PKA - Pt16 Pg29 Piyush's condition - Page 21

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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey was just reading this FF. Its really nice:)
Its been almost a year since it was last updated with the story.
I thought Sumit said he will have his breakfast and come to meet Kumkum's brother Puyuish which should be in hours and noy years 🤢
Will u continue it anytime soon.............
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Posted: 17 years ago
omg guyssss i cant believe i havent updated this in a year.....its what uni does 2 u...i totalllly forgot about this....but dnt worry i will update this asap....so sorry guys, give me some time, imma have 2 catch up on the story myself b4 i update....thanx 4 all ur wonderful comments 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
Thank God 4 realiseing it.........waiting 4 the next part whenever u r free........
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Posted: 17 years ago
erm gunna update the next part...forgive if its crappy lol bcuz its been so lon since ive written this
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Posted: 17 years ago

Previously

Sumit hangs up and scratches his head

S - Kumkum ke bhai mujhse kyun mila chahte hai....whatever chal ut ja Sumit

Sumit gets out of bed and has a shower, he informs his family about Piyush and sets out to meet him.

Part 16

Sumit arrives at Kumkum's house, he gets out of his car and checks out his reflection in the car window, he sorts his shirt out then goes and knocks on the door, Raj opens, Sumit takes his blessings


S - uncle voh, Kumkum ka phone aaya tha....

Ra - haan voh mera beta tumse milna chahta hai

S - acha, voh kahan hai?

Ra - peeche garden mein breakfast kar raha hai, tume vahan chale jao


Sumit nods his head and follows Raj out in to the garden, he sees Naina sitting with Kumkum and Piyush at the garden table. Kumkum smiles seeing him, Sumit goes and greets Naina, then looks at Piyush, he puts out his hand


S - hi, I'm Sumit


Piyush nods his head but doesn't shake Sumit's hand, Sumit glances at Kumkum who shrugs her shoulders, Piyush signals Sumit to sit down, Sumit does so, Piyush finishes his breakfast then looks at Kumkum


P - andhar jao, ma aap bhi

K - lekin...

P - maine kaha jao

N - chal Kumkum


Naina and Kumkum leave, Sumit feels uneasy but dosn't let Piyush see, he sees Piyush staring at him


S - aap mujhse milna chahte the?

P - haan ma ne bataya tha ke tum Kumkum se shaadi karna chahte ho

S - ji

P - kya karte ho?


Sumit shifts in his seat, he recalls when Raj had asked him questions similar to these but then Raj had been joking around but from Piyush's body language Sumit could tell that he is serious


S - filhaal tho main ek cafe mein gaana gaata hoon


Piyush chuckles and offers Sumit some biscuits, Sumit refuses, Piyush puts the plate down


P - tho tumhara kehna hai ke agar tumhari or Kumkum ki shaadi ho gayi tho tum usse gaa kar khilaoge

S - main kuch samja nahin...

P - main samja tha hoon, Kumkum meri behen hai, aur main chahta hoon ke voh jahan shaadi karti hai vahan usse duniya ke har sukh mil sakke...kya tum voh sab de sakte ho?

S - ji, zaroor

P - kaise? tum tho sirf gaane gaa the ho

S - haan magar mere dad ka ek business hai, agar main chahoon tho main vahan kaam kar sakta hon aur Kumkum ko voh har sukh de sakta hoon, jiski aap baat kar rahe ho

P - tho tum apne dad ke paison se meri behen ko khilaoge, khush rakoge

S - ji?

P - baat saaf hai Sumit


Piyush cleans his hands with a cloth and stands up


P - agar tum meri behen se shaadi karna chahte ho, tho tumhe meri ek shart maan ni hogi

S - kaisi shart?

P - agar tum is ek saal mein kam se kam 10 lakh kama sakte ho, tho tum Kumkum se shaadi kar sakte ho

S - kya? 10 lakh....ek saal mein, yeh tho.....

P - mushkil hai? jaanta hoon lekin agar tum sache dil se Kumkum ko chahte ho tho yeh tho tumhare liye bohat aasaan hoga, agar tumhe shart manzoor hai tho bata dena. It was nice meeting you Sumit.


Piyush turns to leave while Sumit stays seated, Piyush stops and turns around


P - aur haan, agar tum yeh shart maante ho tho is ek saal mein tum Kumkum se bilkul nahin mil sakte, tumhe yeh sab akele karna padega


Piyush goes inside, Sumit is still in shock, he gets up and begins to walk inside


S (thinks) - agar shart maan lete hoon tho ek saal mein 10 lakh kama ne padege aur saath saath Kumkum se shaadi kar sakta hoon...lekin ek saal tak Kumkum se nahin mil sakta....aur agar nahin maanta tho Kumkum se shaadi nahin kar sakta...kya karoon


Sumit is in a dilemma, he goes inside and finds Kumkum in front of him


K - kya kaha bhaiya ne?

S - voh....kahan hai?

K - andhar, mama aur papa ke paas


Sumit walks past her and goes inside, he stands in front of Piyush


S - mujhe aapki shart manzoor hai

P - really? tho teek hai, tum ja sakte ho


Sumit turns to leave, Kumkum is at the door, she makes him stop


Ra - kaisi shart?

N - yeh kaisi baatein kar raha ho tum dono?

P - maine Sumit se kaha ke agar voh Kumkum se shaadi karna chahte hai tho is ek saal mein usse 10 lakh kama ne hoge aur saath saath voh Kumkum se mil nahin sakta

Ra - Piyush yeh tum...

N - jab humne haan kar diya tho yeh kyun?

P - kyunki main dhekna chahta hoon ke kya yeh larka Kumkum ke liye sahi hai


Raj and Naina try to convince Poyush to leave everything alone but Piyush is adamant, outside Kumkum looks upset, she looks at Sumit who frowns, she is about to speak but Piyush comes, he holds Kumkum's arm


P - andhar chalo Kumkum, shart ke mutabik, agle ek saal mein tum dono nahin mil sakte


Kumkum and Sumit stare at each other sadly before Piysuh takes Kumkum inside and shuts the door on Sumit's face, Sumit looks dejected, he turns and gets in his car and drives to the beach, he gets out and sits on a rock


S - maine shart tho maanli, lekin is ek saal mein kaise kamaoon 10 lakh? aur is ek saal main kaise rahoon ga Kumkum ke bina


Sumit calls Eksoo and tells her everything that happened, Eksoo is shocked, she calls Anku and Rach and all three go to see Sumit at the beach


E - tumne yeh shart maani kyun?

S - kaise na maanta, agar nahin maanta tho main Kumkum se shaadi kaise kar sakta?

A - tho ab tum kya karenge? Kaise kamo ge yeh paise?

S - pata nahin

R - uff yeh Piyush bhaiya bhi.....kudh ghar rehte nahin lekin jab aate ho tho Kumkum par rog jamate ho

E - haan...lekin Sumit kuch socho, kya karoge jismein tumhe 10 lakh mil sake

A - voh apni mehnat se

S - tum sab mere ek kaam karoge?

A - kaisa kaam?

S - jao dheko ke Kumkum kaisi hai....voh bohat udaas lag rahi thi

R - teek hai hum chalte hai.....lekin tumhe jald se jald kuch sochna padega


The girls leave, Sumit thinks of what to do, the girls go and see Kumkum, she's sitting in her room sadly, she sees them and runs and hugs them and starts to cry


E - bas Kumkum, rona bandh karo

A - haan sab teek hojayega

K - kaise teek hoga? bhaiya ne kis tara ki shart rakhi hai Sumit ke saamne....voh jaante hai ke yeh karna na mumkin hai...aur phir bhi

R - mujhe tho lagta hai ke voh chahte hi nahin ke tumhari shaadi Sumit se ho jaaye

K - Sumit kaisa hai?

A - udaas hai, aur gehri soch mein ke voh kya kar sakta hai jis se usse 10 lakh mile

K - I hope ke usse kuch na kuch idea aaye....


coming up - Sumit decides to make a music album

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Posted: 17 years ago
SUPERB PART, lekin bechare sumit ki rah mein kitni musabitein likhe hain, kiya devil bhayya nikla kumkum:
-shart:10lack ek saal mein
-us ek saal woh kumkum se nahi mil sakta

sirf paise kamane ki baat hoti to phir bhi thik tha ab bechara kiya karega
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Posted: 17 years ago
superb rachu
nice to see u back cont it 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
thts reallyy cool part plzzzz help sumit to make his music album plzzz
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey rachu..... bhool gayi mujhe kya??? 😳 😳

Nice part bachchaaaaaaa 👏 👏 👏 Very sensitive type.... waiting for next now 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
gr8 to c u bak here..!!but pls...dont forget the FF... 😳

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