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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow this story has taken a beautiful turn and its really gr8!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey, Swt hrt. Dont get dissappointed. 😊 Mujhe aap ki kahaani bahut achhi lagi. 👏 👏 👏 U know mein ek silent reader lekin aaj ke baad hamesha comment karne ki koshish karoongi. 😛 I reallly love to read complete Urdu FF's. Urs iz one of them. Dont worry we all love ur FF.Come on cheer up. 😳 Its really awesome,superb and ofcoure BEST. 👏
Anywayz, from where are u? Ur janki right?? 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi,she say rite u r ff is vey good and urdu is also good plz countinu u r ff ok bye 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Sorry, guys. Mere ko do dino ke liye out of town jaana pada isliye me post reply nahi kar paayi magar aaj doopehr tin baje ke baad me likhnewali hoon, so keep watching Tu mile dil khile...........................
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Sorry for getting late & I'm sure that you will forgive me for it.Thanks a lot everyone who gave me reply. Apne muje bahot takat dihe jisse me aage is kahaani ko badha saku aur me hamesha aap sab ki iskeliye shukrguzaar rahoongi aur Sumit ne jo shayari ki hai woh meri banaayi hui hai, aur Kumkum I mean Juhiji ko samne rakhke aisi kai shayari banaa chuki hoon jo me aap sab ke sath share karna chahungi, apko woh jaisi bhi lage uske baare me muje zaroor bataiyega aur me aapse apni personal feelings is kahaani ke zariye bataati rahoongi kyonki is kahaani me jitne bhi characters hai jo Kumkum ko chahte hai uske zariye apni dil ki baat apko bataa rahi hoon kyonki jab bhi me kahaani likhti hoon meri baju me Kumkum ka photo hamesha rehta hai aur vaise to woh meri ruh me bas chuki hai..................................

Aur ab kahaani ki baat..................................

Sagai ho jaane ke baad Sumit-Kumkum ko ek sath phoolo se sajaaye huve joole par bithaya jaata hai aur gharwale sab jashn manaate hai aur dol bajaakar nachte-gaate hai. Magar Sumit to Kumkum me itna kho jaata hai ki woh apni aas-paas ki duniyaa ko bhool jaata hai aur apne sapno me kuch is kadar khota hai ki woh sirf Kumkum ki taraf dekhta hai aur uski aankho me uske aanewale kal ki zalak dikhai dena shuru kar deti hai.

Sumit ke khayalo me:

Sumit ne red colour ka shirt aur white pent pehna hota hai aur Kumkum ne red colour ki saari, kano me earrings, hatho me kangna aur pairo me payal pehne huve hai. Aur sirf woh dono ek khule medan me ek tent me raat ke andhere me ek sath hote hai aur music baj raha hota hai aur SOORAJ HUVA MATTHAM CHAND JALNE LAGA......... ye gana chal raha hota hai, tab woh dono ek doosre ko ek tight hug dete hai, Kumkum Sumit ke sath close dance karti hai...........................................

Sooraj huva matham, chand jalne laga,
Aasama ye haye, kyon pighalne laga.
Me thehra raha, zameen chalne lagi,
Dhadka ye dil, saans thamne lagi.
Ho kya ye mera pehla pehla payar hai.

Ho oooo aan aa ...................
Sooraj huve matham, chand jalne laga,
Aasama ye haye, kyon pighalne laga.
Me thehari rahi, zameen chalne lagi,
Dhadka ye dil, saans thamne lagi.
Sajnaa kya ye mera pehla pehla pyar hai.

Hai khoobsurat ye pal sab kuch raha hai badal,
sapne haqeeqat me jo dhal rahe hai.
Kya sadiyo se poorana hai rishta ye hamaara,
ye jis tarah tumse hum mil rahe hai.
Unhi rahe har dam pyar ka mosam,
Unhi milo humse tum janam janam,
Me thehra raha zameen chalne lagi,
dhadka ye dil saans thamne lagi,
Kya ye mera pehla pehal pyar hai. Sajana......

Is dauran Sumit Kumkum ko chumta hai aur uske baad Kumkum sharma kar palat jaati hai aur Sumit usko apni or khinchkar Kumkum ko apni god me utha leta hai aur gol ghumata hai aur usse wahaan rakhe gaye bed ki taraf le jaata hai.

Tere hi rang se yun me to rangi hoon sanam,
Haan doob ke paar me ho rahi hoon sanam,
O mahiyaa ve tere ishq me,
paake tuje khudse hi kho rahi hoon sanam.
Sagar huva pyasa raat jagne lagi sholo ke dilme bhi aag jalne lagi.
Me thehra raha zameen chalne lagi,
Dhadka ye dil saans thamne lagi.
Sajana kya ye mera pehla pehla pyar hai.

Is ke dauran Sumit Kumkum ko bed par sulaata hai aur khud Kumkum ke nazdik jaata hai, Kumkum Sumitke sine lag jaati hai aur song khatma honewala hota hai tab Sumit Kumkum ke hotho ko chumta hai.........................

Magar tabhi Kumkum haqeeqat me Sumit ki aankho ke samne chutki bajaati hai aur Sumit ka sapna adhoora reh jaata hai.

Kumkum: Sumit, aap kahaan kho gaye the me kabse apko boola rahi thi aur aap hai ki meri or dekh rahe the magar apne hi khayalo me goom the aisa kya ho gaya?

Sumit: Woh actually, me woh me....

Kumkum: AAp itne khoye huve kyon hai, jo kehna chahte hai woh bejijak keh sakte hai.

Sumit: Jab sathi sapno bhi aata hai toduniya itni rangin lagne lagti hai, jab asliyat me aisa hoga to zindagi ke maine hi badal jaayege. Yahi keh raha hi mera khayal muje ki ab sath zindagi bhar ka nahi magar janam janam ka ho jaaye. Aur mere kehne ki baat..................aisa kehkar sharma jaata hai.

Kumkum: Sumit, aap se ek baat kahoon?

Sumit: Haan, kaho naa isme itna poochhnewali kaun si baat hai?

Kumkum: Woh aaj aap bahot handsome lag rahe hai aur

Sumit: Aur.........kaho naa.
ye kehkar Kumkum ke nazdik jaane ki koshish karta hai.

Kumkum: Aap ka shayrana andaaz muje bahot pasand aaya.

Sumit: Ye to apki sangat ka asar hai, jisne is patthar ko ek khoobsurat moorat banaa diya. Or ye sab aap ke sath ka natijaa hai. and I love you so much aur aage....

Kumkum sharma jaati hai aur Sumit ka cell bajta hai, Sumit us par dhyan nahi deta.

Kumkum: Age aapka cell baj raha hai.

Sumit: Yeh javaab nahi ho sakta aur haan me aaj raat khane ke baad chhat pe me tumhara intezaar karoonga tumne muje kahaa tha ke tum muje milne aaogi to me tumhari raah dekhoonga, abhi isliye chhod raha hoon ki dadimaa aa rahi hai aur cell baj raha hai, aur haan tab muje mera javaab chahiye.

Sumit ko phone pe good news milti hai ki market me wadhwa company ke shares ke daam sabse high ho gaye hai.
Sumit yeh baat sabko bataata hai.

Dadima; Sachmuchye kamaal Kumkum ka hai, jaise in dono ki sagai hui turant acchi khabre milne lagi, Kumkum jiti raho aur tum dono hamesha khush raho.

Sumit: Haan, dadimaa, aap bilkul sahi keh rahi hai. Kumkum mere liye hi nahi hum sabke liye lucky hai.

Sab is baat ko saraahte hai aur Kumkum Sumit ki or aur Sumit Kumkum ki or dekh kar ek doosre ko thanks kehte hai aur sab khushiyaa manaate hai.

To be continued..........................................
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46
Greattt. Ab aage kya hoga uska intezaar rahega.
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great part 👏 👏
kash sapna saach hotha 😆 😆
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very nice part w/ the dream sequence and all, continue soon!!! 😊
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Yes, ab hum jayenge aage kyonki Kumkum-Sumit ko ek jo hona hai, par usse pehle jisne bhi post reply kiya usko Thanks a lot aur jo silent viewers se ek goozarish hai ki chahe hum duniya ki kisi bhi kone me kyon na ho magar ye forums hume jode rakhti hai aur usi ke zariye aap sab mere dost ban gaye hai. Apki baat muje pata nahi magar maine apne dilse apko dost samja hai aur main apke taste ko janna chahti hoon isliye aap se post reply karne ki binti karti hoon, jisse apki pasand napasans aur aap kya mehsoos karte hai ye pataa chale. Aur chaliye Kumkum Sumit ke pyar bhare safar par............................


Raat ka khana ho gaya tha magar Sumit to khana khane nahi aaya, aur khane ke table par Kumkum sab ko serve kar deti hai magar usne wahaan Sumit ko nahi dekha aur isiliye uski nazar Sumit ko talash kar rahi hoti hai, tab uski yeh becheni Veena dekhti hai.

Veena: Are, kya huva Kumkum beta? Itni bechen kyon ho? Or chalo tum bhi hamaare sath khana kha lo.

Kumkum: Nahi mummyji. Muje bhookh nahi hai aur Sumit bhi nahi aaye.

Veena: Accha to yeh baat hai (Kumkum sharma jaati hai). Tu fikr mat kar, maine usse khane ko puchha tha magar usne kaha ki bad me agar man karega to Madhav se khana mangwa lega, aur usse to maine chhat pe jaate huve dekha tha, magar tu to khale.

Kumkum: Nahi, sach me bhookh nahi hai.

Kumkum Veenaji ko aisa kehti hai, magar sach me woh isliye nahi kha rahi thi kyonki Sumit bhookha tha, woh sabko khilati hai magar woh Sumit ke baare me sochti hai aur usse khayal aata hai ki Sumit chhat par uska intezaar kar raha hoga kyonki subah usine ye kaha tha aur sab jab kha lete hai tab woh khana plate me nikaal ke chupke se chhat pe jaati hai.

Wahaan chhat pe Sumit Kumkum ki raah dekh raha hota hai or Kumkum jab chhal par pahonchti hai to woh Sumit ko chand se baat karte dekhti hai.

Sumit: Ae chand tu jaanta hai ki,
Ishq kar deta hai dil ko bekaraar, Bhar deta hai patthro me bhi pyar, Har ek ko nahi milti zindagi ki ye bahaar kyonki pya ka doosra naam hai intezaar...................

aur phir geet gata hai, Phoolo ke rangse, dil ki kalam se tujko likhi roz paake, kaise bataaoon, kis kis tarah se , pal pal muje tu sataati. Tere hi sapne lekar ke soya, teri hi yado me jaaga, tere khyalo me ulza raha, jaise ho mala me dhaga, haan badal bijli chandan pani jaisa apna pyar, lena hoga janam hume kayin kayin baar, haan kitna magir kitna madhur tera mera pyar, lena hoga janam hume

Itna gaate gaate woh pichhe dekhta hai to uske pichhe Kumkum khadi hoti hai aur woh dang reh jaata hai.

Kumkum: Itna madhur, itna magir tera mera pyar lena hoga janam hume kayin kayin baar.

Sumit: Kumkum, tum bhi gaan a gaa rahi ho!

Kumkum: Kyon me gaana nahi gaa sakti?

Sumit: Nahi, aisi koi baat nahi, magar..................

Kumkum: yeh gaana isliye gaya kyonki main aap se maafi mangna chahti thi.

Sumit: Magar kyon?

Kumkum: Woh isliye ki maine apko bahot intezzr karvaaya aur meri wajah se aap bhooke hai, isliye sorry.

Sumit: Kumkum tum bhi naa. Tum kabhi mafi mangne deti ho jo main tumhe mafi mangne doon, tumko aaj last time bol raha hoon, ki tum mujse kabhi mafi nahi mangogi, varna main tumse rooth jaoonga.

Kumkum: Are, woh to muje bahot bhari padega ki mera itna accha dost mujse rooth jaye isliye ab mafi nahi mangoongi. Thik hai. Ab khana kha lijiye.

Sumit: Tum to pehle khao. Tum bhi to bhookhi ho.

Kumkum: Sumit, aap kaise jaante hai.

Sumit: Dil ki baat dilbar ke alaava kaun jaan sakta hai. aur vaise bhi main apni Kumkum ko jaanta nahi kya? Woh khud bhookhi rahegi jab tak uska apna khana nahi kha leta.

Kumkum ki aankhe bahr aati hai aur woh apne hatho se khane ka nivala Sumit ke mooh me deti hai aur baad me Sumit bhi Kumkum ko apne hatho se khilata hai.

Sumit: Haan Kumkum tum kuch baat batanewali thi agar tumne muje aaj aur abhi woh nahi batai to tumhe yahaan se jaane nahi doonga.

Kumkum: Thik hai to suniye, Sapne the, sapno me aap shamil huve. Naa jaane kaise hum apke pyar ke kabil huve.
Karzdar rahenge hum us hasin pal ke jab aap hamaari chhoti si duniya me shamil huve.

Sumit: Kumkum tumhare liye ye sher ka javaab me is tarah se doonga. Zindagi me apki ahemiyat bataa nahi sakte, dil me apki jagah dikha nahi sakte, kuch rishte anmol hote hai duniya me, ye hum sabko samja nahi sakte.
Magar ek baat puchhu.

Kumkum: Haan, apko me kabhi manaa karoongi kya?

Sumit: Tum muje tumse aap kyon boolane lagi ho?

Kumkum: Kyonki aap woh insaan hai jiski me bahot izzat karti hoon aur vaise bhi hamaari shadi hogi to aap mere pati ban jayenge to apko muje isi tarah se pukarna padega.

Sumit: Main jaanta hoon,tumhari har rooh ko mehsoos kar sakta hoon, main tumhare sath jo rishta jodna chahta hoon woh is duniya ka sabse haseen rishta hai, aap to parayo ko kaha jaata hai, tum to meri apni ho aur do din me meri ardhangini ban jaaogi aur isiliye tumhe muje aaap kehne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai, tum muje yahi kehkar pookarogi. Understand.

Kumkum: Thik hai. Tum jaisa thik samjo, ab barabar hai.

Sumit: Haan bilkul barabar hai.

Kumkum: To main chalti hoon.

Sumit: kahaan.

Kumkum: Niche aur kahaan.

Sumit: Nahi, thodi der thehrona.

Kumkum: Nahi, koi dekh lega aur maine apna kaha nibhaya. Main jaa rahi hoon.

Sumit Kumkum ko rokne ki bahot koshish karta hai magar Kumkum chali jaati hai.

Sumit: Chalo kuch nah, do din ke baad to mere sath hi aana padega aur vaise bhi kal to mehandi aur sangit hai to vahaan kahaan jaaogi.

Apne aap par haskar kamre me jaakar so jaata hai.

To be continued..........................................



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Posted: 18 years ago
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fantastic janu 👏 👏 .
cont soon 😃

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