ff-KumkumSumit(Tu Mile Dil Khile)Upd20/05 - Page 2

hi, welcome to the forum. Will definetly read ur FF. 😊

Now I'm starting the story writing. And I'm introducin the characters & the situation. &a mp;n bsp; There are two families and two persons are negative.
The First one is Wadhwa family and the other is Sharma family.
THE WADHWA FAMILY:-
1) Harshwardhan Wadhawa- ye parivaar ke sabse bade member hai aur Sumit ke dadaji hai.
2) Rajeshvari Wadhwa- ye dadima hai.
3) Kulbhushan & Veena- ye Sumit ke mummy-daddy hai.
4) Sumit Wadhwa- ye janab parivaar me sabse chhote hai kehne ka matlab ye hai ki woh dadaji & dadima ke ladle hai. ye bahot hi Handsome hai. unho ne M.B.A. kiya hai. aur wadhawa house ke business ki babdor unke haath me hai. Abhi abhi unki Ek ladki ke saath sagai hui hai. Sumit bahut hi Khushmijaz hai. aur apne parivaar se bahut hi pyar karta hai. Apne parivaar ke liye woh kuch bhi karne ke liye har waqt taiyar rehta hai.
5) Sukanya bua- ye Sumit ki buaji hai. aur sirf apne baare me hi sochti hai.

Now The SHARMA FAMILY:-
1) Raj Sharma- ye hai sharma industries ke malik aur inke do bachhe hai. unke bete ka naam Rohit hai & beti ka naam to aap jaan hi gaye honge. Yes, off course hamari sabse pyari aur har dil aziz KUMKUM.
2) Kavita- ye kumkum ki maa I mean Mrs. Sharma hai.Kumkum inki bahot ladli hai.
3) Rohit- ye kumkum ke bhaiya hai. Unko ek ladki se pyar hua tha aur woh ladki unke bane banaye business ko tabah karke chali gayi kyonki who sirf paise enthne ko aayi thi. Unki us ladki se sagai hui thi jo toot gayi.
4) KUMKUM- ye Mr & Mrs. Sharma ki beti hai. Apne mummy-papa ki bahut hi ladli hai. Aur modern hone ke bavjood apni sanskar, sanskruti aur sabhyta ki ijjat karti hai aur usne in sabhi ko apnaya bhi hai ye kiski taklif sehen nahi kar sakti hai aur doosro ko madad bhi karti hai. Barbad huyi Sharma industries ko usine fir apne pairo pe khada kiya hai.Iski to jitni taarif ki jaaye utni kam hai. Unki sagai uske papa ne apni hi company ke board of directors ke ek member se ki hai.

Negative roles ke introduction ki jaroorat nahi hai kyonki woh to hum baad me samaj hi jaayenge.
Please give the response and thank you very much to them who gives their opinions & responses.
Ab kahani baad me.Shaam ko me kahani ki shuruaat karne wali hoon. So, keep watching & Sorry, about getting late. Good Bye & See you soon.

hey janu.........firstly welcome....to our forum..... 😃

and sure we'll support u.....the beginning is gud........keep it up 👏 .......waiting for the other section 😛 😊 😊

so is it tht sumeet is engaged to someone else and kumkum to someone else oh waiting for the update
and we all r there to support u dont worry

Hey friends.There is a powercut in my house. So, I can't open my computer. But when it will be light up, I will start writing. I am sending this message from a cybercafe.So, wait & sorry for getting late. I'll be there soon. Good Bye & See you later.
and yes I'll be there about 12 o'clock or tommorow morning.

Hello, friends I'm back. The story begins.................

Raat ki khamoshi me Kumkum apne garden me ekdum chuchap bethi hoti hai aur apni poorani yaado ko fad ke use jalaa rahi hai. Us ki aankho me ek khalbalahat si hai aur aansoo ki dharaa woh rok nahi pa rahi hai.
Usi dauran Mr. Raj Sharma tehlne ke liye garden me niklte hai aur Kumkum ko ye sab karte dekh chonk jaate hai. Woh turant hi Kumkum ke paas jaate hai.
Kumkum unhe dekh unke sine se lag jaati hai aur poochati hai ke papa ye sab hamare saath hi kyon hua? bahiyane, maine aur aap sab ne koi galat kaam nahi kiya to aisa hamare saath hi kyon huva?
Tabhi Mr. Sharma jalati hui photo dekhte hai aur sab baate samaj jaate hai aur Kumkum se kahte hai ki shayad ye hamare jivan ki koi parikha thi aur hum is pariksha me safal bhi huve hai.

Mr. Sharma: Beta tum to hamara sahaara ho. Agar tum na hoti to Rohit kitni badi problem me pad sakta tha ye tum bahut acchi tarah se janati ho. Tumne Rohit ko aur hum sab ko us ladki ke changul se bachaya aur woh jo bhi lekar bhaag gayi us se hame koi fark nahi padta kyonki tumne baad me apne tarike se business karke Sharma Industries ko ik esa mukam diya hai ki me wahaan tak dedh saal me jaana soch bhi nahi sakta. To tum kyon is poorani yado ko leke ro rahi ho. Tum meri beti nahi mera beta ho. Jo har waqt me apne baap se kandhe se kandha milakar chalti ho.

Kumkum: Magar papa usne hamari aur sabse zyada bahiya ki feeings ko hurt kiya hai. Usne apke banaye huve Karobar ko bhi nahi chhoda aur usne kayde kanoon ko bhi hamare khilaf istemaal karke hame aisa fasaya ke hum aaj tak uske khilaf koi saboot ya koi gavaah nahi rakh paye jis se hame nyay mile.

Mr. Sharma: Tum chinta kyon karti ho hamare karobar ko to tumne itna badhaya hai ke mai aur Rohit bhi itne acche mukam par phonch nahi paate. Hamari feelings ki baat kare to beta is duniya me us ladki jaise kai log hai aur tumhare jaise sirf kuch hi hai. Hamare paas to tum thi aur hum sab us hadse se bahar nikal chuke hai. Tumhare pyar ne hin hame phir sambhal ne ki shakti di hai varna hum to kabke bikhar chuke hote aur tumhare hi karan Priya jaisi sulji, samajdar Aur bahut pyari patni Rohit ko aur is ghar ko bahot hi acchi bahu mili hai. Isliye tum bhi ye sab kuch bhoola kar aage badhne ki socho aur vaise bhi tumhare market performance ko dekh ke Wadhwa industries ne hamari industries ke saath milkar kam karne ki offer ki hai aur maine woh manzoor kardi hai. Tum bhi to yahi chahati thi na?

Kumkum: Haan papa. Wadhwa industries india ki top five companies me se ek hai aur ye company ki prestige to market me haihi aur sath sath is company me sanskar aur sanskruti ko bhi shamil kiya gaya hai. Isliye is company ke saath kaam karne ki muje tahe dil se Khwahish hai aur is se hamari company ko bhi bahot profit hoga.

Mr. Sharma: To thik hai ab ye aansoo poch ke apne kal ke assignment aur presentation ke liye taiyaar ho jao. Kyonki ye bahot bada project hai aur tum se behtar ise koi sambhal nahi sakta. Isliye tumhi kal Wadhawa company jaogi aur vahaan ke Chair person Mr. Sumit Wadhwa se to me already mil chuka hoon. Bahot hi dilchasp insaan hai aur bahot hi helpful hai. Woh bhi tum se milna chahte the. To kal subhe milke ye kaam kae lena.
OK

Kumkum: Thik hai. Jaisa aap kahe.

Mr.Sharma: Aur ab tum so jaao. Bahot der ho chuki hai. Good Night may swwet angel. I love you.

Kumkum: Good Night my sweet papa. I love you too papa.

To be continued.....................................

awesome waiting when will sumeet meet kumkum 😛 😊 😛

very nice part, can't wait till sukk meet 😳

Ab aage............................................

Subah Kumkum pe ghar pe Kumkum taiyar hokar bhagvan ke mandir me jaati hai and she prays to god.

Kumkum: (Do hath jodkar prarthna karti hai) He Bhagvan mere parivaar ne us buri aurat ke karan bahot dukh jele hai. Hum kai arse baad is hadse se ubhar paye hai. Apke aur mere maa-baap ke aashirvaad se hi me is kabil ho paayi hoo ki me unhe sambhal saku. Aaj mere liye aur meri company ke liye bahot bada din hai. Agar aaj me safal hoti hoo to agar me kal naa bhi rahoo to bhi mere parivaar ko koi taklif nahi rahegi. Jis tarah aapne muje musibat se bachaya hai aage chalkar bhi mere sar pe apna hath banaye rakhna kyonki apke siva hamara koi wajood nahi hai aur muje apne kaam me safalta mile aise aashirvaad dete rehna aur muje sahi raah dikhana aur agar me bahtak jaau to muje phir se apne farz ke raste par chalne ke liye raah dikhana................

Utne me hi Kumkum ki maa Mrs. Sharma aati hai...........

Mrs. Sharma: Beti, tu chinta kyon karti hai bhagvaan hamesha acche logo ke sath hote hai aur sahi insaano ki hi pariksha karte hai. Tune to bahot hi acche kaam kiye hai aur isiliye tu bahot safalta paayegi. Aur mere aur tere papa ka aashirvaad to hehi. Aur tere sanskar hi itne unche hai ki woh kabhi tuje teri raah se bhatka nahi sakte. Aur tu jis ghar me jaayegi woh ghar ke to bhagya hi khul jaayenge aur dekhna tuje to bahot hi pyar karnewala, tera bahot khayal karnewala pati mila hai. Ab to teri shadi bhi usse karvani padegina?

Kumkum: Maa, aap bhi kya meri shadi ki bate lekar beth gayi. Woh intezaar kar lega aur abhi tak to woh company ke kaam se out of India bhi to gaya hai. Aur vaise bhi uske parivaar me to koi nahi hai aur apko hi apne mummy daddy samjta hai to hum to yahi rahenge aapke sath...
Dono haste hai.
Usi waqt Mr. Sharma Kumkum ko aavaj laga kar kehte hai..
Mr. Sharma: Are, Kumkum beta baate bad me karlene pehle nashta karke Wadhwa company ko chali jaao kyonki aaj to tumhe Mr. Wadhwa se jo milna hai.

Kumkum: Papa muje nashta nahi karna. Maine coffee pili hai aur me nikal rahi hoo.

Mr. Sharma: Are driver ko sath leti jana. OK

Kumkum: thik hai papa. Ab me jaao.
kumkum apne mummy papa ke pair chhutihai.

Mr. Sharma: Haan Beta. tum jaao aur suno Best of Luck & take care.

Kumkum: Thank you & take care too. Mummy-papa I love you, Good bye............................ Aur Nikal jaati hai.

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(Usi waqt Sumit ke ghar par)

Sumit taiyaar ho kar Mandir me bhagvaan kedarshan ke liye jata hai. Aur dadima vaha hoti hai. Darshan ke baad Sumit ko woh tika lagati hai aur prasad deti hai aur kehti hai,
Dadima: He bhagvaan ise kahiye ki ab ye tika laganewali ko ghar me bahoo banakar le aaye.

Sumit: Dadima agar woh aabhi jaaye to bhi me tika to aapse hi lagvaunga. Isliye aapki ye duty to kabhi khatm nahi hogi.

Dadima: Beta sach kehti hoo ab is ghar ko bahoo ki zarurat hai aur vaise bhi sagai to ho gai hai to phir kyon shadi ke liye naa bol raha hai. Haan karde na beta.

Sumit:Thik hai me sochta hoon. Ab muje jaane dijiye aur muje aashirvaad dijiye.

Dadima: Jug jug jiyo aur khub tarkki karo.

Sumit Kul ke paas jata hai.

Sumit: papa, aaj maine Sharma industries ki Honour Miss Kumkum Sharma ko boolaya hai aur me unke presentation aur assignment dekhnewala hoon. Maine inka naam bahot baar suna hai par kabhi unse mila nahi hoon. To kya kiya jaaye.

Kul: Are, woh abhi aanewali hai isliya maine tumhare secretary ko doosri meetings cancel karvaane ke liye bol diya hai isliye chinta mat karo . Hum Mr. Sharma ko to mile hi hai agar tumhe sab thik lage to sari formalities poori kar lena kyonki muje tumpe poora bharosa hai isliye tum jo bhi decision loge usme me tumhare sath rahoonga.

Sumit: Thank You dad.

Usi waqt veenaji Sumit Ko nashte ke liye boolati hai..

Veena; Chal, Sumit nashta karle varna late ho jayega.

Sumit: maa me already late ho chuka hoon. Please muje juice de dijiye.

Veena: Hamesha aisa hi karta he ye ladka. apna bilkul khayal nahi rakhta. Ab to iski shadi karvani hi padegi.

Sumit: kya maa tum bhi. Me lunch karne ghr aaoonga. Ab to khush ho jaao.

Tabhi dadaji aate hai.......................

Dadaji: beta sumit tumhari maa sach keh rahi hai. Aur haan, Kul ne bataya ki tum aaj Sharma In dustries ki honour Kumkum Sharma se milne wale ho.

Sumit: Haan dadaji.........

Dadaji: Beta, us ladki ne bahot chhoti umar me zindagi me bahot kuch dekha hai aur bahot hi honsle ke sath apne maa-baap ko musibat se bachaya hai. Uske sath kaam karna hamara saubhagy hoga. Isliye uske sath kaam karne se hichkhichana nahi. maine use dekha hai. Bahot pyari aur acchi bacchi hai.

Sumit: Thik hai dadaji. jaisa aap kahe. Ab me chalta hoon.
Sabke pair chhuke office jaane ke liye niklta hai.

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Raste me ek jagah kisika accident ho gaya hota hai. Aur vahi se Kumkum aur Sumit ki gaadi guzarti hai. Accident ko dekh dond apni gadi se utar kar madad karne ke liye utarte hai. Kumkum us accident me jis lady ko laga hota hai use apne driver ke sath Hospital bhejti hai aur woh driver ko Wadhwa Company aane ko kehti hai aur khud taxi me jaane ki baat karti hai. Ye sun kar Sumit vahan Kumkum ke paas jata hai aur kehta hai,

Sumit: Apko Wadhwa company jana hai. Chaliye me apko lekar jata hoon.

Kumkum: rehne dijiye bhaisaab, khamakha aapko taklif hogi. Me taxi se chali jaaoongi.

Sumit: Are aap samji nahi me bhi wadhwa company hi jaa raha hoon. Isliye apko keh raha hoon.
Sumit Gadi ka darvaja kholta hai aur Kumkum beth jati hai.

Kumkum: (with curiosity) Kya aap Wadhwa company me kaam karte hai? Aur apka naam?

Sumit: Mera naam Sumit Wadhwa hai. Aur me Wadhwa group of companies ka chair person aur M.D. Hoon.

Kumkum: (khushi se) Are, Aap Mr. Wadhwa hai. Me aapse hi to milne aa rahi thi.

Sumit: Kya? aap muj se milne aa rahi thi? Magar aap mujse kyon milna chahti thi aur aap hai kaun?

kumkum: Me, Kumkum Sharma hoon. Sharma Industries ki Honour.

Sumit: (bahot khush ho ke_) Wow! what a co-incident!
Nice to meet you.

kumkum: Nice to meet you too.............................

To be continued................................................... ......................................................

at a great point u stopped the story 😛