. Doctors Sumit ko savdhan karte hai ki Kumkum ne apne sharir se bahot zyada khoon de diya hai shayad uski jaan ko khatra ho sakta hai. Yeh sunkar Sumit bahot pareshan ho jaata hai aur Kumkum ko milne jaata hai.

Sumit: Kumkum, yeh sab kya hai? Yeh me kya sun raha hoon? Tumne aisi zid kyon ki?

Kumkum: Tum chinta mat karo. Aur uncle to mere apne hai. Kya agar aaj uncle ki jagah mere papa hote to me kya ye sab na karti, to tum kyon fikr kar rahe ho. Muje kuch nahi hoga, bas uncle ko kuch hona nahi chahiye.

Sumit: Agar tum jaisa insaan yeh sab kare to bhagvaan bhi kisika kuch nahi bigaad sakte. Sach me Kumkum aaj tumne ek jeevansathi ki tarh mera sath diya hai. Aur isliye me aaj wada karta hoon ki kabhi bhi tumhari zindagi me koi tufan aaya to use pehle mera samnaa karna hoga.

Itne me Kumkum ka cell bajta hai aur woh dekhte hi Kumkum bed se uthkar bahar jaati hai.

Kumkum: Hello, tum kahaan ho? Kaise ho? Tumhe ye to yaad hai na ki tumhari sagai kisise ho chuki hai? Aur koi tumhara intezaar kar raha hai. Aur tum India kab aarahe ho?Jatin ab chup bhi mat raho kuch to kaho.

Jatin: Are, tum bolne ka moka dogi to me bolungana. Tumhare liye ek surprise hai aur agle hafte hum shadi kar rahe hai.

Kumkum: Kya? aur tum to bahar ho to me shadi kisse karoongi?

Jatin: Tum fikr mat karo. Surprise ye hai ki me abhi Bombay airport par hoon aur isiliye to main shadi ke liye keh raha hoon.

Kumkum: Kya tum sach keh rahe ho?

Jatin: Maine kabhi tumhare sath mazak kiya hai? Aur kya tum Mrs. Jatin kapoor banane ke liye taiyaar ho?

Kumkum: Janab, jabse sagai hui hai tab se yahin ek khwab to dekhti aayi hoon.

Jatin: Ab muje airport pr hi khada rehna padega ya tum muje lene bhi aaogi?

Kumkum: Me bas abhi aati hoon. Tum wahan meri wait karo.

Phone katkar Kumkum Sumit ke paas aati hai aur apne aur Jatin ki sagai ke baare me aur woh shadi karnewale hai ye sab bata kar airport ki or rawaana hoti hai. Yeh sab sunkar Sumit chonk jaata hai aur usko kuch accha nahi lagta. Woh sochta hai ki Kumkum ki shadi ke baare me sunkar kyon use jealous feel huva. Woh apne dil se is baare me javaab mangta hai aur javaab me bhi use Kumkum hi milti hai. Use ye ehsas hota haiki woh Kumkum se pyar karta hai. Baad me use khayaal aata hai ki uski sagai Renuka se ho chuki hai magar use pyar nahi karta . Pyar to sirf woh Kumkum se karta hai magar Kumkum Jatin se shadi karnewali hai yeh sochke woh is natije pe pahonchata hai ki Pyar lene ka nahi dene ka naam hai isliye woh kumkum ko ye sab nahi batayega aur khud Renuka se shadi kar lega. Wahan Kumkum ki shadi ek hafte baad ki te hoti hai aur Sharma family me shadi ki taiyariyaan shuru ho jaati hai. Tab Sumit Kumkum ko apni Fioncey se milwane airport pe boolata hai aur Kumkum wahan jaati hai aur jab woh Sumit ki honewali patne se milti he to

Kumkum: Tum? Tum kya kar rahi ho yahaan pe? Door ho jaao meri nazro se

Itna bolte hi Kumkum behosh ho jaati hai ................


To be continued..........................................