pyrasa bandhan updated pg40 on 06.02.07

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mykrishna

@mykrishna

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Posted: 17 years ago

#251

thanks...the update will be there soon...

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Tamana

@SuKk_forever

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#252

Originally posted by: mykrishna
i think, no one wants to read this ff...i know i cant write as well as krishna..i m sorry for disappointing u all but still for krishna, i m continuing the ff..

Actually to tell u da truth, this was the first ff I read and I think that u and krishna r doing a wonderful job and plz plz plz do continue..

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vernika

@verni

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#253

sweetu.........very senti update......cont soon plzzz 😊

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mykrishna

@mykrishna

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#254

In kumkum's room...

Kumkum is fast asleep...Something in going on in Sumit's mind...Asit asks sumit to join him in his room for sometime..sumit agrees..
😕
Asit's room:

Asit-sumit...kumkum ki tabiyat bigad hi rahi hai...koi improvement nahin hai...she's growing weaker now...hum parson hi operate kar rahe hai ..is it ok?... 😭

sumit-tu jo bhi kar..i have full faith..but...main ek cheez soch raha tha asit..wo..

They talk about something....

Later, Kumkum's room:

Sumit makes kumkum sit..

Sumit-sweety thoda sa soup piyegi...aao..main pilaoonga..

But she hugs him, hidhing her face in his neck...sumit keeps the soup aside and hugs her back..

sumit-bacchi?...what happened?..

She closes her eyes and tears fall down her red face...
sumit wipes them... 😭

sumit-kumkum?..takleef ho rahi hai?..uneasy ho?..

She sweetly nods her head.."nahin..bas yun hi.."

sumit-pagli..you are crying..bas yun hi?.. 😊

kumkum-sumit...darr lag raha hai..hum sab log k..kuch waqt saath nahin bita sakte..?i..i mean..hum sab..

sumit understands what she's going through...he touches her face.. 😭

"bilkul kk...bas ye soup pi lo..phir i'll call everyone...theek?..ab no nahin royegi na baby?.."

she looks at him..

he makes her drink the soup and calls everyone...

They join them and kumkum feels nice...soon, she falls asleep holding sumit and sharman's arm...

11:45...Outside kumkum's room..

rohit-sumit...ab..kumkum ka..

Sumit(in tears)-bhaiyya ..parson operation..

His eyes reflect the turmoil within his heart..

anjali-ab?..su..sumit..wo..kumkum ko pata hai?..

sumit nods his head"nahin..bhabhi"..

sumit-kal...kuch khaas plan kiya hai uske liye..bata doonga raat tak....

rohit-tu ghar jaa..aaram kar..

sumit-bhaiyya...ab parson tak neend bhi toh nahin aayegi na...aap log jao..pratha ka kal school hoga na..
par..pratha kahaan hai...?

sharman indicates to kumkum's room...

They looks from the window...Pratha is sleeping holding kumkum tightly..kumkum is also protecting her from the hand which is free from drip...pratha's hand on her stomach and kumkum is holding her back...

Sumit is in tears looking at them..sleeping lovingly...

sharman-main le aoon?..

sumit-nahin..i'll go..

Sumit goes to the room and tries to move her hand softly away from pratha, but kumkum wakes up..

su-kumkum?...aap rest karo...pratha ko..

kk(in tears)-please bas aaj reh jaane do..phir zid nahin karungi...so bhi gayi hai...

Su(smiles)-aap bhi to nahin so paoge na theek se?..hmm?..kal uska school

kk(clutching her)bas ek din..

su-(kisses her forehead)accha baba..bas..so jao..raat bahut ho gayi hai...you need rest..

sumit leaves them sleeping....the scene is serenading...all of them are in tears on seeing kumkum's love for pratha and vice-versa..

Edited by mykrishna - 17 years ago

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Priya

@Pearl29

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#255

How beautiful............i can imagine it...please carry on quickly.......waiting for KK to be all right soon.....

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ambreen

@-Amby-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#256

hoep kk is fine soon
continue soon

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mykrishna

@mykrishna

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#257

Next morning...kumkum is aslep.sumit goes to her...

He touches her cheeks.

Sumit-kumkum?...

She wakes up..

sumit-bas abhi so jaana...thodi der baith jao please...hmm..

he makes her sit on the bed...

Asit-abhi to iski dressing bhi kholni hogi..

Kumkum removes her mask..

asit-aao..paas aao kumkum..dressing change karoonga..

kumkum-sumit...tum ..tum..bahar jaa sakte ho kuch der..

sumit-kyun?..

Asit-kya hua kumkum?..

kumkum-tumhe accha nahin lagega..tum jao..

sumit-kumkum..main koi baccha thodi naa hoon...chalo asit tu start kar de..

kumkum-sumit...mere baal nahin hain ab..

She's in tears..

sumit holds her hand..

sumit-itni stitches aayi hain..mujhe pata hai baba..

kumkum-tumhe mere baal bahut pasand they na...tum kehte they..

sumit-ki tum unhe khula choda karo..hmm?

kumkum-kya phir bhi pyaar karoge mujhe..

Asit hears this and gets emotional too...

sumit-(hugs her tightly)...main tumse pyaar karta hoon kumkum...sharir se nahin..aur kya main apni kumkum ke keval balon se pyaar karoonga?..

tum jab bhi dekhogi...apne sumit ko saath paogi..aur pata hai..jab hamare 12-15 bacche honge ....aur tum bahut moti ho jaogi...aur mere saare baal

white ho jayenge na..tab bhi hamara pyaar aisa hi rahega..

Asit and kumkum laugh..

sumit-tum bacchon jaisi baatein karti ho kabhi kabhi..

Asit-chalo...ab idhar aao..

asit removes her bandages one by one and she gets a little pain....

Sumit is not able to tolerate her pain..

sumit-asit..please dheere-dheere kar..

asit-arrey sumit...mujhe pata hai..

sumit-aasit...use dard ho raha hai..sambhal ke..

he adores his concerning ways for her...

Finally, her bandage is put away..

her entire head is pinkish and bruised due to the previous stitches..

Asit carefully checks it...

sumit is crying silently..kumkum is sitting with her eyes closed..

asit-hmm..kuch kuch healing toh hui hai..chalo..theek hai..i'll bandage it up hmm????..

Asit wraps new bandage around it and tears roll down both, sumit and kumkum's face..

sumit cries to see kumkum in pain and kumkum cries due to pain..

asit consoles kumkum...and leaves due to some urgent call

when her dressing is over, she opens her eyes, finding sumit in tears..

kumkum-(resting her head softly on sumit's shoulders)..sumit?..

He hugs her warmly...

Sumit-bahut himmat hai tum mein kumkum...par dekhna...mujhe pata hai..bhagwaan mere saath kuch galat nahin karega..bas kuch din

aur...phir tum bilkul theek ho jaogi...

kumkum wipes his tears..

kumkum-kaha tha na mat dekho...

sumit-khud itna seh rahi ho...aur main dekhoon bhi nahin?...ab bhi pain hai?..

kumkum(smiles)-aadat ho chuki hai ab dard ki ..sumit..chodo na..ye sab baatein...accha kal kya hai?..saturday na?..

sumit-(wiping tears)..haan..kal saturday hai..

kumkum-oh God!..maine bacchon ke liye candy nahin li..

sumit-bacche..??

kumkum-haan...wo neeche waale ward mein...

sumit-accha aapke dost?..

kumkum smiles at his words..

sumit-arrey ab to unke sumit bhaiyya aa gaye hain na..ab main gift doonga..

kumkum-thankyou..

sumit-(hugs her)dost nahin...husband bhi hoon aapka...itna haq banta hai mera bhi..

kumkum-itna nahin...ab sab haq tumhaara hi hai sumit..

sumit-chalo..ab let jao..you's feeling tired na?..

kumkum-tumhe kaise pata chala?..

sumit-tumhaari aankhon se...sab pata chal jaata hai..chalo..ab let jao kk..aao.

he makes her lie down...and soon, she falls asleep due to tiredness..

sumit covers her up with blanket..and leaves the room..