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Posted: 17 years ago
u always make kk ill kyun??
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: panjwani

u always make kk ill kyun??
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Coz i luv to see Sumit taking care of Kumkum....๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 17 years ago
koi toh likho ab...........kk is still unwell..........
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Posted: 17 years ago
๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† guys did u turn this thread into a continuous story?

was meant to be random scenes so that any one can write about anything... but oh well! as u ppl wish! ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜†

Enjoy practicing ur writing skills... ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 17 years ago
Koi toh likho....phir i will continue... ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 17 years ago
ok ill continue i am not tht good but then sonu u do write

su takes kk to dhruvs room and kk starts crying
su makes kk sit on the bed and bends down on his knees infront of her

su--kk kya huwa kk ro mat bollo naa kya huwa

kk keeps crying and hugs su
su lets her hug him and pats her back

after sometime kk stops crying su moves her and asks her

su--kk kya huwa hai

kk-su pata nahi mujhe bahot darr lag raha hai aur tabiyat bhi thik nahi lag rahi hai

su-kk darne ki kya bat hai main ho naa tumhare saath aur kal hum doctor ke pass jayenge thik hai

kk shakes her head and says--nahi su doctor ke pass jane ki zaroorat nahi hai main thik ho jaongi main thik hu

su--nahi kk dhruv ke waqt bhi tumhari tabiyat itni kharab nahi thi tum itni kamzoor nahi thi

but kk doesnt listen to him and keeps telling him no
su gets up and makes kk lie down and says

su--doctor ke baare mein hum kal baat karenge ab tumhe aaram ki zarorat hai

he makes kk lie down but kk suddenly gets up puts a hand over her mouth and runs to the bathroom
at first su is confused but he then heard some noices and understood tht kk is vomiting he runs to the bathroom and sees kk

kk is vomiting and her eyes are red and tears are coming down her cheeks

su comes and holds her hair and pats her back
once kk finishes su takes a napkin and wipes her face he then picks up kk and takes her to the room
he makes kk lie down and puts a blanket on her and sits next to her and puts her to sleep

he sees kk sleeping and makes up his mind to take kk to the doctor tomorrow as he cant see his kk in this state
and also he wants to know wht is wrong with kk as she wasnt this kamzoor during dhruvs time also

next morning
kk opens her eyes and feels better she looks to her side and sees su still sitting next to her and holding her hand and he has gone to sleep like tht only

she feels guilty tht because o fher su had to sleep whole night in which a uncomfortable state she slowly removes her hand and goes to get up but su holds her hand again and kk turns and looks at him

su was sleeping when kk removed her hand su suddenly got up and saw kk getting out of bed at tht time su holds her hand

kk turns and lookss at su
kk--tum aaram karo abhi utne ki zarorat nahi hai tum poori raat barabar se nahi so paye

su looks at her and smiles and thinks tht kk in this state also thinks abt him first
kk continues
kk-aur mein tumhare liye and baki sab ke liye breakfast banati hu

till now su was ok with wht she had said but not nwo
su-- nahi tum kitchen mein jana bhi bhul jayo kam karna to door ki baat hai

kk-kyun ab kya huwa
su- kya huwa u r not going to work got it and it is my order tum bilkul kam nahi karogi aur har waqt aaram karogi aur ek aur baat hum kuch waqt mein doctor ke pass jayenge

kk opens her mouth to say no but su says something before she can
su-aur ab tum mana nahi karogi aur agar korogi toh mein tumhe god mein le jaonga
and su gets up and goes and gets ready to take kk to the doctor

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Posted: 17 years ago
haan Henna even I was wondering what's going on!! ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† guys this is supposed to be 1-part stories, not continouos ๐Ÿ˜ณ ....
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Posted: 17 years ago
wowowowow nicee part plzz contuied
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: rah_akki

haan Henna even I was wondering what's going on!! ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† guys this is supposed to be 1-part stories, not continouos ๐Ÿ˜ณ ....



๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ I think the concept of the thread has been lost...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

I might be starting a new thread soon... so keep a look out for it... it's gonna be a lil diffi to this one... but i'm sure if the dev team approves u'll enjoy it for sure! ๐Ÿ˜‰

tc ppl!

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Posted: 17 years ago

we have not forgoten the concept of thread ๐Ÿ˜›
here is my story ๐Ÿ˜›

It is 14 feb, ya din pyaar karna wala ka din hii.Is din do sunder sa pyaara sa bacha where born. One was boy and other was girl. Boy was named as Sumit Raichand ๐Ÿ˜ณ and girl was named as kumkum mishra ๐Ÿ˜ณ . Abb ya duno kisa milanga aga dhekhanga ๐Ÿ˜• .

20 years later ๐Ÿ˜›

It is a pleasant morning at ST.Xavier College with leaves and flowers fallen all over the place. As the time pass by all start coming in and black color car enters the college and he his the heart throb off college he is non other than Sumit raichand and at the same time enters a beautiful girl with her friends it is kumkum Mishra. Sumit and kumkum pass by each other. They nevar knew abt each other n neither they ever saw each other.. but then thru one common frnd su comes 2 knw abt kk as hez very popular among girls ๐Ÿ˜ณ ...he tries 2 befriend kk but she thinks hez a flirt n doesnt talk wid him. then tht common frnd will b talkn abt su everytym tht how hez handsum hunk of d coll n how all gals r aftr him kk gets irritated n thinks how can all girls be so dumb n come in his words ๐Ÿ˜ก . one day hu is carrying loads of books n cudnt manage... then he sees kk passing by n jus requests her if she can help him.. n kk being a nice gal ๐Ÿ˜› .. agrees n carries sum of his books n goes wid him... although she doesnt want to then after reaching class he thanks her 4 da help. then she says u r welcome. then he jus offers her sum toffies n though she denies.. he insists n she takes... then one boy comes n ask hu some help reg studies n he helps him. kk sees n thinks mayb wat she was thinking is wrong n su might be a gud guy ๐Ÿ˜ณ . then class starts n kk goes n sits at her place n so does su.. but in b/w class kk happens 2 notice him but w/o him knowing it and when kk is not looking at him then su is looking at him ๐Ÿ˜† . sum days pass by... kk comes 2 coll n sees su wid sum girls talking and chatting... n feels lil jealous ๐Ÿ˜ก .. her common frnd calls her 2 join them n kk comes but is feeling upset then after sumtym d convo is over n everyone leave... kk is also leaving but su calls her bak n then he jus tries 2 have a convo wid her... she feels uneasy initially but then as they talk she is comfortable. then su asks suddenly her cell number n kk is like confusd as although shez talkn 2 him but shez not sure whether 2 believe him or not..so she makes an xcuse tht she has 2 go to library n goes off frm ther su is surprised n more shocked. but kk feels upset tht how she made an xcuse lyk tht.. Then she later gives him her number..he calls her n they both keep talking n she finds tht su is really a nice person.. n not like wat she thought then they become gud frnds as the days pass by they became good friends ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ .
So close that they share even slight things which each other. One fine day there was a inter college competition at ooty and the college was taking part. All where practicing and the day finally arrived it was selection day and bt bad luck sumit didn't get selected ๐Ÿ˜ญ .
KK was really disappointed and sad ๐Ÿ˜” . But su made everyone happy and wished them best of luck ๐Ÿ˜ƒ .Now the day finally arrived all r ready to leave bt kk didn't turn up su went to her house packs her bag and force her to get ready and drops her in the college.Su bits bye to all.
KK was just was not in mood was feeling sad and feeling tht she was missing someone here su also same thing he was feeling. He was missing kk so much and was thinking ki mujha kya huva? Why I am like this why I am missing kk ๐Ÿ˜ญ .
They land up in ooty, which is greenery everywhere ๐Ÿ˜ณ . All where so happy except kk was finding su everywhere and she thinks why I am like this? Next day comp day all r busy geeting ready bt kk just sits like this here friends ask her wht happened bt she dosnt say anything ๐Ÿ˜ญ . Friends force her to get ready and finally dance comp starts kk dose her best and she moves out fr thr as she was not in mood .Results where announced kk bagged first prize ๐Ÿ‘ everyone was waiting fr kk bt kk didn't turn up.Kk was sitting on rock crying ๐Ÿ˜ญ Mujha su hona why I am missing him su kha hatum somebody puts hand on kk shoulders when she sees it is su and she runs and hugs him tightly ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— โค๏ธ .
Su says I cannt live with out u kk .is ko pyaar khatha tho I love u ๐Ÿค— โค๏ธ .kk says me to and they both hug each other tightly ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— all come and clap.

hope u all like it๐Ÿ˜ƒ


Edited by preethi - 17 years ago

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